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Did You Like This Story?

Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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18%
OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
57
15%
Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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54%
Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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12%
 
Total votes : 375

Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 5:43 am

Littlecatzee wrote:Can't wait for more story. ;D Reading here inspires me to write more of my own story! Even though my story and this story are so different.

They're both good (: Though Sarah is very creepy...
It's okay Owl :thumbup:
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:22 am

I must know more! Sooooooo much suspence!
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:24 am

(I'll have to write more later. Sis wants to go on.)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:31 am

Aaaaaaw. =[
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:32 am

Okay. :)

*Waits for more story*
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Nerosky » Wed Jul 20, 2011 7:37 am

i love this story
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♥♠♦♣ Bullying? Think you're SO cool? That girl you just called fat? She is overdosing on diet pills. That girl you just called ugly? She spends hours at home putting makeup on hoping people would like her. That guy you just made fun of for crying? His mother is in the hospital with cancer,dying.Put this in your signature if you're against bullying.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Shin Kuroi » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:00 am

lol im weird like tht :)
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:01 am

MxRxSxMxMxR wrote:lol im weird like tht :)

Well don't do it again.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Shin Kuroi » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:04 am

dont worry I wont, just was bored waiting
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Jul 20, 2011 8:57 am

Thanks for all the compliments, guys! I really am truly thankful and so happy!








Jenette smiled evilly and grabbed Suzi's arm. She heald Suzi over a big shredder thing.
LET GO OF HER!
I will NEVER let go of her! She's the reason that you are in a trouble!!!!
What?
I was astonished. What did Jenette mean?
Don't you understand?! Suzi is EVIL! She's the reason that your sister died!
Don't listen to her!
Of course I won't listen to Jenette! She's been evil to me forever! NOW LET SUZI GO, JENETTE!
NEVER!
So I threw a rock at Jenette and she let go of Suzi. Luckily, I grabbed Suzi just in time. If I hadn't brabbed her in time she would have been shredded.
Thank you!
No problem! That's what friends are for!
Yes......
As soon as Suzi said those words, she grabbed me and heald me over the shredder.
What are you doing?!
Jenette is right..... I killed your sister. And now I want to kill you too!
WHAT?! BUT I THOUGHT YOU WHERE MY FRIEND!
I was never your friend! I tied myself up in my house to lure you! I knew Jenette would come, and she would take us here! That's right, Jenette! I read your diary and knew what you where planning! I found your house number, Amy, and at night I killed your sister! I knew that she was just a child and so she wouldn't be able to fight back. I also knew that she kept her window opened at night because she got too hot. So that was the perfect chance! So I killed her, and then I ran away. Then I was going to kill you, but you caught me! So I ran away! But then I knew that you'd believe me if I was your friend! So I became your 'friend' and bretended to like you! To be your best best friend!
But....... but............
Suzi laughed.
You're pathetic!
Let Amy go!
Fine, as you wish!
Suzi dropped me over the blades, but right before I was going to hit the shredder and was baout to be shredded into pieces, the shredder shut down. I landed on the shredder, unharmed. Jenette had shut down it. She had saved my life!
HEY! JENETTE YOU STAY OUT OF THIS!
Or what?
Suzi said nothing.
Why where you so mean to me all these years, Jenette?
To keep you safe. I knew that Suzi was evil, all along. She had been killing people alot, and Delilah, Twila, Suger and I tried to stop her. But she kept on escaping. So we where all mean and rude to everybody, as our desguise. We needed to protect everybody in the school, but when I saw Suzi I knew that she was trying to befriend you and then kill you! So I took action and made her embarassed. I stole her diapers, and then she was offended. So that was when I tried to catch you after school, but you where already heading to Suzi's house. I followed you, and then I tied you guys up to keep in character. I planned to throw you in the trashcans overnight, and then rescue you, Amy, and then I'd leave Suzi behind. But I was too late and the trash truck had already gotten you, so I ran to you and now we're here.
So..... all those times you embarrased me you where protection me?
Exactly! And I'm sorry I embarassed you so much, it was only for your protection.
How come you protect me more then the other kids at school?
Jenette took a deep breath and then spoke.
Because I'm your sister.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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