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The year is 3018.......

Postby theburningfire » Wed Apr 10, 2013 9:17 am

Introduction


The year is 4013 many think this would be when there are flying cars and servant robots and every thing would be invented and robotic. Really its more like ten times worse then it was in the great depression, starving kids and families living on the street. Millions homeless, few jobs available but its through out the entire world.

Lets put it this way, the world is hardly surviving. 140 years ago the sun died but luckily our scientist were ready. They built a giant light out of earths atmosphere, powered by a generator that takes energy from the core of earth.

Then 115 years ago, the soldiers came. Nobody knows who they are or were they come from they just know, they hadn't come in peace. They and there leader took over the world making laws all humans most follow.

Plus every year a child of the age of 12-16 from every country is chosen to go to the "academy" to become a soldier. one kid becomes a soldier never to be heard from they're family again, the rest die.
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby theburningfire » Wed Apr 10, 2013 9:22 am

Chapter 1

Lily Anna-Siblings


I woke up to the first bell. I got dressed in my work clothes. Ate quickly then ran outside to do the farm chores. I was lucky it was a Saturday or else I would have been late for school and got in a heap of trouble.

After I finished the chores I headed inside. I found a note from my mom that said
"Going to town for the day watch your siblings."
I figured she was getting baby supplies considering she was pregnant.

I'm 12 and the second one of nine kids. My sister, Julia who's 16 was sent to the academy last year so I was the oldest kid around now. After me is my ten year old brother Michael. Then Anna and Eva who are 9 year old twins. Then there's Gwen who's four. There's also a boy named Milo who's 7 but he's adopted.

This may seem like a lot of kids but hey it's the rules. It's also nice because theirs lots of helpful hands to do chores. Kids usually start working when their 4 but don't do the hard farm chores tell they're 7 or 8.

I helped the little kids clean their room. Then made lunch, which was corn and a couple scraps of meat from the night before. "More! Sissy More!" Gwen wailed wanting more food. "There is no more." I said to her quietly. I set her on the floor and she ran off after our cat.

I went to the older kids room and climbed up onto my bunk above Michaels bed. Our room was small but it works. I heard a knock on the door figuring it was mom and she locked herself out of the house again. I opened it but it wasn't my mom.

It was dad.

Chapter 2

Megan- My home


(Note: Always look up there^ there's two different people)

I don't have a home, just the forest. But the forest is my home, I've lived here all my life. So I guess you could say I have a home. What I mean is I don't have a house but I do live somewhere. I have no family but I have Ginger. She's like family. We lived with each other our whole lives so I guess you could call us family.

I live out here for a reason. No one wants me or Ginger. No ones allowed to feed us or give us shelter, because our blood. We both come from mixed blood. Perhaps a Republic father and a Civil mother or vise versa. Maybe a Rebel parent and a non-rebel mother. Anyway no one is allowed to come near us because of it. I'm just an eleven year old girl. Yet when people see my scar they run and hide.

Scars are what the soldiers use to keep track of us. Anyone who's supposed to be rejected by the public they put a cross shaped scar across the side of their face. Whether you have mixed blood or you broke the law. Any of the ways. If you have what's known to the public as a "Traitors scar" everyone runs and hides when they see you. Even if your like me and have done nothing wrong except be born into this world. Your still a traitor to them.

I was hunting with ginger when I saw him. Just a little boy no older then five years. With a traitors scar.
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby .Fish. » Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:45 am

Can I post? Pawsome story :33
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby theburningfire » Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:49 am

Yep just trying to keep it more organized, so I'll write all entries there then make a separate post when a new entry is up.
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby .Fish. » Wed Apr 17, 2013 9:56 am

Ok! The intro is really interesting!!!
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby theburningfire » Wed Apr 17, 2013 11:20 am

Thanks! I want to write more but I'm prewriting it in a notebook (my writing turns out better this way) and I left it in my locker >.<
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby .Fish. » Mon Apr 29, 2013 5:34 am

Epic first chapter!
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby monstRsoup » Mon Apr 29, 2013 7:04 am

this story sounds neat...
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Re: The year is 3018.......

Postby theburningfire » Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:48 am

Thanks guys!
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Postby .Fish. » Mon Apr 29, 2013 10:50 am

Welcome! :33
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