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Postby white.flag » Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:16 pm

True Nature

This story takes place in London, England. The time period is sometime around now, because I'm not going into the past with this. This is a fictional anime story. If you have any characters you would like to be in the story, feel free to pm me. The characters do not have to be human, but I won't go into detail on that, eigther. These characters are mainly between the ages of sixteen and twenty something. They attand a high school/college called Benjamin High/Benjamin University. And, yes, those names did come from the metal band Breaking Benjamin. None of these pictures or images belong to me, unless stated in the form. I thank you for reading my story and I hope you find it somewhat interesting. This is my first time doing an Anime story, so I want a little critic. I don't care if you don't like it, so don't tell me, but I wouldn't mind if you pointed out a flaw in my street names or English culture. I am not from England, so I have absolutely no idea if my information is correct. Please enjoy.

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Red;;
Neighborhood of Catrina, Angel, Capital, Coleson, and Toby
{{Croydon Rd}}


Green;;
Neighborhood of Karma, Amanda, Lauren, Eric, Foalon, Trey
{{No Name on Map}}


Blue;;
Benjamin High School
{{Above the Word 'Lewisham'}}


Purple;;
Benjamin College
{{Above the Word 'Lewisham'}}


Pink;;
Extra Neighborhood
{{Sidcup Bypass Rd}}


Orange;;
Cafe Dumonts
{{Next to Green, Above the Word 'Lewisham', Below the Word 'Bexley'}}
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Re: True Nature

Postby white.flag » Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:16 pm

Characters

Name and link | Link to House | Inner animal/pet and link | Age | High School or College | Species


Girls;;
Catrina | House | Racoon | Eighteen | College | Unknown
Lauren | House | Pegasus | Twenty | College | Unknown
Angel | House | Fox | Nineteen | College | Unknown
Amanda | House | Kitten | Sixteen | High School | Unknown
Capital | House | Tiger Panther | Fifteen | High School | Unknown
Karma | House | Nightingale | Eighteen | College | Unknown

Boys;;
Eric | House | Tiger | Twenty-One | College | Unknown
Trey | House | Dog | Seventeen | High School |Unknown
Toby | House | Lion | Nineteen | College | Unknown
Coleson | House | Ferret | Twenty |College | Unknown
Foalon | House | Falcon | Twenty | College | Unknown
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Re: True Nature

Postby white.flag » Sat Mar 30, 2013 3:16 pm

Index
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The snow glows white on the mountain tonight
Not a footprint to be seen
A kingdom of isolation and it looks like I'm the Queen
The wind is howling like the swirling storm inside
Couldn’t keep it in, heaven knows I tried
Don’t let them in, don’t let them see
Be the good girl you always had to be
Conceal, don’t feel
Don’t let them know
Well, now they know

~Demi Lavato Let It Go
One, two, three and four
The devil's knocking at your door
Caught in the eye of a dead man's lie
Show your life with your head held high
Now you're on your knees
With your head held low
the big man tells you where to go
Tell him it's good
Tell him okay
Don't do a damn thing they say

~ The Pretty Reckless Heaven Knows
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Re: True Nature

Postby white.flag » Sun Mar 31, 2013 1:28 pm

Chapter One;; New Student
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The house was silent as the red-headed teen woke up. She was horribly tired, but she had to get up. It was tuesday, aka: the first day of her new school. She lazily slipped out of her pajamas and into the shower. After washing her hair and letting the warm water soak her, she checked the clock. 'An hour.' She told herself. She Slipped into her school uniform, which was a white button-up, a black vest, and a plad skirt. She pulled on some black boots as she sat on the couch in her living room. She lived alone in her house, but she never seemed to feel lonely. She hummed softly as she ate some cereal and watched the telly. When she was done, she picked up her phone and headed outside. Once to her car, she realized that she had forgotten her bookbag, which was a messenger bag. The red-head walked back inside, grabbed her bag, and got in the car again.
It took the girl about Thirty-five minutes to reach Benjamin High School. She smiled up at her new school. She was an exchange student from the United States, and she was happy to be away from home. She had left her mother and father in The States at the beginning of the summer. She parked her car and got out, grabbing her phone and her bookbag before getting out and heading towards the large feild in front of the school.
Once there, she imediately noticed a table with a few girls standing behind it. Two of them looked extremely happy to be there, but the other three looked like the could care less. As she walked up to the table, she noticed one of the other girls giving her a somewhat evil smile, obviously after stopping mid-sentance. The girl she was talking to turned. They both looked younger than the others. The first girl had long, londe hair and strangely pink-ish eyes. The second one had long, brunette pig-tails. She also had purple eyes and looked completely harmless....
One of the happier girls looked over at her. "Oh, hey!" She said, "You must be new! What's your name?" The girl had long, blonde hair and purple eyes. She also had a set of cordless head phones around her neck. The girl next to her turned almost instantly. She had long, wavy, brunette hair and green eyes. She had an actual flower in her hair and looked a little more layed-back. "I'm Catrina," The red-head said, a bit shyly. "Nice to meet you, Catrina! I'm Lauren, this is Angel, those two are Capital and Karma-they're in high school-, and that over there is Amanda!" Said the girl with blonde hair. Amanda nodded, not looking up from her book.
"Nice to meet you all," Catrina said. "Here's a map of the school, some coupons for the cafe down the road-where did you move?-, and a bell schedule-do you have a schedule yet?" Lauren said. Catrina pulled a schedule out of her bag and showed it to the two girls. Lauren nodded and gave her the papers. "And I moved onto Croydon Road." Catrina added, putting everything into her messenger beg. "Oh, that's the road I live on!" Angel said. Catrina nodded and turned towards the front doors as she heard the first bell ring.
None of the girls she had met earlier were in her first class, so she sat at her dest aquwardly when the teacher told them to socialize. After a minute or two, a boy came up to her desk. He had the blonde hair that was perfectly messed up and light blue eyes.
"Hey," Hey said, his voice deep and devil-ish. Catrina couldn't help but notice the fact that his eyes had a red-ish tint to them. He also had a mischevious glint in his eyes. She nodded shyly. "Hi," She said softly. He was ver handsom, and his smile was overly charming. She looked down at her hands.
"I'm guessing you're new here. My name is Eric." He said, letting his white teeth show. They were perfect. Catrina yanked her mind from his looks and answered. "I'm Catrina." She said. "I'll see you around campus. Maybe you could sit with us at lunch." And with that, he went back to his group.

~ ~ {Lunch} ~ ~


Catrina caught herself right before letting out a loud sigh of relief. The bell for lunch had just rang, and student's were already piling out. Lauren-one of the only people she knew in the class-practicly ran to her desk. "Hurry! I wanna show you where we sit!" She urged the red-head. "Sorry, but someone's already asked for me to sit with him." Catrina said, putting on her bag. "Ooooooooh! Him!? Yay! You already found you a dude! Wow, girl. You move fast." Lauren said, changing emotions quickly.
They walked out of class together. "Soooo... What's he like?" Lauren pestered Catrina. "Well, I met him in my first class. he seemed pretty nice. And he was really cute." She explained. Lauren's eyes went wide. "Ooooooh! I can't wait to meet him! Do you rember his name?" She asked. Catrina shook her head. "I forgot, but I'll remember when I see him."
Once they got to the cafeteria, Lauren looked for Angel as Catrina looked for the boy. They stepped into the lunch line after Lauren found Angel and got their trays. As they walked out-shoulder to shoulder-Lauren asked, "Do you see him yet?" Catrina looked around. "I don't think so..." She said as she got on her tippy-toes. Shortly after, a familiar figure came appeared. "Hey." Eric said, "You gonna eat with us or no?" He nodded towards the table he came from. "This is Eric, the boy I was talking about." Catrina said, turning to Lauren. Her eyes were thin and she was glaring at him. "Sorry, but she's eating with us for lunch." she growled, grabbing Catrina's arm and dragging her off.
Catrina looked back and mouthed 'sorry', but Eric's glare was cold on Lauren's back. Catrina gave him a questioning look. Lauren gripped her arm tighter. "Come on; we eat outside." She said. Catrina reluculantly followed as Lauren let go of her. As they ate in silence, Karma joined them laughing. "Oh," she said as she noticed Catrina. Karma looked beside her and shh'd the air. "No. Don't be rude, you don't even know her.... No, I'll let her figure that out.... No. Be quiet for a minute and let me eat." She growled.
"So... What's wrong with me hanging out with Eric?" Catrina asked. "Oh, it's probably because he's a va-" But she was cut off by Lauren. "Because he's a very bad person." She growled. "What? She'll figure it out sooner or later... Devin! I thught you told me not to use that kind of language." She said."Or sooner than later..." Amanda-who Catrina had not noticed-said lowly.
They all looked up to see Eric walking towards them. "Hey." He said. "Hey, Eric." Catrina said happily. This time, had had two othe people with him. She didn't recognize eigther of them. "Why are you here?" Lauren asked. She looked like she was trying to be nice, but the tone of her voice wasn't helping. He gave her a devilish smile. "Just making sure you weren't saying anything untrue about me." He glanced at Catrina and took a step foward. "Are you sure you wanna eat out here? It's windy and dirrty. Why don't you come sit with us inside. No wind; no dirt." He offered his hand towards her. She reached out for it, she didn't want to do it, but it felt more like she had to.
As soon as her hand touched his, Lauren grabbed her wrist. "You don't have to do this. He's bad news." She said, but that only made Eric tighten his grip. "Let her go." This time, it was Karma speaking. Lauren looked at her in disbelief. Eric took the chance to pull Catrina to her feet and towards him. She felt Lauren's hand slip as he led her inside, a tight grip on her arm.
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Re: True Nature

Postby white.flag » Thu Apr 25, 2013 9:16 am

Chapter Two;; Strange Happenings
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Karma glared behind her at Lauren. "She could-" "Stop!" She cut the over-reacting Lauren off. She had been complaining to Karma all afternoon that she hadn't seen Catrina. Devin gave her a calm-down glare. She looked back to Lauren. "Devin told me to, and he would never tell me to do something unless it's for a good reason." She growled. She lived in a library, but it wasn't public. The only people that ever read the books were her and Devin. "Well ask Devin what his reason was." Lauren demanded. She plopped down on the couch. One of the pillows fell off, but Lauren seemed to ignore it. Karma flashed her a deathly glare. She picked up the pillow and set it beside Lauren. "Fist of all, you do not come here and toss things around, whether you're mad or not. Secondly, you will never demand something of Devin again. He is not your mentor. Lastly," Karma sat in a large chair, "Devin would prefer that you do not learn the reason until it is time." Karma's nightingale landed on the back of Karma's chair as Devin sat propperly on the other couch. "Now, I would like to know why Capital is reading one of my books without my or Devin's permission." Lauren, who seemed to be unaware of another person in the room, followed Karma's eyes. Sitting cross-legged on the railing of the upper-shelf bookshelves was Capital. Capital gave the already mad Karma an innocent smile. "I was just reading a book." She said, hopping from the railing to the floor. She glanced back at the book. "It might help if you turn it right-side-up." Karma shot at her. Capital looked hurt as she turned and started upstairs to put to book back. "Tea?" Karma asked Lauren as she walked over to the kitchen. "Please." Lauren replied.

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Eric had talked her into skipping after lunch and going out with him. They went skating and to a few cafes, but his friends were there, too. "You wanna go to the new resteraunt? Eight?" He asked her as she got out. "Sorry, but I'm going out with Lauren and them." She apoligized. She knew she had chose the wrong words as he drove off quickly. She turned and went inside, only to see someone on her couch. "Ummmm....?" She said aloud.
Amazing art shop here! Extremely good art by a very polite person.
My muse? It's doing backflips. Pm me if you want me to join an rp or if you wanna do a 1 x 1.

The snow glows white on the mountain tonight
Not a footprint to be seen
A kingdom of isolation and it looks like I'm the Queen
The wind is howling like the swirling storm inside
Couldn’t keep it in, heaven knows I tried
Don’t let them in, don’t let them see
Be the good girl you always had to be
Conceal, don’t feel
Don’t let them know
Well, now they know

~Demi Lavato Let It Go
One, two, three and four
The devil's knocking at your door
Caught in the eye of a dead man's lie
Show your life with your head held high
Now you're on your knees
With your head held low
the big man tells you where to go
Tell him it's good
Tell him okay
Don't do a damn thing they say

~ The Pretty Reckless Heaven Knows
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