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Postby officialratsgalore » Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:11 am

Fill in the blanks to make the story personal. You can change anything about the story if you'd like.. Just, try to keep the plot.
Feel Free To Comment - This is made for you, not me.. Continue below for my version of Soul Creatures..


*I only have a few samples of the story finished. I'd rather finish the story then write the samples.

Ƨσʋℓ Ɔяɛαтʋяɛƨ - First Part

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I wake up from hearing a tapping noise. There was a dark figure at my window, I hesitated at first but I heard a familiar voice. When I opened the window, (Bestfriend's name) was on the balcony. (He/She) started screaming at me. "(Your name), I was up there all night! Why didn't you open your window!" (He/She) was so close to crying. I held (him/her) and perked (his/her) chin up. "What's wrong, are you okay?" I asked, I could see fear in (his/her) eyes. She stuttered for a moment then broke out in tears. I squeezed her as tight as possible. "You need to rest." I said while covering (him/her) with a blanket.

The next morning, I awoke on the floor. I picked myself up but when I looked on the bed (Bestfriend's name) was gone! I flipped the sheets over, opened the closet, checked the balcony. Yet, (he/she) was nowhere to be seen.. Suddenly, I heard a bang under the bed. "OW!" I bent down and leaned under, it was (Bestfriend's name). But, (he/she) didn't look like herself. Actually, she looked like a (Animal that looks like your best friend)!

"(Bestfriend's name)?" I wasn't sure if (he/she) could understand me but I was certain it was (him/her). Then, (he/she) spoke. "Yes? Why are you looking at me like that?" I immediately stood up and took a deep breath, then I started throwing around clothes from my drawer until, finally, I found my hand mirror. "Look at yourself!' I said, sliding the mirror under the bed. All I heard was a (Snarl, Hiss, Growl, etc..). Then, (he/she) screamed! "AAH! WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!"


Ƨσʋℓ Ɔяɛαтʋяɛƨ - Second Part

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I've been sitting down the past two hours trying to get (Bestfriend's name) to remember why (he/she) was on my porch last night. (He/She) said (he/she) has no memory whatsoever of how (he/she) got on my balcony or even under my bed. If my parents walk in and see a talking (Animal) on my couch I don't even want to know how they would react. That's why I'm glad they went on that business trip last (Day of the week) and they won't be coming back until next (Month, year, day.. etc.). I sighed. "School is about to start in an hour.. I didn't even began to get ready.." (He/She) gasped. "Wait. You're leaving me home alone?" (He/She) began to panic before I even got to explain myself.

I covered (his/her) mouth to speak. "You know that if I'm absent again they will call my parents, if my parents don't answer then they will come to my house! We don't want that, do we?" (He/She) nodded and I placed my hand off of (his/her) mouth. "You just.. Stay put, okay?! Don't open the doors or do anything!" I said with a (food) in my hand. "Here, take this!" I threw the (food) at (him/her) then opened the door. "I'll be back at 2:15, try not to destroy the house." I joked before slamming the door shut.

On my way to school I couldn't help but wonder what happened to (Bestfriend's name). Why did (he/she) turn into a (animal)? I was so caught up in my thoughts I hadn't realized the bell rang for the students to get to their first class. I quickly ran inside the school and to (Class #).

"Hello class, today we are going to learn about Animal Behaviors.. (Your name), why are you so late to class?" (Teacher's name) and the rest of the class's attention was all on me. To make matters worse, the zipper to my bag slipped open and everything dropped out of my bag. The teacher came over to help me pick up my books and (Crush's name) caught my pencil with (his/her) foot. "You dropped this.." (He/She) said so charmingly. I already felt myself drooling over (him/her) "T-thank you.." I stuttered, without showing eye contact. Smooth, (Your name), stuttering is the biggest loser's move.. I thought. (He/She) chuckled then sat back down in (his/her) seat. Once we finished picking up all of my books and pencils, which seemed like forever, (Teacher's name) forgot about my tardiness and continued teaching the class.


Ƨσʋℓ Ɔяɛαтʋяɛƨ - Third Part
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Someone behind me said. "Psst.. (Your name)." When I turned to see who it was, it was (Someone), (he/she) examined my face. "Are you alright? You look kind of off." (He/she) said. "I need your help with something later.." Then, (He/she) slipped a note into my hand, from under the desk, and I quickly turned my attention back to the teacher. "Do you have something to say?" Asked (Teacher's name). "Umm.. No, (Teacher's name).." I looked at the class who was all staring at me, all but, (Crush's name)..

Sooner or later school ended and I was walking back home. I dropped my bag on the side and looked for the note (Someone) gave me. When I found it, it read. "(Your name), I saw what happened to (You bestfriend's name) last night.. I'm scared to death, can you please meet me at my house tonight?" It left an address and a time at the bottom of the page. I wasn't sure what to do.. "If (he/she) knows what if word gets out? What if my friend gets kidnapped and tested on my government officials?" I was flustered. I grabbed my bag and ran home.

"(Bestfriend's name)?!" I called (his/her) name but (he/she) didn't answer. I looked around the living room but (he/she) wasn't there. Suddenly, I heard a whisper coming from the closet. I went to grab the doorknob when my (boyfriend/girlfriend),(boyfriend/girlfriend's name), came down the stairs.  :shock: I slowly moved away from the closet door and onto the couch. "What's wrong?" (he/she) asked me.. "Oh, nothing.." I replied. My legs were facing him but my head was turned to the closet.. I can't help but wonder what (Someone) knows.. Then, I looked back at (My boyfriend/girlfriend's name) and smiled. "Well, I'm not feeling so well today." I said while helping (him/her) off of the couch. "How about you come back next month?" I tried to close the door but (his/her's) hand got in the way. "Are you breaking up with me?" (He/she) said then looked at me, which gave me the biggest heartache. I shrugged. "I donno." Then (he/she) flipped out, throwing his keys in the air. "Is it about (Crush's name)?! Because, I know how (he/she) looks at you! Are you cheating on me?" (He/she) placed (his/her) hands on my shoulders as if (he/she) was about to hug me. So, I quickly stepped back and brushed (him/her) off. "I'm not cheating on you with anyone, I just think we need some time alone." Ohmigosh.. My life is ruined.


Ƨσʋℓ Ɔяɛαтʋяɛƨ - Fourth Part
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I finally got the door closed then I waited a few seconds until I knew (he/she) was gone. (His/her) keys were still on the floor. I opened the door and looked around but (he/she) was nowhere to be seen, just (his/her) car.. I shut the door and locked it. These things just keep getting weirder.. I sprinted over to the closet and quickly swung the door open. A naked, but, human (Bestfriend's name) fell out from the closet. (He/She) was passed out and pale. I checked (his/her) pulse, (he/she) was still alive, I'm so lucky I took that extra health class. Then, I dragged (him/her) onto the couch and placed a warm towel over (him/her), "Can you hear me?" I whispered. "I'm new to this, I don't know what to do.. You have to wake up!" I pleaded with (him/her) and cried silently. "Please wake up.."

A person was at the door, "(Your name)?" I lifted my head and yelled at them. "Go away (Boyfriend/Girlfriend's name)!" But, it wasn't (him/her). I wiped my tears then opened the door. It was (Crush's name)! "Why at this time?" I thought.

"What do you want, (Crush's name)?" I didn't want to open the door too wide. So, I stood in between the crack. (He/she) scratched the back of his neck and smiled, that gorgeous smile. "Can I come inside?" (He/she) had a worried expression growing on (his/her) face, but I still refused to let him in. "No." I said, then, his face turned white. "Please. We don't have much time." (He/she) practically picked me up and placed me to the side. Just before (he/she) got inside (he/she) bounced back, like a forcefield. My eyes widened at the sight, I watch plenty of movies to know what (he/she) was.. I leaped inside of the house, causing the door to swing all the way open. "I'm not inviting you in!" I yelled still wondering why he wasn't burning from the sun.


(This is what Sabrina looks like (human)--->Click
This is what Alex looks like (human)--->Click
This is what Sabrina looks like (poodle)--->Click
This is what Alex looks like (pitbull)--->Click
This is Priscilla(human)--->Click)
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Cocker Spaniel's First Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Mon Jun 24, 2013 9:16 am

Here is my example of Soul Creatures:

I wake up from hearing a tapping noise. There was a dark figure at my window, I hesitated at first but I heard a familiar voice. When I opened the window, Sabrina was on the balcony. She starts screaming at me. "Priscilla, I was up there all night! Why didn't you open your window!" She was so close to crying. I held her and perked her chin up. "What's wrong, are you okay?" I asked, I could see fear in her eyes. She stuttered for a moment then broke out in tears. I squeezed her as tight as possible. "You need to rest." I said while covering her with a blanket.

The next morning, I awoke on the floor. I picked myself up but when I looked on the bed Sabrina was gone! I flipped the sheets over, opened the closet, checked the balcony. Yet, she was nowhere to be seen.. Suddenly, I heard a bang under the bed. "OW!" I bent down and leaned under, it was Sabrina. But, she didn't look like herself. Actually, she looked like a poodle!

"Sabrina?" I wasn't sure if she could understand me but I was certain it was her. Then, she spoke. "Yes? Why are you looking at me like that?" I immediately stood up and took a deep breath, then I started throwing around clothes from my drawer until, finally, I found my hand mirror. "Look at yourself!' I said, sliding the mirror under the bed. All I heard was a growl. Then, she screamed! "AAH! WHAT HAPPENED TO ME!"
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Cocker Spaniel's Second Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Mon Jun 24, 2013 10:37 am

I've been sitting down the past two hours trying to get Sabrina to remember why she was on my porch last night. She said she has no memory whatsoever of how she got on my balcony or even under my bed. If my parents walk in and see a talking poodle on my couch I don't even want to know how they would react. That's why I'm glad they went on that business trip last Saturday and they won't be coming back until next month. I sighed. "School is about to start in an hour.. I didn't even began to get ready.." Sabrina gasped. "Wait. You're leaving me home alone?" She began to panic before I even got to explain myself.

I covered her mouth to speak. "You know that if I'm absent again they will call my parents, if my parents don't answer then they will come to my house! We don't want that, do we?" She nodded and I placed my hand off of her mouth. "You just.. Stay put, okay?! Don't open the doors or do anything!" I said with a granola bar in my hand. "Here, take this!" I threw the granola at her then opened the door. "I'll be back at 2:15, try not to destroy the house." I joked before slamming the door shut.

On my way to school I couldn't help but wonder what happened to Sabrina. Why did she turn into a poodle? I was so caught up in my thoughts I hadn't realized the bell rang for the students to get to their first class. I quickly ran inside the school and to Room 284.

"Hello class, today we are going to learn about Animal Behaviors.. Priscilla, why are you so late to class?" Ms. Ferrier and the rest of the class's attention was all on me. To make matters worse, the zipper to my bag slipped open and everything dropped out of my bag. The teacher came over to help me pick up my books and Alex caught my pencil with his foot. "You dropped this.." He said so charmingly. I already felt myself drooling over him "T-thank you.." I stuttered, without showing eye contact. Smooth, Scilla, stuttering is the biggest loser's move.. I thought. He chuckled then sat back down in his seat. Once we finished picking up all of my books and pencils, which seemed like forever, Ms. Ferrier forgot about my tardiness and continued teaching the class.
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Cocker Spaniel's Third Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:05 pm

Someone behind me whispered. "Psst.. Priscilla." When I turned to see who it was, it was Jake. He slowly examined my face. "Are you alright? You look kind of off." He said. I just shook my head and when I was about to turn back around he whispered again. "I need your help with something later.." Then, he slipped a note into my hand, from under the desk, and I quickly turned my attention back to the teacher. "Do you have something to say?" Asked Ms.Ferrier. "Umm.. No, Ms.Ferrier.." I looked at the class who was all staring at me, all but, Alex..

Sooner or later school ended and I walked back home. I dropped my bag at the side and looked for the note Jake gave me during class. When I found it, it read. "I saw what happened to Sabrina last night.. I'm scared to death, can you please meet me at my house?" Then it left an address and a time at the bottom of the page. I wasn't sure what to do.. "If he knows, what if word gets out? What if my friend gets kidnapped and tested on by government officials?!" I began to panic and became flustered by the idea. Then, I grabbed my bag and ran home.

"Sabrina?!" I called, but she didn't answer. I looked around the living room but she wasn't there. Suddenly, I heard a whisper coming from the closet. I went to grab the doorknob when my boyfriend, Ezra, came down the stairs. :shock: I slowly moved away from the closet door and onto the couch. "What's wrong?" He asked me.. "Oh, nothing.." I replied. My legs were facing him while my head was turned to the closet.. Is she in the closet? What form has she taken, human or animal? Has Ezra seen her?!.. Then, I looked back at Ezra and smiled. "Well, I'm not feeling so well today." I said while helping him off of the couch. "How about you come back next month?" I tried to close the door but his hand got in the way. "Are you breaking up with me?" He asked, with a sound of fear in his voice, it gave me the biggest heartache. I shrugged. "I donno." Then he flipped out, throwing his keys in the air. "Is it about Alex?! Because, I know how he looks at you! Are you cheating on me?" He placed his hands on my shoulders as if he was about to hug me. I quickly stepped back and brushed him off. "I'm not cheating on you with anyone, I just think we need some time alone."
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Cocker Spaniel's Fourth Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Thu Jun 27, 2013 11:28 pm

I finally got the door closed then I waited a few seconds until I knew he was gone. However, his keys were still on the floor. I opened the door and looked around but he was nowhere to be seen, just his car.. I shut the door and locked it. These things just keep getting weirder.. I sprinted over to the closet and quickly swung the door open. A naked, but, human Sabrina fell out from the closet. She was passed out and pale. I checked her pulse, she was still alive, I'm so lucky I took that extra health class. Then, I dragged her onto the couch and placed a warm towel over her, "Can you hear me?" I whispered. "I'm new to this, I don't know what to do.. You have to wake up!" I pleaded with her and cried silently. "Please wake up.."

A person was at the door, "Priscilla?" I lifted my head and yelled at them. "Go away Ezra!" But, it wasn't him. I wiped my tears then opened the door. It was Alex! "Why at this time?" I thought.

"What do you want, Alex?" I didn't want to open the door too wide. So, I stood in between the crack. He scratched the back of his neck and smiled, that gorgeous smile. "Can I come inside?" He had a worried expression growing on his face, but I still refused to let him in. "No." I said, then, his face turned white, "Please. We don't have much time." He practically picked me up and placed me to the side. Just before he got inside he bounced back, like a forcefield. My eyes widened at the sight, I watch plenty of movies to know what he was.. I leaped inside of the house, causing the door to swing all the way open. "I'm not inviting you in!" I yelled, still wondering why he wasn't burning from the sun.
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Cocker Spaniel's Fifth Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:23 am

Alex seemed to know exactly what was happening. He looked down at his hands which were growing fur on them and had an 'Oh no' expression on his face. "Quick, Priscilla, invite me in!" He was changing into a monster, I was gonna invite a handsome monster into my house! Seems to make perfect sense. "Alright, I invite you inside my house.." Right when I said 'I invite you', Alex jumped into the house. By the time he landed onto the floor, however, he was already finished changing. "Alex? Is that you?" I asked stupidly, of course it was him.. I just saw it happen! He didn't look like a monster at all! "You're a pitbull?" I asked, sorta wanting to laugh but Sabrina's a poodle. "Just.. Just, close the door.. Please.." He still had his charming voice, at least.

"What's going on?" I wanted answers and, yes, I was gonna get them. If it took a collar, some soap, and a bathtub.. I was gonna get them! Alex sighed. "I don't know exactly.. But, I'll tell you what I do.." I nodded my head and took a seat on the couch, next to Sabrina, who's still passed out.. Alex continued his story, he began with.. "Well, I'm not who you think I am." Then, I had to interrupt and say, "You're not Alex?". He let out a sigh and kept going.."Of course I'm Alex, but I'm a shape-shifter.. I was born this way. My whole family was.." The room got quiet. Out of everyone in the whole world why was it Alex? Then he added, "Oh. I can also read minds.." That's when my mouth dropped and the blushing came up.
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Cocker Spaniel's Sixth Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Fri Jun 28, 2013 1:53 am

I was still confused. That explains him, but, not Sabrina. He was obviously reading my mind because before I said anything he already had an answer. "What happened with your friend is the same thing that's going to happen to you. Your friend turned into a poodle, am I correct? She turned into a poodle because that's what her soul creature is on the outside." I placed my hands on my head. "You just said that it's going to happen to me." He paused to think, then replied. "Everyone has two soul creatures, they are the animals that represent you on the outside and on the in. The natural born shapeshifters are starting a revolution, the government can't just block us out anymore. We can do things that they can't and that scares them! We were naturally born with the shape-shifting gene turned on. Everyone has the gene and the natural-borns found a way to turn it on. That's what happened to Sabrina. We turned on her gene."

"Who is 'we'?" I never like the sound of an uninvited 'we'. He glanced into my eyes and I felt a small tingle go down my back.. "I'm not sure who turned her gene on exactly. But, 'we' means the natural-borns, of course." Great, now this whole thing sounds like an occult.. Why is he smiling? Oh, he heard that? Let me just try to stop thinking for a while. I looked at Sabrina. "Is the gene making her sick?" I wanted to know if she was in any pain even if I couldn't do anything about it.

Alex shook his head. "Actually, no. She's making herself sick.. She is so confused that she fainted. She'll wake up sooner or later." I found myself sliding forward and pushed myself back up. "So she'll be alright?" I asked, making sure. He plainly replied with, "She'll be fine.." Then, he smiled. "One more thing, us.. Shapeshifters, we have a.. Sorta tradition. Well, it's more like a gift or talent." I rolled my eyes. "Cough it up!" What else does he want to tell me? Could it be any worse than this? "Besides, soul creatures natural-borns have soul mates and I think that I imprinted on you.."
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Cocker Spaniel's Seventh Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Fri Jun 28, 2013 2:28 am

He pulled his ears back and lowered his head. What, is he embarrassed of liking me? Or does he wish he imprinted on some other girl? I grinned then gave him a hug. He's so cute as a pitbull, I felt like going in the kitchen to grab him a dog treat. Then I remembered, "I have to go to Jake's house tonight..". I murmured. It looked like he didn't like the sound of that and he had a face of jealousy. "Oh no. I mean, look, he gave me this note.." I reached into my pocket and pulled the note out for Alex. He rolled his eyes. "You already know what you need to know and it's too dangerous." He said it sternly and jumped off of the couch. "You can't go.."

"Oh so, you imprint on me and now you own me?" I decided to use his 'talent' against him. "He's scared. He needs to know!" Alex turned around and barked like thunder. "Needs to know what?! I trust that you won't just go around telling people just because they're scared!" He huffed then calmed. "He will know soon enough, this is a revolution." He looked at me curiously with a tilted head. "What?" I looked at my hands, they seemed perfectly fine. I didn't feel any changes.. "Why are you looking at me like that?" He blinked twice then sat on his haunches. "Anger isn't what triggered your shift..?" He said it as if it was a question. I looked again at my hands and feet, I didn't see a tail sticking out of my jeans. "I guess so.." I shrugged. "I was definitely angry."

Alex smiled. "Yeah, I know. I felt it.." Really? So he reads my thoughts, imprints on me, and feels my emotions... "Do you ever ask for permission? That's probably why you were so shocked when I didn't invite you in.." I looked down at him and he seemed pretty tired. "Why are you still a pitbull? Can't you shift back?" I asked. He glared at his paws and side. "I can if I wanted to. But, I don't." Then, I placed my hands on my hips. "Why not?" He placed his head on his paws, saying, "If I did, I wouldn't shift back without clothes on." I turned to Sabrina, "That explains a lot.."
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Cocker Spaniel's Eight Part

Postby officialratsgalore » Fri Jun 28, 2013 2:44 am

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Well, it's getting close to night and I am still waiting for Sabrina to wake up. "Are you sure she's okay?" I asked Alex, who is no longer a pitbull nor naked.. He's wearing some of Ezra's old clothes. He placed his hand on my lap for reassurance. "I promise you, she'll be fine." I smiled back but, no matter, I am still worried about my best friend. If it was some other hot guy telling me that I'm a shape-shifter I would have thought he was crazy. But, it's not, it's Alex.

I rested my head on his chest and we laid on the couch, taking turns to watch her. At one point, we both ending up falling asleep. But, she stayed asleep until early in the morning when she woke us up with her screaming. Alex and I tried to explain everything to her carefully. She was convinced that she's crazy and needed to go to an institution. But, somehow someway, we finally convinced her.

I was kind of waiting for myself to shift. Alex said it would happen when you least expect it but I feel like it just won't work for me. He said that there are many types of shifting. There is shifting on que, shifting in fear, shifting in anger, shifting in happiness, and just randomly shifting.. Well, I've tried shifting on que.. That doesn't seem to work, I've also tried anger and happiness. The only one that I didn't try is fear. I'm really hoping my shifting is not random.. But, if my shifting is in fear I hope my soul creature can defend me.. I looked down at my cup of coffee, realizing I was shivering from thinking to hard. I placed the cup on the side and closed the curtain, I don't have school until another two weeks. It was cancelled, for some reason.


recap?
Soul Creatures represent your looks and your personality, pretty much.
Sabrina caused herself to faint by overreacting..
Alex says he imprinted on Priscilla, Ezra disappeared, and Priscilla ditched Jake..
Alex's shifting works by anger but he can control it..
Natural-borns were born with the 'shifting' gene already turned on, plus they have other powers such as reading minds and feeling emotions.
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