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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 7:33 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Today (I'm skipping past all those boring lessons) we went outside for lunch. Music looked like she couldn't wait to start explaining.

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Music: So everyone! Me and Bloom discovered something over the weekend.
Cassie: What?
Teina: Yeah, what?
Music: Well.. we all have magic powers!
Everyone: :shock: Seriously?
Music: Okay then, I'll show you! *raises paw to the sky*
*lightning bolt shoots up into the sky*
*nearby random dogs look terrified and runs away*
Everyone: :shock:
Bloom: I can do something too!
*walks casually over to the BIG MAC, who didn't notice the lightning bolt, and touches her on the shoulder*
BIG MAC: EEEEEEEK! THERE'S A FLOWER ON MY SHOULDER! HELP ME!

So they both have powers.... I didn't know I wasn't the only one. Quite surprising.

Everyone: :shock:
Music and Bloom: See?
Cassie: You know, you're right! The other day I was going to get the sprinkler. I couldn't be bothered to get it, so I just randomly started spinning.
Everyone: Seriously?
Me: I mean, who does that when they're not bothered to get the sprinkler?
Cassie: Yeah, and water started shooting out of my paw.
X-ey: I think I have the same power as Bloom.
Teina: I can suck out people's happy dreams!

Oooh! Creepy, but cool! I wanna see how does the BIG MAC react... And she still hasn't ran away yet, like everyone else.

Me: :twisted: Try it on MacKenzie!

Teina walked over to the BIG MAC (who still had her back turned) and held up her syringe. I didn't notice that before. And anyways, she stabbed the needle thing into the BIG MAC's fur.... And pulled back the pusher thing on the top.... And the BIG MAC started screaming.

BIG MAC: AAAAAH! Shadows! DON'T RUIN MY FUR! HELLLP ME!!!!
Everyone: :shock:
Teina: ;)

Well then... Everyone's spoken up, so it's my turn!
Me: I think I have a power too...
Music: Whaaat is it?
Me: ;) This!

I swept my paw through the air. I felt the air churning around me as a gust of wind blew Music back.

Me: :oops: Oops... Sorry....
Bloom: *catches Music*
Music: Thanks!
Bloom: No problem.

At least she didn't smash into the ground or something. Who knows, maybe I could have sent a gust of wind to stop her from falling. Oh well. So anyways, the bell rang and we went back into the school. I could be enjoying myself here now...

So anyways, right now it's Catnese class, last period. I'm bored... I've done my worksheet, but I think I've got eight questions wrong out of ten. Whatever. So the BIG MAC's in this class... Maybe I can get my fake spider to her desk or something. Hmm.... I know! My powers! Hmm.... Let me try.

I kinda succeeded... So it was like this.

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I put the fake spider on my lap... And flicked my paw at the BIG MAC. The spider went flying... and hit the teacher on the back of her head.

Teacher: AHHH! SPIDER! Oh, its fake. So... who did that? Mackenzie, you're trying to hide your smile... Detention after school! Meet me after this class!
BIG MAC: But... but....
Teacher: NO BUTS!
BIG MAC: *glares at me*
Me: ;)
BIG MAC: But I didn't do it! She did it! *points at me*
Teacher: Don't try blaming it on anyone else! *turns back to board*
BIG MAC: :evil:
Me: ;)

So the BIG MAC's gonna be in detention. But my fake spider.... The teacher's going to put it in the cupboard or something. *sigh* Whatever. I'll get a new one. I'm going to write in you later, my feathered friend.

So I'm home now! So anyways, I'm in my room now.... Tigren? Get out of my room. No, I'm not writing in a diary. Cassie wants me to do something? Whatever. Don't touch my... book.

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Should I use this orange? Nah, this dark blue's good. This yellow? Too bright. Whatever. I'll use blue - This orange's better, actually. Anyways, I'm Tigren Swiftrunner. My kinda annoying sister Skyler (though she's not as spoilt and as annoying as Nicole) has gone down to eat the pizza Cassie's made for us. Nicole got the biggest piece, Cassie got the second, I was third and Skyler was fourth. So yeah, Skyler gets the smallest piece and the crumbs. Whatever. So, this is a diary, isn't it? She's called it a Hawk? Weird. So I'm going to kinda write in her diary with this warm orange. *flips through pages* Why is there pink pen? Oh, Nicole, really? So anyways, I'm Tigren Swiftrunner, and I enjoy potion making and stuff. And of course, I'm pretty much the smartest in the family and yeah, the potions I make are pretty cool. Should I pour a pink paper-dying potion on her diary? Probably not. Even with my scythe, I guess she could overcome me... Because she has the advantage of wings. I've always wanted wings. I'm trying to make a potion that gives a dog wings. It's so unfair of how the younger sibling gets the good stuff. All I've got is a harmless, scorpion tail, though it does give a good scratch with the tip. No poison, though. She must have finished the pizza by now.... It's so tiny, I'm surprised she isn't banging on the locker door already. Oh, never mind. She's screaming something about Nicole and now me, and to let her back in her room. Whatever. I'd just put this diary down.

- Tigren Swiftrunner


Gah! Why is everyone and their grandmother writing in my Hawk? And HE DARES TO POUR A PINK PAPER-DYING POTION IN MY HAWK?! And this is not a diary! This is a Hawk, okay? Why my orange pen? My days are seeming to get worse and worse. Grrr.... I only got a slice of ham and pineapple pizza. Except all the pineapple and ham's been eaten by Nicole. And all I got was a small piece of pizza, and some crumbs of ham and pineapple. That's just so unfair. Today's such a bad day.... School's better than home. You know what? I think Jewel and her friends probably sent another video. After that I'm checking Kolli's PawTube.

From Lilly

I want to tell you that I think Jewel has a crush! Click the video to find out more!


Okay.... That's just short. Whatever.

*click*


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Lilly: This is Lilly here, and hi Skyler! I've filmed the sorting because Jewel's already mooning over the new kid -
Jewel (background): I'm not mooning over him!
Lilly: Never mind her. So yeah, here's the sorting.

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Snowy: Oooh! Perfect jock. *winks* I'm Snowy, the most beautiful and popular girl around here. Name and interests?
???: Erm... Well, I'm Tobias.... And I like sports, I guess... And this is my cardinal, Storm.
Storm: Chirp!
Snowy: Your bird is so cute! You're going to jocks -
Tobias: Are you a Popular, like her? *nods to Sunny*
Snowy: Of course! Since I'm such a beautiful, popular girl, would you like to go to the dance -
Tobias: So, you're a Popular too? What are the groups?
Snowy: Well, of course there are the best Populars and the cute jocks, who so go together well. Then there's the nerds, who are okay and kind of smart, then the creepy emos, and of course the Outcasts, who are my hated enemies. The Outcasts are over there *points at Jewel* so you must always be careful of them -
Tobias: Okay.... I'm going over there. *points at Jewel*
Snowy: But... But... YOU REJECTED MY OFFER? OUTCASTS!
Tobias: *walks towards Jewel*
*camera turns to Jewel and Tobias*
Jewel: Erm... Hello.... This is where the Outcasts stay....
Tobias: Erm... Hello. What's your name?
Jewel: I'm Jewel...
Tobias: You've.... You've got a nice name.
Jewel: Thanks, Tobias.
Tobias: What is the dance the white furred dog's talking about?
Jewel: It's the Christmas dance.... Though she's moved it to another date because she's finding her own crush.
Tobias: Oh.... Well, then... Would.... you like.... to go to the dance with me?
Jewel: Ye... Yes!
Tobias: Then it's settled, then. See you there!
*screen turns back to Lilly*
Lilly: Now will she admit she's mooning over him? ;) So Skyler, so this is the new guy, and Kolli reminds you to watch her PawTube videos. Bye!


So... Jewel has a crush. He's okay, I guess... I'm going to watch PawTube now. See you later, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Toy Dragon » Mon Apr 06, 2015 7:47 pm

Awesome entry!! ^.^
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 8:02 pm

Da Writing Dragon wrote:Awesome entry!! ^.^


Thanks! Do you like the pet (Tobias) for Jewel's crush? I hope he's what you're kinda expecting.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 8:15 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Today, I'm getting kinda worried. Music's fur looks like its becoming.... rainbow? Anyways, we saw the BIG MAC at lunchtime. She got up from her seat and was going towards the bathroom, so me, Music and the rest followed her. Here are the pictures if you forgot -

Music

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Teina

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X-ey

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Bloom

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Cassie

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We found out that every day, the BIG MAC goes and holds up her paw at the camera and suddenly, a wave of darkness clogs it up. However the camera doesn't catch this because she's standing right under it. So we went in at least one second after her and we spotted her sliding down a glowing red passage, then the camera unclogged and everything was normal like right after the passage just... disappears. So after like a couple of seconds, and we were about to go, a blue tunnel opened up right next to it. We stared at it for a couple of seconds before silently agreeing. So we stepped in and kinda slipped down the tunnel. Down, and down, and down... Then we floated up and up... but instead of the bathroom ceiling, we were floating in the sky. I wasn't a bit afraid since I always felt like this when I flew... except my wings were still folded against my back. Still, I wasn't afraid. Not at all.

Cassie: Help meeeeee!!!
Me: Don't worry! It's fine! Look! *points up to the sky*

So I noticed it first. There was a huge globe just floating there. There were creatures flying all over the place - dogs, wolves, cats, rats and many more. It was very colourful, with bits of white fur here and a dab of blue there.... So anyways, when we finally came up, a robot greeted us. I thought these things only existed in movies.

Robot: Welcome to the Heaven Clan!
Music: Wait - what?
Robot (can robots gasp?): *gasp* You are the chosen ones! I have to take you to Angel!
Teina: Wait - whaaaaat?

Does the robot mean the angel or the name Angel? Robots are really confusing sometimes. Probably because I've never met one until today. So anyways, the robot dragged us away. It flew - yeah, flew - up to a palace of white pearl at the top of the supposed 'city'.

Robot: *puts us down (finally!)* They have arrived, Angel.
Angel?: Ahh, yes. The chosen ones.

Her voice... it's like a lullaby... I wanted to sleep. Her voice was like the wind chimes, singing a gentle lullaby... So soothing, like the breeze in my fur as I fly. Anyways, and here's a picture of her.

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Angel: Now, let me explain, in Australipaw, there are states. In each state are specific clans. We are the Heaven Clan. I am the leader, as you should have guessed.

O-kay, like none of us guessed. The sound of her voice... Very soothing. Relaxing....

Angel: There is also the Hell Clan. Their leader is Bitewing... My younger sister.

Ouch. The leader of your enemies is your sibling. I can feel what she feels if Tigren goes off and joins Snowy's fanclub. But this is much more serious.

Angel: *opens holographic computer* Here is what she looks like.

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Angel: The Hell Clan are our sworn enemies. They are planning a war against us. So we must prepare. We will train your powers until you are able to transform into your other animal self. You will be able to turn into any other animal that your power relates to. However, it will not be a wolf. So now I have explained, I will arrange a time for you to come tomorrow. Goodbye.

With a wave of her cream-coloured paw, a wave of soothing light shot out and we were warped back to the toilets. Weird...

Anyways, I'm at home now. I'm still thinking about Angel and Bitewing and the Clans... In fact, I remember something from the night I found out I had powers. I remembered a shadowy wolf... I think. He said something about Hell Clan... But I can't remember anything else. I'm supposed to be doing homework.... I'm going to write in you tomorrow.

Good morning, Hawk! I'm using the same page to save paper and stuff, but yeah, I can't find Music at school. I can only see a new girl around here acting like Music... and hanging out with us. I'm going to ask where's she. Maybe Bloom knows it. There's a picture of the new girl down there.

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I'm back! So yeah, the 'new' girl's actually Music. And she's 'grown her wings'. Weird. But she looks cool, and her pet Vixen's pretty cool too. But Music has to go to a place called Wolfia due to her sick grandparents.... I'm going to miss having her around. I feel like one of my friends at Furford. I'm kinda sad... But we're going to send a message to her when she leaves... Guess it's time for classes now. I have to go, or I'll have detention! Bye, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 8:23 pm

Sorry for the short entry. My mind's kinda blank...
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Toy Dragon » Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:56 pm

Nah..it was awesome! Also Tobias is perfect! Thank you for um...providing him... ^.^ (/^.^)/
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby BrandNewMelody » Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:45 am

Still in love with this...lots of fun and action ;)
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby pinkgeneguy » Tue Apr 07, 2015 9:31 am

This is like Da Writing Dragons, which i love as well! Cant wait to read more!








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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:32 pm

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Dear Hawk,

Music's already left for Wolfia. Cassie's suggested we send a video of the sorting, so one of the guys went and got permission from Principal Dustpaw for us to film.

Me: Cassie - you ready?
Cassie: Yeah!
*click*
Cassie: Hi, Music or Bloom. This is just the sorting, so just watch!
*screen turns to the BIG MAC and the new kid and her pet goat*

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???: Hi, I'm Pepper -
BIG MAC: Just get to Exiles. And maybe I can have the goat!
Goat: Baaaa! *bites at her wings*
BIG MAC: Ahhhhh!
Pepper: Oh yeah, also there's a tarantula on your back! *sticks out tongue and runs off with her goat*
BIG MAC: Eeeeeek!

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???: Spirits of the dead... Speak to me.....
BIG MAC: SPEAK UP! I CAN'T HEAR YOU!
???: I'm Faith.... Spirits of the dead... Arise....
BIG MAC: Ahhhh! *faints*
Cassie: Angel told us she was the undead Clan leader!

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???: Hi, I'm Shyly! My name is like, opposite to me! I really, really, rea -
BIG MAC: Just cut to the chase! What is your power?
Shyly: I can make illusions real! Like - Oh! There's a spider on your back!
BIG MAC: E-e-exiles.... *faints*

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???: Boy, we got a beaut' right here!
BIG MAC: Oooh! *girly giggle* Perfect jock!
???: Now, lassie, my name's Ace. What group are you gonna put me in? *winks*
BIG MAC: Jock!
Me: I wonder how will Music react to this...

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BIG MAC: That hat is, like, sooooo last century!
???: Let's put some ice on the burn! At least my mouth isn't as big as yours! *sticks out tongue*
BIG MAC: What did you just say?! GET TO EMOS AND BE THE LEADER! YOU WILL PAY FOR WHAT YOU DID! SINCE YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE THERE, YOU WILL BE SOOOO LONELY, LOSER!
???: Oh, and my name's Sanya. *walks away*
Everyone: :shock:

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Me: What in the Hawk - Connie?
BIG MAC: Oh... Since you're going to be more popular than me... Exiles!

*turns screen back to us*

Cassie: So that was everyone! See you when you get home!
Shyly: I'm Shyly! I can see you there, behind the screen! You there I al -
Me: Shyly! *slaps paw over her mouth*
Cassie: Bye! We miss you!
*click*

I wonder if Music or Bloom will get it.... And how they would react. Whatever. The BIG MAC's as mean as always. And I wonder if Music will come back in time for her homework... And training with Angel. See you after school, Hawk.

So yeah, I'm home now. I've got a couple of messages on my IPaw....

From Kolli

You're going to Barktree? You know that my little sis Connie's going there too? Say hi for me - and tell her I've got 8000 subscribers already! I'm way ahead of her on PawTube :D

From Fang

When are you going to come back? Oh yeah, found something really funny in Riptide's room. Check out the video :lol:


Okay, everything's really confusing.... Kolli's little sister is Connie, who attends Barktree High with me for now... And there's something funny in Riptide's room? I thought he loved to act cool and stuff. Whatever.

*click*


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Fang: Hi Skyler! I'm going and sneaking into Riptide's room.... He's been staying there all day after school. *sneaks towards door holding IPaw*

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Riptide (inside room): Why? Why did it have to be today? WHY?!
Fang: *opens door a crack*
Riptide: *staring at plushie* Why TODAY?!
Fang: *bursts into laughter* :lol:
Riptide: What - *turns around* FANG!!!!
Fang: Oh no... *dashes out*
Riptide: FANG!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!!
Fang: *runs outside screaming* AHHHHHH! RIPTIDE'S CHASING ME BECAUSE I SAW HIM IN HIS ROOM!!!!
Riptide: COME BACK, YOU PESKY LITTLE DOG!!!!
Random jocks: ??? :what:


So yeah, the whole video was bumping up and down as Riptide chased Fang up the stairs, into the 1st floor classroom, out the window and into the swimming pool... The camera was probably waterproof. So the chase ended when Fang burst into his dorm and locked the door holding the camera and breathing heavily.

Fang: *pant* So... Riptide has.... *pant* A girly dog plushie... *pants once more and slips into his bed* So.... tired..... *hits send button then falls asleep*


Ooookay. Weird. So... I guess I have to eat dinner now. See you, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby Toy Dragon » Tue Apr 07, 2015 5:37 pm

Nice entry! Awesome as usual... ^.^
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