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§ Yes!
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§ Duh yeah! It was awesomer that PIE!
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TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:02 am

*squeals like a two year old* I'm gonna meet my goal!!! <3 And these five songs give me good ideas. AND I've been meaning to add her back in. If anyone can guess her, then you'll get to have a pet in my book.
Book 1 Book 2 Book 3 Book 4




I yawned, waking up in my room at HQ. It was my third day here, and I had gotten to know the Ten pretty well. I glanced around the room. Wind, Windsong, Wings, April, Moonlight, Moonlit Star, and Myth were still sleeping. Hazel and Forest were up - Hazel wasn't in the room (probably talking to Lucky [AGAIN]) and Forest was reading a book, her staff propped up against the bed frame. She noticed I was awake, then smiled at me.
Hi, she said.
Hi, Forest, I responded. After three days, we'd really gotten to know each other. For instance - she was actually home-schooled before she found out she was one of the Ten!
I gave her a small smiled, then grabbed something that she had wanted to borrow. I tossed it on her bed.
So... You finished reading it? I can borrow it? I nodded.
Yeah. Hey, where's Hazel?
Dunno. She was up before I was.
Thanks. I grabbed my jacket and slung it over my shirt. I walked out of the room, and glanced next-door, at Lucky's. She was with her gang, apparently still asleep. The door would've been open if Hazel was in their. I racked my mind of where Hazel could be. I finally settled that she could be in Room 12321, since that's where Zaylen, Dawn Lily, Alex, Kiria, Amy, and Gem slept.
I finally reached the door. I glanced in. No one was there, and light filter in from the windows. Suddenly, I heard running. I glanced behind me.
Wind! What is it?! What happened?!
Just follow me, she breathed.
I chased after her, but she always pulled ahead of me- she's the fastest out of us Ten. She jumped up the stairs, and I followed, skipping four every time. We finally got to the last flight of stairs, and we both jumped over them with ease. I was getting scared now. I've never been up in this part. Our room was just below here! What was wrong!
Suddenly, I heard a yelp.
What was that?!
Oh no, Wind breathed, skidding to a halt. I nearly tripped over her. She grabbed her arrow and went forward. She dropped it. It's Forest, Hazel, and Windsong! Forest and Windsong found Hazel, but... Oh no.... Then it hit me. She was scared, yes, when someone in the HQ was in trouble (we've had a freakish squeamish yesterday), but the way she said Windsong....
Windsong's your sister, isn't she? Wind nodded.
Yeah.
I glanced at her as she hurled the arrow at the thing that was leaving the room. It froze, then jumped on her, scratching her. I jumped on it, but then it vanished.
FREAKING. COME. ON!!!!
Suddenly, Hazel darted out, Forest and Windsong on her paws. Wind ran over to her sister, and I glanced at Forest and Hazel.
Wha happened?!
Hazel clenched her jaw together. Forest gasped for breath.
I heard a commotion going on upstairs when I woke up, and I went up there. I glanced in the room.... And.... She shuttered.
These things.... Two purple with flames, one kept shifting forms from what looked like a dog with candles on its fur with a red velvet dress to a dog with nine tails, and a costume on, and then.... There was a yellow thing.....
There was the sound of a head hitting a locker. If someone mentions that again, I will jump out a window.
Forest blinked, turning around to her. Huh? Hazel asked.
I think she hit a nerve. Don't. Ask. About. My. Past!!!!! Hazel and Forest jumped.
Paws skidded on the floor, and I whirled around. Blood was on the floor. Hazel, Wind, Windsong, Forest, and Alex could see it too.
No.... I murmured. I saw what they were looking at. It wasn't the blood (I blinked and it vanished- Alex did to, I think she was making it appear....?). It was Lillian, then it wasn't, then it was. The cycle kept repeating.
Yes, my dear old friend. It's me. When you found out you were with these slimeballs, I'd figure out MY path! And I did too..... No, you will be destroyed!
She laughed, and then lunged at us. That's when a surprise came upstairs for us.
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby daz » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:36 am

Coooooooooool.
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:37 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:Coooooooooool.

Thanks! <3 Should I write another entry?





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby daz » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:39 am

Lemme think... YES.
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 6:39 am

Flashpaw100 wrote:Lemme think... YES.

ok, ok, I will. Later





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:31 am

Yay new book! :D Goods stuff!

oooo is the dog with the pink writing who I think it is? XD *waits to find out*
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:32 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:Yay new book! :D Goods stuff!

oooo is the dog with the pink writing who I think it is? XD *waits to find out*

Who do you think it is?

Yay, ^.^





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:34 am

Is it... *drum roll* Thimese? thats like the only character I can think of with pink writing :3
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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby star star. » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:35 am

WhiteKitsune wrote:Is it... *drum roll* Thimese? thats like the only character I can think of with pink writing :3

Nope. :twisted: Find out in the next entry, will you. (Yoda moment.)





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Re: TJOG: The First War

Postby WhiteKitsune » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:38 am

Cant wait for it * goes back to previous books to figure out mistery dog*
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