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winter ;; comments welcomed

Postby I'm Not The Only One » Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:13 pm

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      Hi guys c: I haven't posted a story in like...forever so don't be too harsh to judge the layout, I'll make it prettier when I have time (probably in the Christmas holidays) but I really wanted to post this and get some feedback! Now on another note- You might think this story is a bit of a wolf version of Disney's movie "Frozen." At the start you might think this, but I promise you it will have its own twists and turns, and take a completely different turn! I am also aware that there are probably books that sound similar, but to be honest I've never read one, so please tell me if I'm copying someone's work! So that's a big enough blurb for now, how about a real blurb? (Sorry for how bad it is, I promise to work on it a bit more later!)

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It has been foretold that on the coldest night of Winter, a pup with pure white fur will be born, bringing with her an eternal winter. For centuries, pack wolves have thought of themselves as the kings of the forests, ruthlessly killing and chasing off wild dogs and lonesome wolves. They think that the forest is only big enough for the strongest of canines, but this is not true. And they will learn. Along with the eternal winter comes a prophecy, fore-telling that it can be broken by the brightest and most powerful thing on earth. Jaila, the pup's mother, leaves her litter to her old pack and leaves, believing that to end this winter she must unite dogs and wolves, that the mysterious thing in the prophecy is forgiveness and unison. Meanwhile Tundra, the white pup, faces heart-wrenching decisions, the choice between blood or pack, and the whole forest's survival, is based on her decisions. It's a harsh and difficult time to live in the forest, and it's future is unclear.


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      Note: I am going to try and make this as factual as possible, so most of the wolf behavior and hierarchy will be mostly factual, however this is a fantasy story, so if you see a fact that isn't right, it's probably for the purpose of this story. Okay, let's get on with the story ae?
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Postby I'm Not The Only One » Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:14 pm

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      {{Will work on this throughout the week}}
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