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Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Sat Aug 03, 2013 8:10 am

CHAPTERS
Introduction & Rules; You are here
The Clan & StarClan; Here
The Territory; Here
Prologue; Here!!! :3


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This is still a w.i.p

Here is a quick explanation of where "Swiftfoot's Story" came from. If you take time to read it, awesome! If not, that's fine too ^_^ But you must read my rules.

INTRODUCTION
This is the background story concerning one of my roleplaying warrior characters, Swiftfoot. I kind of "quit" chicken smoothie with my old account, and I ended up forgetting my password. So I came back with this account and joined a bunch of new roleplays and became a bit more literate. But then I started coming online less and less as each of the roleplays I participated in slowly went dormant, or didn't even start. But now I'm back and have been for a couple of months. While I was joining a warrior RP someone had taken my usual prefix "feather" so I came up with this name and fell in love with it. Special thanks to {Bubbles} for that. The name also erupted so many more ideas for her personality, and then her history, then her love life. She differs a little bit in every roleplay in order to fit the plot, different rank, prophecy, etc. You get the point. Though if you are in a roleplay with me the part about her sister and Owleyes will most likely be different. Well that's it, now onto about the story.

ABOUT
"Swiftfoot's Story" is her life story, starting at being born. Swiftfoot is just and ordinary cat, another reason why I love her name. Just an ordinary cat of her clan who made life changing choices, ones that anyone could have made. Some were good and some were bad. She has encountered many obstacles and made her way around them in her own way. I have already got part of it planned out. Though I don't have the other half of her warrior life set in stone yet, but I've got plenty of ideas. Now onto the rules.

DOESN'T EVERYBODY LOVE RULES?
- You can post to mark and comment, and I like pms too! I will do polls and contests here, and ask for what you guys think shoukd happen next when im stuck. That is if the story even ends up being good enough cx

- When I haven't written in a while, please just be patient. I do have a life, and school and I can't be on 24/7. I'm coming up with this stuff off the top of my head, even now. I only have a rough idea and I'll take a break when I need to refresh and think about things. Though I will try to be as active as a I can in chatting with you guys.

- If you really hate my story, or you think it's bad.. please don't be rude. I take suggestions though!

-No spam! I will report you and have it deleted.

- AAAANNNNDDDD. That's about it.. cx.

- One more rule, please enjoy!
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Sat Aug 03, 2013 8:10 am

CHAPTERS
Introduction & Rules; Here
The Clan & StarClan; You are here
The Territory; Here


Announcement! I need images for some of the cats in the Clan. If anyone would be willing to find a couple for me I would be most grateful :3


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Ӏ ҽ ɑ ժ ҽ ɾ
➺ Scorchstar | ♂ | 62 moons | 2 lives left | large brown tabby with amber eyes

ժ ҽ ք մ է վ
➺ Foxfur | 62 moons | ♀ | reddish brown she-cat {Currently a Queen. In charge in her place is Badgerclaw}

ʍ ҽ ժ ì ϲ ì ղ ҽ . ϲ ɑ է
➺ Greystone | 84 moons | ♀ | long-haired grey she-cat with yellow-amber eyes

ʍ ҽ ժ ì ϲ ì ղ ҽ . ϲ ɑ է . ɑ ք ք.
➺ Sparrowflight | 25 moons | ♀ | jet black she-cat with brown eyes

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➺ Badgerclaw | 62 moons | ♂ | large handsome dark tabby and yellow eyes
➺ Lizardstripe | Age | ♂ | brown tom with large stripe down midback
➺ Dewcloud | Age | ♀ | light grey she-cat
➺ Whiteface | 45 moons | ♂ | tabby tom with white face
➺ Sharpclaw | 15 moons | ♂ | dark ginger tom

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➺ Snakepaw | 8 moons | ♂ | brown tom
➺ Larkpaw | 8 moons | ♀ | dark gray she-cat
➺ Nettlepaw | 8 moons | ♀ | pale gray she-cat


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➺ Silverfur | ♀ | 59 moons | Looks | long-haired grey/brown she- cat with blue eyes
➺ Hazelstream | 42 moons | ♀ | tortoiseshell she-cat
➺ Foxfur | 62 moons | ♀ | reddish brown she-cat
➺ Speckletail | 26 moons | ♀ | Light grey she-cat with darker flecks | Expecting Goosefeather's kits

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Parents; Badgerclaw & Silverfur
➺ Swiftkit | Less than a moon | ♀ | light silver she-cat with blue-green eyes flecked with gold

➺ Shadowkit | Less than a moon | ♂ | dark, almost black tabby tom with green eyes
➺ Snowkit | Less than a moon | ♀ | white she-cat with blue eyes

Parents; Hazelstream & Whiteface
➺ Harekit | 3 moons | ♂ | handsome creamy white-brown tom with darker ears, legs, and tail with brown eyes

➺ Owlkit | 3 moons | ♂ | handsome black tom with white paws, chest, face and tail tip with handsome yellow-green eyes

Parents; Scorchstar & Foxfur
➺ Fawnkit | 2 moons | ♀ | creamy reddish brown she-cat with darker flecks


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➺ Patchfoot | 110 moons | ♂ | Black and white tom
➺ Mudfur | 99 | ♂ | mottled dark brown tom
➺ Mosspelt | 119 moons | ♀ | Looks | once-pretty long haired pale gray she-cat
➺ Clovertail | 108 moons | ♀ | Looks | tortoiseshell she-cat


➺ Name | Age | ♂/♀ | Looks | Image


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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Wed Aug 14, 2013 9:51 am

CHAPTERS
Introduction & Rules; Here
The Clan & StarClan; Here
The Territory; You are here


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Since this is just a fan made story, the territory is no place on this world in particular. Anwayss, the clan live in a deep lush seemingly never ending forest to the east side of camp. This place is filled with a variety of trees and land formations including ravines, rivers, stream, and on the rare occasion you may come a crossed a bare patch of land. Camp is located to west end of the forest built up the north side of a cliff, where not too far north is a waterfall with a river flowing east through the rest of the forest. It is made up of mainly rocks and bushes. Dens are made within the rock piles. If you climb up certain parts of the cliff you can safely make it on top. Going farther west the forest gets thinner until it's open wide space with rolling hills and plains. Vice versa as you go east. For prey, its is like that in the books. Except all of the clans combined. Same for predators.
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:21 am

prologue


It was a quiet night in Clan territory. The only sound to be heard was the faint crashing sound of a waterfall, north of camp and the occasional rustle of the brush or the hoot of an owl, sounds of night animals searching for a meal. Young bright stars could be seen clearly. Alongside it, the real looker of the night sky, a full moon. Not even a slight breeze disturbed the leaves of the trees. It was a perfect night for the birth of three young kits. In camp, the air was stirring. Something was different. A large handsome tabby padded out of the nursery, and made his way towards the medicine cat den quickly. The medicine cat den a few fox-lengths away built underneath a pile of rocks, big and small. He had easy passage into the entrance, which instantly seemed much larger once he was inside. The scent of herbs was very strong and the yellow eyes of the senior tom trailed to the tight curled bodies of the pair of medicine cats.

"Greystone," he whispered lightly prodding the older she-cats thick grey pelt with a large paw. The she-cat's eyes opened slowly and she lifted her head, so her gaze could meet the warrior's. Sparrowflight awoke after her mentor. "Greystone, the kits are coming," he said with a strong thick voice.

The she-cats turned heads in surprise, "Already Badgerclaw?" Greystone asked. But soon she relaxed and got to her paws with a nod. "Let us gather our herbs. Go to her, she needs you with her right now," she mewed softly. The warrior and the medicine cat exchanged a knowing look between them. Badgerclaw and Silverfur were very much in love. Ever since they became mates, kits were something they had always wanted. Though both of them had been very healthy all of their life, not one kit survived a litter. Badgerclaw dipped his head and obeyed. It didn't take the two of them long, and they soon entered passed the brush and arrived in the dark warm den.

Shining eyes of six cats were all fixed on Silverfur who was lying on her side near the entrance of the den. The deputy of the clan was lying on her stomach next to her speaking to her softly. Small contractions shook the she-cat's body slightly, signaling she was getting ready to give birth. Badgerclaw took Foxfur's place beside his mate. The queens had their kits fall back asleep, but stayed awake themselves. A while later the last of the three was born. The queen curled around two shaking frames of newborn kits, one almost black and one a gray-ish white. Greystone removed the sac surrounding the little she-cat. Greystone worked vigorously to get the kit to breath, but nothing seemed to work. Don't give up Greystone. You can do this. As the last bit of Greystone's hope started to dwindle, the kit's jaws parted in a gasp for air. Greystone let out the breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding. After many, many moons of helping queens give birth, a kit taking its first breath still got her.

After all three kits had settled with their mother and Badgerclaw curled around his exhausted mate, she began to examine the kits with Sparrowflight. Greystone's eyes were drawn to the youngest little gray kit. She had a special fondness for the little she-kit, which grew by the minute. For being the last kit, she was very strong already, almost as much as her littermates. Though she was not the biggest, nor the strongest, she a lot of determination into getting to nurse. The two medicine cats were impressed. Seeing that the kits were healthy, with happy thoughts running through their mind and images that would last forever they left for their den to rest for tomorrow. Which they assumed would be a bright, cheerful, and exciting day.
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Tatzel » Wed Aug 14, 2013 10:23 am

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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:10 am

Prologue is up! What do you think so far? Do you think I should use small text for the story or keep it as is?
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby roses.in.abyss » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:23 am

Marking, I'm going to start reading the prologue in a few minutes. Seems interesting!
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:32 am

Okies :3 tell me what you think!
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby roses.in.abyss » Thu Aug 15, 2013 7:42 am

I like it, but . . . who is Greystone? I'm kind of confused. Other than that, it's good! Also, you should use small print.
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Re: Swiftfoot's Story

Postby Song & Lyric » Thu Aug 15, 2013 8:08 am

I thought I edited the clan ranks xD Greystone is top medicine cat. And I'm lad you liked it. Any suggestions?
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