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noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:45 pm

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I remember when the sun would beat down upon the Clans grounds, when the clouds would lazily float across the sky, giving us a peaceful stare. But all that changed when that mangy flea-bag had come up from nowhere and ruined everything. I remember the Clans camp grounds littered with puddles of blood and bones and dead bodies and corpses. I rememeber the hatred in each cats eyes, burning throughout their wry souls and into the next, searching with prying eyes for the next victim, the next unliucky cat to have their throat ripped out and their body shredded to threads. This was the time of the Solar Ecplise. The Solar Ecplise was the first the cats ever experienced, but not seeing the full moon, cats thought it was a sign from StarClan that War was upon them, and they must fight. It was, in a way that all cats imagined but never really spoke up, it was horrific.
I remember the moons and moons and countless moons of fighting for victory. But, for victory over what? What were they fighting for, we never really found out. Only that each wave after wave after wave of boundless warriors surging our camp was the reason to fight back, with every claw extended and fang gleaming. It was this way, that we kept fighting back, with each warrior, queen, apprentice, kit, elder, leader and deputy. Oh, the amount of kits and apprentices we lost during those times. They were tough, really tough and dark times the Clans went through those moons and days of agony. All four Clans, fighting against eachother, do I remember. The lightning that striked in ThunderClans eyes, my own eyes as well. The shadows that covered the colors of ShadowClans eyes. The never ending hatred flow in RiverClans eyes. And the love and caring and hospitality swept away from WindClans now hollow eyes.
And it all started when that mess of a rouge, Sol, and his pack of battle hungry rouges came into the Clans territory. And he started with us, my Clan, which i do not which one. There was a hypnotic spell about him, drawing us all to his attention, like we were under something. No one really found out, but we did find out that StarClan granted a random cat a very destructive gift, and planned out his destiny, also knowing it would ruin each and every Clan. He caused this war. He caused the hatred. He caused the flow of blood beneathed our paws. And he caused the Solar Ecplise.
He was the one that made the sun disappear in the place of a round black ball with a rim of white-hot fire around the black ball. He started this. He started that turmoil.
He was the cause of all those deaths, of all those occurrences in StarClan, all those lives to be lost from the leaders, forcing the inexperienced to be the head of an angered and scared Clan. I remember it, even though I was a mere week old. I remember it clear as day in my head, replaying in my head like a record. Over and over and over those screams of agony and pain and loss. Each cat went down, either way, but only a few, remained.
There were only a measly selection of use Clan cats left, a few from RiverClan and WindClan, but mostly ShadowClan and ThunderClan. Me, myself I do not know which Clan I originated from. I was just a mere kit, only about a week old. Not knowing because no one ever told me, seeing as I was born right as this turmoil began. I know I am certainly not WindClan or ThunderClan. Those cats had a certain alliance with them, being all friendly. We watched them with careful eyes, seeing them grow closer and closer together. So I know I'm not either one of those. But I'll never know my true Clan. All I know now is that I now belong to a Clan that is not afraid of anything, not like those emaciated flea-pelts who jump at every crack of a brach, every rustle of a leaf.
The next thing I remember is coming here, to this little camp we've made up here, so close to the stars, not that I put much weight in them now, anyways. Tigerpaw tells me that the others have been saying that they feel much more protected and safer here, so close to the heavens and StarClan. He also tells me that they love us and that they care for us. I keep telling him, rubbish! If they loved us, why did they do this to us? If they truly loved us, they wouldn't have made us go through the pain and suffering that we did. They wouldnt have dine this to us, done this to me. I lost whatever youth I could have had. I lost everything and everyone. I can't even remember my mothers own face. Isn't that pathetic? Isn't that sad? I think so. It makes me what to cry, sometimes, it really does. As of yet, though, I never have. It's too late for whatever could have been, so I suppose I need to move on in my life. That's what they tell me, anyway.
It was all caused, by one, scrawny cat named Sol.

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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:15 pm

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Ot was tough,
finding our way up those
rocky mountains and cliffs.
But we made it, I know.
with just a few problems
with our bunch of scraggly
warriors, we made it up.
I rememeber the hot sand
digging up

between my toes and through the crevices in my claws. How the discomfort of the burning sun heating up my pelt after each pass under a cooling shadow. But we made it, I know. We came up to a clearing, a wide, vast clearing that ended just before a forest started. Oh, how marvelous it looked! Actuall, living trees sprouted from the ground and gave off spectacular shadows and coolness and shade. Oh, how good the shade felt on my burning hot pelt. Little purple windflowers were in spurts everywhere, as far as the eye could see. The grass was a rich, vibrant green, in full bloom and it was seemed to be cut low. As if animals there or maybe insects came and trimmed down the grass to a normal height other than towering weeds. In fact, there were no weeds at all to disrupt the beauty of the meadow. Yes, the meadow. There were little caves in the medium sized bushes that grew along the edge of the cliff, but be careful! You had to be cautious of every careful step you took while adventuring these great caverns in the mighty green stalks.
There were many species of plants and little creatures running amok. There were Brids of Paradise, and purple lilacs, and Lilly's, and tall, tall towering Sunflowers! Oh the variety. And the prey was plentiful, no matter what! There were birds, squirrels, rabbits, owls, mice, voles, rats and frogs. Only the ShadowClan cats would chase those slimy creatures of course.
Prey was everywhere. In the trees, in burrows, hiding in bushes and underground, everywhere. We were certain to be fat and happy by the end of this upcoming moon! And how we went right to work on exploring! The second we appeared over the edge of the cliff and took a breathtaking look around, we set off In all different directions, sniffing and inspecting, setting scent markers just in case. We had to be more cautious, more alert this time. More alert than ever.
After following my friend, Tigerpaw, I set off by my own, into the forest part of the magnificent clearing. As I entered, birds tweeted warnings and took off at the first sight of me. Tall, towering oaks stood above me, holding many prey, branches, leaves, twigs, and secrets. I stumbled a but over a few snaking roots, But found my way into another clearing, but much more smaller. I crunched my way over mounds and mounds of dead leaves into the center. What a perfect camp. With no trees at all covering the sky, the moon and sun could beat right down upon them. It was almost a perfect circle, a little indent, maybe a cave, made out the side of a tree that seemed to finding its way into the clearing. It was maybe a foot or two in, and it was the biggest tree I have ever seen!
So big! And it had a deep cave right in the middle of it. Perfect for the leader! It could be the leaders den. Also, to add to the clearings perfectness, there was a large, stone rock that looked much too easy to climb, for the HighRock. It seemed to be set back a little further than the den, so it gave the leader some privacy.
It was the most perfect I have ever sought, and I ran my hardest back to the cats to tell them.

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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:30 pm

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Peachkit to Sandykit to Rootkit → sister, brother, brother
Skyfeather to Peachkit to Sandykit to Rootkit → mother
Snowdrift to Petalfur → brother and sister

m a t e s
Skyfeather → Hawktail
m e n t o r s
Rabbitstrike → Birdpaw
Petalfur →Tigerpaw
Nightclaw → Wavepaw

c l a n s
Sunstar → ThunderClan
Ivytail → ShadowClan
Littleleaf → WindClan
Sweetpaw → ThunderClan
Rabbitstrike → RiverClan
Snowdrift → WindClan
Nightclaw → ShadowClan
Hawktail → RiverClan
Petalfur → WindClan
Birdpaw → Unknown
Tigerpaw → ShadowClan
Wavepaw → ThunderClan
Skyfeather → RiverClan
Peachkit → The new ThunderClan
Sandkit → Tye new ThunderClan
Rootkit → The new ThunderClan




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After moons and moons of traveling up those cliffs and mountains, avoiding everything dangerous as possible, we made it. Though coming across our beautiful territory, we couldn't be sure who to trust. We knew nobody, maybe a small friend from meeting them at previous gatherings, but from the invasion of Sol and our expirience of the Soalr Ecplise, all alliances and friendships, we're broken. Broken into tiny, shattered pieces that could pierce your heart at anytime when you looked at them, and they gave you a sharp glare as if to say: We don't know eachother anymore. We have changed, and so have you. Get over it and move on.
But, we did eventually evolve into the care free, but cautious warriors and cats we once were. And as we approached our beautiful oasis of lush green grasses and dark rich forests, we came back. Sunstar, who Starclan had pronounced leader the last time we all visited the moonpool before we left, had seen growing tensions between cats of formerly different clans, though, as we settled into land and got back into the notion of things. And yet, we had a leader, and a deputy, and even a medicine cat, but we were not a single clan, yet. We still had to make alliances and trust eachother more thoroughly, though, it seemed.
We had to get to know eachother. Get to know eachother I guess. So, we spent a few moons alone and together, weekly Gatherings in the big clearing by the monstrous tree, our faithful leader Sunstar leasing us all. And during that short time of getting to know eachother, we did. And we grew to like everyone for who they were.
Okay, sure some cats were frustrated at this new evolve. Who wasn't? We all we're devasted when we had to move past the thought of letting go of our loved ones memories and accept new ones. But we did, eventually but stubbornly we did.
but we were in the only green as far as a birds flight for four days and four nights, and no cat made a fight to leave. Not one. THey knew what would happen to them if they did. They knew the conciqueces, they were even worse than there and living with the cats you disliked. But no one fought. Not one cat. And I think they are glad they didn't....




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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:15 pm

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x x x x x x

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There will be one is chosen from a Clan that was made from four. This cat will be chosen for many battles, thought to be the strongest and witty. But this cat will break down. This cat will emerge in many Clan battles and fights. This cat will become the weakest ever, until it's on the verge of StarClan. But then this cat will grow again to be the strongest.

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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Wed Jun 06, 2012 1:38 pm

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Flashback One

[url]http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1217578&p=36759051#p35553007]Chapter One[/url]
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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Thu Jun 07, 2012 10:52 am

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"Before the rouges attacked..."



Skittering paws over dead, crunchy leaves could be heard probably a mile away. Birdkit sniffed gingerly at a piece of bark that had suddenly fallen from out of the sky. Or, it seemed like it did. The trees grew so tall in this part of the forest, it was unbelievable. Well, for Birdkit, because she was so tiny. She was about the size of a rat. The tiny kit was stalking the forest bit by the Twoleg fence. The wooden creation was towering before her, just one mere fox length in front of her. And that was when she heard the disrupting noise. It sounded like a cat leaping up on something. Bewildered, Birdkit whipped her tiny head from side to side, her small ears flapping against her head, looking here and there, forgetting all about the fence. Finally, the mysterious noise speaks up. "Ahem" said the Tom sitting ontop of the fence. Slowly, Birdkit raised her head. And there he was. The mysterious noise turned out to be a regular tom cat. Or so she thought. This tom had a beautiful colored calico pelt, similar to Birdkits, but the colors on her pelt were smudged and pale. His we're striking to look at, bright and clean. There was a mix of black, orange, white and brown splotches over his sparkly white pelt. He had gleaming, mischievous yellow eyes that glinted when caught in the sun. He had long legs that looked like they would make him fly when he ran. He had a long, snake like tail that draped idly over the edge of the fence, as if daring her to swipe at it with her tiny thorn sharp claws. He was but tall, not counting the added cat-whisker of length added to his ears. Looking at this cat was like looking up at the lazy blue sky. But she had to speak up, he could hurt her!
Birdkit hissed sharply, allowing authority to enter her throat and take charge. She arched her tiny back, her stubby tail shot straight up, stiff like a stick. But the tom didn't give way, he actually looked rather taken aback at such force that came from such a tiny source. Birdkit was rather taken aback herself! She didn't know she had it in her. But, she guesses she did. But, the tom quickly regained himself, because she straightened up again and his eyes slowly narrowed to slits again. He looked scarier this time, though, Birdkit realized. She shrank back until her rump backed into a bramble that poked out. She yelped and jumped forward, right as the mysterious cat started to speak. Odd.. she thought. "Why are you snarling when you are on my territory?" said the Tom, calling down to her in such a powerful voice, Birdkit had to shake her head to stop from falling into the trance it brought.
Birdkit sniffed and straightened from her crouch. W-well, who are y-you?" she demanded, her back aching from crouching so deeply. "I am Sol" the calico replied simply. "And I suppose you have a name, as well?" Birdkit snorted at such a ridiculous question. Who does this cat think he his? He acts like he owns the forest! All bossy and being sarcastic with the all fantastic Birdkit! The strongest kit in all the Clans! And he was speaking, to her. A loner. Or whatever he was.
"Who doesn't have a name?" Birdkit cried out in a mocking tone. This cat was getting on her nerves, acting like he owned the forest. "I suppose so, so may I know yours?" this time, Birdkit held her tongue. He had a scary look in his eyes. She broke in, stuttering, "uh, uh, yes, I-it's Birdkit" she said softly, aiming her gaze to the dusty ground that was littered with uprooted grass stalks and dead leaves.
Sol smiled, as if amused by the sound of her name. Birdkit tensed, her fur spiking. "Interesting. So your one of those wild cats that lives in the forest? The ones who eat bones and sharpens your claws in rocks, as I have heard?" So he's a talker... Birdkit thought, revising Sol's words and making sense of them. He also seemed like a spy! Well, he couldn't be a spy form another Clan, seeing from his unusual name and claiming she was in his territory, which was Kittypet territory. If he wasn't a spy, or a Clan cat, then, who was he? Birdkit took caution in her next words, sensing that this cat is powerful.
"We don't do that stuff! Those are just rumors." Birdkit ruffled her fur to make her appear larger and turned her back on Sol and his matters. She started to pad away when he called back to her. His voice sounded so lulling, so transfixing, it was hard to resist. Slowly, she turned back and faced him.
"You are probably wondering where I am from" he said before drawing his tongue over a few matted strands of fur. Birdkit froze. That was exactly what she was thinking, plus who in StarClans name was he!
"I am not a Kittypet, or a loner, or a rouge. I am a traveler. I don't live with Twolegs, I live by myself. And I have come a long way to see you, Birdkit" he meowed, but at the same moment, a call sounded form the bushes. "Who is there?" Birdkit froze. It was probably a warrior looking for her. She groaned, knowing she was going to be in a heap of trouble when she got back. As she turned away and made her way towards the call of the voice, she looked back at Sol to say goodbye, but he was already gone.
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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:30 am

I like it! (I'll delete this if you want me to)
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Fri Jun 08, 2012 7:25 am

No, it's okay. And thank you! I'll have the first chapter up soon c:
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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby passion. » Sat Jun 09, 2012 7:56 am

Okay, chapter one is almost done c:
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Re: noтнιng ever ѕтayѕ тнe ѕaмe

Postby light. » Sat Jun 09, 2012 8:04 am

may I point out just a few grammar mistakes?

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:Birdkit sniffed gingerly at a piece of bark that had suddenly fell from out of the sky.


There I would use fallen instead of fell.

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:Well, for Birdkit, becuase she was so tiny.

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:becuase she straightened up again and his eyes slowly narrowed to slits again.


Probably a typo, because

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:Bewhildered, Birdkit whipped her tiny head from side to side


Again, a typo, probably. It would be bewildered

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:He had gleaming, mischevious yellow eyes


Typo: mischievous

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:But the tom didnt give way


You missed the apostrophe; didn't

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:He had ling legs


I guess here you meant long

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:seeing from his unusuall name


It should be unusual

~ f o r e v e r ~ wrote:But, she guess she did


Here I'm not sure, but shouldn't it be guesses?

Other than that, I like it. Please keep writting c:
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