fourteen. { writing contest entry.

[Korona Knight]

My gosh...Nope. I'm done. I'm out. I've been beaten xP

But seriously. That was amazing.

[toast-]

rawr, the magical judge has come to judge lol. no, just kidding. but both your entries are great. i-i don't know... this is gonna be hard haha

-- alone xx

[abbie-sama]

I...
It...
The...
I...
The...
A-awesom-
/faints

[runnershigh]

O-O it... i... it's just... pure awesomeness... asdfghjkljcdbfsdjfbjwfbgiw *flails arms wildly, then faints*

[runnershigh]

no worries at all, i was only just stating the obvious truth :3 i wish you good luck in the competition! *cough*even though you don't need it at all*cough*

[runnershigh]

oh! *blushes* thank you! <3333

[I'm Not The Only One]

This is truly amazing. Nothing much else you can say but it's amazing xD

[Charias]

This is so amazing. Seriously. I cannot express how amazing this is.

[Rolly-chan]

It is amazing, so no belittling yourself! :3
At the beginning there were a few too many "was"s for my liking (too much passive description in the first paragraph), but the rest is incredibly well written and seriously awesome <3

EDIT: I mean the second paragraph *cough* xD It's late where I am *coughcough*

[Rolly-chan]

You're not the only one xD It's so frigging hard *whine* No worries, though, the story is so amazing that this little passive voice over-abundance at the beginning is pretty insignificant in comparison ^^