Rockfire wrote:Understanable JF I shall wait till then
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My eyes opened slowly. Everything was bright and blurry. I heard voices all around me, but I couldn't understand what they were saying. I tried speaking, but all that came out was some quiet breathing sound. I couldn't speak, could barely hear, could barely see. I tried moving, but that didn't work either.
Amy? Where are you?I tried to say Jenette, but I couldn't. I tried thinking thoughts to her, but my mind was on shut-down. I couldn't think anything to her no matter how hard I tried. I heard a voice next to me, suddenly (it's words will be in blue).
Will she be okay?That was the first voice I heard (other than Jenette). I heard another person speaking but couldn't make out their words.
Her eyes are open! Can she see? Or is it natural that they're just staring at the ceiling?Was I even blinking?
Amy?! Are you there? Please still be there...I wanted to talk to Jenette so bad, but I couldn't make my brain work. My eyesight was starting to clear up, and I could start to see the ceiling clearly. I tried blinking, but my eyelids were stiff.
Her eyes aren't as red. Is that a good sign?Amy? Amy! Please don't be dead...And that snapped me back into reality.
DEAD?! YOU MEAN I COULD BE DEAD?! I shouted at Jenette through my mind.
Amy! Is that you?!No, it's the Muffin Man! I thought to her.
Of course it's me! Am I really dead?!No! How would you be speaking if you were?!I'm not speaking. I'm thinking.Oh.... great. You could be dead.But I thought you said I couldn't die!!Yeah. Unless that spider gets you. Which he did.SAY WHAT?! THE SPIDER KILLED ME?!I don't know yet. Try speaking.I tried open my mouth, but I couldn't. It felt as if it was clamped shut...
I can't! It was hard enough to think to you, I don't know if I can speak!Just try, Amy. You could be dying, which means you might be able to stop it.I can stop myself from dying?If you try. You could already be dead, but it's worth a shot.Okay, I'll try. I focused and tried to close my eyes. I felt them slowly start to go downward. After ten minutes they finally closed all the way. I opened them slowly and after another ten minutes they were open again. I closed them again and they closed a bit faster. It took 8 minutes. I kept on doing that, just blinking, and soon I got it down to regular.
Wait, she's blinking! Is she alive?I opened my mouth slowly. My jaw hurt like crazy as I opened it. I tried speaking, but all that came out was a little moan.
Did you hear that?I tried speaking again. And, finally, one word came out.
Help.She's alive! Nurse! She's awake!Was I? Or was I really dead, and this was where the dead went when they died?
Jenette.Amy! You're doing it! Keep on speaking and try moving!Jenette.... where.... are you?I moved my legs up and down. My vision was almost completely clear now. I could hear clearly. I was waking up.
Good! Keep on going, Amy! I'm almost there!Almost where?I'm almost to the hospital!Hospital?Yeah! Where you are!I'm in a hospital?Yeah. After you got hit with that rock the spider threw at you the others took you to the hospital.What spider? What others? What rock?Amy? Are you okay?Who's Amy?