Comments/Discussion of Behind My Eyes

I'm writing a story/novel called Behind My Eyes. In writing it, I've come written across some, in my view, very interesting ideas. I wanted a place to discuss them with my readers and get their view on some of the concepts I've introduced so I've made this. This also the correct place to post critique for my story, not on the main thread. I want to have a discussion with people about the themes, ideas, and concepts I've written about in my novel. I do however, have some rules. You can view the story here.
Rules:
1. No telling anyone their idea or interpretation of an idea is wrong.
2. Please, no swearing.
3. No spamming
4. Be polite to everyone who posts here, even if you think they are wrong.
So, to get us started, I'll introduce a topic to talk about that I'd like some feedback on.
Do you agree with my interpretation of The Eagle by Alfred, Lord Tennyson? Why or why not? What do you think the poet meant? Did my argument make sense?
Post away!