Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat May 26, 2012 8:11 am

Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Taking hearts out, that's very creepy...........
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby -Frost- » Sat May 26, 2012 8:50 am

Wait a minute, if they're back in time (which is "mom" the present mom or past mom?) shouldn't like the time space continural breaking or something?
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat May 26, 2012 9:10 am

Rebel Faery wrote:Yay! Rhubarb is back! Make him save Jenette!

lol
xxazul63xx wrote:Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Taking hearts out, that's very creepy...........

Yush, it is.
Brownbeak wrote:Wait a minute, if they're back in time (which is "mom" the present mom or past mom?) shouldn't like the time space continural breaking or something?

Yes, it would be. Which is why everything is all confusing now. But the questions will be answered by the end of book 10! :)

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We tried again and again to escape, but we all kept on growing exhausted. Just as we were about to reach the fire, there was a loud ringing noise. Suddenly, the trash stopped moving, we stopped moving, the fire disappeared, and we were all confused. And then there was a long loud shout from above.
AAAAMMMYYYY!!!!!!!!
AGAHGAHAGHAGAHGA!!!!!!!!!!
What was that?
I smiled.
I believe it is my friend.
Suddenly, there was a loud crash behind us, and we all turned around abruptly. And there she was.
Amy!
Jenette! You didn't think that I'd leave you here all alone, did you?
I smiled. But something was different with Amy. She seemed more.... heroic.... and brave.....
Hey.... WAIT A MINUTE! OMW where is Bob? WHERE IS HE?!
Right here.
Amy ran over to me and took Bob.
Hey.... YOU WROTE IN HIM?!
I thought you'd like to know what was happening!
HI! I'm back. You probably want to know what happened to me, right? Well, you see, I was about to- wait. Sorry. I'll have to tell you about what happened to me some other time. Right now something else is happening!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!
Aurauria was MAD!
Amy, what did you do?
I sorta pushed Aurauria into a giant piece of jello.
NICE!
Me and Jenette slapped high-fives.
Now..... how do we get out of here?
Follow me!
Why was I so brave? I don't know. Might have been because I was getting into this "Saving the world" thing.
Come on, everyone!
I ran to the very top of the trash pile, and everyone followed me.
Alright, turn here!
Jenette looked at me blankly.
Amy, I hate to burst your buble, but there's a wall.
Trust me! Just turn!
Jenette shrugged, but turned. She went straight through the wall.
Alright, keep on going everyone!
Everyone went through the wall (I went last), and we ran fast. Everyone sort of stopped when they realized what we were in. We were in a tomb.
Amy, how did we get here?
I found a map to this place, and found out that we could go through a few walls!
Okay..... why are we in a tomb?
That's the part I don't know.
We kept on running through the hallways of the tomb, when suddenly, we reached a dead end.
Huh? I didn't see this place on the map.
We were standing in front of a big wall.
Maybe we missed a turn. Let's turn around and go back.
So we all turned around..... but there was another dead end right in front of us. I did a 360 degree turn. We were surrounded by walls that had appeared out of nowhere! And that meant that-
We're trapped.
Just great.
What now, Amy?
Jenette looked at me expectantly, as if I had the answer to everything. And maybe I did. But not this.
Um... uh.... try to find a way out?
Ya. That worked.
Okay, get to work everyone!
We all searched around as much as we could, but there was no secret passage. Suddenly, we heard a snapping noise, and I looked up. A net dropped down on us, and the little puppies screamed. I tried to get out of the net, but I was too tangled in it. I looked around for Jenette, and saw her tangled as well.
Escape! Come on, does anyone have a knife? Something sharp? Anyone?
There was no answer.
Alright, try biting the rope!
And we did. The rope tasted awful, I'll tell you that. And none of us could break the rope. It was too thick. We suddenly heard a noise up above, and all looked up. And then we saw it. The ceiling of the tomb had somehow disappeared, and now we could see sky. And you know what we saw in the sky? A helicopter. The helicopter flew higher and higher, and the net we were in was raised higher and higher, until it wasn't touching the ground anymore. We were all still tangled in the net, though, so we were raised with it. The puppies screamd, and Jenette tried to break free of the rope even harder. But nothing worked. We were all caught in the rope. The rope was being raised higher, and we were soon high in the air. An all too familiar voice boomed down at us.
Remain silent!
Suzi. Oh great.
Suzi!
Why did Jenette sound happy? The rope was flown over a sea, and we could see everything. And then the helicopter stopped moving right above a dock. And then it dropped our net, and the net fell through the air (with us still in it) and it landed on the dock with a thud.
OWW!
There was moaning from all the dogs that had been in the net. We had had a rough fall. The helicopter landed shortly after we did, and out walked Suzi.
Hello.
Suzi, thank you!
Wha?
Oh, don't thank me.
Suzi smiled..... non-evilly..... it was totally out of character. But all that changed in a second. Dogs with guns surrounded us.
Because I didn't save you.
Jenette's face fell, and a look of actual pain were in her eyes.
Suzi?
Jenette, I thought you'd know better than anyone.
Suzi grabbed Jenette by the wrist and looked her in the eye.
Don't trust anyone.
She threw Jenette to the ground, and I Jenette grunted. And then out of the shadows appeared the one and only pie face. Rhubarb.
Come on, get moving!
Everyone stood up. They started walking.
Single file line!
What was going on? What was going to happen? Everyone got in one line straight line on the dock. I was the third person in line, and Jenette was the fourth.
Wait a few seconds!
A boat suddenly appeared right in front of us in the sea (it was in front of the dock). When it stopped moving, we looked up at it towering above us.
Alright, board!
And we did. Everyone of us in line boarded the big boat, and all of us fit on it (including his royal pieness [Rhubarb] and Suzi). When everyone was boarded and settled on the boat, Suzi stood on the top deck.
You are probably wondering why you are all here.
We were.
And you are probably all wondering where we're going.
We were.
Well, I'll tell you, since I'm nice like that.
We all waited expectantly. Suzi looked down on us, her evil smile returning.
We're going where I can make use of you all.
We waited again, fear gripping our hearts. Suzi looked at each and every one of us.
We're going to the arena.
There were gasps and slight moans. But I was confused. What was the arena?
Jenette? What's the arena?
I was whispering so that Suzi wouldn't hear me. Jenette was standing right next to me.
Only the worst place ever.
Why is she taking us there?
Probably because she wants us to be helpful to her.
How would we be helpful to her?
You really don't know about the arena, do you?
I shook my head. Jenette sighed, and looked into my eyes.
The arena is where dogs are put to the ultimate test. They are tested on their running skills, strength skills, mind skills, etc. etc.
That doesn't sound so bad.
Let me finish. After they are tested on their skills, they are sent to war.
I didn't like the sound of that.
War?
Jenette nodded solemly.
War. They are trained for the war.
What war?
The war that you're supposed to win.
Huh?
What war?
The war of the world.



















And that is the end of book 9! I hope you all liked it! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TPDebate » Sat May 26, 2012 11:18 am

AGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGA!!!!!!! Hey, I just did the Amy yell! :D Mom.Amy.Suzi.War.Pie.Tomb.Bob.Arena. AGAGAGAG! ITS ALL GETTING INTO MY HEAD!!!! Sorry, sleep deprived.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sat May 26, 2012 11:26 am

the world is in amy's paws! ....................................... yup........... we're all gonna die..............
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby -Frost- » Sat May 26, 2012 1:06 pm

Oh, I could keep on reading your stories forever XD You never know what's going to happen, randomness and awesomeness, loving it ^^
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Sat May 26, 2012 2:01 pm

Whoop! Awesome book!
And Suzi's (maybe?) good? Huh, she's weird....

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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Rebel Faery » Sun May 27, 2012 4:40 am

Yes! His royal pieness is awesome! And, the arena makes me think of The Hunger Games. Is that weird?

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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 27, 2012 9:44 am

whoa gal1 wrote:AGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGAGA!!!!!!! Hey, I just did the Amy yell! :D Mom.Amy.Suzi.War.Pie.Tomb.Bob.Arena. AGAGAGAG! ITS ALL GETTING INTO MY HEAD!!!! Sorry, sleep deprived.

lol
xxazul63xx wrote:the world is in amy's paws! ....................................... yup........... we're all gonna die..............

XD
Brownbeak wrote:Oh, I could keep on reading your stories forever XD You never know what's going to happen, randomness and awesomeness, loving it ^^

Aww, thanks! :)
Artemis's Arrow wrote:
Whoop! Awesome book!
And Suzi's (maybe?) good? Huh, she's weird....

YAYAYAY NEW BOOK!!!!!! XD

lol, yes, new book! :D
Rebel Faery wrote:Yes! His royal pieness is awesome! And, the arena makes me think of The Hunger Games. Is that weird?

[And yeah. We're all gonna die, xxazul63xx] (wow, that's hard to say)

Hmm.... I've never seen The Hunger Games..... that's sorta cool that it reminds you of it, though! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Running Out Of Time - Ninth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun May 27, 2012 9:56 am


"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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