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by ᴛʜᴇᴡᴏʟғ » Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:41 pm
Gone
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♢♦♢ Section 1 ♢♦♢
by ᴛʜᴇᴡᴏʟғ » Mon Jul 01, 2013 5:34 am
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So?
by ᴛʜᴇᴡᴏʟғ » Sun Jul 07, 2013 5:40 am
{ Please tell me what you think! Going too fast, too slow? More detail, less detail? Continue or no...? }
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Re: ♢♦♢ The Table ♢♦♢ A Short Story
by ~Demonic Moon Curse~ » Sun Jul 07, 2013 7:02 am
I think it's good! To should definitely continue. You should separate the speakers from each other, put the things thy say on separate lines, if you understand. For example:
Kait stopped a few feet ahead of me and looked back. "Michael, are you sure you're alright?" She looked at me with green eyes that shone with worry.
I smiled gently and nodded. "Yeah, I'm fine. My head is just..." I shook it.
Kait stopped a few feet ahead of me and looked back. "Michael, are you sure you're alright?" She looked at me with green eyes that shone with worry.
I smiled gently and nodded. "Yeah, I'm fine. My head is just..." I shook it.
Oh me! Oh life! of the questions of these recurring,
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
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Re: ♢♦♢ The Table ♢♦♢ A Short Story
by ᴛʜᴇᴡᴏʟғ » Sun Jul 07, 2013 7:08 am
Oh yeah, thank you! Haha I meant to go back and space it out because I wrote this on my phone and just emailed it, but totally forgot xD
Thanks!(:
Thanks!(:
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Re: ♢♦♢ The Table ♢♦♢ A Short Story
by ~Demonic Moon Curse~ » Mon Jul 29, 2013 11:19 am
Oh, okay, you're welcome! 
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Oh me! Oh life! of the questions of these recurring,
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,
That the powerful play goes on, and you may contribute a verse.
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