Fire and Ice-the prophecy-#1-My warrior tail

[Thing Two]

I absolutely love the warrior cat books written by Erin hunter and I have decided to make my own story.
I apologise for not being able to write more quickly, the chapters take a long time.
Comments are welcome.
Autocorrect might be a problem for a while as I use my iPad a lot of the time so try to ignore it.

Blurb/Back story thing:
Long ago the four great Clans faught; ThunderClan, RiverClan, ShadowClan and WindClan. To this day, the history of the fight is seen as a Legend amoung the remaining Clans, retold on stormy nights to give the kits nightmares. No one knows who won the Legendary Battle, but after the battles of the Clans, the leaders joined (Thunder and Shadow, Wind and River), creating the new and striving Clans, FireClan and IceClan.
The Clans moved to a new teritory - as far away from Twolegs as they could posibly get - until they found a little valley with only a couple of Twoleg nests. Medicine cats were cast aside, little to no importance now that StarClan had became a myth of the past, lost on the long journey. The only need for them now was healing. The warrior code slowly fades over the seasons, becoming less and less important, only just at the back of every cats mind. No gatherings take place anymore - there was nothing much to say anyway. Kits are born in New-leaf, elders die in Leaf-bare. Prey is lush and never few, even in Leaf-bare. No cat has crossed the borders, not even the cheekiest of kits. well, that was, until now . . .

Prolog thingy:

Water drips from an unknown source down from a pointed rock and falls, rippling the smooth surface of the pool. Tendrils of mist wrap their icy fingers around trees, white as bone. Dew glitters in the moon light and stars glisten on an old tabby tom as he gazes into a crystal clear pool that seemed not to have a bottom. A slim ginger Tom slinks out of the shadows of the undergrowth and sits down beside the old tabby with his tail curled around his paws. Moments pass before the old toms voice breaks the silence. 'Amberstar,' he says and after a moment he turns to look at the newcomer. 'I glad you are here, it has been generations since a cat joined us.' Amberstar gazes into the pool a moment longer before turning to face the old tabby. 'My clan is becoming less and less faithful every moon, Sagewhisker, I think it is time.' Sagewhisker looks at Amberstar, considering what he just said. 'So do I.' He mews finally before turning back to the pool.
Moons seem to pass before he speaks again 'I will send our most faithful follower a prophecy.' He mews as he turns back to Amberstar. Amberstar nods in return and looks back to the pool as Sagewhisker climbs to his old paws and pads across the clearing and into the undergrowth, leaving Amberstar sitting alone by the pool.

Territory is coming soon.

[Thing Two]

Leader
• Emberstar • A fiery ginger tabby tom with deep green eyes •

Deputy
• Ashfall • A small, pale grey-white she-cat with green eyes
Apprentice; Dawnpaw

Medicine cat
• Spottedrain • Light grey she-cat with darker grey markings on her face and sky blue eyes •

Warriors
• Flameheart • Dark ginger tabby Tom with bright green eyes •

• Badgerclaw • large white Tom with black feet, tail and patches over his pelt •

• leafdapple • light grey she-cat with brown spots and stripes and muddy green eyes. •

Apprentices
• Dawnpaw • Light ginger Tom with green eyes. •

Elders
• owlcry • grumpy old brown and grey tabby Tom •
• birdcall • cream and brown she-cat •

Queens and their kits
• whitefur • long-furred white she-cat • pregnant with flamehearts kits •
Goldentail • light sandy coloured she-cat with green eyes and a ginger tail • mother of badgerclaws kits: Berrykit (white tortoiseshell she-cat with dark brown eyes and black nose) Hazelkit (light brown shecat with dark amber, almost brown eyes.) and bramble kit (dark brown tabby with muddy green eyes) •

We are the burning heart of the forest, with the streanth and bravness of thunderClan and will and toughness of shadowclan, darknes meets the storm, and we will one day rule the forest. Our leader was the one who changed the warrior world forever. Our clan will be remembered as eather the greatest clan remembered by starclan as the one who united the clans again or the one who started the second war, wiping out the cats of the moor, water, darkness and forest.

Leader
• Cloudstar • short-haired white tom with green eyes.•

Deputy
• Pinefrost • A large, handsome silver and brown tabby tom with mysterious pale blue-tan eyes •
Apprentice: Fernpaw

Medicine cat
• Petalfall • A brown she-cat with smoky grey markings and blind, clear blue eyes •

Warriors
• Sparrowsong • Brown and ginger tabby she-cat with pale blue eyes •
Apprentice: Rockpaw.

• Nightshade • Black she-cat with amber eyes •
Apprentice: Maplepaw

• Icestorm • Black Tom with white socks, a grey tail and blue eyes •
Apprentice: Specklepaw

• Pebblewave • bulky grey tom with blue eyes •

• Cloverwish • creamy white she-cat with grass green eyes •

Apprentices
• Maplepaw • A golden brown she-cat with sharp brown eyes •

• Fernpaw • Light grey she-cat with burning green eyes •

• Rockpaw • grey marbled Tom with fierce blue eyes

• Specklepaw • white she-cat with brown and grey dappled spots •

Queens and their Kits
• Ivypool • georgous grey tabby she cat with blue/green eyes (mother of Icestorms kits, Echokit (dark grey she-cat with white socks and blue eyes) Ripplekit (grey Tom with light tabby stripes, darker on his tail, and green eyes) heatherkit (light brown shecat with green eyes)

Elders
• whitetail • old white shecat with grey patches and bright greedy amber eyes •

• Snowdrop • White kittypet she-cat with emerald eyes •

• Dusky • old grey mottled kittypet tom with dull, milky amber eyes •

• Fallpaw • fluffy grey tabbyish tortoiseshell she-cat loner with green eyes and short tail •

We are the peaful clan of the moor, with the speed and agility of WindClan and the sleekness and strength of RiverClan, we are clearly the best Clan in the history of all Clans. We will always be the one to stop the fights and find peace in the moor, water, darkness and forest.

FireClan
Siblings
owlcry and birdcall
Ashfall (older) Spottedrain and whitefur
Goldentail and flameheart
Leafdapple and Badgerclaw
Berrykit, hazelkit and Bramblekit
Mates and their kits:
Birdcall mother to Leafdapple and Badgerclaw
Emberstar father to Goldentail and Flameheart, grandfather to Dawnpaw
Flameheart and whitefur to Dawnpaw
Badgerclaw to goldentail to Berrykit, Hazelkit and Bramblekit

IceClan
Siblings
Whitetail a and Cloudstar
Sparrowsong and Petalfall
Pinefrost and Ivypool
Nightpelt, Icestorm and Pebblewave
Fallpaw (older) and Fernpaw
Specklepaw and Rockpaw
Echokit, Ripplekit and Heatherkit
Mates and their kits:
Whitetail mother to cloverwish
Dusky father to Fernpaw
Pinefrost and Sparrowsong to maplepaw
Cloverwish and Pebblewave to specklepaw and rockpaw

[Thing Two]

Chapter one.

Lush moor land stretches out in front of Fernpaws paws, green grass dotted with heather and gorse. Dawnpaw padded up beside her and together they started running, their paws as light as a feather. Fernpaw spotted a rabbit and raced towards it. She lunged, sinking her claws into its juicy flesh.
'What are you doing?!'
Fernpaw is wrenched out of her dream by Maplepaw clambering to her paws and craning her neck to lick up the blood droplets from where Fernpaws claws had made a scratch in her back. 'Sorry.' Fernpaw yawned and sat up to lick Maplepaws golden brown fur out of her claws. 'That’s ok.' Maplepaw mewed and touched her nose to Fernpaws ear to show that she forgave her. 'Now come on, we might be able to go on the dawn patrol!' Maplepaw grinned and padded out of the apprentices den with Fernpaw by her side.
As soon as they emerge from the intertwined bracken she almost bump into Pinefrost and Sparrowsong. 'Ah, here you are, we were just coming to get you for the dawn patrol!' Pinefrost mews to Fernpaw as Maplepaw touches noses with her mother. Maplepaws eyes light up as she hears Pinefrost. 'Oh! Can I come?' She mews excitedly. Sparrowsong smiles at her daughter, 'you will have to ask your mentor, I was just going to get Rockpaw, we will meet you at the camp entrance.' Pinefrost nods to Sparrowsong and she pads ingot he apprentices den in search for her apprentice. Maplepaw smiles like a mad badger and bounds off to the warriors den to fetch nightshade, he mentor, leaving Fernpaw and Pinefrost to pad over to the camp entrance.
At the camp entrance Fernpaw gazes around camp, watching the cats go about their daily duties. The clan is smaller than when she arrived in the clan as a kit. So many cats have died or just plain out disappeared. Fernpaw could swear that she could hear their paw steps a night, padding around camp but where ever she got up to look that camp was empty.
Maplepaw bounds out of the warriors den, breaking into Fernpaws thoughts 'I can come!' She yowls across the whole camp. 'Shh! You will wake the whole camp, I would expect better from a almost-warrior.' Sparrowsong scolds gently, padding up to beside Pinefrost with Rockpaw slowly padding behind her, scuffing his paws in the dust. Maplepaw pads over to Fernpaw 'well,' she said a little quieter 'what are we waiting for!?' Pinefrost smiles at the excited apprentice 'ok, let's go.'
Pinefrost and Sparrowsong bound across the log connecting the camp to the land and walk ahead of the apprentices chatting about something a rather. Rockpaw pads slowly between the mentors and Fernpaw and Maplepaw, looking down a his paws.
'I can't believe your grump of a mentor let you come!' Fernpaw mews with amusement. Maplepaw stifles a mew of amusement 'I bet you a moon of dawn patrols that nightshade will be the grumpiest elder of all time!' The two friends meow with laughter until Maplepaw speaks properly again 'nah, it wasn't that hard, I just poked with my paw until she got so annoyed she had to let me come.' Fernpaw smiles a the thought of her friend poking the grumpy warrior and gazes over toward the FireClan border and let her mind wonder. 'Hey!' Fernpaw mews, an idea popping into her head 'I wonder if Pinefrost will let us do some hunting!' Before Maplepaw could reply Pinefrost called back 'why don't you apprentices go do some hunting?' Fernpaw grinned and raced off, reliving her dream, only without the FireClan apprentice. A rabbit popped out of a hole under Fernpaws paws and she tripped over. Maplepaw laughed and swiped a paw into the hole and managed to pull out the fleeing rabbit and kill it with a bite to the neck.
'Good catch' Rockpaw said as he bounded over. Maplepaw blushed and Fernpaw rolled her eyes. 'I’m going to hunt by the stream, there are too many rabbit holes around here.' She said and padded off towards the stream that marked the border of FireClan and IceClan.
'Ok, Rockpaw and I will hunt here.' Maplepaw said, placing down her large rabbit but Rockpaw was already padding after Fernpaw. He turned 'oh, um, yeah, I thought the stream would be a good place to hunt as well.' Anger flashed in Maplepaws eyes for a second the she shrugged and dragged her rabbit after them.
Fernpaw crouched by the river, her paw outstretched but her shadow not on the river. Her eyes watch the silver shapes dart around. One came up to the surface and she snatched it out, landing it on the bank where it flapped about. We pounced on it and killed it with a bite to the back of the neck.
'Nice catch.' Said a voice from the other side of the river. Fernpaw looked up, licking the fish scales from her mouth and smiled 'Dawnpaw.' she said, using all her will power to keep her paws from running toward him. Beside her Rockpaw had caught a fish too and was staring at the FireClan apprentice with narrowed eyes but stayed silent. 'What brings you here?' Maplepaw said from Rockpaws other side. As Maplepaw finished speaking two other FireClan warriors padded up to Dawnpaws side. 'We would like to speek to your leader.' a grey-white she-cat said. Rockpaw gritted his teeth 'Why should we let you?' He snarled as Pinefrost apdded up from behind the apprentices. The grey-white she-cat looked partly relieved to have a warrior to talk to and not just three apprentices.
'My name is Ashfall, I am Fireclans new deputy.' she began 'This is Badgerclaw and Dawnpaw,' the bulky black and white tom and dawnpaw bowed their heads as Ashfall introduced them. 'We have come to deliver a message from Emberstar, our leader.' Pinefrost inspected the FireClan warriors and Dawnpaw, looking them up and down. 'Can't you just give it to me? I'm IceClans deputy after all, why must you see our leader?' Ashfall bowed her head, accepting that as a good question. 'We must speak privately with him.' Pinefrost took a moment to consider 'Fine, we will escort you to our camp.'

The FireClan patrol was clearly outnumbered, 5 to 3 but they didn’t seem to mind, they followed peacefully as Pinefrost lead them back to camp. Dawnpaw dropped back to talk to Fernpaw. 'that was a brilliant catch you made.' He said, gesturing to her fish. Fernpaw blushed and nodded, not speaking around her fish in case she blew fishy breath into his face. 'You must teach my sometime.' he said a little quieter so the warrior’s couldn’t hear. But Rockpaw did. 'Why would fernpaw want to teach you, a FireClan apprentice how to fish? You own part of the stream, why don’t you teach yourself?' Rockpaw asked fiercely. If it was Fernpaw Rockpaw was talking to she would have been quite taken aback but Dawnpaw didn’t seem to mind. 'Fernpaw seems very good at fishing.' Dawnpaw shrugged. Rockpaw just glared back 'how do you know her name was Fernpaw? No one told you what our names were.'
Fear flashed through Dawnpaws eyes then he regained his posture 'I've met her before on a hunting patrol.' He said simply, in a tone that said not to say any more on the subject. Fernpaw let out a breath that she didn’t know she had been holding.
Without knowing it they had reached the trunk that lead across the lake onto the island IceClan made their camp. Pinefrost, Sparrowsong and the FireClan warriors had already leaped up onto the trunk and were waiting for them. 'Don’t jump up just there' Fernpaw mumbled around her fish to Dawnpaw as he readied his hunches to leap up 'There are too many roots and you won’t make it, come around here.' She mewed kindly and followed Rockpaw and Maplepaw around the trunk to where there were no roots blocking their way to the top.
Rockpaw and Maplepaw leaped up, Rockpaw catching Maplepaws scruff as she almost fell. She thanked him and blushed but he ignored her and waited to Fernpaw and Dawnpaw to take the jump. Dawnpaw jumped up and almost bowled Rockpaw over, Fernpaw leaped after him and laughed 'I think your warrior name will be Dawnleap, you’re so great at leaping.' Dawnpaw smiled at her joke but Maplepaw and Rockpaw were already padding after the warriors, Maplepaw dragging her huge rabbit behind her. Dawnpaw sighed. 'Come on, we're getting left behind.' Fernpaw and Dawnpaw bounded after the two apprentices.

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[Mckarca]

It's really good! I'm excited for the next bit.

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thank you. I workin on it now.

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(Sorry i took so long with this one, ive been writing it in between rolaplaying then with the event i forgot about it, but here it is! I'll try not to be too long till the next one.)

When Dawnpaw reached camp with Fernpaw, Maplepaw was already putting her catch on the freash kill pile. Dawnpaw watched Fernpaw padd over to place her fish there aswell and was about to follow her when Rockpaw spoke up 'don't you want to join your patrol explaining to Cloudstar why you are in our territory?' Rockpaw sneered. Dawnpaw shrugged and nodded, following the FireClan warriors into the leaders den with Rockpaw and Pinefrost as a guard, leaving Fernpaw behind.
"Our lastest leader, Amberstar, just got his last life," Ashfall explained sollumly to Cloudstar "Emberstar has taken over and he believes things have got to change. He doesnt like the way the clans are living and believes we should go back to the old ways." She paused, letting this sink in. "He wants IceClan to join FireClan for a gathering next full moon." The den was silent, everycat looking at Cloudstar expectantly for a reply.
"I will think about Emberstars proposal," Cloudstar declared, rising to his paws, "A patrol will escort you to the border." Cloudstar started to pad out of the den, Ashfall and her patrol followed "Cloudstar, with all respect, I must have an answer to take back to Emberstar." Cloudstar turned to Ashfall "If we are there, we are there, if we arnt, we arnt.' He snapped. Ashfall looked pleadingly at Cloudstar and he sighed "I will send a patrol with my desition." He declared grudgingly. Ashfall nodded and flicked his tail for Dawnpaw and Badgerclaw to follow as Pinefrost and a few warriors Dawnpaw didnt recognise as they led them back accross the tree trunk connecting the island to the land.

Spottedrain woke up to high pitch squealing and the hushed voice of Goldentail. She sighed, dabbing some poppy seeds up and some chamomile and taking them into the nusery.
"Hush, you'll wake up the whole Clan." Spottedrain murmered to Berrykit, placing the poppy seeds in front of her. As she licked them up Spottedrain asked quietly "Now, what woke you up this time, little kit?" Berrykit looked up at her with big eyes "My friends were calling to me, they wanted me to come and play. Then Goldentail told me off." Just as Spottedrain had expected, the same as the last few nights. "What friends do you mean, Berrykit?" She probed. "The other kits!" Berrykits said as if Spottedrain was being silly. Goldentail glanced at the other two sleeping bundles of fur curled up together and gave Spottedrain a concerned look. Berrykit yawned "It's time for you to go to sleep, little one." Spottedrain murmered softly. Berrykit nodded and curled back up with her siblings, she was soon fast asleep.
"Oh, Spottedrain, is there something wrong with her?" Goldentail asked and Spottedrain shook her head "It must be some new, imaginary game she made up, maybe ever since Cloudstar agreed to come to the gathering next full moon she gets the idea that the IceClan kits are coming to play with her."
"I will have a talk to her in the morning." Goldentail sighed and curled up around her kits, closing her eyes. Spottedrain watched the queen as her breathing slowed and she slipped into sleep. Statasfied, Spottedrain slipped back to her den and curled up, hoping to get some desent sleep.

Spottedrain woke in misty forest, her heart leaped, as it did in every dream she has had since she became a medicine cat apprentice, hoping for a StarClan cat to poke its head out to greet her. Her heart dropped as she looked around the still forest around her. She sighed and padded through the peaceful forest. She heard cats voices, muffled by the mist and stepped into a clearing. A few cats with stars in their pelts gathered around a pool, talking in hushed voices. Spottedrain gasped and the cat nearest to her turned and gasped as well 'Sagewhisker!" the she-cat hissed. An old tabby tom broke off midsentace and looked grimly at spottedrain. "Grave times are coming, Spottedrain." He said in deep voice that rang out even through the mist. The cats all stopped murmering and turned to Spottedrain, some glancing at each other with wide eyes. "You're StarClan!" Was all she could choke out. Sagewhisker frowned at her and padded towards her "You must keep your faith strong." He placed his tail on her shoulder and images flashed infront of Spottedrains eyes. Many cats fighting, yowls of pain and anguish filling the air, needless blood being spilled, over flowing, filling her mouth, nose and ears.
Sagewhiskers voice booms over the screeching of cats and through the flooding blood:
"The night of death comes for a burning sky,
Some cats will live, others must die,
For the up bringing of the long dead law,
the dust of dawn will bring back together, the cats, once more ..."
Spottedrain gasps as Sagewhisker removed his tail from her shoulder. She gets a gimpse of the fading, stary pelted cats eyes all on her before everything turns black.