The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[tanner]

I would like some critique please!
Username:tanner
Link to your form:
Adoption Agency you are applying for: the agency
Deadline for your form: tonight
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? either. perferably here.

[Skylarr.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Minnie:)
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=99202&start=5260#p3609310
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency 2.0
Deadline for your form: Tonight
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine

[Lirrie]

This is a critique for Tanner!
Who the critique is for:Tanner
What you had to say about it: Ok first you MUST alway qoute the artist saying you have permmision, if you do not chances are you wont get the desigh. Ok you need to bulk up your form a little, have a little story in it. Right now all we know is she has a lovable personality, we dont know if she likes or dislikes anything.

This is a critique for Minne!
Who the critique is for: Minnie
What you had to say about it: Well um I can say anything about your form except I wouldnt do the human asspect. They look for more what you are doing with the character as its self i would have focused on its dragon part but thats just me.

[Skylarr.]

yes i usually tend to do that.... i guess i just see it easier from my point of view../:

[Lirrie]

yes i usually tend to do that.... i guess i just see it easier from my point of view../:

Hmm well that is difficult then, hmmmm well its still a good form, but next time I would look at it from the characters perspective.

[Skylarr.]

thanks!

[versicolor]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Jelli
Link to your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=120564&start=460 I'm not exactly sure how to link it to the exact post, but it's the first post on the page
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Sparkle, Gloom, Scene, and Unloved Adoption Center!
Deadline for your form: Friday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here please C:

[Lirrie]

This is a critique for Jellie!
Who the critique is for:Jellie
What you had to say about it: I could not find a thing wrong with you form, the story seemed well thought out and the characters seemed real, id love to see how you continue this story. Thhe only think maybe you could do is have the characters speak more.

I would like some critique please!
Username: Lirrie
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=99202&p=3569220&hilit=luniea#p3569220
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: tonight
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Just here

I edited my form

[Papercutt.]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Lady-Luck
Link to your form: Mines way towards the bottom : viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=2880
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails Adoption
Deadline for your form: Need to check
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is good as long as I get feedback.

EDITED ONCE

[Lirrie]

This is a critique for Lady-Luck!
Who the critique is for: Lady-Luck
What you had to say about it: I loved your form it was well thought out and id love to see if you take it further, the ending though was a bit too much for me, I guess thats just how i am but maybe you could tweak that a little. Anywell great form, try th put spaces in between each of you bolded heading and good luck.