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Owlwings Agony

Postby The NightFury » Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:34 am

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Owlpaw ran through the forest, Jackalpaw was right behind her. She turned and saw a slightly larger tabby tom landing on her "Get off me!" She hissed playfully, Jackalpaw and Owlpaw rolled around until Jackalpaw was on Owlpaw. "Gotcha!" He licked her nose and purred, Owlpaw wiggled free "Stop. We could get caught!" She purred nudging the tom with her paw. Jackalpaw smiled "Dont worry, Tumblefur and Hawksight havent been looking for us." Harksight was Jackalpaws mentor and Tumblefur was Owlpaws mentor. Owlpaw shook her head "We should be training!" She backed away. "We just did! Owlpaw, If we become warriors soon we could be together!" Jackalpaw looked towards the camp "Come on. Lets hunt and get back, Its getting late." He shoved Owlwing and ran off, Owlwing shook her head purring and ran after him.


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Owlpaw sat next to Jackalpaw, her tail quivered with excitement. It had been a moon since the short escape. Soon Owlpaw saw Ivystar jump onto a high branch, a bare branch attached to a oak in the middle of camp, and called out "Owlpaw, step forward!" Owlpaw obeyed "I, Ivystar, leader of Oakclan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. She has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend her to you as a warrior in her turn."
"Owlpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Owlpaw, from this moment you will be known as Owltalon. StarClan honors your battle moves and keen senses, and we welcome you as a full warrior of OakClan."

Owltalon stood up tall and bowed her head, Tumblefur himself looked like he became leader. Jackalpaw looked the same, he let out a purr then looked at Ivystar.
"I, Ivystar, leader of Oakclan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on this apprentice. He has trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend him to you as a warrior in her turn."
"Jackalpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend your Clan, even at the cost of your life?"
"I do."
"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name. Jackalpaw, from this moment you will be known as Jackalheart. StarClan honors your kind heart and clever moves, and we welcome you as a full warrior of OakClan."
Jackalheart did the same, Hawksight seemed to look as if he saw a swarm of maggots. Owltalon and Jackalheart got dismissed and sat vigil.



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It had been four moons since their ceremony, Owltalon and Jackleheart ran through the forest. Goose Chasing. Owltalon jumped, her talon like claws digging into the large bird. Jackleheart jumped over Owltalon pulling down the gooses head, Owltalon jumped off before being flattened as the goose rolled over, Jackleheart had killed it. "Finally! Thank Starclan!" He growled in joy. Owltalon purred and licked his ear "Now our clan can have a feast!" she grabbed the goose and so did Jackleheart. They dragged it into camp as the kits and apprentices filled them with questions, Jackleheart growled playfully and all the kits squeakily ran around. Soon Ivystar appeared from her den, her eyes widdend. She hissed and unsheathed her claws, Owltalon and Jackalheart put down the goose in confusion "Wha-" a huge claw swipped down and tossed Jackalheart into the oak, a badger. "No!" Owltalon ran over to Jackalheart as warriors attack the badger. "Owltalon..." he rasped "D-d-dont worry-y" He let out a ragged purr. "I cant help you! Where is Dewwhisker!" Owltalon yowled looking, she soon saw the small she cat racing towards them "Oh no!" Dewwhisker put her paw slightly on Jackalhearts stomach and he coughed up blood. The small she cat yanked her paw away "I cant save h-" Jackalheart fell still and the badger dead. Dewwhisker ran off as Owltalon sobbed in Jacklehearts fur. Thunder boomed over head and lightning struck the oak, Owltalon dragged Jackalheart away from the tree into the forest, but she had no choice but to leave him. She licked his earand whispered "I will always love you, an i will learn to save." She ran. The thoughts of death stung her and felt like talons clawing into her.

Tнe Cнαɴɢe

Owltalon changed her name to Owlwing. She walked silently for three moons, she was skinny and dirty. She was in agony, She had a dream to keep following the shadows so she did. Owlwing soon found a new scent and walked further into it, she ran into a couple of cats but she wasnt willing to fight. They took her in and she did what she needed to do, learned how to save a life.
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby #Spirit » Sat Jun 07, 2014 11:38 am

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Tawnypaw's Encounter

Postby #Spirit » Sat Jun 07, 2014 2:45 pm

Tawnypaw's encounter with death and Ivy's first appearance to NightClan




Spiritpaw growled and circled Blackpelt, snapping at his neck, he narrowly craned back just in time to avoid it. The deputy began to drive the apprentice towards the lake and Spiritpaw felt water fall over her paws, Blackpelt swiped at her nose and she hissed, leaping at him with full force as he then splashed water into her eye. Spiritpaw then struck again, her and the older cat tumbled over each other and Blackpelt took the opportunity to plunge her underwater, pulling Spiritpaw up to breath and as she did she gasped for air but then sunk back down under his weight. She then growled and took control, grabbing hold of Blackpelt's head she sunk his head under water as grasped him by the scruff, smirking she heard, "well done," it came out in a raspy purr

Spiritpaw dipped her head, "couldn't have done it without ya, Blackpelt!" She flicked her tail and let herself breath. The young cat pulled herself to the shore and flopped over on her back, "now let me rest, my eyes are full of water!" She mewed and soaked herself in the sun, in the corner of her eye she could see Blackpelt's nod as he, too, rested in the bright rays of the sun

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The training duo had been padding ever so calmly, two fish in Blackpelt's jaws and one in Spiritpaw's, back to NightClan's camp to meet with Thornstar. Just then, Blackpelt's ears perked as he heard a familiar yowl, and Spiritpaw did as well just after, "what was that?" The she-cat whispered and looked around. Blackpelt gasped, "Tawnypaw!!" He screeched and frantically looked around before darting off, his apprentice dragging after, Tawnypaw had been well known as Blackpelt's younger sister, far younger but still his sister. They gasped out as they saw a white cat with black spots and narrowed green eyes attack Tawnypaw, a kittypet, obviously, anyone could tell by her collar. It saw the two and ran away, Blackpelt and Spiritpaw ran directly for Tawnypaw, Spiritpaw pressed her muzzle against the limp apprentice's fur and wailed for her friend. Blackpelt hushed her worriedly, "she's not dead!" He quickly picked Tawnypaw up and started right for camp.

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{~The Agony That Was My Life~}

Postby C a s » Sat Jun 07, 2014 3:30 pm

The Agony That Was My Life

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Brightkit hissed angrily as his father raked his claws along the small kit's back. "That's what you get for failing!" Clawtooth spat. Brightkit nodded sadly and tried the move again, again failing. Claws struck his back again.
Everyday, Clawtooth took his son out to train. He was the favorite of the litter, and Clawtooth wanted him for his cause. He roughly trained and worked him, injured him to teach lessons. At first, the idea of special training excited young Brightkit. He wanted to be the best of the best-but he wasn't prepared for such pain.
On this particular day, Flashheart decided to see what he did to their son everyday. She followed them, and now burst from the undergrowth with a hiss. "Don't lay another claw on him!" She spat angrily. "I'm making him strong and ready for the attack!" Clawtooth's growling response came. Flashheart leapt, and Clawtooth struck his claws across her throat. Flashheart fell to the ground. A gurgling sound came from her mouth, as well as blood. Then she lays still.
"You killed her!" Brightkit gasped. Clawtooth does the same to the small kit, and Brightkit blacked out.

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Days later, Brightkit awakes in the Medicine den. "Mother?" He murmurs groggily. Cats around him whisper, and he picks up little bits of the conversation.
"Yes...all three of the others were murdered...yes, Clawtooth's work...as well as was Flashheart...you think he'll come finish the work?...yes...I thi..." He blacked out again.


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"Your mentor will be Dewyleaf. I hope Dewyleaf will pass on all she knows to you."
The tortoiseshell padded forward. In moments, she touches noses with newly names Brightpaw, and Thornstar finished the ceremony.
It had been three moons since Clawtooth had killed Flashheart, his three kits, and almost Brightkit. In his time of sorrow, Russetpaw had comforted him the most. He was unaware of his developing feelings for her. Instead, they were the closest of friends, and he couldn't wait to train with her.

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Brightpaw was now eleven moons old. He knew he was in love with Shinepaw, a gray and ginger she-cat that was as sweet as her name. He and her promised eachother they'd be mates.
"Catch me if you can!" Shinepaw mewed as she ran through the forest. Laughing, Brightpaw gave chase. She whirled around and pounced at him, and Brightpaw let her pin him. She gave his cheek a gentle lick. "I love you." "I love you too," he purred, looking into her eyes.
A ferocious growl came from the undergrowth, and they stood up, too see two
foxes stomping out. "Run!" Brightpaw hissed. He quickly nudged her towards the trees.
Shinepaw was frozen in fear. The foxes lunged forward, and snapped at them. As the darker one jumped at Brightpaw, Shinepaw jumped and took the blow. The fox snapped its jaws around her neck, and she was dead with no suffering. Brightpaw let out a sorrowful yowl and jumped at the tree, pulling himself up.

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There was no burial. There was nothing left to bury when they found him in the tree. That night they sat vigil. Brightpaw spent the night weeping for his love.

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"Then by the powers of StarClan, I give you your warrior name, Bright-"
"Wait." Brightpaw stopped Thornstar. "I want to be named Brightshine, in honor of Shinepaw." Thornstar narrowed her eyes. "Fine, then,I give you the warrior name Brightshine, on memory of Shinepaw. Your courage and devotion is honored." Russetwing's eyes slashed with hurt, but only for one moment.

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All of these memories went through Brightshine's head as he lay at Russetstar's claws. Along with more familiar memories of Russetwing and their kits that were not really his. "I'll save you," he whispered softly. Then the world was black.
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Re: Glace And The Tom

Postby ShadowOfTheBird » Sat Jun 07, 2014 4:05 pm

Glace And The Tom


Astral, he is very protective of Glace, but why? There was a tom, the only one other than Ashstone, who liked Glace.


It was dusk, I was watching Glace from a tree. He came back, that Thornfreeze. I never trusted him, whenever I spoke to him without my sister, he just seemed different. "Hello Glace." I heard him purr, and in response was her "hi Thornfreeze." I hissed silently in response. He asked her to go on a walk, she said yes and they stood. "Let's hurry." he said to her, she nodded and the two took off. I followed them until he lead her near a thunderpath as he called it.

All seemed fine until I saw him grin slightly, that was it. I leapt down, claws unsheathed as I saw him start to leap forward. I heard Glace hiss at me but ignored it. I swiped at him, hitting his muzzle. He latched onto my shoulder, trying to shake me. I swung my left paw up and bit back, this time into the windpipe. He shook me off before I could finish him, but he then sprung forward at Glace instead.

I jumped in front of him "YOU SHALL NOT HURT HER, FOR IT WILL COST YOUR LIFE!" I hissed and leapt forward at him, having already shaken his claws from me. I pinned him down and latched my teeth onto his neck, eventually I felt him go limp. I stood and hissed once again.

Glace then hissed quietly before tearing up. She ran off before I could track her. Luckily she came back, but I still don't know where she went off to.
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Blood of the Evil Lies Within. ||-Crookedheart's Life-||-WIP

Postby pinkdepths » Mon Jun 09, 2014 5:49 am

Crookedheart Was a only kit, well at first.
Born form her mother Applegoose,
Followed by her dark forest father Longclaw.
He was evil.
She shared his pelt
Which led cats to thinking she herself was evil.
She stayed away from other cats,
The word often said to her was evil its-self.
She was treated like her father treated them.
A hard life is what she had.
Born in the forest, her mom killed by her father,
He tried to kill her as well…
Nightclan killed her father.
The rest is up to you to discover.
But remember,
Blood runs thicker than wood.
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The Story of Dustwhisker and Mudpelt

Postby areadbhar » Mon Jun 09, 2014 6:16 am

Kithood:

Thunder and Twig took care of their newborn kits. "What should we call them?" Twig said. "Let's call this one Dust." Thunder said, pointing at the light brown one. "And this one Mud. What about the last one?" Twig said, pointing at the dark brown one. "I can't think of one, how about..." Thunder said. "Twig Jr!" Both cats said at the same time.


Growing Up and Discovering the Hard Life:

"Prey is scarce. We can't feed the kits." Thunder said. "I know a place we can leave them." Twig said. They took the kits to the dumpster, and left them. Meanwhile, the kits huddled under the dumpster in the rain.


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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby Henry is Bae » Mon Jun 09, 2014 6:21 am

Nice lillystorm
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Re: NightClan's Untold Stories

Postby pinkdepths » Mon Jun 09, 2014 6:30 am

Thanks. I'm working on it. (: Changed my username ahahhahahaha. And siggy >;D
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