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by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:12 am
Littlecatzee wrote:OMG. Wow that part make my story look like POOP.

Nah your story is better!

"The game is
coming to its end."
"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."
"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."
"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."
"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:13 am
Death the Kat wrote:THAT. WAS. AWESOME.
lol thank you!
"The game is
coming to its end."
"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."
"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."
"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."
"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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by • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 9:28 am
Littlecatzee wrote:No way my story is awful compared to your's! I'm going to have to plan a big twist if I want to compete with that!

Not true! Yours is WAY better and you know it!
Hawky & Tundra wrote:JF, let people compliment you on your writing! That WAS TOTALLY EPIC! Your story is better than mine and LC! (No offense LC

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Fine, thank you you guys! YOu're the best!

I couldn't believe that Jenette was my sister! I mean, all these years and I didn't know!
If you two are done with the flashback, I've got some killing to do!Hold on right there! You're not going anywhere until I-But suddenly, Suzi disappeared. Where had she gone?
Come with me.Why? Where are we going?Just come here.So I walked over to Jenette and suddenly I was in a strange place with her. There where computers everywhere and mechanical systems and everything technoligic.
Where are we?Oh.... I forgot to tell you, didn't I? I'm a secret agent.
"The game is
coming to its end."
"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."
"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."
"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."
"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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