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☠ A Step to Adventure ☠ -- Weekly Story / Critique Please

Postby qwill. » Tue Dec 30, 2014 8:41 am

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There have always been pirates.

Tales of men, invincible to all but that of their own kind, have graced the seven seas for years, gaining their height in the fifteenth-century with buccaneers steeling Spanish treasure. It seemed a great life of adventure, a life of mystery and wonder.


Cuba: 1663--Three unlikely friends had always lusted for the life of a pirate. Brought together by circumstance, Talia Fields, Jack Brig, and Enzo Price long to be pirates. They sit at the ports of Havana, forgetting their very different lives for a moment to watch the ships, and to fantasize about a life at sea.

So, if the opportunity to stow away arises, would it be enough to tempt the young heroes?

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☠--Talia Fields...is the twenty-year-old daughter of a wealthy English merchant. She lives in a large house on the wharf, overseeing the activity and doing as her father says. She has always dreamed of adventure, especially since meeting her best friends Enzo and Jack as a child. However, she has never thought anything of her wanderlust, and only dreams of sailing away to the exotic east, or the tropical islands.

☠--Jack Brig...is the apprentice blacksmith living with his poor father in the slums of Havana. He met Talia by chance, saving her from a wild horse when she was twelve and he thirteen. The two became fast friends, and grew up together underfoot of the guards and men of Talia's father. Jack despises piracy. He is an honorable man, and dreams of sailing for the king himself, and one day marrying Talia, though she'd never guess his true feelings, as he hides them well.

☠--Enzo Price...is the street kid. Two years younger than Jack, he would tag along behind Talia and the older boy, looking for a place to belong and join in. He never knew a family, but is quite adept at thievery and deceit. Enzo believes that the only life for him is a life at sea. He watches the ships day in and day out, looking for an escape to the wilds of pirate life. Jack tries to convince him to get a good job, to find a girl with money and settle down in Havana, but he will hear none of it.

Sound interesting?
Check back here every few days or so for an installment in Jack, Talia, and Enzo's adventures. I will post chapters here, but I would prefer if you would post comments and questions in the discussion thread, to be found here. This is my first attempt at kind of a routinely update, and I hope to have moderate success. If A Step to Adventure goes well, I might attempt other stories of these types. For now, just bear with me, and join Enzo, Jack, and Talia in the wild ride that is fifteenth century piracy.

Questions / Comments / Critiques Here!

Chapters
☠ One ☠ - Missed Moments
☠ Two ☠ - Potential Pirates
☠ Three ☠ - We Need a Ship
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☠ Chapter One: Missed Moments ☠

Postby qwill. » Tue Dec 30, 2014 9:42 am

✧--Talia Fields
Bright sunlight filtered through the open window, bringing Talia's eyes open with a snap. She sat up, her mind clouded and her thoughts murky. She was grasping at the last scenes of a fantastical dream she had been having, one filled with pirates and mermaids and tall, beautiful men to whisk her off into adventure. "Miss, you need to be down at the docks in a an 'alf-hour." The shrill voice of Talia's maidservant Mary floated up the stairs. The docks. Don't remind me. Talia thought to herself, standing up with a groan. It was just another one of her father's send-offs, another trip she wasn't allowed to go on, another ship sailing to adventure without her. And yet, she still had to be present to 'make an appearance' to the locals. No one here in Havana actually cared about her father's industry. There were going to be maybe five people at the send of, waiting only for her father's place on the dock once he had departed.

Pulling on a red day gown, Talia walked downstairs, her hair hanging loosely off her head. The summer heat and proximity to the equator made her delicate northern locks frizz, irritating her to no end. "Let me pull that up for you," Mary said, dropping her cooking on the stove and pulling Talia's hair up into a tight bun.

"Ah, that's good," Talia winced, rubbing her scalp. She glanced out the kitchen window to see a carriage waiting at the bottom of the steps, the driver absentmindedly smoking a pipe. Calling a quick goodbye to Mary, Talia walked out of the door, wandering to prolong her time alone. She was happy to have a life of privilege, but the constant company and waiting on often got on her nerves. She just wanted to make her own choices and lead her own life. Stepping up to the door of the carriage, the driver hopped down from his post to open the coach. Talia dipped her head in thanks, boarding the vehicle. With a start, they were off, taking the short trip down to the port district of Havana. The rocking of the horse-drawn carriage reminded Talia of her dream earlier that morning. She had been dreaming of sailing, smelling the ocean air and feeling the freedom that most assuredly accompanied a life on the seven seas.

Soon, they pulled up to Talia's father's pier. The door opened to the bright day, and Talia stepped down, gliding like a princess through the mass off vendors and crew men. A small group of smartly dressed people greeted her and she smiled back, shaking hands and standing straight. It was standard noblewoman training to know how to fake a smile. Talia was shuffled around, ending up next to the esteemed captain Smith. She groaned inwardly. Smith may be a great military man, but he was fundamentally a creep. She tried to ignore his furtive glances and sultry smiles as her father gave a quick speech.

"Now, on this day, I will be setting of for Eastern China, where it seems I have finally been able to strike a deal for her majesty the Queen," Mr. Fields said, nodding at his family and friends. He smiled at Talia encouragingly. Tali loved her father beyond measure, but it was his oblivious nature that often tore a rift between them. He believed her to be an excellent lady, or, in other words, a porcelain doll, ready at his beck and call to act as almost an accessory. After all, that's what ladies were supposed to do, right?

The ship was seen off moments later, and, as expected, the people on the deck started to disperse, and local vendors swarmed in to set up shop. Smith turned to Talia, taking her hand and smiling sickeningly. "Ah, the beautiful Lady Fields. I was thinking perhaps that she would want to spend a day...exploring the city with an esteemed general," he said with a smirk, kissing the back of her hand.Before Talia could spit on his disgusting face, the general dropped the sleazy facade with a fierce yowl. "A thief! A their has taken my gun!" he yelled, a hand on his sword.

Talia wasn't too worried. Only one person stole from the general, and the same person was also the one they never caught. "Well, general, if that's all, I'd best be off," she said with a curtsey and a smile, heading back to her coach. She smiled to herself wickedly as a commotion split the docks, looking for the thief. She climbed into her carriage, leaning up to talk to the driver. "Sir, if you would be kind enough to take me to the west end smithee, I's be grateful."

"Yes, m'lady," came the reply, and the horses were off.


♤--Jack Brig
Clang! Clang! Clang! The sound of a hammer on the red-hot blade of a sword was like magic to Jack's ears, even at this ungodly hour. The commission for a wealthy englishman was almost complete; all Jack needed to fix was the balance, and even that was low priority. It wasn't like the rapier was ever going to see battle; it was just a decoration for some wealthy man's wall. Who would squander money on such lavish decorations? Jack wondered lightly, examining the blade. Swords this well made didn't come cheap, and to think that it would never see action was almost sad.

A knock at the shop door brought Jack away from the bench. Checking the clock on the wall, Jack smiled. Eight-thirty, on the dot. It was definitely Talia, probably storming about some missed opportunity. And sure enough, as soon as he opened the door, she stomped in, hands on her hips. "Enzo will be in in a few, he has to take the back routes again," she said, taking a seat at the table.

"Won't you get dirt on your new gown?" he asked, a teasing edge to his voice. He loved Talia to death, and often poked fun at her lavish styles just to remind her that she was stuck in a rut.

"Don't you start with me, Jack Brig," she said, brandishing a fist. "That despicable general tried to walk all over me again today. I have had it with this godforsaken island!" she huffed, pounding the waved fist on the table and sending up a cloud of dust and metal shavings.

"Well, there's a ship sailing to Singapore coming in this afternoon, if you wanted to offer yourself up as a deck hand," Jack said, brushing off his hands and sitting across from her. Or we could just run away together, forget the world. Just you and me, he desperately wanted to say. The saddest thing was that she might actually agree. But Jack wanted it to be her idea. He didn't want her to see him as an opportunity to run, but as an opportunity to spend the rest of her life with someone that cared about her beyond measure. He sighed, imagining the two of them together someday, a child at their feet, hard-earned money at their disposal. Her dream may be to travel the world, but his dream was her. It always had been, since that day with the runaway horse.

The door swung open, revealing a dark-skinned young man with an apple in his mouth and a gun tucked into the belt of his tattered pants. "How are you today, mis hermanos?" he said cheerily, dropping the revolver in front of Talia. "You can give that back to your boyfriend." He smiled impishly at the woman, revealing a mouthful of crooked and spotty teeth.

"Thanks, Enzo," she retorted, tucking the gun into her dress. "But he's not my boyfriend. I wouldn't want to infringe on you guys's bromance," she said, smiling. Enzo and Smith were always at each others throats, and Smith had never been able to catch the street boy, which delighted Enzo to no end.

Enzo ignored her, turning to Jack. "So I've heard a few things," he said mysteriously, looking from the older boy to the girl. "Interesting things."

"Christ, Enzo, don't encourage her," Jack said, sighing. "She's already got it in her head that adventure's just a knock away." The kid had recently been hanging around pubs. Known pirate pubs, just to get news of Tortuga and other famed hubs of criminal activity. The last thing Jack wanted was to have his two best friends caught in the middle of some to-do with a lot of pirates. Not only would they all get arrested and hanged, but they would inspire the wrath of pirates!

"Shut up, Jack," Talia said, brushing him off. "Enzo, tell us the news."


☠--Enzo Price
"Alright, so I've been hearing stories," Enzo said, lowering his voice. "Stories of ships gone down few hundred kilos off the coast of Spain. There's a man in town by the name of Pike looking to gather a crew to investigate." From his days of snooping around, Enzo had heard Pike's name uttered many times. He was a notorious pirate with many a tale of buried treasure under his belt, and if he was looking for a crew, one thing was for certain. Enzo was going to be on that crew.

But Enzo owed what little he did have to Jack and Talia, so he figured it wasn't fair to just up and leave them, especially when he knew's Talia's appetite for adventure. "I'm going for it," he said matter of factly, standing up and pacing the floor.

Jack raised an eyebrow. "Enzo, are you sure that's what you want?"

Enzo felt his stomach curl with guilt. Jack had always been like a brother to the little street kid, and doing exactly what he had always warned against felt an awful lot like disappointing his only family. But Enzo was nineteen now, officially an adult. He could do what he wanted, right? "It's what I've always wanted," Enzo retorted, stopping to look at Jack.

"And how do you know that they'll take you? No offense, but you look like a child." Jack stood too, almost a head taller than Enzo, despite being only two years older.

No matter how irksome, the remark was true. Enzo was skinny; he still looked like a fourteen year old from years of not having enough on his plate and dodging guards like Smith. Before he could come up with a good reply, Talia stood up too. "Enzo, they'll take you. They'll take you, because I'm coming with you." Enzo's stomach dropped. Not that he didn't admire Talia's resolve, but Jack could never stand to lose her.

"No, Tal," Jack said with a finality. "Do you know what they do to girls out there?" he said, genuine worry in his voice.

"Then I'll disguise myself as a man," she said firmly. "I'm small enough to act as a cabin boy, and I'll keep an eye on Enzo." Enzo could tell she was angry with Jack's protection of her. For as long as he could remember, Talia had been the most stubborn, stick-to-her-ideals person he had ever met, even if she was a girl. Plus, Enzo didn't like to see the two of them fight. They were like parents to him, and he couldn't bear to be the source of argument.

"I can go by myself, I don't need the protection of either of you," he said, stepping between them. Without waiting for a reply, Enzo stormed out of the shop and down the street, pushing angrily past the crowds to the tavern where he had heard all the rumors in the first place.

The atmosphere was dark, with people and drunkards stumbling around in a smoke-heavy fog. Enzo coughed, but made his way to the back, where a man sat with his feet on a table and a pipe in his mouth. "Are you Pike?" Enzo asked, placing a hand on the table.

The man tipped his hat to get a better look at him. Enzo shivered slightly at what he saw when the oil lantern caught the man's face. It was twisted and scarred, with a large chunk missing from the nose. He wore a patch over one eye and a copious amount of eye makeup over the other. He was the absolute picture-perfect image of what, to Enzo, a pirate should look like. He even had a colorful bird sitting on his left shoulder, humming what sounded like a maritime ditty. "Who's asking?" the man growled, leaning close to Enzo.

"I am," Enzo stated, holding his ground.

The man laughed. "Spunk. Come back tomorrow at dawn, and maybe if you make it I'll let you on the Tempest." He leaned back, signaling the end of the conversation.

Enzo let out a breath of air. "Yes, sir," he said, backing away. There was no turning back.
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☠ Chapter Two: Potential Pirates ☠

Postby qwill. » Tue Dec 30, 2014 7:30 pm

✧--Talia Fields
Talia glanced from the slammed door to Jack, her normally warm brown eyes icy. "You had no right," she snarled glaring at the blacksmith. "He needs us, and you let him go."

"Tal, I don't know what you're talking about. I tried to make him see sense!" Jack put a hand on her arm, but Talia shrugged it away, trying not to let him see the tears that were gathering in her eyes. She felt like no one listened to her. She got it all the time with her father and Smith; she didn't need it from Jack, too. At least Enzo was looking out for his own pride, and not her protection.

"Jack, I need this. I need to feel something." Talia sighed, some of the anger leaving her gaze. "I can't live my life in a box. Or on an island in the Caribbean, no matter how big."

"And I agree with you. But does it have to be pirates?" he asked, sounding resigned. After all the years they had been friends, Talia still won most of their arguments. "I know we used to watch the sea, waiting for the ship to stow away on. But we were kids, Tal. It's time to grow up." Jack rubbed her shoulders, but once again she pulled away from his friendly embrace.

"Jack Brig, I won't ever grow up," Talia said, facing the door. She was done being pushed around, done being told what to do by people who thought that they 'knew what was best.' Talia knew what was best for herself, and she would stop at nothing to get it, not anymore. Without turning to say goodbye, Talia walked through the door, wiping away an escaped tear. Her red gown, slightly dusty and sticky, flew out behind her as she walked up the street towards the wharf, where her father's house, now empty save for a few servants, stood on a hill. They lived in the port district of Havana, meaning everything was fairly close; the carriage she had used this morning had mostly been for show, as Talia preferred walking on most days.

The door to the mansion flew open with Talia, startling Mary, who had been asleep at the kitchen table. "What the devil's got you in a tizzy, Miss?" she asked, yawning.

"I'm fine, Mary," Talia responded curtly, heading up to her bedroom. She felt like screaming; Enzo was gone, Jack was angry with her, and she had no other friends on this whole damned island with whom to vent her trouble. Would I really have joined a pirate crew? she asked herself, staring down at her hands. As much as she hated to admit it, Jack was right. Pirate ships were dangerous for woman, especially those of her age and stature, and she wasn't exactly trained or prepared for a life at sea. Was it the wanderlust driving her? Talia couldn't be sure. She was just finished living her life by rote. And maybe Enzo was right. If now was the time to act, why shouldn't she?

Walking to her closet, Talia pulled off the gown and returned it to a hook, feeling the breeze from the window run across her slip. Pulling that off as well, Talia searched for the pair of trousers; she didn't have many, but--aha! In a box way in the corner, she found folded a pair of dirt brown trousers and a shirt, crossovers from her days as a teenager when she spent most of the afternoons running through the street. Binding her already flat chest with a cloth, Talia pulled on the boy's clothes. Tucking her hair into a trifold hat, Talia searched the room for one final thing before setting off to what might as well be her own death.

Finding it in a trunk under head four-poster, Talia smiled. A silver dagger with a ruby hilt; it wasn't much in the way of self-defense, but it was from the finest blacksmith in Havana, Jack Brig. He had given it to her as a gift for her eighteenth birthday. Tucking that as well as a compass into the belt of her pants, Talia slowly opened the door to make sure she wasn't being spied on by any of her maids. They were all incompetent; sleeping on the job or taking afternoon dalliances with the locals, so she wasn't too worried. Sure enough, escaping the house was a breeze. She floated past Mary like a spirit, making for the door.

It felt strange to Talia, walking on the street and having no one pay any heed or attention. She was invisible; a street rat bent on causing wanton mischief. Talia loved it. Finding her way through the crown, Talia walked into the pirate bar where she knew Enzo got most of his leads. She couldn't see the coal-skinned boy anywhere, but she supposed it was for the best. She didn't want her cover blown at this stage in the game. Some bustle in the back of the pub caught her attention. A man with a colored bird on his shoulder stood, muttering orders to a group of ratty sailors. That must be Pike, she thought excitedly, and swaggered over, trying to seem confident, which she was not. "Excuse me, Sir, but I hear you're looking for a crew," she said, leaning on the table.

"Aye, it be true," the man growled, eyeing her suspiciously. "I've got one spot left if you can make it by dawn. Yeh look more promising than that scrawny boy that came in here earlier, anyhow." He turned away and went back to speaking to his men.

Talia's jaw dropped. It was that easy? Dawn, he had said. Well, what was she supposed to do now? She'd only been gone from the house ten minutes, no one would have even noticed her absence. I guess I'll just stay in here for a while, she thought, setting down at a table, still rather shocked.


♤--Jack Brig
Jack pounded his fist into the table with the slamming of the door. Talia was bold and stubborn, but now she was in danger, and Jack couldn't live with himself knowing that he had goaded her into it. "She's just angry from being left behind again while her dad's in Eastern China," he muttered to himself. "She wouldn't actually do it." But Talia, as intelligent as she was, was also rash, doing things, as she had said, to feel and to experience adventure.

Pulling his coat from the rack, Jack opened the door, changed his mind, closed it and sat down, putting his hand on his chin. Going after her wouldn't solve any problems; it might make them worse, for all he knew. Jack had to think about this carefully. He knew what he had to do. Though it pained him to even think it, Jack had to let her go. Making her do something against his will would only push her further away. Jack sat up, thinking. But that didn't mean he couldn't at least keep an eye on her.

And Enzo. The kid was like a little brother to Jack, and yet Jack had never been able to sway him on any decision he had ever made. He would go join the pirate crew, and maybe die at see, but he would still come back to haunt Jack, telling him "I told you it would be fun." Was Jack the only one in Havana with a sensible head on his shoulders? He sighed, brushing his hand through the layer of dust and dirt that had settled on the table like sand. He picked up the sword he had abandoned to cool earlier and started working on it once more.

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Jack spent most of the rest of the day in his work shop. He had abandoned the commissioned sword for a personal piece; he would need to somehow defend himself if he actually were to traverse the seven seas after a girl who didn't care at all what he thought about her. It was a wickedly curved cutlass with a gold hilt; he had been working on it for years, and every time he had pocket money for gold leaf, or engraving tools he would invest, adding bit by bit and piece by piece. He tucked the sword on his belt along with the family revolver for good measure. He had a coin purse with a few shillings as well, and he figured that he might need it to hire someone to be his ferry. Jack laughed at his own foolishness. What the hell are you doing, Brig? he asked himself over and over again as feet that didn't seem to be his led him out the door and onto the rapidly darkening street. What if she hates you forever?

Jack, however, would rather Talia despise him for the rest of his life than have to live knowing he let her die. And so, he set out to find a ship that would willing follow a pirate vessel into dangerous waters. Laughing again at the miraculous thought, Jack walked down the street and through the bustle of the post to Twin Flags, a shifty tavern on the wharf. It was inhabited by the scum of Havana: dirty street children, drunk sailors, and brightly dressed ladies with copious amounts of makeup. Jack felt like taking a mop to the entire place and scrubbing floor until the rat droppings and spilled alcohol came clean. The job would probably take years.

Jack brushed past a young man as he walked to the bar. He turned to apologize for not looking where he was going, but the boy pulled his hat low over his face and ran out onto the street. Shrugging, Jack turned to the barmaid. "I'll have water, please."

The woman laughed; it was shrill and annoying, but somewhat infectious, and many of the others in the place joined in raucously. "D'yeh hear this one? Water, I'm sure. I'll get 'yeh a pint of rum." She puttered around behind the bar chuckling to herself before sliding a stein of dark liquid to Jack. He raised his eyebrows before taking a drink. It was vile, bitter, and everything in between. He felt like spewing it across the counter, but he didn't feel that would be gentlemanly.

"'Aye, er, thanks, Miss," he choked, trying to smile.

A tall but lean man slid into the bar next to him, clapping him on the back. "First bottle 'a rum, Mate? Aye, I remember mine. Wait...no, I don't." The man burst into laughter at his own joke. "And I'll bet it was a good one one, too!" he hiccuped, commandeering Jack's own stein.

Jack looked at the man incredulously, trying to keep from laughing. "Excuse me, but I don't believe we've met," he said, offering his hand for the man to shake.

"Of course we haven't met, why do you think I'm over here?" the man said, heartily taking the handshake. "Name's John Ward. Captain John Ward. And you look like the type of lad I'm looking for."

"And what does that look like, I might ask," Jack said, removing his hand from the obviously drunk captain. It was rather sticky, and Jack wasn't fond of sticky.

"It looks like you, I already said that. Maybe you aren't the one I'm looking for. Not too bright, is he Bellamy?" The captain called across the room to an older man smoking a pipe and reading the paper.

"Aye, John. But he's the one," came the man's reply.

"The one for what?" Jack repeated, trying to get a grasp on the conversation. It was all starting to get very confusing.

"The one that's lucky enough for this." And with that, Captain John Ward tackled Jack. Jack tried to struggle, but the wiry sea captain had a good hold on him, and soon a bag was being forced over his head.

"Let me out!" Jack yelled, trying to reach for his sword and finding that his hands were tied behind his back. Something hit him across the head and his vision faded to black.


☠--Enzo Price
After leaving the bar, Enzo stalked down the street to the abandoned storage house, where he spent most of the time he didn't spend pickpocketing and annoying Jack and Talia. A real pirate ship! He had the opportunity to board a real pirate ship, with real pirates! Enzo could barely sit still. Pike had seemed like a nice enough guy, for a pirate. Almost too nice. Enzo sat for a moment on his tattered rug, thinking. What if it was all just a lie? What if he actually was walking into a trap, or some sick joke as JAck had warned.

No, Enzo thought. This is real. I just know it. He looked at a small coin on the ground amidst a pile of other trinkets, the markings almost gone from years of rubbing. Enzo had stolen that from Jack when he was only ten; the older boy had caught him, then given him a gold piece and told him to turn his life around. Stealing was almost as bad as piracy, Jack had said. Enzo had smiled, his two front teeth missing. But pirates were the heroes of the sea, he had told a doubting Jack. Jack had laughed and ruffled his short hair. Will I ever see him again? Enzo thought, a sickening feeling bubbling inside of him. What if he just stays mad at me forever?

No, Jack would be too worried with Talia. He loved that girl, Enzo could see it every time he looked at her. And she didn't even know, not yet. They would get married some day, and then where would Enzo be when they moved to London to start a family? He would still be stealing from foreigners and watching ships move off to exotic places that he could never afford to see. This was Enzo's chance, and he wasn't going to miss it. Settling down on the rug, Enzo pulled a tattered blanket over himself, staring up at the rafters. Tomorrow at dawn. Tomorrow at dawn. He repeated the words over and over to himself in his mind before drifting off to sleep.

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Yelling from the docks woke Enzo the next morning. Scrambling out from under his covers, Enzo ran to the window. The sun was barely gracing the horizon; he wasn't too late! Pulling on a pair of trousers, Enzo raced down out of the storage shed and to the docks, where he saw a group of rowdy men holding their heads and laughing while boarding a ship. Skidding to a halt behind some boxes, Enzo searched for a sign that this was really his ship before barging in. The name scrawled in fancy letters on the bow was hard to read from a distance, but Enzo could make it out, if only barely.

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And I'll let you aboard the Tempest... wasn't that what Pike had told him? Enzo decided just to go with it before he missed his window. Walking out to the group of pirates, Enzo nearly bowled over the man himself and swallowed as the bird on Pike's shoulder gave a commanding squeak. Pike turned, growling. "You again? Another boy already took your place, kid."

Pike was turning to leave, but Enzo couldn't let him. "No! I'll fight for it!" he yelled, without thinking. And what exactly will you fight with? said a nasty voice in his head. It sounded a little bit like Jack.

A rumbling bout of laughter split the dock until Pike held up his hand, his eye glowing fiercely. "You will, will you? Give the lad a cutlass." He flicked his hand and a sword was tossed to the ground near Enzo's feet. He picked it up, his hand shaking. "Get the other kid!" shouted Pike. A man cam off the ship, dragging with him a small boy. A very familiar, very feminine boy.

Talia! I can't fight Talia! Enzo thought wildly. Somehow he had to find a way to get them both on without blowing her cover. Talia faced him, her eyes mean. Was she really going to do this? The girl charged, a silver dagger in her hand. The pirates cheered, yelling for Enzo to run. As soon as she came near, she shoulder checked Enzo, whispering, "I'll beat you, then stand up for you, got it? Just play along."

Enzo's spirits lifted. The girl always had a plan, that was for sure. Brandishing his sword, Enzo pretended to stab at Talia, who was much to quick for his lumbering movements. She bowled him over once more, cutting a gash in his arm.

"Ow, what are you, oh..." Enzo winced in pain, but stopped before he could mess things up. "I give up!" he shouted just as Talia came in for a finishing blow.

The pirates booed, turning back to their business. Talia rolled her eyes at Enzo and offered a hand up. "Captain Pike, if I may. I've seen this one around Havana. He may be a bloody lousy swordsman, but I've seen him still the gun out of the hand of the navy general."

Pike, who was wiping a tear of laughter at Enzo's foolishness out of his eyes, looked to Talia, intrigued. "Is that right? Well, I guess we could keep him around for comic relief. Get him a cot, we leave in an 'our."

Talia glared at Enzo, pushing him away. "You owe me," she said, walking the board up to the main deck. Enzo followed, blotting up blood with his shirt.

"You're the one who severed an artery," he retorted, binding the wound.

"If I had severed an artery, you'd be dead. I just wanted to make it look convincing. But I'm glad you're here, aye?"

Enzo smiled. "Aye. But Jack's going to kill you."

Talia growled, shooing her dagger back into her boot after wiping Enzo's blood off the silver blade. "Don't talk to me about Jack. He can shove--" Before she could finish, men started yelling for all hands. "Anchors away," Talia said, her voice bright.

"Lower it an octave and they won't know until next Thursday," Enzo teased, brushing her shoulder as they went up to help with the ropes.

"Shove off, Enzo Price."
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☠ Chapter Three: We Need a Ship ☠

Postby qwill. » Wed Dec 31, 2014 6:22 pm

✧--Talia Fields
Talia breathed in the salty air as the ship jerked away from the port, gliding out like a great bird over the water. The Queen's Tempest really was a beautiful vessel, with a large deck where most of the crew milled about their daily chores. Talia was utterly taken with it all; she still couldn't believe that she had run away from the only home she had really ever known to walk the deck of a pirate ship, where, as a young woman, she was in constant danger. And she loved it. For the first time in years, Talia felt truly free, and ready to make her own decisions. Until she was handed a bucket and mop and told to get to work. Talia raised an eyebrow. "Do you really need eight people swabbing the deck at once?" she asked, glaring up at the first mate who had given her the job.

"Don't question, Boy, and get to work. I don't have time to argue with the likes of a swabbie," he said, leaning in close to her face. Talia pulled back, wrinkling her nose. He was a handsome young man around her age with golden brown hair and skin tanned and muscled from working under the sun day in and day out. His accent was that of Englishman; Talia guessed that he was the son of a nobleman turned rogue, much like herself.

"Drake! You're needed at the wheel," called a gruff voice from further aboard the ship. Drake turned to look at Talia once more, suspicion in his eyes.

He pushed her aside as he answered the call, saying "Don't challenge orders before we're even a day out to sea."

Talia grabbed the mop and started to swab the deck, a thousand retorts at the tip of her tongue. Enzo walked up beside her, also with mop and elbowed her in the ribs. "I suppose you've met Drake, then," he said, watching the young man speak angrily to the person steering the ship as he dumped water on the cracked boards of the deck. "I heard he's worse than Pike 'imself."

"Well, he definitely doesn't know sarcasm when he sees it." Talia pushed her mop back and forth angrily, pacing the deck.

"Talia, I watched you. You weren't being sarcastic, you really didn't want to swab the deck. You aren't used to chores...seriously, what made you think you could live out here for weeks on end with little food, lots of chores, and dirty men?" Enzo leaned back to wipe his brow, already sweating under the morning sun.

"You, too? I thought you were on my side, Enzo! I left because I needed to feel something more than the Cuban heat and the pressure of being a spinster." By all regular standards, Talia should have been married by now. Her father was unique in the fact that he didn't often force her into dates, but she could tell that he was getting anxious. He needed heirs to his company, and Talia alone was not and would never be good enough. Finishing her chore, Talia walked over to the side of the ship and leaned out over the water, watching the port of Havana rapidly disappear. "I wanted it to be as amazing as I thought it was going to be," she said sadly.

Before Enzo could answer, a hand clapped Talia on the shoulder. "You. Cabin Boy. I need you in my quarters." Talia turned around to see Drake, the first mate, his eyes cold. Talia started to panic, looking at Enzo over the man's shoulder. It's been like an hour! How can he know my identity?

"Just go with it!" Enzo mouthed as Drake led Talia away and below deck.


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