Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Who's your favorite?

Amy
7
22%
Jenette
5
16%
Suzi
2
6%
Gish
3
9%
DQ
5
16%
Ginger
0
No votes
Rhubarb
7
22%
Misty
1
3%
Jessy
2
6%
Brent
0
No votes
 
Total votes : 32

Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:30 am

Purrfect pic JF love it. DQ IS EVIL SHE IS EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!! I agree with Mento. XD
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Apr 01, 2013 4:58 am

Lion. wrote:
Evil DQ.
I knew she hadn't changed.
Get her Amy! xD Great entry JF.

lol, thank you!
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
It was nothing, I'm glad I could help out, the doctors here were stumped so basically we all had to stick it out until we got better.
Any who, who do you guys think is more evil Snake lady (I can never remember her name, it begins with an 'A')
Or DQ?

The doctors here were stumped too. But now I don't think she's sick even more, so that's good at least.
Lion. wrote:
The snake lady? You mean Aurauria? (I think thats how you spell it.)
I would definatly go with DQ, she's so evil. xD

Chyeah, it be Aurauria. Just think of the name Auria and add an extra "Aur".
Feel The Beat wrote:Aw that pic is so cute JF! <3

I'd say... Aurauria. She tryed to kill her own adoptive daughter! :o

Thanks! :)
Mento. wrote:BLARG BLARG BLARB!!!! NEW ENTRY NEW ENTRY!!

lol, see announcement below. ^.^
Rockfire wrote:Purrfect pic JF love it. DQ IS EVIL SHE IS EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!! I agree with Mento. XD

Thanks, Rocky!

Alright, so I know you all have been awaiting an entry. A special entry just for Easter, right? Well I just woke up, like, five minutes ago, so my brain is a bit on shut-down at the moment. -.- I'll try and write it later when I'm more active! If I don't, you'll probably just get a one-worded entry. :p

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:37 am

Lol ok JF! Happy Easter!
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Apr 01, 2013 7:08 am

Haha, happy Easter JF! I will await the next entry.
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Apr 01, 2013 1:23 pm

Rockfire wrote:Lol ok JF! Happy Easter!

Happy Easter!
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
Haha, happy Easter JF! I will await the next entry.

Happy Easter!

New entry!















I was shaking uncontrollably. I felt lost. I felt... insane. My brain felt like it was going to explode. Maybe it was.
Amy...
What happened?
Their voices echoed and sounded far away. I could barely hear them.
Amy...
My eyes were still open, but everything was blurry.
You're insane. Admit it. You always have been.
I'm... not...
Wake up!
Yes you are and you know it. Look at yourself! You're on the ground, shaking, not thinking straight. What do you call that?
Wake.... up....
The voices were fading. I started to not even feel Jenette's hands on me.
D.........Q.......
Don't worry about your little friends, Amy. I'll keep them company.
Don't... hurt... them...
Or what? You're paralyzed on the ground! You can't hurt me.
And then everything went black.

My eyes opened slowly. I was chained to a wall. I quickly tried to think up a memory and remembered Jenette and what had happened. I breathed a sigh of relief, glad I was sane again and still had my memory.
HELP MEEEEEEEEEEE!
I looked to my left and my mouth dropped open.
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WHAT THE HECK HAPPENED TO YOU?!
I DON'T KNOW! I FEEL SO BIG!!
Amy? Are you okay?!
Jenette!
I looked around the room and saw that Jenette, Gish, Ginger, Suzi, Flower, and Clyff were all chained to the wall -- just like me.
Well this didn't go according to plan.
OHMEHGOSHWE'REGONNADIIIIIIIIIIIE!
Great. I'm chained to a wall with the annoying bunny who won't shut up.
What happened?
DQ appeared. She said that it was time she "did something" with us.
Wait, so you saw her?
Yeah. After you blacked out she appeared and then she knocked us all out. What happened to you back there?
DQ was in my brain and tried to erase my memory.
Oh. Wait, you still remember everything, don't you?
Yeah, I think.
Enough chit-chat.
DQ appeared in the center of the room, grinning evilly.
Evil must win in the end. And for it to win, you all need to die. But I want to have a little fun with it.
DQ nodded her head slightly and guards appeared and started to unchain us from the walls. They unchained Jenette and as soon as the chains were off her she took action. She swung her leg up and knocked one of the guards in the gut, and then swung a punch at another guard's face. She jumped over the two guards (who were now knocked out) and rammed her head against another guard. Everybody was trying to catch her, but she was too fast. She twisted her body in a way I didn't even know was possible and swung herself over a guard's back and then knocked him out. Soon there were only two guards left. One of the guards charged at Jenette from behind and the other charged at her from the front. Jenette swung her head left to right and looked at the guards coming for her. Just as they were about to grab her she jumped into the air. The guards crashed into each other and Jenette twirled in the air as she soared upward. She was going amazingly high. And then she fell gracefully to the ground. She got to her feet and smiled at me.
Piece of cake.
Not quite.
DQ appeared out of the shadows and tackled Jenette. They started fighting.
Not this again.
You may have defeated my guards, but you won't defeat me!
Woah, self centered much?
So they kicked and punched. That's when I realized that the guard who had the keys was laying right in front of me. I reached my foot out and grabbed the keys with my toes. I swung my foot up and let go of the keys and it landed in my hands (which were chained). I wriggled the key around in my hand and finally unlocked myself. Gish stared at me.
What?
How did you do that?
I wriggled my toes.
The use of feet!
I went around the room and started unchaining all the others. Soon we were all free.
Come on, Jenette!
DQ was sitting on Jenette, who was trying to kick her off.
Just five more minutes!
Jenette finally got DQ off and then started punching the stuffing out of her.
Save it for the war, you two!
DQ suddenly shouted in frustration and disappeared, then reappeared on top of Jenette's back. She quickly yanked Jenette's hands behind her back, making Jenette shout in pain. DQ then took out chains and chained Jenette's hands together, and then her feet. DQ then lifted her hands and chains floated up from the ground. She moved her hands forward and they suddenly tied around all of our hands and feet, making us chained. Again.
There. That's better. Now, for the fun part.
DQ put her hands up again and we all started to suddenly float into the air and follow her.
You cheated!
I'm evil. I don't play by the rules.
We floated out of the dark cell we had been in (I now realized that it had been some sort of prison) and through multiple dark tunnels. I saw red light in the room ahead of us.
Where are we going?
We entered a room lit up by red-orange flames which leaped from corner to corner but didn't burn anybody in the room. There were multiple dogs in the room. Demon-dogs.
Welcome to my home.
This is where you live?
Yup. Home sweet home.
She brought us forward and laid us on the ground. Then she moved her hand over everybody except Jenette and we suddenly all froze in place. I couldn't blink, couldn't speak. But I could hear.
Alright. Jenette, you'll go first since you're the most annoying.
DQ raised Jenette up and put her chains on a hook that was hanging by a piece of rope from the ceiling. Jenette struggled and tried to break free but couldn't.
And the best part is your friends will watch you die once and for all.
And with those words Jenette struggled even harder. The hook started to raise into the air, dragging Jenette with it. Jenette floated by the hook. The hook moved over a large pit. DQ looked over at some of the demon-dogs and nodded her head. The demon-dogs suddenly turned to fire and jumped into the pit. The pit lit up with the flames of the demon-dogs and the flames started to get larger and larger.
Goodbye, Jenette. Have fun.
Jenette held her head high bravely.
Drop her!
The hook was released from Jenette's chains and everything went in slow motion as Jenette fell toward the flames. I wanted to scream, I wanted to save her. But I couldn't. I was completely frozen. I watched in horror as Jenette fell into the flames, heard her screams, saw DQ's evil grin. And then Jenette's screams dissolved, and she was no more.
That was beautiful. Next!
Jenette suddenly burst out of the flames, looking completely different (yet I could still tell it as her).
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A scepter-like thing formed in her hands and she landed on the ground in front of DQ, scepter in hand.
What the heck?!
Jenette spun her scepter around and then posed as if she were ready to whack DQ with it.
You think you could get rid of me that easy, did you?
Chyeah. I did.
Well, as you see-
Jenette ran toward DQ.
You can't!
She planted her scepter inches away from DQ. Light burst from the scepter and an earthquake erupted from it. Everybody except Jenette were knocked over. Jenette picked up her scepter, which now glowed. She aimed it at me and the others and we were suddenly unfrozen.
Jenette?
It's me.
Jen? I think you've done it.
Done what?
You've evolved into the next part of becoming an angel. You're at part 2.
How many parts are there?
Usually 3.
Cool.
We best be getting out of here...
Good idea.
So we went away, leaving DQ and the demon-dogs knocked out on the ground. Where we were going, I don't know. What just happened, I don't know either. But whatever it was, I'm sure it would all make sense in the end.















End of book seven!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby .Fish. » Mon Apr 01, 2013 1:53 pm

AWESOME ENTRY LOVE IT CAN'T WAIT TILL BOOK 8!!!!!!!
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Postby Nonexsitent » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:00 pm

Ooh, I really am looking forward to book 8. :D
Keep up the good work JF.
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Postby star star. » Mon Apr 01, 2013 2:11 pm

OHMEHGOSH!!!!!!!!

DARN YOU DQ!!





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Postby daz » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:43 pm

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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Draikinator » Mon Apr 01, 2013 5:50 pm

Wait, how is that a book? That's like a page and a half I think?
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