Poets paradise (post now)

[Horsey girl7777]

I adore poems and would love to hear yours! I will post some too! Criticism and comments are accepted!
And if you sadly are not in poem writing mood, please post tips as well as feedback for the writers!

Pet's name: Shakespeare

[Horsey girl7777]

KINGDOM OF KIDS
My bedroom my kingdom, my throne my bed.
My toys my people, with my cotton crown on my head.
I rule my kingdom with pride and all it's secrets inside.
My walls are strong and protected with posters, there is no reason to hide.
When my brother's kingdom attacks I have no fear to be shown.
As I know my brother's people have come to the unknown.
Socks are thrown and the fight is rough.
But I am calm as I know my socks and people are tough.
At the end of the day, win we did.
Out of socks and elastics but I know I won my rights as a kid.
By Horsey girl7777

[Horsey girl7777]

I must go

I must go to the sun,
to repay all you've done,
to make my life so interesting and fun.

I must go to the moon,
and be back soon,
for you have given me the gift of great life
and a better gift I shall never find.

I must reach for the stars,
and yes, that far,
to find the loving care you had found
in only one single bound.

To another universe I must travel,
further than any travel I have ever travelled,
to be even similar to the one and only, amazing
supportive,
YOU!

By Horsey girl7777

[Horsey girl7777]

Father

You stand tall above me as you are grander
You help and support me as you are kinder
You always win against me as you are better
You fight for me as you are stronger
You protect me as you are braver
You help me as you are smarter
I love you because you are my father

By Horsey girl7777

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[Horsey girl7777]

Happy father's day Australia, hope you enjoy this poem!

[Horsey girl7777]

Fly away
I’m looking out my window with a dream I’ve kept since I was young it’s not too extreme
I’ve always dreamed of lifting off and flying away
If I could fly I could fly I would travel the world fly the 7 seas, the universe & all the galaxies
I’m looking out the window from this prison. Looking at the birds with freedom.
I know where I am but lost is the greatest freedom in life
I wish apon a star not up to far that I could lift off, freedom I strive
I’m an eagle I’m an eagle I can fly I can fly, fly the skies fly the skies so so high so so high.
It is just a dream, though I know it will come true
if we work together, if I am with you.
By Horsey girl7777

[TheSongOfTheStars]

Wandereress
I will wander alone, alone
I am alone, have no one.
A father, a mother, and a sister I will never know.
I must go.
I used have a family and home
Now I am alone
I used to have love and happiness and joy
Now I have the grey cloak, the long bow, and the flighted arrow
I am the Wandereress.
I used to love
But now I have forgotten how
I wander alone
I am alone

[Horsey girl7777]

Thanks so much for your beautiful poem, truly well thought!

[Horsey girl7777]

Lies

not

love

I thought I knew who you are,
I thought you as an evening star,
I thought our minds where all but far,
I thought you always spoke from your heart.
now I know us was fake,
just a mistake,
your mind is as unpredictable as a lake.
I thought I knew love,
I know now it was fright.
I thought for me you let out a dove,
I don't know how to find love at first sight.
Fright over came,
you used me as a frame,
just to hold up a picture,
a picture with your name,
a picture of my shame.
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[panfou]

The sounds of the lake
Seem so fake
But when I'm with you
I know one thing is true
The love from you that shines like gold
Is a story waiting to be told
A story waiting to be sung
A guitar waiting to be strum
A bird waiting to sing
A mighty and powerful king

Somehting something something
I can't think of any more rhymes ;D
Hi