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Postby #Spirit » Thu May 08, 2014 12:06 pm

Welcome to NightClan's untold stories! Here is where anyone can from the clan can post stories from long ago about NightClan, my clan. You can post things such as unexplained deaths and your cat's history, including written stories about your cat or cats. If someone quits and wants all of their cats to die or be lost, then we can also write stories for their cat's deaths. Spoofs are also welcome, as long as you keep it appropriate, like all other things in this forum.


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*NO PLAGIARISM! If I see or notice any plagiarism, then you are banned from this topic, also give credit to it's creator if you are using art

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*Don't use this thread to have conversations, don't even reply unless you are commenting on a story, but use nice comments or critique





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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby fish out of water » Thu May 08, 2014 12:10 pm

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Sail yawned and peered around the rocking hull of the boat with caution. Her eyes narrowed when she spotted the one thing she didn't like about life on the water, waves, Her sister. She leaped off the cushion and bounded up the rope ladder to the ship's deck. She admired her twoleg's passion for travel, but her heart lingered for freedom. She watched carefully as the ship pulled towards a dock. Peterson Port. The boat stopped, the rocks bumping against the ship, knocking it gently towards dock. She leaped carefully onto the dock, and quickly bolting away. she would no longer be sail, but what would she call herself? Was she really ready for this change? Of course she was. She began to pad along the dock, other sea-cats calling her. "Hey Hazel eyes!" or "Hey sail!" from the ones who she knew. Hazel. I will call myself Hazel.


Hazel padded across the dock, briefly peeking behind herself for any cats before bolting towards the forest. She started panting, and looking around. Her ears perked as she noticed the trickling sound of a river. One thought filled her mind, Food! She ran over to the water and watched the many fish swim by. She reached her jaw in and snatched a trout out of the water. She sat down and began to ate some of the fish, her muzzle dripping. Maybe this won't be too bad. she told herself before falling asleep.


Hazel woke suddenly to a cat that poked her with a claw gently. "Who are you!?" she yelled, it seemed to come out louder than she intended. The calico cat stood there, his face straight, his fur gleaming in the sun. "You are on Nightclan Territory Kittypet! he spat. Hazel looked at him confused. "How did you-" she asked looking down, she noticed her seafoam green tag. "Oh." she said simply, looking to her side and finding a thick stick. She grabbed this stick and placed it between her and her collar. She pulled, and pulled, and pulled until her collar snapped her free, sending her flying backwards. "I'm not a kittypet." she told him, sitting down. "I'm just a loner, looking for a clan." she lied. What is a clan? she asked herself, as he narrowed his eyes, and began to pad towards his camp. She followed quickly.


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"Thornblaze?" Hazelstripe called, padding trough the underbrush of the forest. She saw the muscular, calico cat siting in a clearing. He was looking off into the distant stars as if something was out there, in reach, yet so far away. Her head turned suddenly as a cracking came from the other end of the clearing. It was a small fox, slowly padding towards Thronblaze. "Thornblaze!" she yelled, turning the head of the fox, she leaped infront of him. It happened as if it was slow motion. Thornblaze turned his head, and let out a silent "No." into the air. She turned her head back to the fox. It was inching closer to her head, pinning her down, but he was confused. Hazelstripe was smiling. She was in the very same spot she had found thronblaze moons ago. She drew her last breath with a slight sigh and looked back at the fox, before he bowled his head into hers. And with a last blink she watched Thronblaze draw nearer, and the fox run in terror. And she died with a smile on her face.


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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby ♬raιĸoυ♬ » Thu May 08, 2014 12:10 pm

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Shiver

Now, Shiver wasn't remembered for his kindness, or bravery towards others, not like he did that, but it was for his crude manners. He was the last cat you'd want to annoy, and luckily Icesky ended his life.


The story of his life

( Will now be told through Shiver's eyes )

i woke up beside my mom, Clearstream and my brother and sister were already out of the nest.
"Hey, Ice, Whisper, let's go hunting!" I chirped.
"Be careful." My mother warned, and dismissed us.
"wow! The mountains are so big! Look over there, see that.." I froze, "Hawk!"
I tried to runaway, but my legs buckled beneath me and the hawk swooped down.
Ice and whisper came to my aid and helped fight it off, I thought I was safe until I opened my eyes and saw it coming straight for me. I screeched and felt its talons dig into my head. Ice ripped it away,
Why can't I see?! Where's my eye!? I thought feeling scattered, I stumble into the snow, looking with my only eye at the pool of blood forming beneath my head, I went unconscious.

I guess it was not to long after, but I awoke in our den, lying on the ground, feathers and wolf fur lined in my nest. "He's awake!" My mother Clearstream purred and nuzzled my forehead.
"eww, yuck." I mewed, embarrassed after receiving mommy's comforting licks
She smirked and prepared to go hunting with Frostheart, "We'll catch that eagle and bring it home for you Shiver!" Ice and Whisper cheered, and I flattened my ears in embarrassment.
A short period of Time passed and we saw only Frostheart return. "The eagles took Clearstream, now with little protection, we are going to the forest." He growled holding back tears in grief for his mate.
They traveled to the forest, and clan territories.
"You're going to stay here, in Nightclan, with your uncle, Brokenstar. I'm going to seek Clearstream's former clan and tell then the news." Frostheart whispered.
Time passed and Ice, Whisper, and I were made warriors, and had gotten over the death of their father, Frostheart, he had died from a mysterious lump in his belly. Shiver kept his name, but Ice and Whisper became Icesky and Whisperclaw.
Brokenstar fell from leader and little after that, Spiritstar took his place.
I mooned over Spiritstar for moons until I finally had the gut a to ask her to be my mate, and she said no.
My soul was filled with spitting rage, and after I found out she had kits with a Spikeclan cat, I 'exploded'
I trapped them in the fire hopping to kill them all, but no, she ran away, and I announced her secret at the gathering. The cats seemed unaffected by it and were angry at me. Icesky found Spiritstar and told her what happened, she returned and exiled me.
I hated Icesky, Spiritstar, Star, and their kits from then on out.
While out, Icesky came and attacked me, and we fought until he threw on the rocks that cut my throat and made me bleed to death. My senses fading, spasms flowing through my body for a final time. The only thing on my mind was Hate. I could see he was triumphant, so I snarled as I died,
"You live on now, Icesky. But I'll come back and kill you, no matter how long it takes."
Then my life faded and my spirit found its way to the DarkForest where I live with my kin, readying to kill Icesky and Whisperclaw. My heart burned for nothing but revenge, and revenge is what I will get.
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Rainsplash's Death

Postby #Spirit » Thu May 08, 2014 12:12 pm

Spiritstar's eyes widened, she was trapped and alone, fire broke out around her where are Suncloud and Cedarpaw?! We need our medicine cats! Her mind screamed, her claws gripped into the ground until she saw a flash of white and black. Her brother and deputy, Rainsplash, was trying to save Cedarpaw and Whitepaw! Out of the corner of her eye she could see Rainsplash darting towards Cedarpaw, who was desperately struggling to pull Whitepaw out from under a fallen log. The medicine cat apprentice attempted in pushing the branch away, but it was no use, Rainsplash dashed to the rescue and nudged the log away with the help of Cedarpaw, Spiritstar had no use in hanging around so she burst towards the cats. She could hear Rainsplash shout to Whitepaw and Cedarpaw, "RUN!! HURRY!"

Spiritstar dashed towards her brother, "come on!" They were far from the other cats of their clan. She caught Cedarpaw and Whitepaw skidded away from the camp through the nearest place of exit, but just then, a loud craaaaaack erupted from above them as a large pine tree was split in half, it seemed as if it were coming straight towards them. Cedarpaw ran with some honey, not knowing of the cats still trapped in camp. Rainsplash stared wide-eyed up at the falling tree, un-moving with a gasp. Fire blocked out Spiritstar's view, she felt auite giddy and weak, but she could see Rainsplash's pelt, NO! she dashed forwards just as the tree struck, pushing her brother out of the way. It was too late, Rainsplash's pelt had been burned and he lay dead on the ground. Spiritstar was crushed by the weight of the pine tree, or the later Prisoner's den, and she had lost a life almost instantly, thankfully StarClan was able to heal her, but they surely weren't able to heal Rainsplash. Flames swirled around in Spiritstar's vision, the dazed she-cat could make out brown shapes, shards of bark, flying around and a thunderous crash of the oddly large pine tree, fire blazed and her pelt was incredibly warm. She awoke from her encounter with death to find that her pelt had caught flame



About a moon later once the clan was fine, they had left FeatherClan camp, where they had stayed during this 'incident,' and Russetwing was chosen as the new deputy. Spiritstar remains sad about her brother's death to this very day.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby Fading Dreams » Thu May 08, 2014 12:14 pm

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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby pinkdepths » Thu May 08, 2014 12:21 pm

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Revenge. The word replayed in her mind endlessly, tossing and turning in her mind, her head spinning. Her claws were outstretched as she looked across the border towards where Spikeclan camp was located. Her paw pressed to the other side, her claws digging into the dirt on the other side, her paw pads pressing a pawprint into the dusty area. Her scent wasn’t hidden, nothing was. Your turn to feel the pain I’m sure most of your warriors’ do, Ivy, her mind seemed to speak as she pulled herself fully across the border. Turning her head, her blue eyes looking back. Take it in, you might never see this place again.
She turned back to the scenery ahead of her, each familiar sight bringing memories to her mind. Revenge; the word seemed to flicker in and out of her mind like a whirlwind of a single word. Her eyes narrowed, taking in each particle of dust that moved from it’s original place. Her ears perked as a hiss entered the hearing of her gray ears. Ivy! The thought automatically crossed her mind, just before the roar of the leader came before her ears sharply. Traitor. The word echoed her mind endlessly as the Ivy leapt at her. She let out a squeal, her fangs bared in a snarl. Ivy’s teeth grazed her neck as she let out a growl. Her outstretched claws aimed themselves for the muzzle of Ivy, blood splattering. A bowl to the side threw her to the ground, the harsh ground beneath her causing plenty of pain.
Pain burned in her pelt, yet she ignored it. Revenge… The word came back, flickering as if a ghost in the wind. Bringing her paw up, her sharp claws showing, she pulled them close to Ivy’s ear, dragging it across, blood spilled. I have a chance of winning this battle, at least. She thought, just before something hit her neck, nice and painful. Her sight flickered for a moment, just as she noticed it was Ivy’s paws. The pain was unbearable, her loud yowl bursting into the area.
Ivy’s hiss came clearly to her, easily heard, “I will have my revenge, Ivory!” The larger cat had said to her. Revenge isn’t what you need, death is! Her mind seemed to speak for her, yet she held her tongue.
“Revenge for what exactly? Having an actual life away from all the pain we’re forced to bear for you?” She asked with a loud hiss, just as the leader’s paw pressed to her face. She spat, aiming a paw with unsheathed claws for her recently slashed, bleeding, muzzle. She took the time to rise to her paws, quickly, just before claws slashed against her throat. She stumbled back, the pain bubbling within the wound. Blood trickled from it, yet she once again ignored it.
She leapt again. A simple leap, Maybe I can get her neck, just maybe… she thought, her claws fully extended. She hissed as Ivy stealthily ducked, swiping her sharp claws across her tender belly. She let out a growl, followed by a loud yowl. She hit the ground painfully, the sheering pain beating through her heavily. Blood dappled her grey and white pelt, coating the ground as well.
“it's about time you pay the price, Ivory. You showed no respect for my clan,” Ivy hissed, standing before her. Ivoryfeather’s sighted was dimming by the minute as she tried to struggle to her paws. She was flailing endlessly, blood seeping from her heavy wounds. The world spun ever so quickly just before she stopped abruptly. Every pain that she felt was no longer felt. The world went black before her, eyes closing.
Revenge.
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Ivy's Escape

Postby #Spirit » Thu May 08, 2014 1:29 pm

Ivy sat at the foot of Mrs. Robinson's chair, pressing against her leg in sheer boredom, eyes dull as she watched her sister sleep on the couch lazily. Anger pricked at her mind, Abigail was worthless, and so were the other cats that lived among her with Mrs. Robinson as well. She hated the stench of that horrid kittypet food, and admired the aroma of her twoleg's food, she would often jump on the table and beg for a share in her twoleg's food but was always whisked away by a twoleg paw. She could no longer live like this, everyone here seemed quite feeble in her opinion, which made Ivy despise where she lived, always the same routine and the same old sights. I need to leave this horrible place, but how? Where would I go? I heard stories of the ferocious forest cats that live in the wild and feed on bones. Perhaps I could take advantage of those fools... maybe learn how to live like that. It would be amazing to one day come back to this place and show everyone how fearless I am. Perhaps then they would respect me as if I were their leader. Yes, that will be the day. She let out a snort of annoyance and flopped over onto her back, staring up at Mrs. Robinson with bored green eyes. She let out a mew of hunger as she looked up at her meal, licking her chops as she turned over onto her paws. Ivy glared up at Mrs. Robinson, leaping onto her lap and curling up as her owner stroked her fur. It was quite calming, actually, this she had enjoyed. Though she didn't enjoy being restricted to one area, and only from the window she could see the municipal, which she longed to escape to, a thought struck her hey, maybe I should take my plan into action. How bad could it be? I could just get food from those dumpster things, of course she flexed her claws in anticipation and pleasure as she broke away from her twoleg, simply swiping past Abigail. She froze as she heard a voice.

Abigail purred, "what makes you so happy? Your never in a good mood, but what should I expect?"

Ivy was aware that her sister was joking, but her stupid and simple jokes had been getting quite irritating, "none of your beeswax, furball." She hissed through clenched teeth, claws striking the floor.

Abigail was a bit taken aback, just as I expected, she's in a mood she turned away with a "hmmph!" and started towards Laila

The skeptical and fairly young she-cat stalked along the side of the couch, unseen by the others, Ivy slipped down the hallway and made a turn towards the garage door, where a cat flap awaited her to make her escape from. She made her way nimbly across the garage, where at the end of it, one side of the garage was nearly shut, yet still open, at the very least. Ivy pressed herself to the ground, slinking along the cold floor of the garage until the slightly plump kittypet was able the just squeeze from the small opening. Freedom! Ivy stood in the dead of night, staring around and swiftly darting towards the fence. She leaped at the fence, claws gripping the wooden surface as she hauled herself up, struggling to finally get a hold of the fence. Ivy made her way down on the other side. Suddenly, a pair of bright blue eyes glowed in the grass and Ivy leaped back in fear as it neared her, claws unsheathed and eyes glittering in the moon's dim light. Once she could see what it was, she noticed a slender, blue cat with a blue collar, her claws immediately unsheathed as she stared her in the eye.

The strange she-cat stepped forward, her face now fully visible under the light of a lamp post, "I'm Sparks," she mewed, eyes narrowed and claws unsheathed as well

Ivy blinked, "well, nice to meet you but I'm kind of in a rush," she told her, voice sped and impatient, "now, if you could please let me pa-"

Sparks cocked her head to one side, "where are you going, exactly?"

"To the city to get away from my twolegs..."

"Hey, I could guide you there."

Ivy blinked in surprise, "really? Are you sure about that?" She was still angry that this cat had scared her, and she wanted to do things for herself, "um, actually, I am kind of destine to be a loner, so yea."

Sparks' eyes narrowed, "if you insist," she turned away and muttered under her breath, "die for all I care."

Ivy let out a snort of disgust and swept away in arrogance, head and muzzle raised as if she had won a glorious battle against the cat. Hey eyes were narrowed in determination as she squished through an opening in her neighbor's fence, slipping through to the other side. A dog barked at her through a window and she hissed, fur fluffing up as her sharp claws extended, she glared at the dogs fangs as she caught a glimpse of it's snarl those would make me fearless, imagine if I replaced those with my own. I'd be unstoppable! Ivy was not a normal house cat, that was for sure. She always refused to have her fur groomed, for she would always bite or scratch the lady who usually groomed the other cats in her former owner's house. The rest would just sit calm while Ivy would be throwing a fit. Also, she was not one to like talking, she avoided conversation, for she feared that it would become awkward or she would be embarrassed. Yet, she desired power, power over all that have crossed her path, power over the forest cats who she had heard so many stories about by eavesdropping on conversations, as she usually had done. The only one who she had loved in that house was Mrs. Robinson, such a kind twoleg, the kindest that Ivy would probably experience, being loved would be rare from her, from here on out.




Ivy awoke in the dark alley once more, this was where she had been sleeping for two weeks. Her belly panged with hunger, luckily she had gotten a bit of food from the Carrionplace that's very lucky.. she thought gratefully, I'd better go get myself some grub, on the thought. The now thin cat had got to her paws and searched for food when I have cats look up to me, I'll make them hunt for me! She was determined to make this happen. Ivy darted down the sidewalk, claws outstretched, she now had a habit of unsheathing her claws wherever she went, though they were not the sharpest, they could still be useful if she ever found herself in a scuffle.

Though, two moons later, she did


The young she-cat drew near and hissed at Ivy, "get off of NightClan's territory, kittypet!"

Ivy's eyes narrowed and she lifted one paw up to her stomach in shock, with that, she turned to one side and whacked her sharp claws against the side of her opponent's face, causing her head to jerk to the side quickly. The cat yowled and leaped at her as Ivy swiftly aimed a sharp blow at her belly. The cat stood panting, it was a small cat, and quite immature, yet older than a kitten. The small ginger and white cat stared up at her, blood dripping down her leg as she let out a soft cry and fell on one side. Just then, Ivy hissed and threw her claws across the younger cat's neck, the cat lay there in a pool of blood. Ivy suddenly felt a smirk grow across her face, it was a good feeling, one she'd remember for a long time. A patrol neared, and a young grey speckled cat gasped as she saw the small cat.

"Tawnypaw!" She yowled, and after her so did a large black tom. With that, Ivy took off into the forest, swerving past trees and leaping over a fallen log. Though, Ivy had collected one thing, a fallen fang from the so called 'Tawnypaw's' mouth, she held it proudly as she returned to her alleyway. She sat and lodged it through her collar, OUCH! it suddenly stabbed into her neck, but she couldn't get it out. She pulled and pulled, but it was no use. She sighed, and then a flash of pelts caught her eye, this place had been temporarily inhabited by others!

The almost blue-colored cat spoke first, clearing his throat, "I am Shark, and this is Cocoa, who might you be?" This cat was quite large and had claws made of a dog's. Cocoa dipped her head

"I-Ivy," she was slightly shocked, this had been an eventful day

Cocoa gasped, "Shark! Shark it's the ivy in the prophecy!!" Shark turned to his sister

"Are you sure?!" Shark looked back at Ivy and whispered, "she's in no shape to be leader."

Cocoa shook her head, "rubbish, you see, Ivy, dozens of homeless cats have been living among us, we keep them safe but there is no leader. We are thriving, the forest cats are threatening us, will you help us in battle against them?" She whispered, only in earshot of Shark, "just to prove that she is," Shark just nodded. She looked down at the blood staining Ivy's claws and snorted, "uh, what's that?"

"Yes!" She then lied, "oh, I fought off a pack of wild cats that threatened my... food." Ivy smirked at the thought of leading perhaps someone has granted my wish



Now, Ivy isn't the wisest cat, nor is she in a prophecy, but let's all remember for the future... if you have a cat, please entertain it so that the forest cats don't seek revenge on him or her, or so that the forest cats don't die.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby zoooooo » Thu May 08, 2014 1:33 pm

SparrowMoons Past

Before SparrowMoon earned her name, she was a rouge, living outside the code, on her own with her mother and litter-mates, but what was her life like? How did she see the world knowing about the clans but not livin in one? And How did she come across clan life?

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I gazed up at the trees "mom? We're has dad gone?" I asked glancing over my shoulders, "why did he leave?" I asked my eyes widening in awe as my mother spoke "he belonged to a clan, his name is RedLeaf..... And we'll he did not leave, h-he died in a battle last moon" my mother stammered, I gasped "why didn't you tell me!" I wailed, my heart pooling with grief. My mother looked at me with sorrow in her eyes "beacuse... I just couldn't! my mom meowed, I nodded glaring at her and i scuffled out of our bramble den, I glanced at my litter mates as they tussled and fought in the dust. Rowan looked up and called to Me "hey come and play with us!" my sister yowled. But I shook my head and walked away glancing up "What is a clan?" I muttered to myself "We'll... Whatever it is..... I am going to become a clan cat" I declared

A few moons latter
I continued to pester my mother for moons, by then i had learned about cats known as warriors, and how they all lived together. I sighed glanced up at the claw-moon and back at my family. whispering I meowed to myself "Clans here I come!" I mewed "I'm gonna be a great warrior!" I meowed raising my voice slightly, sneaking out of the den i began pushing my way through many brambles, i wrinkle my nose as i sniffed a tree stump, gasping I felt my pelt prick "clan sent!" I meowed quitely bounding forwards my tail wavering in excitement .
I ran along the trees until i felt another cat crash Into me "Hey!" I spat, the other cat turned to me and hissed "This is my territory!" the other cat yowled, I took a few steps back "what?! Wait I'm here cause I want to join! I want to hunt and fight like the warriors!" I meowed pleadingly, the other cat glared and snarled "And why would a kittypet do that!? and if its a fight you want.... You can have one!" the other cat snapped and leapt at me her claws out_ Stretched, I took a few steps forwards and sheathed my claws "I'm not afraid of you! And I'm NOT a KittyPet!" I Yowled flinging myself forwards, the other cat came to a stop and hissed, I braced myself but then felt utterly confused when the other cat sat down and shrugged "oh well then you must be a rouge! I'm SmallPaw by the way.... And I'm training to be a warrior! She meowed. I Gasped this was a clan cat,"wow! That's why I came, to be a warrior!" I meowed eagerly, but SmallPaw just shrugged again "it's not up to me!" the young cat meowed "But I can take you to camp! she meowed. I she felt my jaw drop and i nodded eagerly.
It was a while before we had reached the camp, and I was tired and hungry, just then SmallPaw looked at me and whispered Shh! This is the camp! she meowed, I nodded "okay, what now?" I asked. SmallPaw just slapped her tail over my mouth, and whispered " it will be dawn soon, and I will have to take you to SpiritStar!"The small tawny cat meowed dipping beneath some brambles, in what felt like many moons she reappeared with a tall cat "Sparrow, Meet SpiritStar!" SmallPaw meowed, I gasped in astonishment and dipped my head.

A Moon Latter
I finally had become a clan cat, my biggest dream had come true, It had been a moon or so since I began my training and I am pretty certain I was doing well for a outsider, I soon learned the code and how to hunt and fight using water!, one day while I was patrolling on my own, I bumped into a couple small kits, and their names were Red and Jake, I instantly recognized the sent of my mother buried in their pelts, so I eagerly took them back to camp, and luckily they were accepted and welcomed in just like I was, In another four moons I had earned my name, SparrowMoon, and my friend SmallPaw became SmallBird, I will never be able to thank her enough for brining me to the clans, and I will never forget that I was once a rouge, but I will always be a warrior, right till the end.....


RedFeathers Secret

RedFeather was once known as Red, along with her brother Jake, she was a KittyPet born to Lilly & Hank, she was always bright and happy, but one day that all changed? Why and how? What caused her to become cold and lonely? What forced her to leave?

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I was born inside a Two-leg nest, and yes I was a KittyPet! But that did not hold me back, when I was five moons old me and my brother Jake were exploring in the woods behind our yard, that's when we met our older HalfSister... SparrowMoon, latter we joined the same clan as SparrowMoon, and That clan is called NightClan, we earned the names, RedPaw and LionPaw.... And we're welcomed as full Apprentices of NightClan. Although we were welcome I never truly got over the muttering and whispering of the other Apprentices and young warriors, I often picked up words like "KittyPet, Don't belong, never going to be a true warrior!" These words stung at my heart, and made me more determined to prove I was as fit as any ClanBorn cat! Although I did not fully ever believe in StarClan, I followed the code, and learned how important it is, and for many moons I trained hard, and soon enough I became RedFeather, and my brother Became LionTail!

Six and a Half Moons Latter
I knew it was bad but I had the instinct I explore beyond our territory, although I still kept the warrior code in mind, it grew less important to me, and so one day I went on AppleClan land, but that was a mistake! When I was drinking from a pretty stream, a Coyotie jumped out from no were, I yowled and slashed its nose, then I turned and fled, but I had no experience with the moor and no idea about the cliff, but I had no time to worry and I kept running, I could feel that coyotes breath hot on my tail, but then RemedyLeaf happened to be sitting by the cliff I yowled a warning as I tried to stop, witch I couldn't cause I wasn't used to the coarse moor grass of AppleClan and I skidded off the cliff with the Coyotie and The AppleClan Medicine cat, we all laded with a thud, I let out a sigh of relief as the Coyotie limped away and did not continue to attack me, as I tried to get up my leg was screaming with pain, so I decided to stay put for a while, glancing over my shoulder to see if RemedyLeaf was okay, my blood turned to ice and I gasped in horror, as the rival clans medicine cat lay sprawled out limply, her neck twisted Ina unnatural way, her body in a uncomfortable arch. I lay their with grief pooled in my heart and the suns cruel scorching rays beating down on me, until long I heard the yowls and paw steps of the AppleClan cats. A young grey warrior spat at me, I recognized her from the gatherings and I knew she was known as TroutTail, behind her came MudTail and RosePaw the MedicineCats apprentice, I felt sick to my stomach as the Apprentice wailed in grief and I watched her burry her nose in RemedyLeafs cold fur, "Please don't hurt me!" I begged the two warriors as they closed in their eyes narrowed, I am thankful that instead of tearing my pelt off, they brought me to RosePaws den, were she set my leg on the road to heal, in a half moons time, PineStar sent PatchClaw to return me to NightClan, and he did so, he brought me to HoneyPaw at the gathering place, and she and PatchClaw brought me home, once I was home I realized that no cat had hardly noticed me, and I was somewhat glad that the medicine cat, and many other cats were busy helping BarkFur, LionTail was annoying as a burr in your fur he pestered me and pestered me, questioning my loyalty.... So one night I took some comfrey leaves from the Medicine cat den and left the clan, I am positive my leg never healed right and that it never will fully recover, and I have been living in the twoleg place for the past few moons.I believe it's just better, that no cat remembers me, and I will never forget and ALWAYS regret that it is MY fault RemedyLeaf Died!

I have Now lived in the Twoleg place for many moons, I have found peace alone away from clan life, I now hunt and fend for not only myself but my two kits, Fire and Dawn who I would like to one day call FireFur and DawnStreak.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Thu May 08, 2014 2:48 pm

Echo's Hidden Chapter


Her story may seem finished, a mostly blind cat abandoned by others, but it gets far deeper.


Echo


Most know her as the bitter, ignorant one, who cares for herself instead of others. But how exactly did this happen? Why is she so mean and bitter? Why is she so calm yet snappy? There is a small hidden part, a part hidden within her conciseness.


I awoke, I was outside with Clover, Summer, and Strike. Strike looked at me "Ginger! You're awake!" he meowed. I knew the chemicals did something but what? Suddenly I noticed the world around me starting to get blurry. Clover looked into my eyes "I think it caused a reaction with her eyes." she told the others. "What?" Summer asked, looking over "I think Ginger might be going blind." Clover explained. I could hear every word they were saying, and Strike didn't seem too happy about it "We take her for now, but if she gets in our way we leave her for dead." he said firmly. Strike had always seemed to be the leader figure in our small little group but this? I knew I couldn't get in the way. We stayed together for about a moon, a badger attacked. I could barely see it so hid rather than attacking. Strike was clearly mad but what was I supposed to do? Go out and get myself killed? After all was over with, they walked over to me "You were told not to get in the way, our plan would have worked if you had tried to attack Ginger! You fool!" Strike hissed, I backed up. Clover looked at me "Get lost!" she hissed, the nicest cat here hissing at me. Summer stayed without a word, I was her kit after all, but I was also Strike's and he didn't seem to care. I got out into the forest, the words "Ginger! You fool!" ringing through my head. I eventually had enough and decided that Ginger was no more. By that time my hearing was much stronger, Echo became my name. I have learned never to trust much because of them, and if I ever see them again they will die!
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby #Spirit » Fri May 09, 2014 9:34 am

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