Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!!!!!

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Are You Happy That I'm Writing A Sequel?

Of course, the first one was epicness, and I bet this one will be too!
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51%
It's already so great, I can't wait to see what happens next!
8
8%
No, the first one was an epic fail and this one will be too. You should just stop writing and stick to doing nothing your whole life.
33
31%
The first one was good, but this one is better!
2
2%
This one is okay, not as good as the first one.
5
5%
I LOVE this one! It is the AWESOMEST!!!!!!!
4
4%
 
Total votes : 106

Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Ellies » Tue Sep 06, 2011 11:32 am

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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 07, 2011 4:41 am

lol Thank you! :D

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:07 pm

So we headed out of HQ in search for the pearl. We first went to this deserted cabin (why must it always be deserted?) and found a lot of dust. Then we pulled a lever, and ended up in a snake pit. I hate snakes. OOHHH! I'm like Indiana Jones! *Hums Indiana Jones them song* Dun dun dun dun, dun dun dun, dun dun dun dun, dun dun DUN DUN DUN! Dun dun dun dun, dun dun dun!!!! Dun dun dun, dun dun dun, dun dun dun dun dun dun! Okay, enough of that. Anyways, Jenette fought off the snakes with her frying pan (I like frying pans...) and I fought them off with my awesome-....... fine. I cowered away in the corner, as you can probably guess. Anyways, Jenette wacked those snakes good and hard and we where soon safe. But now we where wondering how to escape, before the snakes woke up and bit both of us.
Jenette?
Yurp?
She had said yurp. What dog says yurp? Especially a girly froofroo secret agent dog?!
First of all, why did you just say yurp?
'Cause I like that word.
Okkkaaayyyy.... ignoring the awkwardness. Second of all, HOW THE BURITOS DO WE GET OUT OF THIS PLACE?!
Calm down, calm down. I'll think of a way out by no tim- HEY! I THOUGHT OF A WAY OUT!
Wow, how did I know you was going to say that?
Where.
Huh? What do you mean?
You said 'how did I know you was going to say that', when it should have been 'how did I know you where going to say that'.
Please don't correct me.
Jenette rolled her eyes, but continued on with her gigantic speech.
Rope the snakes together.
But I HATE snak-
DO IT!
Did she really think I'd take orders from her? Really, she's quite pethetic.
Fine.
Why did I say that? And wait, why was I walking towards the snakes and roping them together?
Thank you.
I was done roping them, and I was angry at her and at myself. So Jenette climbed the rope first, and she was back up to the cabin. So now it was my turn. I began climbing the snake rope, when suddenly a snake I had tied together woke up, and it was staring right at me.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Ellies » Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:10 pm

WOW getting more awsome by the minet
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Sep 07, 2011 12:12 pm

:lol: I hope it is! :lol:

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Shin Kuroi » Wed Sep 07, 2011 7:44 pm

(off topic): who the heck would say vote 3 and 3 people? whats going on this is pure epicness!
What ever will happen to us today?
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:15 am

Write more JF!
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Sep 08, 2011 9:48 am

MxRxSxMxMxR wrote:(off topic): who the heck would say vote 3 and 3 people? whats going on this is pure epicness!

I don't care if people vote badly, a couple of bad votes isn't going to ruin my dream of becoming a famous author! :)
Draggy Ave wrote:Write more JF!
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Of course! :)






The snake untied itself and hissed at me. The rope dropped, along with me. I was back in the pit, with a bunch of unconscious snakes and one that was conscious. But, of course things had to get worse. So all the snakes where now awake. So I started singing this song. Don't ask me why, it just reminded me of it. The snakes started back away, and even Jenette covered her ears from above me.
SHUT UP, AMY!
The snakes where gone! I had saved my life. I stopped singing
MAN! WHO GAVE YOU SINGING LESSONS?!
I ignored her comment.
Help me out of this place!
Okay, I'll go look for something to help you with!
Jenette left me. Alone. In a pit. Full of snakes. Oh joy. I was bored, so I started humming. I shouldn't have. The snakes came back, angrier then ever. They hissed at me.
JENETTE!!!! HELP ME!!!!!!!!
Jenette ran back.
WHAT HAPPENED?! WHO DIED?!
HHHHHEEEEELLLLLLPPPPPPP MMMMMMEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly, I backed up into a lever, and the hole above me (where Jenette was) closed. I was in the dark, with a bunch of snakes.
Amy? Are you okay?
Jenette's voice was muffled, but I could still hear her.
AAAAAAAAGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Suddenly, the floor beneath me slid out from under me, and I fell fell fell. It was getting lighter at least, now. But maybe that was a bad thing that I could see. I saw snakes all around me, falling as well.
AMY!
That was the last thing I heard from Jenette.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby Lunala » Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:06 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
MxRxSxMxMxR wrote:(off topic): who the heck would say vote 3 and 3 people? whats going on this is pure epicness!

I don't care if people vote badly, a couple of bad votes isn't going to ruin my dream of becoming a famous author! :)

Yay, go for your dream!!! :D The only thing I could say is use better grammar and describe things more. Ya know like the famous people do, letting you know the scene exactly... But then again a diary, errr I mean journal (XD), isn't very descriptive so I should just shut up and bow down to the awesome writer of TIAJNAD! XD

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AMY!
That was the last thing I heard from Jenette.

ZOMG, does that mean Amy died?!?!?!?!?! That's impossible, though. A story doesn't happen like that usually.
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Re: Sneaky Times In This Journal - THE SEQUAL TO TIAJNAD!!!!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Sep 08, 2011 11:09 am

Doglover141 wrote:Yay, go for your dream!!! :D The only thing I could say is use better grammar and describe things more. Ya know like the famous people do, letting you know the scene exactly... But then again a diary, errr I mean journal (XD), isn't very descriptive so I should just shut up and bow down to the awesome writer of TIAJNAD! XD

Thanks! :) And ya, I know. I've got to work on my grammar! And lol- yes it is a journal NOT A DIARY! XD

Doglover141 wrote:ZOMG, does that mean Amy died?!?!?!?!?! That's impossible, though. A story doesn't happen like that usually.

You'll see later on! Seriously, my brother was like reading and when he finished reading this, he attacked me saying "WRITE MORE NOW!!!!!!!!" and I was like "Okay." ..... I like my brother! XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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