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How would you feel if I restarted the Notebook?

Don't restart the notebook
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Wait you're restarting the notebook?
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I don't care.
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YES RESTART!
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Sun May 17, 2015 1:48 pm

Oh my gosh!! Ooooh snap, Carma is in trouble now!
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Mon May 18, 2015 4:50 am

(Going into third person (Third dog?) Point of view.)
This time, when the demon came into focus, he was angrier.
A lot angrier.
???; YOU!
The demon grabbed onto Carma and shook her.
???; WHERE IS THAT LIZARD?
Kiana: Umm... dragon.
Carma: Name?
The demon paused, confused.
???; WHAT.
Carma: Don't make me ask again. Give me like, your name.
???; UMM...
Carma: Are you like, deaf? I asked what your name is.
???; I DON'T HAVE ONE.
Carma: Uggh. Can you stop speaking in liek, Caps? it's sooo annoying.
???; How's this?
Kiana; What. The. Dog.
???; Uggh. That dog is like, sooo annoying. Let's leave her.
Kiana: :shock: I am you.
Carma: I'm sooo with you. I think you'll be a popular.
Kiana closed her eye, with difficulty.
Kiana: I'm so confused. Am I a popular or an outcast?

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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Mon May 18, 2015 10:10 am

Lol!! That is hilarious!
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Hey there, I'm BlondeChick! Just the average dirty
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busy so I won't be able to get on the computer
much to draw, but I will be on a mobile phone
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Tue May 19, 2015 3:39 am

Me; Hey Darhk.
Darhk; Ready to play Minecraft?
I smirked. Since I had a secret boyfriend?, instead of going to his house, we just skyped each other.
Me; I'm totally going to find diamonds first.
Darhk; Game on. Whoever wins buys ice cream.
We logged onto our server and the screen flushed blinding white.
Me; BLINDED BY THE LIGHT.
Darhk; Where are we?
I looked around.
Me; Well... blocky sun, weird block-like structures... Yep, we're in Minecraft.
Darhk; What? How?
Me; I bet it had something to do with the dare.
Darhk; So as soon as we find diamonds, we can leave?
I shrugged.
Me; Guess so. Come on, let's go build a shelter before it gets dark.
Darhk blushed.
Darhk; Umm... don't you think we should build seperate shelters?
Me; Later. The sun's going to set soon, so we need to start soon.
Darhk paused, then nodded.
Darhk; You go get some wood, I'll dig out a cave.
Me; Umm..
Me: Darhk? Do you think that we can... um... "faint" here?

He shrugged, and walked off. I turned towards the nearest tree- we had spawned in a forest- and stared at the trunk.
I shrugged and started to pound my paw against it. After a while my paw hurt, but I had several pieces of wood.
I heard growling noises and turned around. A minecraft wolf pup was standing behind me. I slowly crouched down.
Me; Hey pup. Are you lost?
The wolf glared at me. I rummaged through my pockets and my paw closed around a piece of chocolate.
Me; I was saving this for later, but here.
The wolf slowly inched forward and sniffed the chocolate. It lapped it up and a collar appeared around his neck.
Me; I'm going to call you Bone.
Bone growled at something behind me. I turned around to see a creeper.
Oh dog.
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Tue May 19, 2015 4:11 am

Oh my. Run!!
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Tue May 19, 2015 9:41 am

((Note: This post may have a little bit of creepypasta (Creepyness). Not a lot, but a little bit. There may also be some blood))
(I used http://minecraft.gamepedia.com/ as a refrence for this post.)

Me; DARHK! I FOUND A CREEPER!
Darhk: Deal with it!
Me: HNNGH I CAN'T! I DON'T KNOW IF I CAN "FAINT" IN THIS WORLD!
Darhk: //sigh// I'm coming.
Bone growled at the creeper and the creeper backed away.
Me; GET HIM BONE! BUT DON'T "FAINT"!
Bone looked at me, then at the creeper. He hid behind me.
Me; Really... .___. Scaredy-dog.
The creeper advanced towards me and smacked it away with my paw.
Creeper: That'sssss a very nice jacket you've got there... It'd be a ssssshame if anything were to happen to it...
Me; HNNGH IT TALKS! GO AWAY!
I smacked it again and it began to hiss and vibrate. Oh dog. I'm really going to die.
I closed my eyes and prayed that it would be swift.
I felt something pick me up and I felt a breeze running through my fur.
I opened my eyes and saw the forest floor beneath the trees. A masked dog was carrying me.
Me; Who are you? Are you stuck here too?
He shook his head.
???: No. I've lived here all my life. You must be KianaKat, or Kiana, right?
:shock: Okay, creepy much?
Waait a second... wasn't there some kinda glitch/virus/creepypasta character who was in Minecraft? Hero whatsit?
Herobrine?
Me; Is your name... Herobrine?
Herobrine: ..no...
He approached a clearing and I saw Darhk walking through it. Herobrine dropped me on the ground. When I looked up, he was gone.
Darhk: Kiana? Where did you come from? :what:
Me; Darhk... We aren't alone here.
Darhk smirked.
Darhk: No, really? You mean besides the skeletons and endermen?
I nodded, blushing a bit.
Me; Yeah... apparently Herobrine is here too.
Darhk stared at me for a second, then grabbed my paw and pulled me through the forest, a grim look on his face. He kept glancing up at the trees, and into the surrounding forest.
Me; Darhk, what's wrong?
Darhk: Don't you know who Herobrine is?
Me; Umm... yeah? He's a glitch in minecraft.
Darhk: People say he's Notch's dead brother, who was placed in Minecraft as a vengeful spirit. Sometimes he seals people in dungeons, and takes their stuff. Sometimes he just watches from the mist. This map is haunted. Let's find the diamonds and get out of here.
I yanked my paw out of his grasp. He turned and looked at me.
Me; He can't be that bad right? He saved me from a creeper! While you were off dancing with the chickens...
Darhk: Sorry... I couldn't find you.
I heard a small 'plonk' as something fell to the ground next to one of the oak trees. I walked over there and picked it up. It was a map, and a small note was written on it.
I've decided to help you. Travel to the Rocky Pine and my friends will meet you there. I mean you no harm.
~Herobrine.

((YES ITS FINALLY GETTING INTERESTING!!))
(Kova, I stopped replying to your comments as much because I don't really want to spam up the Notebook. Thank you for your support. :D It's really appreciated.)

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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Tue May 19, 2015 9:56 am

Completely understand. ouo you should make a fanclub
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Tue May 19, 2015 11:31 am

Kova wrote:Completely understand. ouo you should make a fanclub

I would but I don't know how...
Do you know how to make a fanclub?

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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby BlondeChick » Tue May 19, 2015 12:09 pm

Good question. Possibly you start a separate thread and link it to your story. Idk what group it would go under though, I shall go find out.

Edit: Start a separate thread under ChickenSmoothie chat ^u^
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Re: Kiana's Notebook

Postby Archaeopteryx. » Tue May 19, 2015 12:51 pm

Okay thanks!

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