For Ever And Ever [Comments Welcome]

[Mr Fox.]

Hello, this is a story of mine from a while ago that I want to be starting back up. The first few chapters will be extremely short due to they are old and have only be edited, but with out further ado.. Here it is.

[Mr Fox.]

Running. Running for your life. Brambles cutting your legs and wind stings your cheeks. Your foot catchs on the on a root and you fall to the hard packed dirt. The pain, the blood and......him. He is not what you thought he was. He is here, laughing at you. Never in a million year would you have thought this would happen, but it has, here and now. Your love used against you, stabbing deep like a knife to your heart. Feeling the fangs sink into your neck you welcome the pain, the death. Who ever thought your love would kill you. Who ever thought he would be a vampire.............

[Mr Fox.]

I woke up and yawned "Weird dream." I've been getting a lot of dreams like this lately but I never seem to see the guy's face. If some one out there is trying to send me a message they're doing a pretty sucky job. Right now the only message I'm getting is stay away from freaky vampires, but there is a problem with that, VAMPIRES ARN'T REAL.

"Ever!! School!!!" My mother yelled up to me.

"****!!" I exclaimed, jumping out of bed and pulling off my fuzzy Sponge Bob pajama pants and my low cut Invader Zim tee-shirt, swapping them for ripped, faded jeans with green, blue, and purple paint splatters and a long sleeved grey and black stripped tee-shirt. Quickly, I ran downstairs while slipping on my worn out sneakers. Grabbing my backpack I ran out the door to my rusted pickup and put the key in the ignition. Quickly I pulled out in to the Californian traffic and headed to school. Once there I pulled in to a packing spot and ran to my first class.

"You must be Eveline Cairithian." Said the teacher and I nodded in response "You're late, take the seat right over there." He said pointing to the seat front and center, slowly I trudged over and sat down grumbling. "As I was saying class my name is Mr. Grendel and I will be your math teacher for this semester." He said, speaking with a tone that you could just tell that he hated us all. The class went on and on without a spark of anything that could be called interesting but finally the class came to an end and i left as fast as I could.

[Mr Fox.]

The rest of the day went by with a blur till my last period, art. Our assignment was to paint something we did or saw over summer break. Once we were assigned an easel, I put on an apron and grabbed a brush. Using precise strokes I painted the sun setting on the beach with surfers cutting through the waves of the blue ocean.

"Nice painting." A voice behind me said and I turned on my heels seeing a guy who was in a few other of my classes. What was his name? Ryan? Mark? What ever I don't know.

"Uh thanks...um..." I mumbled trying to remember his name.

"Arian. " He said, his gaze still fixed on my painting. Slowly I looked over at his, it was ok I guess, well I guess not. I'm pretty sure a first grader would be able to do better.

"Yours is nice." I said blushing and he laughed.

"If you say so, you're the artist. " He said gazing over at his picture wincing " I'm better at drawing, but not much." I watched him for the first time today I actually noticed some one he had sandy blond hair and a nice tan, his eyes were clear pools of blue.

The sound of y teachers voice interrupted my thoughts and brought me back to reality. "All right, the bell is going to ring. You can leave your paintings on the rack to dry and hang up your aprons" She said and I did just that just in time for the bell to ring. I looked around for Arian, so I could talk to him more, but he was no where to be seen. Sighing, I walked out of the class room and into the hallway.

That's when I hit the ground hard, looking up I saw Raylin Tate standing over me laughing. That ***** had tripped me. I picked up my things and stood up glaring at the queen *****. "Awww" she said with a small pout on her face. "Some ones a bit clumsy." She smiled and skipped away, joining the rest of the A-squad.

[Mr Fox.]

I walked out to my truck finding my best friend, Kell, leaning against it's side " Hey babe." I said to her with a smile.
In response she mock glared at me. "What part of lets carpool on the first day of school, do you not understand?!"
I sighed " Sorry, my alarm didn't go off this morning so I had to go at least twenty miles over the speed limit to get here some what on time." I said and she smiled, knowing I was off the hook, I got in the drivers seat and she got in the passenger seat. "Did you see Sky today?"

"Duh! It was hard to miss him with his brightly died PURPLE hair and skinny jeans! That is so weird, gosh, I mean you go on a month long vacation and when you get back your best gay, brown haired nerd friend is gone and is swapped for Mr. purple hair and skinny jeans!" I laughed at her freak out at Sky's transformation. I had been there when he had decided to change his look but she had been on vacation.

" Oh and we're supposed to meet him at the plaza at seven." She said.

I sighed "What is he dragging us to see this time?"

" Like hell if I know, I'm just the messenger. " She turned on the crappy radio and her favorite song of the week was playing so she was sang along, terribly off pitch. I laughed and sang along to.

The rest of the drive to her house we were singing like idiots. I pulled up to her house and clicked off the radio. "Later Kell." I said, as she left she blew me a kiss and ran into her house.

I laughed pulling away, driving home. Finally I could have some peace. At least until seven. I ran in to the house going straight to my studio. This is my own slice of heaven, a place just for me. I quickly pulled on a painting apron and got to work.

[Butterfly~kitten]

luv it so far! c:

[Mr Fox.]

Thank you! I was looking through my documents on my laptop and I found it and when I read it I almost killed myself for how horrid my grammar was when I wrote it and its still bad haha. I spent the whole time my family was fishing editing it. ( I can't fish.)

[Diaval]

Love it!

[Ice Flower]

its pretty nice
waiting to read more ;3
p.s
check this out: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1790712

[Mr Fox.]

Sorry for the loooong wait I got grounded, I'm back now though so the next chapter should be up somtime today/ tommarrow