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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Wed Dec 15, 2010 5:08 am

Mike Eral was a crazy old man that lived in the village Millstone in 1869.One dreary day a rabid fox bit him.He caught hydrophopia very fast(Rabies).He ran a round town with a knife cutting his own fingers off.He bleed to death.(also it was halloween day ,his birthday too)The townfolk didn't know what tto do.The held a funeral for him but no one came (except the preacher and grave keeper.

Now present day.The town of StoneMill has bloomed but it is still a little bit old fashiend.A family (the Mesolops) with only one child moved to Stonemill.The bought old man Eral house.people their forgott aabout Eral he was a stingy man).The care taker of the house warned them not to buy it."Strange things happen's" He said.The Mesolops payed no heed to his warning.After al it was the only one that was in there price range.A couple months went by.The boy Mike was 8 years old next mont he proudly told "I will be 9 on Halloween".A month went past finally it was Mikes birthday.His mother Mrs.Mesolops baked a wonderful Red Velvet cake.
When Mikes mother cut the cake she screamed.Inbeeded in the cake was Ten bloody fingers crawling with cockeroaches.The old CareTaker from the house shook his head sadly and wispered"They were warned".Back at the house Mrs.Mesolops fainted.Mr.Mesolops turned white and grabbed the cake and threw it out the window.That night when Mike went to bed He heard some one whispering sofly.He cold not understand what it said finally it got louder and louder.Mike pulled the covers over hs head he was so scared.He could now hear what the words are.Coming from a scartchy voice"You took my my Name,You took my Birthday,You took my House and you took my FINGERS!!!"Mike screamed and screamed and was silent.His mother and Father rann up the stairs to his room there stood a ghost.The ghost of Mike Eral.He grinned wickedly and pointed to the bloddy bed.'He also took my Death Day "

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby TheWhiteWolf » Wed Dec 15, 2010 7:30 am

Alright, here is a story called the bride.....

A young couple got married and, after the wedding, they held a reception in the bride’s grandmother’s house. All their family and friends arrived and they laughed, danced and sang, long into the night.

After the wedding reception, the guests decided to play a game of hide and seek. The groom covered his eyes and began counting to a hundred while his new bride and the other guests ran out of the room, looking for somewhere to hide.

Eventually, the groom had found everyone except his beautiful bride. The other guests began calling out her name and searched everywhere for the young woman. They began to grow more and more uneasy when they couldn’t find any trace of her.

Eventually they gave up searching and everybody assumed that the girl had run away and left her husband. As the weeks went by, the husband accepted that his beautiful bride must have had second thoughts about their marriage. He decided to forget about her and go on with his life.

A few years later, a cleaning lady was dusting in the attic when she came across an old trunk. Out of curiosity she opened it. Inside the trunk, she found the rotting corpse of a young woman, still dressed in a bridal gown. There was a wedding ring on one bony finger. It was the missing bride. She must have hidden in the trunk and accidentally locked herself inside. It was impossible to tell whether she had suffocated or starved to death, but her face was frozen in a silent scream.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:10 am

Oh wow.....that sucks. I'm never hiding in a box again
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby yankees324 » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:11 am

The bride one is freaky!! *shivers and hides under blanket*
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:51 am

I love it so creepy
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:27 pm

Hehe, boxes.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Snow_Crystal » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:01 pm

DragonFlight© wrote:I love it so creepy

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:15 pm

No more boxes for me. :|

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This is one I made up called The Werewolf's Secret.
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The little Italian village named Segreto on the island of Sicily. The villagers were almost oblivious to the other villages and towns, shunning their idea of inustrialization. Farming was the only way of life, the village preacher would say every Sunday, saying it was the natural way. No machines could take that away.
The villagers didn't want technology anyway even without the preacher's teachings. They were all happy with this acceptance. Until one day a strange woman by the name of Maria came to visit.

She was almost normal. But not quite. For one, her skin was not olive like the Italians but pale and it was only dotted with small freckles on her cheeks and over the bridge of her nose. Her face was surrounded by a veil of long black hair that sheilded one of her eyes. But it was not her weird walk or unusually hairy arms and legs that set an odd feeling into the villagers minds. It was her company.
Three wolf-like dogs followed Maria wherever she went. They were like cats that had been fed once and needed more. The villagers were clearly upset by the animals that resembled the killers of their livestock and destroyer of their crops but Maria was nice enough. She would never talk about where she came from but many suspected Northern Europe. Maria was also young. She could not be more then 18 and instantly every young farmer who was able to walk was following Maria at a safe distance.
But one farmer's son, Diego, decided he would be the one to ask for Maria's hand in marriage. He would be braver then the cowards who hid behind her. So on a cold Christmas Eve, the fiftieth day Maria had been in the village, Diego walked up to the inn she was staying in and walked in.
The inn was cold and drafty, even more so then outside. Diego walked in and as he did so pulled his coat tighter around him. He went up to the bar in the corner and sat down at a stool. "Which room can I find Maria in?" Diego asked, his voice calm and steady. The bartender looked up and glared hard at Diego. "We've been asked that a lot. All fromy ougn farmers who want some money. No one walks around in fancy clothes t\like that normally. People thinks she rich. but you look different. Room 14."
Diego thanked the man and went up the short staircase upstairs where the double-digit rooms were. He wlaked down the logn hallway and Diego seemed colder then he ever had in his life.
But he mastered his fears saying this was for love an finally found room 14 at the end. He took a deep breath and knocked on the door three times. Diego waited for a long time with no answer. He frowned knowing Maria had not left so she could be answering the door like a normal person. He knocked again and looked through the peephole as he did. The sight made him reel back in horror.
The room was a wreck and papers were all over the floor along with a shredded couch and several of Maria's ice dresses.
The curtains were on the floor and in a tangled mess under them lay Maria's body. Blood came from a gash in her throat and her legs were bleeding profusely. Hair had been ripped out of her head and her eyes were closed.
Then Diego saw the wolves Maria kept as pets. One was sitting near her, blood dripping from it's mouth like slobber from a hound dog. The other one was in a painful state, lying on the ground writhering back on forth on it's back, like a man being tortured.
The third was no where to be seen. We tried to peek further into the room but was stopped by a chilling feeling.

It made Diego's spine curl and he turned facing down the long hallway with a feelign someone was watching him. Someone was. A lone man with black eyes and a long coat stood in the center of the hallway, his hat down and covering is forehead. Diego tried to act calm but was scared. These wolves. They couldn't be. But the legends. So similiar . . .
In that time Diego thought the man lunged and his coat feel off revealing hairy arms and scratches. Diego was thrown to the ground as the man pounced on him in his true form. The werewolf.
Diego felt a terrible pain as his neck was snapped and he had onlyseconds to live before the blood drained out. He had no chance. Like Maria.Poor Maria. Betrayed by her pets. The werewolves.

Diego closed his eyes and could only process the werewolf's Italian words before heis eyes blacke dout.

"We are the Hounds of the Devil."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chara Dreemurr » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:18 pm

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby .:Angel:. » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:24 pm

:shock: all these stories are creepy :)
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