The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

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The characters of my book are awesome, are they not? But which of them is awesomer?

Amy
10
26%
Jenette
15
38%
Mom
1
3%
Sorrow
1
3%
Flower
1
3%
Indah
4
10%
Anger
0
No votes
Jessy
1
3%
Agent Cornelia
1
3%
Misty
5
13%
 
Total votes : 39

Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby brambletalon98 » Sat Nov 19, 2011 4:32 pm

NO!NONONONNONONOO....

* stabs Auriara witih giant fork * die! * stabs once more * you Evill Snake!!! morphing snake thingy... Snake! * stabs once more * >: D
Bramble's Bulletin wrote:
Spare Quote wrote:PLEASE PLAY 999
PLEASE PLAY VLR
PLEASE PLAY ZTD
PLEASE PLAY THE
ZERO ESCAPE SERIES
A note from 2017 wrote:when u remember how big of a role
chicken smoothie and warrior cats roleplays
played in your life but you're in year 11
and stressed out 24/7 and have no time but
wanna be nostalgic for a while
Bramble's Thoughts from 2015 ish wrote:[SCREAMING NOISES]
[GLANCES AT GRAVITY FALLS TRAILER]
[LOUDER SCREAMING AND CRYING]
what am i doing on chicken smoothie i havent been on here for like a year oh go d
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Zookrates » Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:46 pm

o: ... Gosh...
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sun Nov 20, 2011 3:40 am

O.o
So.. this is the end?
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 20, 2011 6:45 am

*Blackberry* wrote:Is it the end yet?

I'll probably write more later, so no. It is not the end.
brambletalon98 wrote:NO!NONONONNONONOO....

* stabs Auriara witih giant fork * die! * stabs once more * you Evill Snake!!! morphing snake thingy... Snake! * stabs once more * >: D

lol!
Zookrates wrote:o: ... Gosh...

Yes. I think I'd react the same way if I had just read that.
Xela XIII wrote:O.o
So.. this is the end?

I will write more later, and you shall see who is writing the diary. It might be someone else.... *Dramatic Music Plays* Hey.... where is that music coming from?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Sun Nov 20, 2011 7:33 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I'll probably write more later, so no. It is not the end.


Write more now. Or else.
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Lunala » Sun Nov 20, 2011 8:15 am

OH MY PICKLES!!! Write more pleeeeaase~
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 20, 2011 9:58 am

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I'll probably write more later, so no. It is not the end.


Write more now. Or else.

lol! Okay, okay! I'll write more! XD
Doglover141 wrote:OH MY PICKLES!!! Write more pleeeeaase~

*Quotes Jenette* Yerp!












Aurauria lunged at me with her sharp teeth. I moved out of the way, and she bit the floor. She hissed in frustration and lunged at me again. I don't know how I was still holding Bob, but I was. Aurauria lunged at me again, but I ran into a room and locked the door, but a dresser in front of it, tore off the doorknob, put another dresser in front of it, and then I pushed a giant weight in front of it.
That should keep her out for a while.
I was suddenly pushed against the wall, a gun under my neck. Of course, it was Aurauria's dog friends. They growled and all of them put the guns to my chest. I shut my eyes and awaited the excrusiating pain.
Sorry to interrupt your party, guys, but I believe I wasn't invited.
I opened my eyes and looked at the dog who had spoken. No, it couldn't be. She was dead! But as I looked more at her, I knew who it was. It was none other then Amy. Amy looked at me.
Hi Jenette!
What was I supposed to answer? Amy looked again at me and frowned.
HEY! YOU TOOK MY JOURNAL!
No, you left it up- what are you doing? HEY! Give..... it..... BACK!
Okay, I'm back! Yup, it's me, AMY! You are probably thinking that I'm dead, right? Well, let me see.... I'm writing in this journal, so I can't be dead! YAY! I'm alive! Now, you are probably wondering how I'm alive, right? Well, while I was falling I- oops. Sorry. The dogs are pointing their guns at Jenette. I walked toward the dogs, an angry look on my face.
Amy! What are you doing?! You don't possibly think that one of you could defeat thousands of these, do you?!
No. But I think I can with a little help...
There was a loud crash as the windows broke. Jenette looked up and smiled when she saw what had broken it.
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Yes, an army of dragons. And I know their names, too! (Listed in order from pictures shown) Desperado, Flame, DarkTail, PinkScorch, Tackle, Flamer, Silver, Destroyer. The dragons roared and lunged at the enemy dogs. Jenette jumped out of the way just in time. The dragons opened their mouths and breathed their firey flames on the enemy dogs, burning them quickly to ashes.
How did you survive?
As I fell to my doom, I realized I forgot my journal. It was very sad. Anyway, as I was falling I actually landed on something's back: A dragon. They where about to eat me when I told them that I it was sad that creatures judged a person before they even knew them. And so Desperado there helped me. He was very kind. He said people judged dragons just like they judged me. We understood each other. So he flew me up out of the hole and the other dragons followed. It took a while, though, because I had fallen a long way. And then we came here and blah blah blah, and now we're together! I hope Mom's alright at HQ. She must be worried sick!
I hugged Jenette.
Amy, Mom's evil.
I pushed away from Jenette.
What do you mean?! Mom's not evil!
She tried to kill me more then once, and she even tried to kill you. She killed Jessy, too. And... she's Aurauria.
That horrible name. Aurauria. It had haunted me many nights.
No! She can't be Aurauria!
Now might not be the best time to mention that you're adopted.
WHAT?! I'M ADOPTED?!
This was too much. Desperado spoke (his words will be in a greenish turquoise).
Me and the other dragons will go and try to destroy that snake outside.
Okay.
I was whispering. What would you say if somebody just told you your mom was evil and tried to kill you and your family and friends? The dragons burst open the door and Aurauria stared at them, scared. That snake was bigger then Aurauria, though.
Amy?!
That wasn't Aurauria's voice. It was Mom's.
You're ALIVE?!
I growled. Aurauria (I'm going to call her that from now on) had betrayed me. She was no logner my mother.
Yes, I am alive! And you are soon not to be! Go, Desperado! Do your thing!
Desperado roared, as did the other dragons, and they breathed all their fire on Aurauria. Aurauria screamed in pain, and was soon ash. The wind blew away the ash, and she was no more. I saw a dog in the corner, shivering with fear.
Dad! Are you alright?
Dad? I thought he was evil! Jenette ran to the dog.
Yes, yes! I'm alright! Wait.... is that... Amy?
Jenette smiled, and the dog ran over to me and hugged me.
Erm.... do I know you?
I'm your father!
I couldn't believe it. My whole life I had thought my father was evil and my mother was good, but my mother was evil and my father was good. This was all too confusing!
..... Father?
Yes, yes! It's me!
I hugged my dad back. I could trust him. I could just tell I could trust him. We hugged and hugged, and I looked over Dad's shoulder and smiled when I saw the dragons hugging as well. Jenette joined in on my hug with Dad, and we all hugged together, smiling happily. This was my family. Jessy, Indah, and Agent Cornelia where waiting at HQ for our return. Oh! And don't worry, Bob! You're part of my family too!













That is not the end of this story! I will be writing the end soon! Thank you XellaXIII for Amy's death and coming back to life, and the "Sorry to interrupt your party. guys, but I believe I wasn't invited" part and the "No, it couldn't be! She was dead! It was none other then Amy."

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby moti » Sun Nov 20, 2011 12:10 pm

Even better than what I was thinking might happen. : D
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby katomorakwarrior » Sun Nov 20, 2011 1:10 pm

I am so glad you didn't kill Amy off. Thank You, Jf
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 20, 2011 1:17 pm

moti wrote:Even better than what I was thinking might happen. : D

What'd you think was going to happen?
Sysshyria wrote:I am so glad you didn't kill Amy off. Thank You, Jf

[cocky]It was in my plan all along.[/endcockyness]

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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