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TJOG: TJOJ: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 10:15 am






Hi, all! This is the third book (I think I second second book last on the last into in book 2) in my series! And... Um.... The name was actually from something I colored a long time ago (Around when I first joined). That is actually how I got Alaridina. It was during summer last year.... Anyway. Oh, here's the poem:
A fire in the dawn
Something I'll never understand
I could've sworn an hour ago
That I saw the Cloud City
But now it's gone,
Replaced with
The Dawn's Fire

And... onto the story!!!










HOW COULD SHE?!
I jerked awake. Charm was staring in the direction where we last were. I could've sworn I saw tears.
I walked over. Charm...
Charm sniffed, and glanced at me. She betrayed us.
But she also saved us, Gwyn murmured, coming up from behind.
Charm sniffed again. It's just... Just not fair.
Life's not fair, Charm.
Charm sighed, but she was shaking violently now. You're right... I knew my parents, but they died and Tiffany became a traitor. Jade... You can't remember anything from your past.
I sighed, hanging my head. Trust me, I wish I did.
There was a rustle in the bushes. I froze, looking over.
Hi.
Nyx!
She laughed, grinning at me. Sorry, girlfriend.
I rolled my eyes. Whatever.
I seriously wished she'd stop calling me that... eventhoughweareliketotallyclosefriends
Nyx sighed. Guys, we need to do... What was that?
She shot an arrow at the bushes, and the bushes stopped moving. They moved again, and a dog came out of the shadows.
Let me join you, please....!
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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby .Fish. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 11:10 am

Curse you cliff hangers!
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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 11:33 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Curse you cliff hangers!

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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby .Fish. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 11:49 am

Night Emerald wrote:
♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Curse you cliff hangers!

PFHT

Why you give Clift hanger? THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW!
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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 11:57 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:
Night Emerald wrote:
♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Curse you cliff hangers!

PFHT

Why you give Clift hanger? THE WORLD MAY NEVER KNOW!

...
I wanted to play minecraft!!! Oh. And you may not get any until Sunday... Be ause I'm too obvsessed with mc and I need to do something for a project and on Monday I have to do my grammar homework and turn it in to our English/reading teacher before the concert and i have to leave with almost half the girls in my grade (including three boys) on a chorus trip to other schools then CiCi's Pizza.

I AM GETTING TO FAR AHEAD OF MYSELF OH MY GOAH SOMEONE HALP





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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Apr 27, 2013 12:20 pm

Love! <3 Right more, please!!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: TJOJ: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Sat Apr 27, 2013 1:18 pm

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Love! <3 Right more, please!!

Thanks!

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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Wed May 08, 2013 11:30 am

Nyx stared at the dog. Um... No. Why?
The dog stared at her in plead. I recognized him.
You...?!
He looked around. Please... I ran away from them because... Well...
Ivy raised a paw, stopping him. How should we trust you? You almost had us killed.
Her sister Fern nodded.
Then who made the ghost appear?
I actually agree with Charm. I've studied ghosts for all my life. They don't appear in the desert near lava without being called to.
The mutt laughed, smiling. I did that. Y'all did nothing wrong. 'Cept, well, you nearly trampled my pet while y'all were escaping.
He said y'all a lot.
What pet?
He held up something. Oh my gosh. It was a rat. That looked like a squirrel.
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I'll just say... I HATE RATS.
Why... Do you have... A... Um.... Pet rat....?
He laughed. Well... Jace and I just met each other randomly one day and she just loves me. So... Yeah. Oh, and I haven't told you who I am yet, if I can join... IF you trust me, that is.
His eyes sparkled.
Alright, fine. I'm Lavender.
Hunter.
Charm.
Ivyfern.
Fernblizzard.
Nyx.
... Danzi.
Gwyn.
Kantaka. I had almost forgotten she was here. I hadn't heard her speak in forever!!
He looked at me. Jace ran up his arm onto his head and leaned out to sniff me. I recoiled. Jade, I said, stiffly. He looked at me curiously.
Mardu, he answered. Jace, come here.
Jace squeaked, running up to him. He held out his arm, and Jace squeaked, leaping off, running away from the desert.
Now what? Mardu asked.
I smirked. Heading to find the Others from about... How long ago was it?
19 and a half years ago.
Mardu narrowed his eyes. From the legends I've heard, one is alive, in plain sight, even though it's not there.
Plain sight, but not there. Gee, that makes a lot of sense. Hint the sarcasm
How are we supposed to find that?
He smiled that cruel evil smile, I was afraid we'd made the wrong decision by trusting him. Why, we'll find out in the morning, shall we? Night, all...
He trailed off, looking back at the direction of his old home. I walked sideways a bit and saw his face - sadness.
Jade? Charm called out. I ran over to her.
Yeah?
Can you go get some firewood, please?
Yeah, sure.
I went back over to the area where I last was, where I saw Mardu still standing.
I have to go out and get firewood. You wanna come?
He blinked, looking over at me. Sure.
We headed out to the forest, picking up branched along the way.
So... how'd you find them?
He shook his head. I was desperate to find my sisters, Defokia and Jaghoal. I guess in English they'd be Alindia and Jade... I'm sure it was a different Jade, though, he added hastily, staring at me. I nodded.
I hope so. I seriously did NOT want to be this guy's sister. He's really annoying and freaks me out.
He laughed softly, as if remembering something. He picked up a large stick, that nearly hit my head. I glared at him, but a smile crept up. I grabbed another sick.
I remember when Alindia and I were younger, we saw a city. Not a real city, of course, but a cloud city. It was so amazing. The sky was a fire-red, and the castle looked a faint red/orange. It looked like the sky was on fire. It was a summer night... So I guess you could say it was on fire.
I laughed, smiling. A pang of jealously swept over me. I wish I remembered something from my childhood.
Mardu smiled at me. Once we find Ginger, I'm sure we'll-
He stopped dead in his tracks. Look, he whispered.
I looked down. Right in front of us, was marks of an animal. One we had never seen. Something came from behind us.
Ah yes. Seems like its a same you should end right here, so close to your final destination.
I froze. Holding my breath, I looked behind me.
Black... Mardu whispered in horror.
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Black's horse reared up.
Black laughed. Looks like we have you now.
His horse's hooves hit the ground. We were alone, and I was scared.










I'm just going to classify something real quick. I LOVE rats. Jade HATES rats. Jade and I have nothing in common... Jade doesn't mind taking control or anything. I hate that.
I can't say anything else... Hope you enjoy the entry!!!!
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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby .Fish. » Wed May 08, 2013 11:59 am

Amazing!!!
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Re: TJOG: TJOG: Dawn's Fire

Postby star star. » Wed May 08, 2013 12:29 pm

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Amazing!!!

Thanks! <3





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