this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Are you a writer or a poet? Come and share your creations with us, or discuss writing techniques with others
Forum rules
Please only post your own original work, do not post poetry or stories which were written by someone else.

this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby chimique, » Wed Apr 22, 2015 9:31 pm

hello diary ugh I'm not a girly girl ,please ,I'm gonna call you an elven ,seeing as I am one now . today sucked ! well it was okay I guess, with all the mystery revealed and stuff, you smell like... cinnamon! hmm its actually quite nice... trust veronica too get me a scented diary . she really is girly and loves dresses, her favourite ones are pink. yuck! sorry if you like pink , i sorta apologise , I guess. my only friend is invisible ,that sucks ,by the way elven do not have big pointed ears, that is a big fat myth which I dislike very much, and I hate ,fairy witches!
anyway, back on topic
dear elven
Image
im Danielle dancer ,my first name is good but the last name? well I don't know what mum was thinking . anyway im considered a weirdo. but I am sort of liked ,people respect me because of how I look ,I mean its not my fault that I have too mask my face! I don't want too be called little miss perfect. well since I turned an elf Im going too go too elvana talents high. its a weird name for a school . I hate school :roll: well ill introduce you too my family
Image
that is my mum, Allyssa , shes obsessed with nature ,she is my actual mum who got trapped in the elven world,i had no parents before her and she loves cooking! I have no dad by the way :(
Image
that's my sister ,cassie ,she and my bestie are complete oppisites!, everyone loves cassie and always worries that shes sick or sads or both, she always gets cake in her lunch ,but she an I are very close.
Image
this is eveie my best friend! she's already attending the school im going too! I hope we get lockers next too each other when I join! its a new year so everyone gets sorted again, shes very quiet and usually fits in with anyone but she chooses too stick with me now

my school is a boarding school, so I have too pack for tomorrow ,bye!!
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby chimique, » Fri Apr 24, 2015 7:57 pm

[center]Image
dear elven,
I arrived at elvana talents high and gasped, the place was huge ,even the gates, which was lucky because if they weren't I think id still be outside trying too open them suddenly eveie snuck up behind me and pawed my shoulder, I spun around and mumbled "who dareth go there !" eveie just grinned and started talking
me: you scared the death outta me !
eveie: well I don't really care, anyway how do you like the school?
me: its big I guess
eveie: yeah, its huge huh? is the wittle baby afraid of the big scary school?
me: no you boofhead well I guess we got to get sorted
I smiled at her and rushed into the building, while I was running her heard her whisper, something like catch out, I think it was watch out. I gasped as I saw the line it was huge ,when I finally got too the front, I met the queen cheese as I like too call her
Image
?: hi ,welcome too elvana talents high ,also known as elvana.T.H anyway the names Clarisse , anyway name and hobbies?
me; I'm Danielle dancer and I like jewellery and dancing and the cold .
Clarisse; bad name + bad looks = outcasts. guards! guide her to the outcasts!
suddenly two boy dogs walked up to me ,they had sympathetic looks on their faces ,I just huffed and refused to move, did I mention I'm stubborn? the boys took me by the paws and dragged me over to a shadowy place ,I just managed to see Clarisse ignore eveie and wave her over too the outcasts I sigh and half high five her and sigh
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby 20lait1 » Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:20 pm

Mark! The Elven is good! Continue writing, please!
User avatar
20lait1
 
Posts: 4319
Joined: Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Elven responds to the Elven

Postby Lightning Lord » Sat Apr 25, 2015 1:51 am


      ^^^
      Well. I'm sort of required to like it huh? XD.
      love the name choice o3o
      No but in all seriousness, It's good keep writing.
      but once more,
      love the name choice.
User avatar
Lightning Lord
 
Posts: 356
Joined: Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:34 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven the assembly and a adm

Postby chimique, » Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:46 pm

oh my hawk! im a big fan of your diary and the dragon! im glad you like the story , and thanks elven!
anyway
Image
dear elven
I looked hopefully at my schedule, luckily I had the first day off to settle in ,but an assembly was on at 5;00 so I had about two hours to unpack and settle in.
I hurried along the hallways until I came across a dorm with a welcome sign on it ,I was puzzled this was my dorm! I checked the numbers, yep this was defiantly my dorm ,I opened the door a bit too reveal a young female wolf
Image
???: hello, nice to meet you and your perfect. little. face
me: hi, that's defiantly the way to welcome your new roommate, defiantly
Monica: hey! I was just joking! anyway the names Monica ,and the rooms pretty bland, don't ya agree.
me: I guess it is ,well shouldn't you show me which bed is mine?

she nodded and led me too a large bed with white sheets and a feather lay on the pillow
earlier on the principal had informed me that whatever you found on your bed was a signal of what soul animal you would get so now I would apparently get a bird , I was pretty happy with that ,my sister got a cotton bud on hers and got a rabbit so I was lucky , once ,along time ago in elvania there was a big war ,dogs fled and hid ,four warriors stood strong and protected the place, only to fall ,after that all was peaceful ,but nobody had seen their soul animals since the war. apparently on your third day ,you get a special liquid and your soul animal appears behind you ,I looked at my watch . agh! it was almost time for assembly ! I hurried along the halls and screeched around corners I ran into assembly . the teacher was walking up on stage I sighed and waited for the long speech ,I got a picture of the teacher
Image
apparently he is a teachers helper and only a year older than us which im glad of because I mightlovelike him, but only a teensy little bit okay maybe I think he's hot... but don't tell him! wait your a diary ,you cant tell him, hopefully anyway .
he just gave a speech about how great this school was and the rules and blah blah . bbboooorrringgg.... anyway he is a jock ,lucky him . at the assembly the new student who didn't get sorted yet came on stage and talked with Clarisse I overheard their conversation
Image
Clarisse: name and hobbies though I'm thinking about jocks or nerds for you
???: Jonah and I like football, basketball and cute girls, I can give you an example if you like
Clarisse; your answer will change your group so choose wisely
Jonah: that girl ,*points too me*
me: whhhaaa?? I'm not cute nor beautiful
Jonah: *shakes head* yes you are, you've got real beauty unlike the cheese over here ,*points too Clarisse
Clarisse : :shock: I . am . beautiful!! outcasts!!!!
the look on her face was really funny, I nearly burst out laughing , that really was the first time I laughed in weeks ! he pawed over to me and smiled like what ya see huh? he smirked then pawed back too his dorm I shrugged ,hardly bothered by his comment still laughing I walked over too my dorm ,only too reveal..

authors note.
if you want to join elvana talents high just fill out this form , I will accept the first 15 entries then stop
Code: Select all
[color=#00BF40][center][size=200]I'm joining elvana talents high![/size]
[img]picture of pet goes here[/img]
name;
personality;
gender;
age;
hobbies;
group;
is s/he a friend of Danielle's?
other;
crush;[/center][/color]

the first person too put in a male form can be if wished her other dorm mate
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby chimique, » Sun May 03, 2015 11:23 am

bump? im just going to do another entry if no one replies in 30 minutes.
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby chimique, » Sun May 03, 2015 12:44 pm

okay
Image
dear elven,
Image
I saw him!
I blushed and took a step back as he smiled at me he turned around and held up you
me: umm... hi wait what give it back ! *grabs at you*
him: hey! ask my name first
me: okay weirdo what's your name!?
him: hey!! anyway its Diego
me: cool now let me in
I walked in to see a cute jock flirting with Monica and heaps of other dogs dancing, eating and eewww kissing? I looked at a big banner which read "late valentines day party" okay that explained it I glared at Monica and looked around and saw a boy, I smiled at him and then everyone rushed out as a p.c read out "ALL COME YOURE GETTING YOURE SOUL ANIMALS EARLY" I nearly got trampled a few times as everyone rushed out but I managed to stay alive barely. I rushed out and ran into the assembly hall as my name got called up. I rushed onto the stage and got handed a walnut shell filled with golden liquid. I took a sip when I was told to and almost fainted . the taste was beautiful! I felt a static electricity shock go down my back. I was put in a pitch black state and when it was over a large peacock settled in front of me and flew onto my back I grinned as it squawked at me
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby Lightning Lord » Thu May 07, 2015 12:55 pm

I'm joining elvana talents high!
Image
name; Lucas (Luke)
personality; Luke is a major flirt who uses comedy to hide his true feelings. He'll make a joke out of everything, but when it comes to his friends he is extremely loyal and will always stand up for them.
gender; male
age; (dunno the age range here soo) 14
hobbies; fencing, tinkering with things, pranks
group; Clarisse put him in jocks, but he tends to hang out with the outcasts because he likes them better
is s/he a friend of Danielle's? he's talked to her a few times, but he's never really got the courage for anything.
other; (you can choose his soul animal c:)
crush; he may have a crush on Danielle but don't tell anyone.
User avatar
Lightning Lord
 
Posts: 356
Joined: Fri Sep 20, 2013 6:34 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby 20lait1 » Thu May 07, 2015 8:06 pm



I'm joining elvana talents high!
Image
name; Windsor Iceheart
personality; The jock kind of guy. Loves sport and is a 'rule-breaker'. He does flirt with girls sometimes, but he doesn't exactly have a crush yet... (If you want him to have a crush, then give him a crush. Your choice.... Though I'd prefer an Outcast.
gender; Male
age; 14, I guess...
hobbies; Sports, pranks, (maybe flirting), and some fencing as well.
group; Jocks, though he might go down to Outcasts if Clarisse catches him flirting with the Outcasts.
is s/he a friend of Danielle's? He makes friends easily... Your choice, but I'd prefer if he was.
other; I don't really know... The elven is awesome and you can choose his soul animal if you want.
crush; Your choice... I'd like if he had one, though on who it's your choice.
User avatar
20lait1
 
Posts: 4319
Joined: Sun Nov 24, 2013 2:41 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Re: this is not a diary ,its an elven !

Postby chimique, » Thu May 07, 2015 8:54 pm

accepted, because your my first and second they can be like another main character if you'd like


hey elven,
Image
I learnt something new today, Clarisse has two 'followers' (more like servants) that she calls princess Belinda and princess Ella here they are in their nonexistence glory
Image
Ella
Image
Belinda
as they clip clopped down the hall they turned to me and giggled , I'm pretty sure it was me ,almost definite. they hurried towards the assembly hall and sneaked in, I sighed and followed this is were the students got sorted apparently ,I mean, it was dark and spooky but Clarisse just strode in like she owned the place, which she practically does because her dad is the principal .great. moms going to blame me if they see me and get in trouble , in front of their particularly make overed faces were two new students ,I guess they were what you'd call cute, I think I might have a crush on one of them how did I write that! well apparently they would get their soul animals immediately because they just missed everyone else getting theirs
well here they are Image
Clarisse; oh!*bats eyelashes* aren't you just adorable! I'm so putting you in jocks! so, I guess name and interests?*grins flirtatiously*
???: hello pretty! I am Lucas but cause your so pretty you can call me Luke, and so can they and I like fencing, tinkering and pranks, but don't worry I wouldn't hurt a girl *winks*
Clarisse:*turns around* you two, he's mine so don't even try*turns back to Lucas* jocks defiantly! if there was a hottie group you'd fit right in!
Lucas : daw thanks but you might want to fix your hair, it looks a bit old ,ya'know ? no offence intended
Clarisse: sure! but just do me one thing, will you go to the dance with me ?
Lucas: what dance?
Clarisse: the school anniversary dance!
Lucas: let me think about it but I might like someone else by then*blows kiss and walks off*

after him another dog walked up, he looks quite proud and ,how do I say it? cheeky oh well I guess he might like one of the new girls?
Image
Clarisse: hey cutie na-
Belinda: will-you-go-too-the-dance-with-me
Clarisse: what! Belinda! I'm down grading you to outcasts for taking a boy before I do!
???: oh what's happening I will just be leaving now,*runs out*
Belinda: fine because your just a stuck up ,snotty little princess humph
Clarisse: you're supposed to love me! worship me! not call me names ! your in your own group the "losers" now! go !
me: :clap: well done Belinda! *covers mouth* oops
Clarrise: you to your in the losers now ,and that horrible friend of yours to! I think her name was evie but I don't care
Image
Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

X
x

Image

X
X
X
x
X
X
X
X
X
X
X

AND I!! X AND I!! X AND I!!X AND I!!
Image
Image
┌─────────────────── ─┐
a prince <3 lmy doctor <3 lsalty <3
jay // lesbean // AEST // a big mess

└─ ───────────────────┘
User avatar
chimique,
 
Posts: 4111
Joined: Mon Nov 24, 2014 3:07 pm
My pets
My items
My wishlist
My gallery
My scenes
My dressups
Trade with me

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: Amazonbot [Bot] and 1 guest