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by Megaguirus » Thu Jan 15, 2015 8:33 am
i'm a new member!
➹ The Mangle / Mangle / None / Yes please!
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Megaguirus gets distracted by a butterfly. So pretty.
"Go ahead reveal yourself,
As you were born to do,
Their fathers killed the prophets,
Hallelujah! They're going to kill us too."
Children 18:3 - FinalFemale/Christian/Homeschooled/INFP/FNaF/Godzilla/Writer/Bugs/Cockroaches/Markiplier"I'm wearing no disguise, a Jesus Freak 'til the day that I die. And I will not compromise, throw every stone but you can't take my life." 7eventh Time Down - Alive in You
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by -Missy- » Thu Jan 15, 2015 9:27 am
This is my intro to my story but im not sure if i like it..help!?!?!
I stare nervously at the square box in front of me. My whole family, like thousands more around the country, gather around the television waiting for our president's face to appear. The television switches on, Amazing Grace plays and we wait, anxiously.
''Hello all!'' Exclaims the President elected 3 years earlier. He beamed happily into the camera. It felt as if he was staring right into your soul, seeing your secrets, your fears.
''Our way of life is dying, being destroyed and corrupted, It started with the floods that wiped out a third of the world’s population then came the disease leaving just 2 billion. But our scientists belive they have found a way to reverse all of this. We are looking to crate the perfect race, we are starting with two, The Adam and Eve if you will…”
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by lukas_stop » Thu Jan 15, 2015 9:30 am
I have to do an assignment for a class, where you have to write 3 journal entries as someone on the Lewis and Clark expedition. I turned to my friend ( who is a writer as well ) and we just had the same look on our faces. I'm so excited to get some ideas to start writing!
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by avaria » Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:56 am
Hi everyone!
I'd like some help, if you guys don't mind.. I'm trying to write a story on this app (Episode Interactive) the plot doesn't need to be that detailed, I can fill everything in later, I just need it to be captivating.
Does anybody have any ideas? I have a bunch, but when I try to write them, they kinda just... melt away, haha.
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by qwill. » Thu Jan 15, 2015 1:51 pm
avaria wrote:Hi everyone!
I'd like some help, if you guys don't mind.. I'm trying to write a story on this app (Episode Interactive) the plot doesn't need to be that detailed, I can fill everything in later, I just need it to be captivating.
Does anybody have any ideas? I have a bunch, but when I try to write them, they kinda just... melt away, haha.
I tried doing that once, after getting obsessed with the app for like a week. You must be more patient than I, because it took me like four hours to complete just the first episode. What I found with that app is that it doesn't really lend itself well to fantasy, so I would go with something more realistic, or just mild, mild fantasy that takes place in the real world.
just a few thoughts, and hope this helps!
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by WilloweWolf » Fri Jan 16, 2015 4:26 am
Hey, guys. I was wondering if you could help me come up with a name for this group in my story Climb that Wall. Here's a brief description, straight from chapter two.
Climb that Wall! wrote:"It’s basically the kingdom’s secret police. I set it up to keep an eye out for things such as this cult. Our job is to track it down and annihilate it as quickly as possible. There are branches all over the kingdom, mainly in the small, backwater villages and in the big cities. This is the entrance to the main headquarters.”
“Small villages and big cities? What do they have to do with each other?”
“Both are good places for a rebel group to hide. They’re also good places for the ‘secret police’ to hide.”
“We’re a rather large group, spanning most of the kingdom. Most of us are mages, seers, or spies.”
“Most of our spies were once accomplished assassins.”
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by Casifer » Fri Jan 16, 2015 4:45 am
lol I found a rap I wrote:
im so stressed I'm a mess
But I'm so blessed
I could have so much less
So why am I so depressed
Need to address my success
Must profess that unless I reassess my life I'll never impress
Can't suppress need to confess
Oh- can't let go
Oh- won't say no
Fight not flight that's my motto
Flash to the past it's gone by so fast
Now the worlds spinnin and I'm not winnin
I'm barely skimmin by
Need to slow down before I go down
Bout to trip, might slip
Beg you to stand by
Ahaha thought it was funny
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