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Reds CAAA character development challenge thread

Postby Red weasel » Sun Dec 28, 2014 7:01 am

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Re: Reds CAAA character development challenge thread

Postby Red weasel » Sun Dec 28, 2014 6:43 pm

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Calypso


Calypso sat out on a rock, as many mermaids normal did, though she was not treated like one. Most mermaids had what humans would call a fish tail, while Calypso had an octopus tail. She was pretty, just like one would expect a mermaid to be, but to most her tail made her look less beautiful, or even evil to some. She tried hard not to let this typing bother her, even though she had very few friends. She saw a small ship nearing in the distance that she could tell carried few people. She watched carefully as the waves tossed the boat about. She rsn her fingers through he slightly damp hair, daydreaming of what it would be like being a normal mermaid. She had seen a few flirt with the humans, in reality, it wasn't really something she wanted to do, but she hang had much chance to try, not what they did. In truth, she wasn't as, happy, as the mermaids she met. She was far more sarcastic, and spent time thinking on more serious topics. She could sing, she supposed, but she couldn't believe the amount of singing that the others did. Calypso was so focused in thought that she almost missed the moment that someone feel of the boat she had be watching. Being a decent person she of course diving into the water, swimming to the boat in the distance. She dipped under the water, seeing a boys body attempting, though failing, to swim above water. She swam quickly over, her octopus still gave her quite a speed boost, and wrapped her arms around the boy waist. His eyes were closed, so he struggled to fight with the grip around him. She was till able to pull him above the water, almost throwing him above onto the boat. She stretched her arms, glancing over the boy, as she spoke in a whining tone, "what is it with these stupid humans who go out on a boat, but can't swim." The boy was mesmerized by the fact that what had to be a mermaid was even real to begin with, and Ignored her words. " aren't ya gonna kiss me or something," he called to her. "You wouldn't want me to do that." She said simpily, laying back in the water to reveal her tail to boy she now found quite annoying. "You-you, your no mermaid at all, your-your a freak. You are a freak!" He stammered and hissed, pointing at the girl. Wordlessly Calypso blinked, and swam away, deep under the raging waters, deciding she need to get away from any other possible interactions her morality system would cause her or have.
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Re: Reds CAAA character development challenge thread

Postby Red weasel » Mon Feb 02, 2015 12:34 pm

Trixa

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Trixa is a happy go lucky wizard wolf. She is very much learning, and tends to make many mistakes. In fact, purple magic matter is all she can control. This of course hasn't phased her much, and has only driven her need to learn more. Trixa comes from a great line of wizards, and wants to live up to their name. She is extremely sweet,band chipper. If asked, she will almost always say that the glass is half full. She come from a long line of Wizard wolfs, though they are not hugely famed for that. She has no expectation on her to me any greatness in her family. She loves to try and climb trees, and has a huge sense for exploration. Her dream is to meet a dragon, and a unicorn, in their natural habitat. Unicorns because of the magical ability the posse, dragons because, well. Dragons are just cool. The magic she casts is always purple, the color of vitality.
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Re: Reds CAAA character development challenge thread

Postby Red weasel » Sat Jul 04, 2015 5:44 am



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Re: Reds CAAA character development challenge thread

Postby Red weasel » Wed Aug 05, 2015 7:03 pm

Roxetta and her sister will post links later.
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