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Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby star star. » Mon Jun 11, 2012 11:46 pm

Alright, so this was requested to be put up on here by Rebel Faery. Hope you all enjoy! You MAY post. *THIS IS COPIED RIGHT OUT OF THE BOOK!!!* When I finish this book, I will put up *SPOILER FOR BOOK!!!* Fallingstar's Life. It will explain her life, and how she came to hate Tinystar (the leader before Softstar)

Warrior series ©: Erin Hunter
Warriors of Four ©: me

SilentClan
Leader & Deputy:
Softstar (she-cat) and Fallingblossom (she-cat)
Warriors:
Leaffall (she-cat), Honeywings (she-cat), Dragonfly (tom), Birchheart (tom), Wingstep (tom), Watersun (tom), Sunwater (she-cat), Raincloud (tom), and Moonlily (she-cat)
Medicine Cat:
SIlentstream (she-cat)
Apprentices:
Jaypaw (tom), Applepaw (she-cat), Snakepaw (tom), and Cloudpaw (she-cat)
Queens & Kits:
Tinyblossom (she-cat)
-kits: Echokit, Silentkit, Skykit, Starkit, Songkit, Riverkit (she-kits)
Elders:
Tawnycater (she-cat), Raysun (tom), Sunray (tom), Moonsun (she-cat)

Outside the clans:
Kittypets:
Myrtle (she-kit), Demi (she-cat), Smoke (tom), and Nettle (tom)
Loners:
Petal (she-cat), Rain (tom), Tawny (she-cat), and Berry (tom)
Rouges (WarClan):
Cherry (she-cat), Rush (tom), Lilac (she-cat), Katniss (she-kit), Rage (tom), and Dragon (tom)





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Warriors of Four: Trapped- Prologue

Postby star star. » Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:03 am

Prologue:
The Prophecy


A lithe, lily-furred she-cat looked around. "Hello?" she called out. "Tinystar? Flowercrystal? Hello?!" Desperate, she looked around. SilverClan, where am I? she thought, scared.
Scared, she turned around, and saw a fire. It didn't make any noise, and she backed up. A cat walked out of the fire.
"Forestflame!" she shouted.
The cat forced a smiled. "Hello, Silentstream," she said. "I'm afraid I have some bad news, though," she said, sighing.
"What?" Silentstream asked.
Forestflame sighed. "The four clans are in an iminsive amount of danger."
"How so?"
Forestflame's eyes began to glow. "The clans must become one again. Star, song, river, sky, and silent must make the clans unite. Twolegs have already divided the clan, nothing is the same.The return will be horrible, a bloody war will rage for days. Help will come with no warning, with Silver behind. If the clans don't unite, there will be no more clans, but if the six succeed, they will become one. Or, war will be over, blood following them."
Silentstream stared at her. "What do you mean?" she called out. Forestflame shook her head. "I cannot tell you," she said, walking back through the fire.
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Warriors of Four: Trapped- Chapter 1

Postby star star. » Tue Jun 12, 2012 12:32 am

Chapter 1:
An Elder's Tale


A silver she-cat and a golden tom were talking. The silver one smiled. "So, what's up, Sunray?" she asked.
Sunray smiled. "Oh, Moonsun.," he said, purring. "The same as usual," he replied, flicking his tail over her ear.
She smiled. "Well, at least Fallingblossom is doing better than us," she said. Her gaze drifted away. "I never thought our kit would become deputy!"
A tabby bounded over, her white paws flailing.
"Hi, Moonsun! Hi, Sunray!" she said.
Sunray laughed. "speaking of kits!" he purred.
Moonsun smiled. "Hello, Echokit! Where are the others?" she asked.
Echokit laughed. "They're coming! Silentkit sent me ahead. She wanted me to ask you if you could tell us about WillowClan!" She smiled, looking hopefully up at them.
Moonsun smiled. "Sure!" she purred. Echokit stiffened.
Sunray tilted his head. "What's wrong?" he asked.
"There's some other cat," she said, warily. A kit leaped over Sunray.
"Omph!" Echokit growled. She tried to get up but failed. The star-colored kit smiled.
"I got you, Echokit," the kit whispered. Looking up, she called her littermates names'. "Songkit, Riverkit, Skykit, Silentkit! Come on!" She looked down. "Sorry!"
Echokit growled. "Get off of me!"
Moonsun smiled. "Starkit, get off. So," she said when Starkit was off. "Want to hear about WillowClan?" she asked.
"Yes!" the six kits said, simultaneously.
"Alright, then!" Sunray said. "So, want to hear a random, yet true story?"
The kits nodded.
"Alright," Moonsun said. "Well, do you want to know who our littermates are?" she asked.
The kits nodded again.
Sunray smiled. "Lilacshadow, Shadowfire, and Raysun were my littermates."
Moonsun sighed. "Well, they were Starwhiskers, Silentsong, Songbird, Riverfall, Skycloud, and I had an adopted sister. She was a kittypet by the name of Myrtle, but in the clan, she was known as Tigersong." Looking down, she added. "They all died."
Songkit sighed. "Who was your mother, Moonsun?"
She looked up, sadly. "Her name was Shadowflame," she said. "My father, well, I never knew him. Shadowflame said he died of sickness, but, well, I never knew."
Another cat came up. He had a very thin tail, and was light red. "Hello, kits," he said. Moonsun looked up. Sunray smiled.
"Hello, Dragonfly. How are your littermates, Fallingblossom and Birchheart doing?" he asked.
"Good," Dragonfly replied. He looked over. "Kits, why are you bugging these two?" he asked.
Riverkit piped up. "They were going to tell us about WillowClan!" she squeaked.
He smiled. "Alright," he said.
The kits turned to Moonsun and Sunray. "Well, remember Mountianstar?" she asked. The kits nodded. "Well, she was the last leader of WillowClan when the twolegs invaded. So, get this. She sent out patrols to get the twolegs OFF our territory!" she said, laughing. The kits laughed, along with Sunray.
Suddenly, a cat burst into the entrance.
"We need help! Sunrise and SunsetClan are attacking!"
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Re: Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:23 am

Yay! Thankyou for the link, the story is really good. You've made a few spelling mistakes, but it's good so far!
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Re: Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby star star. » Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:34 am

:) Thanks! And yes, I know about the spelling errors, just the stupid computer. doesn't know the word I meant. You get what I'm saying?





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Re: Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:39 am

Yeah, I know what you mean. I find it easier to copy the word onto a word document (if you start typing it on a forum) as it has more spelling help.
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
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Re: Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby star star. » Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:39 am

True. Anyway, I'm going to do the next chapter!





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Warriors of Four: Trapped- Chapter 2

Postby star star. » Tue Jun 12, 2012 3:41 am

Chapter 2:
Appletail, Snakeheart, and Cloudstream


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Re: Warriors of Four: Trapped

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:43 am

ok! Thanks for entering contest, by the way!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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