The Tale of Laremgyde

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The Tale of Laremgyde

Postby Cooluser1615 » Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:02 am

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In the kingdom of Laremgyde, there are two main species with the intelligence of humans; the humans themselves and the dermflen, a race of heavy pegasi with substantial magical power. Peace exists on paper between humans and dermflen, but in practice there has long been friction between the two species. The majority of wild dermflen now live in the North, while the human population continues to grow in the Centre and South of the kingdom. However, a darkness is rising that threatens both humans and dermflen alike...
Caught up in the middle of this are Tembrlen and Erganey, a young dermflan and her teenage rider. The two are novices in the Dermflen-Rider Messenger force which dispatches messages of importance across Laremgyde. Little do they know how huge a role they are to play in the coming events, set to either uphold the kingdom or drive it to ruins...

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HeroHorse wrote:This is a fantasy story of my own imagining. It is set in a time similar to Medival Europe, but not exactly, and there may be elements of other time periods as well.
The Tale of Laremgyde is ©HeroHorse at Chickensmoothie.com. This story may not be reproduced, stored or transmitted, in any form, or by any means, without prior permission in writing from HeroHorse.
All characters in this story are fictional and any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.


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Contents
Prologue
Chapter 1: Warnings On the Wind


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Prologue

Postby Cooluser1615 » Sun Jan 11, 2015 7:06 am

Dawn had only just begun, but already there was bloodshed in Laremgyde. The sun stained the sky with vibrant hues of red and orange as its light seeped through the morning mist. A rookery of crows took flight, their raucous clawing clashing horribly with the dawn chorus of the Northern Forest. Even so, the morning was beautiful. However, suddenly the birds fell silent. A sense of terror filled the misty air. A group of long-tailed tits looked down from the coniferous tree where they perched and let out warning cries. In the blink of an eye, the birds took wing, each shooting through the air as fast as they could in an effort to escape the new, menacing presence which had intruded on their home.

From the mist, a shadow emerged. One did not have to be close to see that it was an riderless equid, built like a heavy horse, but taller, stronger and far smarter than any horse could ever hope to be. Powerful muscles rippled beneath the stallion's blood-red coat as he strode through the forest, yet his physical strength was puny in comparison to his expertise in the arts of the arcane. His mane, tail, muzzle, lower legs and mighty wings all darkened to pure black. No white markings blotched his skin, for he was a dermflan, and such markings were therefore alien to him.

The stallion kept on walking through the forest until he came to a small house. Perhaps 'house' was an inaccurate description. The building was a ramshackle wooden hut that had been abandoned many years ago by its creator, or maybe its maker had simply died out in the forest. It didn't matter to the dermflan, though. He was concerned about was what the hut held at present; humans of the lowest order. The stallion pricked his ears and found that his quest had not proved unfruitful, for he could hear the snoring of the bandits who had broken into the building during the night. Dark amusement glinted in the dermflan's eyes, before being replaced by seriousness. He had flown out here for a reason, after all. The stallion did not wait to see if the humans were waking- he simply threw his body against the building, creating a thunderous booming noise. The hut swayed slightly, and for a minute the dermflan wondered whether he had been wrong to thump against it, for he had no desire to kill the humans within. They were going to prove useful to him in the days to come. He needn't have worried, as a burley bandit stumbled out of the hole which a door had once filled. The man was brandishing a dented sword, but upon seeing the dermflan he scurried back into the hut in a panic. Not long after that, six bandits swarmed out of the hut- the man who had originally emerged from the shack made conspicuous by his absence. They milled around, eying the dermflan with suspicion and an element of nervousness. Within seconds the stallion had identified their leader- a man of average height, with a face crisscrossed with scars. Despite having an almost bald head, the leader of the bandits boasted a thick brown beard. Underneath the beard, the man's mouth had contorted into a sneer, exposing a row of chipped and rotten teeth. "Well, what have we got here?" the bandit snarled. "A poor little horsie out all alone.". The men in front of him laughed harshly, but it sounded forced, as if they were merely laughing to appease their leader. The dermflan did not allow the human's insult to provoke him- he'd heard worse, after all -but spoke as all members of his kind did; through telepathy. " I have need of your... services, bandit." the dermflan said.

The gang of men looked shocked at the intrusion on their minds, but their leader was fast to recover. The stallion predicted that it was such adaptability to change that had earned the man his position. That, and a fair amount of backstabbing, blackmailing, murder and other underhanded acts. "Ha! As if! Me, a human, serve a filthy beast! You must be joking!" the bandit spat. This time, the laughter that came from the other bandits was not forced. The dermflan thought briefly about negotiating with the human, but he didn't see the point. Without warning, he channelled his mental focus at the leader of the bandits. The man, unprepared for such a mental attack, was easy to overcome. The dermflan stallion stared in fascination as he forced the human to move his limbs and even speak a word or two. Finally the stallion withdrew the intimate mental contact, and the bandit came in control of his movements once more. The grown man trembled after being released, and fell to his knees before the dermflan. "Command me." he begged, fear lacing every syllable which he spoke. The dermflan waited a few seconds before projecting his orders telepathically to the terrified bandits.

"Any day now, a message shall be sent from the city of Zmakia, a message to the dermflen clanns of the North. It shall be the customary invitation to the annual celebration of the so-called Peace Pact between the humans and the dermflen. It will not reach them. You are to seize the message. Kill the messenger rider and their dermflan and all who accompany them, then bring me the message. Understand? " the dermflan commanded. A chorus of agreements went up from the men. Before they headed into the hut to collect their provisions, the stallion added menacingly "None of you are to break the law of this wretched kingdom while undertaking this mission. And... I need not explain what with happen if you are not absolutely successful.". The men gave frightened confirmations that the dermflan's orders would be obeyed before hurriedly resuming their task. Within minutes, the hoofbeats of the bandits' coarse geldings were fading into the distance and the dermflan stood alone in the forest. He spread his wings. Flying took a heavy toll on the energy of dermflen, but speed was of the utmost importance to the stallion. He sped into a gallop, wings outspread, before leaping into the morning air. The dermflan had only one destination in mind- the Igbarone Mountains.

Where else could sleeping dragons lie?
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Chapter 1: Warnings On the Wind

Postby Cooluser1615 » Sun Jan 11, 2015 9:37 am

A narrow, lonely road of dirt and pebbles wove its way through the desolate, vast plain of grassland between the city of Zmakia and a tributary of the Armgara River. There was not a town or village for many miles in every direction. Only a few groups of nomadic animal-herders lived here, and even they had driven their herds of cattle and goats further south, for it was late in the season of autumn and the blizzards of winter would soon be blowing in from the North. Now, a bay mare, one of the many feral horses that roamed the huge plain, wandered onto the road to nibble at the feeble green shoots that had sprung up between the pebbles due to lack of use. Suddenly the horse stopped munching on the plants. She raised her Roman-nosed head and her eyes widened in fear. The mare dashed off onto the plains, much in the way a housecat might flee a tiger, or a lapdog a wolf. Hoofbeats resonated off the barren road in a rather eerie fashion, like a steady funeral drum. The road crossed a small hill on its winding route across the grassland, and it was over the crest of this hill that two dermflen and their riders emerged.

The first dermflan bore a strong, solid appearance. His coat was iron-grey, but his long mane and tail were as pink as the feathers of a flamingo. The dermflan's wings, muzzle and lower legs also faded into a gentle pink hue. Like all dermflen, he was ridden bareback, for how could one fit a saddle onto a creature who, most of the time, had large wings folded against his sides? The stallion wore no tack but a snaffle bridle. It matched the colour of his mane, tail and wings perfectly. The dermflan moved with a proud, majestic bearing, even in the middle of nowhere. It wasn't as if he saw any shame in being a bit pink, he was a dermflan after all. Among their culture, colours were not really associated with any particular feeling or expression, save for white, the colour of death. The dermflan carried a human on his back. She was obviously his rider, for dermflen did not allow themselves to be ridden by simply anyone. The woman wore a shirt, trousers and boots. All her articles of clothing were a light shade of grey. The rider's long hair was held back in a simple plait, and was pink, for her hair had changed to the colour of her dermflan's mane over time. She was a tall human of regular complexion. Even though she was no older than thirty, her body bore a weathered look, on account of being so exposed to the elements. It was inevitable, after all, since she was duty bound to deliver messages, regardless of the weather or season. The human wore armour of a strange silver metal, inscribed with a design of a dermflan and wings, the symbols of the Dermflan-Rider Messenger force. Strangely, by her left thigh, where most travellers of lonely roads would hang their sword or another weapon, there hung a flute made of the same silvery metal as her armour. It was a pretty instrument, but that was not why the rider carried it. In her hands, the flute was a weapon far more dangerous than a sword.

Suddenly the woman felt her dermflan halt without warning. "What is it, Zemfir?" she asked the stallion, wariness creeping into her telepathic voice. "Listen to the wind, Naina." Zemfir answered. His words were sharp and commanding, like most phrases dermflen came out with. Naina raised her head and listened. She had gained an acute connection with weather after becoming Zemfir's rider. Naina heard lone words on the wind. "Danger... Blood... Sky... White..." the wind hissed in her ears. The rider's heart began to thump harder from fear, for never had the wind told her a lie. Naina took a small grey bag off her back and gave it to the teenage girl and young dermflan who had been accompanying Zemfir and Naina during the journey. Naina was the girl's mentor, and Zemfir was the mentor of the young dermflan. "Erganey, this is a letter for the dermflen clanns of the North. You are going to carry it." The teenager opened her mouth to protest, but Naina stopped her. "Nobody suspects the novice of carrying the message." the older rider said. Zemfir snorted and, unbidden by Naina, began to trot down the lonely road once more.

As the hours passed without any sights of tragedy or dramatic events, Naina began to relax a little. She cursed herself for being so superstitious in the first place. Still, for some reason the rider refused to allow herself to take back the letter in the grey bag. Zemfir began to tire of the constant trotting, as did Naina. The experienced pair both wanted to add a little more speed to their ride. "Shall we canter?" Naina asked longingly. "Why not? The younglings are capable of catching up and it's becoming a pain to keep to this monotonous trot." Zemfir replied. "Catch us up whenever you're ready, Tembrlen." the stallion added, addressing the young dermflan. Erganey and Tembrlen nodded their heads simultaneously; their mentors had ridden ahead of them many times before. The young pair watched as Zemfir and Naina raced off, having no inkling of the horror that was about to befall them.

After a few minutes had passed, Tembrlen sped into a canter of her own. The black-coated mare was larger than most dermflen; her youth simply meant that she had yet to reach the peak of her strength. Erganey was a pale-skinned human teenager, of average height and weight, yet appearing smaller than she actually was due to the grand scale of Tembrlen. As Erganey raised her head, her long, loose hair streamed out behind her. Only a hint of the teenager's original hair colour remained; a few flecks of black at its very roots. The rest of her mane of hair faded into fiery shades of red, then orange, and finally into yellow at its very tips. Erganey's hair was the same colour as Tembrlen's mane, tail, lower legs, muzzle and wings. Tembrlen's wings remained folded by her sides, trapping Erganey's legs and so preventing her from falling off as they rushed forward. Gradually a few trees began coming into view, for Tembrlen and Erganey were nearing the tributary of the Armgara River which marked the end of the plains. Tembrlen's nostrils flared. "Can you smell it? There is a smell of blood in the air." she said. Erganey, with her human nose, might not have been able to discern such subtle scents, but an icy shiver ran down her spine all the same. Tembrlen slowed to a trot, about to enter the thick of the woods, when something stopped them. It was the music of a flute.

Erganey had listened to Naina play her flute before, but the music had never resembled what she now heard. She'd heard Naina play gentle tunes, to coax either light rainfall or fair skies. However, the music now sounded wild, furious and incredibly heartbreaking. The volume of it was louder than Erganey had ever heard from flute music. The weather was quickly affected by the music. Above Erganey and Tembrlen, the azure-blue sky darkened to grey. The winds howled and rain began to pour down from the many rainclouds up above. Yet Erganey and Tembrlen could still hear the angry, heartbreaking melody, right up until the second it abruptly ended. The pair froze, knowing that the music had been killed by killing the musician. A bellow thundered from the depths of the woods, audible despite the cascades of rainwater and the roaring wind. "The message, you idiots! She hasn't got the message!" came the deep-voiced yell. Upon hearing the voice, Tembrlen and Erganey did not waste a moment. They turned and leapt into the air, eventually vanishing into the soaking wet safety provided by the clouds.
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