✘ The Brothers

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✘ The Brothers

Postby lucas. » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:42 pm

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In the city called Broome, lived three brothers named Royal, Lacey, and Liam Mars. The Mars brothers were all born with special powers. The powers of water, fire, and earth. Not many people know about thier powers, but if it gets spread through-out all of Australia, a curse will be placed on the brothers by their father. Their father is a well-know evil wizard around the world. It's bad enough they have to deal with villains without anyone knowing, but now this. What happens if all of Australia gets to know? Read this story to find out!
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✘ The Charcters

Postby lucas. » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:49 pm

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Royal Mars, Lacey Mars, and Liam Mars;; the brothers.
Ren Mars;; their mother.
Charlie Mars;; their step-father.
Gar Bull, Stacey Wonder, and Ray Moore;; their best friends.
Carry Mars;; their-evil-father
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✘ The Chapters

Postby lucas. » Sun Oct 12, 2014 12:50 pm

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Here are all the chapters. <3
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✘ Chapter 1 - Royal's Perspective

Postby lucas. » Mon Oct 13, 2014 8:05 am

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    You've been warned. The words kept replaying inside of my head like a music disk in a stereo. Our real "father" has just warned me yesterday about the evil curse he'd put on us. Why? I honestly have no idea. My plan is to not tell the others for now, and I'm sure they know better than to just go off and tell our friends about our powers. Although, there's not promise that Liam won't. He's not the brightest kid..I'll put it that way. I walked up to my room and pounced on my bed. It can get really annoying just knowing that there's no guarantee that are powers will be kept a secret. Why did we have to be born with these damn powers? Isn't this enough of a curse? I groaned into my pillow and rolled around.
    Then, I heard a knock on my door. Liam? Lacey? Mom? I wasn't sure, so I just said, "Come in." I wasn't sure who came in, but whoever did, plopped on top of me. I groaned, making them roll off and laugh. Lacey.
    "You know I hate when you do that!" I screeched, turning around to look at the laughing Lacey. "Stop laughing," I commanded, but I could tell he couldn't. I rolled my eyes and said, "what are you doing in here, anyway?"
    "Well you know that it's almost my birthday?" He said, and I nodded, with an eyeroll. I simply could never forget his birthday. Who could? He'll mention it whenever the time's possible, well, when it's nearby. "I just wanted to tell you, don't get me anything." He said, with a smile. My eyes grew wide, nothing for him? I couldn't dare do such a thing!
    "Mhm.." I said, and looked around the room. "Okay, fine. I won't get 'cha anything." I lied, with a smile. I believe he caught my smile, because he began laughing. "What's so funny?" I asked.
    "You're a horrible liar." He said, and got off the bed. "But, I'm dead serious." After he left, there was another knock on the door, I groaned once again and the door opened.
    "In comes the bull!" Liam shouted, coming inside my room. Why's everyone coming in here today? Jesus! "Aye, Royal!" He exclaimed, pouncing on top of me like Lacey. Why do they do this? Why? To torture me? Stop. No. He chuckled, rolling off me. I understand if I had a brother, but why two? Yet they're damn twins! But, they don't exactly look alike. Lacey has black hair with some brown through-out it, he has sky-blue eyes which everyone adores, and he's pale. Whilst Liam has bleach blonde hair, grayish-blue eyes, and he's well tanned from being out in the sun. I'm just glad I'm the older, more wiser, one of the bunch. Older by one year, but still!
    "What do you want?" I asked, with clear irritation showering my voice.
    "Well you know it's almost my birthday?" I nodded. Again, I simply could never forget his birthday. "Well, all I want is.." He blew ice-cold water out of his mouth, onto me, and ran away out of my room, laughing like a maniac.
    Boy, he's dead!
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Re: ✘ The Brothers

Postby mαríσnєttє dσll » Mon Oct 13, 2014 8:18 am

Wow!! It's awesome XD I love it. Please continue~~~ C:
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Re: ✘ The Brothers

Postby lucas. » Mon Oct 13, 2014 8:19 am

LaurieIshBoss wrote:Wow!! It's awesome XD I love it. Please continue~~~ C:

    ✘. Thank you!
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