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☆★▬The Stories of the Stars Extra▬★☆

Postby The Pirate Dragon » Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:32 am

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This is an extras page for an SCAA form (which can be found here) which includes story information, certain credits and additional form extras. Please do not post here as this is for my own personal record. Do not use any of this info without my consent and be warned that most of this is a work in progress. Feel free to read through any of this and bookmark the topic if you're interested!
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Glossary - Here
Chapter 1 - Here
Chapter 2 - Here
Chapter 3 - Here
Chapter 4 - Here
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This is the appendix for the story. Any person place or thing officially mentioned of importance in the story can be found here for a short description and/or picture to freshen the memory. It can also be used for clarification on mentioned topics.
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    Vega Ambar - The main character of the story, a member of the Cennet Celestial Council as a Representative of the Stars who decides to live with the citizens to get a better grasp of how they live.
    Chickadee Pilot - A member of the Cennet Celestial Council as a Representative of the Sky and son of Estelle of the Stars and Loni of the Sky. He's rather timid and a bit of a pushover, but he loves the citizens and enjoys being able to watch them and anonymously take care of them. He's been nicknamed "Kid of the Heavens" for his actions in protecting the people and for coming down "like an angel" as they describe him with his wings.
    Jared Malakai - A member of the Cennet Celestial Council as a Representative of the Sun and a rather mischievous canine with a charming but intimidating look. He always acts devilish but secretly cares about society and believes that they are strong and capable of taking care of themselves. He's awfully smart but is quite the politician.
    Cira of the Sun - The sun ruler of the Cennet Quartarchy. He's very "eccentric" though most prefer to call him insane and he loves to be the center of attention. He brags all the time and makes it known that he is the most powerful of the quartarchy of Cennet (which he is). He likes to fight and loves to accept a challenge but is often too egocentric to admit defeat and to give up on something. He's also very temperamental. He likes to be able to make sure the people are living healthily and in strong spirits and loves to come up with holidays to celebrate. Most know him for his adoration of war and battle.
    Lunetta of the Moon - The moon ruler of the Cennet Quartarchy. She isn't temperamental like Cira, but she doesn't like to do much with the citizens of Cennet. She enjoys art and likes to keep to herself and Estelle's staff/friends. She loves making all sorts of strange and abstract art pieces and finds it great when people come to admire her work. She often hides herself in hard to reach places to avoid following admirers but likes to give wise advice to those who are smart enough to track her down. She doesn't like to interfere in the problems of the citizens and believes that leaving them alone to solve their own problems and survive makes them stronger (but it's mainly an excuse of being bored trying to solve their trivial trials). She does, however, like to spread an inkling of hope to the most desperate people.
    Loni of the Sky - The sky ruler of the Cennet Quartarchy. He loves music and animals and finds the people of Cennet good by nature. He believes that they should all be free to make their own choices and that the quartarchy kingdom should help the people whenever they are in need of trouble of any kind. He loves to watch the people and is always intrigued just by seeing them work and develop. He loves to explore and go on adventures and has a genuine adoration for children and animals. He loves to socialize and give gifts to the random people he deems worthy and usually gives out exotic relics/treasures/trinkets that he finds on his many adventures. He's usually hard to find due to him constantly moving around and visiting small towns. He loves to see the people happy and adores comedy. He has a hard time with commitment though and doesn't often like to form strong friendships to anchor him.
    Estelle of the Stars - The star ruler of the Cennet Quartarchy. She likes to keep to herself and isn't the greatest at socializing/saying her feelings, but she loves to watch the people of Cennet. She is most often awake and night and often takes many naps during the day. She shares many interests with Lunetta and is actually extremely good friends with her with their share of art adoration. She likes to play with magic as well and adores coming up with spectacular illusions and optical tricks. Despite being rather pale and liking gray colors, she has quite a bit of artistic ability and manages many color-magic properties. She doesn't often socialize well with the people of Cennet and is often looked at as weak, small and unintelligent to the others of the quartarchy (mainly Cira), and she is rather weak and small.
    Cennet - The world in which this story takes place. It is ruled by the Cennet Quartarchy but is more republically ruled by the Cennet Celestial Council.
    Cennet Quartarchy - The four main rulers of Cennet, Cira of the Sun, Lunetta of the Moon, Loni of the Sky, and Estelle of the Stars. The Quartarchy usually manages overall wars, economical policies and other political necessities, but they have been inactive lately and have left their jobs to the people to form a republic with the Cennet Celestial Council. They are also the ones to give magical capabilities to the people and/or items in Cennet and they choose who occupies the Cennet Celestial Council.
    Cennet Celestial Council - A council made of 3 Representatives of the Sun, 3 Representatives of the Moon, 3 Representatives of the Sky and 6 Representatives of the Stars (each chosen by their celestial leader respectively). It usually manages the people's political welfare when the Cennet Quartarchy is unavailable and holds meetings every five years, but the citizens of Cennet have slowly started to take care of themselves and have become independent on the council. Each member of the council is given the ability to halt the aging process and unique powers.
    Candy Twist - Chickadee's olderhalf-sister and daughter of Cira of the Sun and Estelle of the Stars. Only briefly mentioned various times by Chickadee.
    Cedric-Jaime "CJ" Alvaro - The eventually adopted son of Vega Ambar who lost his family and village in a great war. CJ is known to be usually rather quiet and loves to read and eventually became a military cadet trainer when he grew up.
    Rhett Diamond - Born into a family of mathematical geniuses and lawyers but prefers to use skills for gambling. Loves to have things his way and is extremely protective of his younger sister. He is well known for various reasons at casinos and considers his professional career to be gambling (from which he gains an affluent amount of wealth from).
    Spade Diamond - Born into a family of mathematical geniuses and lawyers but saves skills for the rare use of gambling. Is often rather skittish and finds people too rowdy to be around. Loves to hang around older brother and is known for being almost as good as him at gambling but doesn't often gamble. She lets her brother take care of everything for her and is obsessively sentiment about her scarf.
    Tabitha Calloway - A young girl with magical capabilities much like her parents and sister. She and her twin sister, Massicka, are insistent on finding their long lost parents. For some strange reason, after hitting an older teenage age, she stopped physically aging and has lived beyond the normal age of death. Tabitha is a big prankster who cannot help but lie whenever she feels like it. She has a strange obsessing with children and is known to be emotionally unstable.
    Massicka Calloway - A young girl with magical capabilities much like her parents and sister. She and her twin sister, Tabitha, are insistent on finding their long lost parents. For some strange reason, after hitting an older teenage age, she stopped physically aging and has lived beyond the normal age of death. Massicka is the more responsible of the twins and usually comes up with the plans for their actions. She is usually quite calm and composed and likes to see her plans go through like they should.
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Postby The Pirate Dragon » Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:35 am

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"Simply remind me not to come next time," Vega sighed. "I'll let them know when I feel like sitting through who has a better haircut." He had just come from the meeting's light oak doors and was walking down the cloudy path speckled with violet stars from the sky. These discussions every five years burdened his mind to a near intolerable point.

"Come on," was the reply from a timid canine-fledgling. He had pale green and blue fur and bright white wings that sat atop his back and his mystical tail trailed behind him. "I think it's important to check up on how the citizens are doing."

"It's always the same, Chickadee. Soon enough the Cennet Celestial Council needs to stop having these meetings because the citizens are growing into an age of technology." Vega continued on the path with only occasional glances at his companion behind him. "The Cennet Quartarchy hardly blesses anyone with magic anymore, so eventually it will die out and be replaced with inventions. I can't say I blame them though, the Quartarchy has been inactive and magic is unpredictable."

"Well maybe it's just 'cause not a lot have magic and the others are afraid of it. It's basic thinking! Besides, I like checking up on the people and taking care of them."

"It's no wonder you're Estelle of the Stars' son. You're infatuated with the civilians just like her. Are they really that fascinating?"

Chickadee shrugged and pulled a light-hearted smile across his face. "Well, they're just like us! Just, you know, minus the whole immortal and magically powered thing. Every representative of the Council used to be one (except Candy and I, but whatever)."

"Oh joy, more egocentric babbling buffoons."

"No no! That's not what I meant!" With wings whipped out and ready, the avian canine sped up in front of his starry friend and stopped him. "They're nice! Really! I watch them all the time, like, in the guarding sense. That's why they call me the 'Kid of the Heavens' you know."

"I was sure it was because of your mother being Estelle of the Stars and your father being Loni of the Sky," intervened Jared nearby. He wasn't the friendliest dog to be greeted by with his black eyes and yellow pupils accompanied with curled, midnight horns, but his charming smile and kempt golden haircut got him votes for presence. Otherwise, the blue dog was a tricky and sly fellow though not an entirely wicked one. "If that's what you're telling everyone though, by all means, go right ahead."

"Oh, Jared," cried Chickadee at the sight of a friend. "Tell Vega about the people. Convince him they're nice."

"Why?" a devilish smile inched it's way on Jared's face. "They're good, but they can be bad too. 'Probably have as much free agency as us."

"Have you met them?" Vega inquired.

"Heck no, I hardly have the time."

"Then how can you judge them? Shouldn't we know who we're representing in the Council?"

"As a representative of the Sun, I get told to do my job regardless (and others wonder why we're called 'irresponsible'). I would've expected that you being a representative of the Stars would have already looked down on the people below. Chick has and he's only a representative of the Sky."

"Just because we used to be denizens like the ones we take care of doesn't mean we know how their lives work. We were all chosen to be representatives for the Council at young ages and haven't seen the world in over a hundred years. Does that seem fair to you at all?"

"I thought you already covered that, Vega," Jared wrapped his arm around the starry dog and pulled him in close. "Didn't I overhear you talking about how their tech was all they needed now days? What was that about just letting magic pass away in extinction? I rather like the idea of being one of the few people with magic left."

"Yeah, but," Chickadee moved in closer in the conversation, "Most just move their power into items to be passed down and some is still genetically inherited but it's weak. We're talking about pure magic here. Wait, doesn't having magic make them more inclined to fear us?"

"Poor poor Chick," Jared shrugged. "Always worrying about the people. It doesn't matter what we do because they'll continue their lives no matter what and everyone knows that they just manage themselves now. The Council has grown to be a placebo just like our stagnant Quartarchy."

"Well yeah but they still need us-"

"When have you last seen your parents, Chick? They don't exactly show up anymore. And what about the last plea for help to the Council? I don't see people lining up for advice like they used to do. We're like myths now. Living legends. Who cares about us? We just have those meetings every five years to pretend were doing something worthwhile."

"Maybe they're just struggling in faith! They'll come back!" Chickadee was getting worked up and started to fly above Jared for an intimidating view.

"I hear a lot of speculation," Vega pulled Chickadee down and pushed aside Jared. "Do any of you have proof that the people think these things?"

Silence.

"That's what I thought. Thinking about what the people are dependent on fatigues me. I'd much rather just go and find out. I'm not going to pretend I fight for lives in those meetings anymore because I'm going to go down and live with them. If you two are also real representatives of the people, then you will do the same."

"That's a lot of talk you have there," Jared smirked. "How do you know you're the same kind of capable they are?"

"I don't, that's why I'm going to go and find out. You could always come with and see for your selves, of course."

"Are you asking for help? I never thought you'd be the kind to stoop down to me for assistance."

"Whether or not you're there won't affect my survival, but it would definitely prove the worth of these people to you," and he left on that note, marching towards the goal he felt was so just and worthy.

"You think he's not going to do well in the real world, huh?" Chickadee turned to Jared.

"Vega's a strong guy," Jared chuckled. "I just get the feeling he won't like what he sees."
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