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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) completed

Postby Asherwy » Fri May 08, 2015 2:27 am

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our little
cherry blossoms

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oh little cherry tree, guard the little gate
where your blossoms fell, and our lips met
remember that time, when spring was late
the beginning of you, the beginning of us
we would stay there, forever in wait
for the little cherry blossoms to fall again


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A SHORT STORY
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) characters

Postby Asherwy » Fri May 08, 2015 4:33 pm

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characters

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Case Delgado (( male - 15 → 18 → 24 - main ))
Lark Ambrose (( female - 15 → 18 → 24 - main ))
Joseph Roy (( male - fifteen - side ))
Valerie Caldwell (( female - fifteen - side ))
Edmund Bradley (( male - fifteen - side ))
Helen Parker (( female - fifteen - side ))


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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) table of contents

Postby Asherwy » Fri May 08, 2015 9:34 pm

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table of contents
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AUGUST
one. meeting - two. dubiety
SEPTEMBER
three. uncertainty - four. questions
OCTOBER
five. careful - six. anxiety
NOVEMBER
seven. maybe - eight. astray
DECEMBER
nine. salt - ten. candle
JANUARY
eleven. lost - twelve. tired
FEBRUARY
thirteen. wait - fourteen. recall
MARCH
fifteen. pain - sixteen. shield
APRIL
seventeen. divulge - eighteen. futility
MAY
nineteen. solace - twenty. vines
JUNE
twenty one. sorry - twenty two. goodbye
INTERVAL
in darkness
JULY
twenty three. dread - twenty four. meeting

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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) appreciation

Postby Asherwy » Fri May 08, 2015 9:36 pm

special appreciation

RAEY, CASIMIR, SKIPWRECK, ROSEMARRIE/ROSEBANE
who were there in the brunt of my writing journey bursting with support and encouragement

RANGER OF THE NORTH
for reading this dragged out romance with a headache for a couple hours and making me feel special in the last stretch of writing this story.
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) updates and stuff

Postby Asherwy » Fri May 08, 2015 9:36 pm

NOTICE FOR NEW READERS:
I would like to let you guys know that this story is NOT for everyone, it's very slowly paced and purely about romance with no action of any sort. Definitely not recommended for those with short attention spans, thank you for reading.

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im finally finished after three years of dallying
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❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) meeting

Postby Asherwy » Sat May 09, 2015 5:18 am

one. meeting
AUGUST (( LARK ))


I wondered how the back gate would age, with its peeling black paint and raw metal beneath. My feet
carried me towards the inky, despondent little gate, raising my calloused fingers up to press against the
cool grey switch that would release the gate from its electric magnet. How melancholic would this
gateway look in June? After the trees blossom and grow dull, after the many sullied hands shoving against
its fragile frame, will it still stand tall? Clasping my pale fingers around the handle, I pulled gently and
felt it glide along with my frail arm, wishing I had the taut, bolstered limbs that so invariably belonged
to Helen. Of course it was a result of the vigorous gymnastics training she attended. The clamorous voices
of young, teenage boys struck my sharp ears like an insect who took a wrong turn. I flinched, pausing for
a moment's hesitation before stepping backwards calmly, bringing the gate with me as I patiently waited
for them to pass. These boys knew me as the girl who ignored everyone except my tightly packed band of
friends. My gaze was void as I stared into the distance, vaguely aware of them sauntering past me.

"Thanks Lark!"

They thanked me in a sing-song tone together, only to receive a stiff nod from me. A sonorous laugh came
in reply, deep and vibrant. Their voices were always full of jubilation and a touch of felicity, never
shedding a glare less it be for a joke or some playful banter. It was no surprise that they were so
distinguished within our grade as the brazen, sociable bunch along with the more attractive and dainty girls
amongst the rest. For the most part, they were kind people who couldn't seem to remember the faces or
names of those who didn't stand out. And for some reason they remembered mine. I decided to return the
focus to my eyes, pondering the thought of one of them in turbulent sobs over a trivial matter. The situation
would be extremely amusing. I watched as the last of them meandered out of the gate, paying no attention
to the flaking black paint on the iron fence aside from one, supposedly. His hair was a short, deep, taupe
brown that was so dark it was almost black, yet not quite. It was styled upwards, revealing his nearly black
eyes which were oddly charming against his tanned skin. Many of the youths in my year found this boy to be
very good-looking and 'cute.' For me, this boy's face mattered no more to me than his name. All I knew him
for was that he's the boy who sits next to me in english. As he stripped off a thin fragment of paint from the
frame, I caught his fathomless gaze and he smiled at me, biting the inside of his cheek.

"Thank you."

His voice was rough and gentle, like that of unpolished bronze. Not waiting for me to reply, he walked away,
twisting the piece of paint between his fingers while he crossed the small street to catch up with the rest of
his friends. I found myself following their footsteps with my gaze. I knew they were going to the outdoor
foodcourt that was just around the corner, the foodcourt where most of the students at my school went to
eat once classes were finished for the day. My eyes trailed after their figures, or rather his figure, until they
disappeared from sight. I realised that I could feel the blood being pumped into my fingers and the firm but
rapid beating of my heart in my chest. This is normal, I thought. For some reason I was always nervous
around that boy, however much he annoyed me, which he did. Painfully so. I drifted slowly away from the
gate to the bus station where I had to catch number 72, trying to recall what the boy's name was. Case. I
remembered with a start, Case Delgado.



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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 6:29 am

      - blinks -
      - smiles -
      - smiles wider -
      - grins -

      I.
      Love.
      It.
      Really.
      This is so different and so cool and so promising
      I really really like it
      *blushes*
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby Asherwy » Sat May 09, 2015 12:57 pm

      yes yes change of style change of perspective
      i'm going to try and make you feel so much angst during this
      thank you little pumpkin
      i can rely of you to always stay by my side
      hahhehehuhuahheuhauhu
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Postby noal » Sat May 09, 2015 1:35 pm

...
the story is very
very interesting
and i feel like it will
be a very good story
as it progresses c:
one thing though :
what timeline is this
based around?
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Re: ❀ (( our little cherry blossoms )) posting allowed :3

Postby raey » Sat May 09, 2015 7:16 pm

      - salute -
      pumpkin's always at your service Sir
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