angel in hell

[felis_tyria]

Tears roll down my face. Hell is no place for an angel. I watched the fires and sighed." Lord, save me..." I say. The fires burn my skin. I scream in pain."Don't scream..." I hear my brothers voice in my head." It makes Lucifer stronger..." The faint voice left my head. I cryed in silence and closed my eyes." Save me from this nighmare..." I said quietly. The demons torment me, poke my, pluck my feathers from my wings, to make their 'king' stronger.I try not to cry. I hold my knees close to me. I cover myself with my, now torn wings. I close my eyes." Nothing will save me..." I mutter. I felt a tear roll down my cheek and burned into the fire." Soon, that will be me..." I said." Hope! Heep hope! You will live on for the both of us." My brothers last words." I will, I promise, Scar......I will live and get you back..." I said softly and lifted my head. I see a faint light ahead." Could it be? No, its impossible, they forgot about me..." I said looking at the golden light flying towards me. It picks me up and flies me to heaven. I see Scar, I try to run but falls on the gold pavement." Scar..." I said weakly. Scar came to me." I'm here, and your safe...with me..." He smiled, wind blowing in his golden hair.

this is my first story... tell me what you think!!! i will try to make more if you like!

[Savage Shepherd]

I Love It! Contunie! (Lol I Cant Spell)

[felis_tyria]

alrighty

[~*Malec*~]

( love it. it creates mystery and leads speculation.)

[felis_tyria]

yeah...thats buddies XD

[~*Malec*~]

^.^ as a writer myself the suspense and the intrest the stroy and the words draws is amazeing.
( lol, look at me gettting all nerdy XD <--nerd.)

[felis_tyria]

i made it last night...i was on a group chat and i9 was bored XD

[~*Malec*~]

cool. its really good. *yawn* i woke up too early today and my energy is fried. haha, i wont post my stories though. im terrified of the whole " copy and paste" power.

[felis_tyria]

bb: yeah....i was sead after...i wasted my creativity on the stories XD

[~*Malec*~]

( haha, lol, what does BB mean anyways? )