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Who sang the best song in your opinion?

• Fireivy- Miracle by Cascada
2
33%
• Secrecy- Bones Shatter by Hedley
0
No votes
• Ginger- Never Underestimate a Girl by Vanessa Hudgens
3
50%
• Alex- Structure by InnerPartySystem
1
17%
 
Total votes : 6

TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:28 am

OMS OMS OMS OMS OMS!!! YUSH!!!!! MY FOURTH BOOK!!!! Lol, sorry. xD So, as we remember, it was left off when they were accidentally transported to Kupreanof, Alaska. Is that a real city in Alaska, you may be wondering. Well..... It is. Here.
Book 1 Book 2 Book 3



There was a muffled thud as two other dogs appeared. I recognized them both instantly- they were in Alex' journal!
Fireivy! she squealed, hugging the younger pup. Oh, Secrecy! she whispered, hugging her. Secrecy smiled.
Alex, we couldn't leave you. Alex's eyes weld up in tears. They suddenly started talking, catching up from when they last saw each other.
.....

Later, that evening, we decided to have a bet- the oldest (sadly to say, Merida) would judge who could sing the best, and which song was the best. Fox just REFUSED to sing, so Fireivy started. Fireivy smiled, and started first.
Boy meets girl
You were my dream,my world
But i was blind
You cheated on me from behind
So on my own
I feel so all alone
Though I know it's true
I'm still in love with you

I need a miracle
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
That you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you'll see it can happen to me
I need a miracle
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
That you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you'll see it can happen to me
It can happen to me

Miracle... Miracle

Day and night
I'm always by your side
Cause I know for sure
My love is real my feelings pure
So take a try
No need to ask me why
Cause I know it's true
I'm still in love with you

I need a miracle...
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
That you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you'll see it can happen to me
I need a miracle
I wanna be your girl
Give me a chance to see
That you are made for me
I need a miracle
Please let me be your girl
One day you'll see it can happen to me
It can happen to me

Miracle... Miracle

Miracle... Miracle


We clapped, and Merida wrote down the score. Secrecy went next.

A Bone shatters, fall apart and hit the floor
If it doesn't thrill you it doesn't matter any more
Bones shatter, maybe don't go out this time

No matter where you've been or who you are
If it doesn't kill you it's sure to leave a horrible scar
Bones shatter, baby don't go out this time

So what's another Stan who's not a fan a million miles away?
And what's he gonna do to me that I haven't already seen?
You'll never stop me; you know it's everything to me

We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better
We're not making this up
So just write another letter
I'll be fine
Alive again, another day, I'm not afraid to get over
We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better, I'll be fine

I've been better seen a brighter side of life
But any friend of the failure's a friend of mine
Bones shatter, baby don't go out this time

So what's another Stan who's not a fan a million miles away?
And what's he gonna do to me that I haven't already seen?
You'll never stop me; you know it's everything to me

We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better
We're not making this up
So just write another letter
I'll be fine
Alive again, another day, I'm not afraid to get over
We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better, I'll be fine
Ill be fine
You were everything to me
You were everything to me
You were everything to me
You were everything to me

We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better
We're not making this up
So just write another letter
I'll be fine
Alive again, another day, I'm not afraid to get over
We'll never stop
Cause we're only getting better, I'll be fine
Alive again
Another day
A way to get over
Alive again
Another day
A way to get over


Again, Merida wrote down the score. So far, Secrecy was the best. I was next. I finally thought of a song.

It takes a girl to understand
Just how to win
She knows...She can
I think it's clear
Who wears the pants
What boy...could stand...a chance

She makes it look easy
In control completely
She'll get the best of you...every single...time
Thought by now you'd realize you should

Never underestimate a girl
Gets anything she wants
She's never gonna stop
(You know it...we know it)
Never underestimate a girl
She's always got a plan
The world is in her hands

She got the lipstick
Puts it together
Boys have it good
But girls have it better...(watch out)
Your secretary might
End up your boss
Whether you...really like it...or not

She makes it look easy
In control completely
She'll get the best of you... every single...time
That's right...no no no you should

Never underestimate a girl
Gets anything she wants
She's never gonna stop
(You know it...we know it)
Never underestimate a girl
She's always got a plan
The world is in her hands

She might be the president
Make all the rules
Don't try to win the game
You're only gonna lose
Now girls you know we got it
Got it going on
We've been trying to tell them all along
Listen up guys
Take a little sound advice

Never underestimate a girl
Gets anything she wants
She's never gonna stop
(You know it...we know it)
Never underestimate a girl
She's always got a plan
The world is in her hands


Merida nodded. Finally, it was Alex's turn. She swallowed- My reasons:
    • Her crush was out in the crowd, watching
    • She couldn't think of a song.
Finally, she started singing.

Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, did it feel the same?
Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, it never feels the same

You suck the bottle dry
Touch fingers to the night
Feels like I've been here before
Now there's an empty hole where you were long ago
But things are different when you're young

Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, did it feel the same?
Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, it never

The nights are getting cold
Those faces growing old
And there is nothing you can do
So sing your sad excuses
You've got the scars to prove it
And I'm sure they'll sing along

Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, did it feel the same?
Why did you change? (Why did you change)
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, it never feels the same

It never feels the same
It never feels the same

Why did you change?
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, did it feel the same?
Why did you change? (Why did you change)
Why did you bend and break?
When the water turned to wine, it never
When the water turned to wine, it never feels the same


Fox widened his eyes, and smiled. Merida nodded. I knew all these songs from when I was in middle school. Sunset would never stop listening to them!!! Meh.
Fireivy yawned. Can we go to bed? she whispered. Fox and Alex nodded, though Alex half-heatedly. I think she likes staying up....
But the rest of us agreed, so we did.
My writing's getting sloppy now. If we all survive tonight, I can write more in the morning. Goodnight, TJOG, and pray this isn't my last entry
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:38 am

AWESOME! I loved the one Fireivy sang.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:40 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:AWESOME! I loved the one Fireivy sang.

:) Thanks! Do you want the link to it?





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:41 am

Yes please! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:47 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Yes please! :)

KK, hang on. I'm listening to the song Alex did. xD

Miracle Bones Shatter Never Underestimate A Girl Structure
Just to let you know, the version I'm listening to (for Bones Shatter), it starts out like a rock-metal band (I think). Other than that, it's a good song, as you can tell. xD





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:50 am

Will listen to later. :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Sun Nov 04, 2012 6:51 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Will listen to later. :)

K, cool!

(My favs. either the one Alex or Secrecy sang. xD)





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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Mon Nov 05, 2012 10:56 am

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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby star star. » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:34 pm

Flashpaw100 wrote:cool

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Re: TJOG: Stuck in a Snow Prison

Postby daz » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:39 pm

you haz no energy,
as for me.......


I LOVE THIS BOOK AND TJOC AND TIAJNAD AND CANDYLAND MONKEYS BUT I'M SCARED OF MONKEYS BUT MONKEYS ARE COOL LALALALALALALALA CANDYLANDDDDD!!!!
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face the Flower.
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