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( ♞ - kings and pawns )

Postby floki, » Wed Jun 03, 2015 6:57 am

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open for critique!


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DA CHALLENGES
one hundred scenes ( x||x )
one hundred one shots ( x||x )
captain's ultimate challenge ( x )

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DA CHARACTERS
the shadows
belegeth - ( x ) || ealdwin - ( x )
septimus - ( x )

other charries
rose - ♀ - ( x ) || annith - ♀ - ( x )
ghost - ♂ - ( x ) || vince - ♂ - ( x )

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( ♞ - the challenges )

Postby floki, » Wed Jun 03, 2015 7:55 am

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DA SCENES

“Little by little, day by day, okay?” // “Get. Off. Right now.” // “... That’s it.”
// “So, uh, we should… probably run now.” // “You’re insane! I love it.”
// “Hey, I offered to help you.” // “Who’s laughing now?” // “Would
you please just be quiet?” // “Whoa, buttercup, whoa.” // "I can’t
believe you talked me into this." // “Marry me?” // “Hey! I was gonna
drink that!” // “You did all of this for me?” // “This isn’t over.” // “If
you die, I’m gonna kill you.” // “Well, this is awkward.” // “It was you
who was standing there.” // “That is the stupidest idea you’ve ever had.
Of course I’m in.”// “Hey, I’m with you, okay? Always.” // “Uh, she’s
gunna punch you, man.” // “BAHAHAHA- ahem.”// “I think I am
concussed.”
// “You have got to be kidding me.” //
“This ain’t that kind of movie.” // “Is it… dead?” // “I’ll just sit here and
wait for you to be finished.” // “You wound me.” // “Trust you? PAH.” //
“I don’t know who you are.” // “It’s okay. I promise. I’m here.” // “Oh,
this is going to be good.” // “Well, I finally got your attention.” // “Like a
hole in the head.”// “I'm... okay.” // “Well, are you coming?” // “Where
are your pants!?” // “Help me push it.” // “It’s almost midnight, no way!”
// “Positively smashing.” // “Don’t let go, okay?” // “You can’t leave me
like this.” // “Say that to my mother.” // “Sing me a lullaby, please?” //
“This hurts worse than I thought it would.” // “Hah! - oh, wait, you’re
serious?” // “As much as I’d enjoy that…” // -gasp- “The plague!” “No!” “YES.”
// “I won’t let you do this.” // “I’ve still got it.” // “I can’t do it. I just can’t.”
// "Don’t you ever do that again!" // “I thought I lost you.” // "Teach me?" //
"Don’t you dare throw that snowball-" // "It could be worse." // "We’re in the
middle of a thunderstorm and you wanna stop and feel the rain?" // "I’ve seen
the way you look at me when you think I don’t notice." // "What are you so
afraid of?” // “How did you get that scar?” // “You said WHAT?” // “Can you
stop bringing that up?” // “Wait for me!” // “We’ll be dead by morning.” //
“STOP TALKING.” // “I do.” // “I don’t want to.” // “What did I ever do to you?!”
// “Follow me.”// -SIGH- “I can’t reach it.” // “What are you waiting for?” //
“WAIT NO THAT’S NOT WHAT I MEANT-” // “I don’t need you.” // “You deserve
better.” // “If you love something, let it go.” // “Why do I have to wear this?”
// “Here goes nothing.” // “Where the heck were you?!” // “I don’t need help.”
// “We’re gonna be parents…” // “I didn’t think you knew.” // “I thought those
were poisonous.” // “Don’t make me go alone.” // “I’m sorry… I didn’t know.”
// “I’d be lost without you.” // “Just leave me!” // “I dare you to…” // “Run!”
// “How did you manage that?” // “Liar!” // “I don’t even want to be here.” //
“Oh crap, we fell asleep!” // “Is this the life you wanted?” // “GIVE ME THAT.”
// “Get back here!” // “Let go of me!” // “I’ll just follow you.” // “YOU DON’T
SAY.” // “And yet, you love me anyway.” // “I just thought I’d have a swim.”
// “Don’t cry.”

DA CHARACTERS

3 & 5 have a heart to heart
6, 2, & 10 get lost
5 & 10 have to rescue 4
9, 3, 6, & 5 think the world is going to end.
8 & 1 are left in a room by themselves.
9 & 10 find a puppy
4, 5, and 6 and ramen
8 vs. 4
6. 4, & 8 and the world "reckless"
4 & 2 & heavy metal
1, 5, & 7 and a graveyard.
5 & 1 and a disagreeance
9 & 3 and the song "Titanium, by Sia"
2 & 10 and "... you're stupid."
6 & 7 and "houston we have a problem"
8 and 4 and salsa dancing
1 vs. 10
6 and 2 and "Just pull it out!"
1, 2, 3, 4, and 9 and whatever you please.
7 and 9 and the color maroon.
3 & 7 and a fire
8 asks 5 on a date (joingly, or.. for real?)
1 and 6 and a bad piece of cheese.
4 & 7 and "... Rude."
6 and 7 and "I think we killed it."
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DA ONE SHOTS

Injured - Sinking - Father - Exploit - Boredom
Art of Conversation - Take your Best Shot
Creativity - Flash - Puzzling Words - Ill
Skeleton - Nothing - Servitude - Possibilities
Weightless - Just Say It - Last Words - Immature
Blazing - Help - Presence - Because - Forced
Reversed - Cast Away - Emotions Questions
Wishing - Crackling - Curl Up - Together
Look Again - Brief - Space - Special - Jinx
Stop Fussing Cozy - Breaking - Either Or
Tell Me a Story - Waiting - Willpower - Who Am I?
Idol - Unseen -Just Try - For Me? -_______ - Useful
Treasure - Ceremony - Lightning - Protection
Stay With Me - Mint - Rescue - Dominant - Thief
Deserter - Stolen - Sarcasm - Darling
How Much is too Much? - Over - Try Again -
HiddenForgotten - The First Time - Aging -
Soldiers - Justice Tread Carefully - One False
Step - Connection -Mess - It Can't Be - In Due
Time - Awake - Delicious - Fallen - Trickery -
Around the Bend - Well Traveled - Choices -
Surplus - Rough - If - Friend - Found Not Lost -
Spiral -Deep - I Could Have - Desirable -
Resentment - Build Up - Inch by Inch -
Dilemma - Blue Sky

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DA ULTIMATE

person switch - no dialogue - just dialogue
- one character
( charries that don't usually express... )
love - anger - happiness - humor - sadness
- fear
color - smell - weather - sound - touch
alternate universe - alternate ending
interaction - illness -personality break
parents

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CHARACTERS
( 1 ) belegeth
( 2 ) Ealdwin
( 3 ) Septimus
( 4 ) Rose
( 5 ) Josephine x
( 6 ) Astra x
( 7 ) Novin x
( 8 ) Constantine x
( 9 ) Isabeau x
( 10 ) Christian x

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( ♞ - meh)

Postby floki, » Wed Jun 03, 2015 2:14 pm

    eh... a spot for whatever. probably to organize all the stories for easier access. too lazy to do that though. -_-
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( ♞ - no dialogue #1 )

Postby floki, » Wed Jun 03, 2015 3:36 pm

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characters : elder dragon
setting : the mourn forest
word count : 607

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      Two yellow orbs glistened under the soft rays of the full moon. Each one speckled with different shades of colors. Blues, pinks, greens, all placed into one eye. The eye of a beast that flew in low in the sky. A beast that was tame to man, fierce to evils. A beast that had lived for centuries. A dragon.

      The soft groan of the beast vibrated across its thick belly. Slowly his mouth opened to reveal the rows of stained teeth. Few were broken off, others bent in odd directions. Many were blunt and shaven down. Few were missing. But one stood out than all the others. It was not a color of the norm, but a golden one. A shiny golden tooth, given as a gift from the dwarves. The tooth stood out like a black sheep stood out among the white. Not only was it made of the finest gold, but it was the hardest, and sharpest of them all. This very tooth was the only thing keeping the poor creature alive.

      His head drifted down as he blinked his yellow eyes. Quietly he curled up into a tight ball, tucking his brown scaled tail in, and underneath him. His tail was spotted with white and black spots. A sign of his true age. For every spot, was ten years of age. There were far too many to count on his tail. His worn, bent, twisted tail. A tail that once held beautiful tan spikes. Now they were all shaven down to nothing. A tail that he once was able to swing and knock enemies down, but now couldn't even lift it up passed his head.

      Up, down. Up, down. His stomach rose and fell in the tune of the night crickets that sang in the crisp autumn air. The dragons scales reflecting off the moons rays every time his belly rose. Each of them dully glowing a shade of brown like no other. The scales were rough and sharp like a rock. Many showings signs of long abuse. A set of scales were missing on the left shoulder blade of the front leg. What was there was the pale flesh of the old creature. A simple scar it was, given to him by a long ago enemy.

      Wings wrapped around the body of the dragon. Each filled with small holes that mattered nothing to his flying patterns. Spikes were set on each joint of the dragons wings. Veins snaked across the thin layer of skin. All a dark blue, like the blood that flowed through out the warm blooded beast.

      The sound of a crack caused the elder dragon to raise his head. His yellow eyes staring across the dark forest. Slowly emerged a young deer. Stubs beginning to show on the top of his own head. Cautiously he approached the dragon, taking small steps. When he reached but a few feet from him, he paused. His head slowly lowering, as his foot moved out. Bowing to the old dragon, he waited for a response.

      There was a soft chuckle, before the dragon reach out with his wing, grazing the side of the deer. There he waited for him to join him in his slumber. A hint of a smile crawling up on his scaly lips. The gentle dragon watched as the deer moved in, curling up next to him. From there, he tucked his tattered wing in, sheltering the deer from the wind and the dark world outside. From there, they slept. The trees whispered back in forth as the crickets sang a soft lullaby. The night was calm. The night was fair.
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