Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of the last entry (on page 12)?

OMW OMW OMW OMW OMW! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT JUST HAPPENED!
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I knew it all along!
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6%
Such a surprise!
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NO! I mean, YES! I mean, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK!
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Total votes : 31

Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:59 pm

JF you made meh fav character ebil? Pete was like Peeta from The Hunger Games.
Pete = Peeta
Bread = Butter
Peanut Butter = Jelly
Cookies = Milk
Pickles = Walking around my neighborhood barefoot
Wait what was I talking about?
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

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I guess Gale's cool, but Peeta's THE BOY WIT THE BREAD


Yea, you can't say The Truth is wrong.

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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Ellies » Sat Feb 25, 2012 4:24 pm

I just dont see why more vilonce is beeing added to this story,Just for the sake of smaller kids. I mean im fiene with it but u know lol. I really think Amy should just find jennet (yes most things are possible XD) Good story so far. But dosent amy have to graduate Middle school. But We all heart TIAJNAD. "playes a song on amy's dog pod "
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 25, 2012 4:55 pm

TheHungerGamer wrote:JF you made meh fav character ebil? Pete was like Peeta from The Hunger Games.
Pete = Peeta
Bread = Butter
Peanut Butter = Jelly
Cookies = Milk
Pickles = Walking around my neighborhood barefoot
Wait what was I talking about?

lol!
Ellies wrote:I just dont see why more vilonce is beeing added to this story,Just for the sake of smaller kids. I mean im fiene with it but u know lol. I really think Amy should just find jennet (yes most things are possible XD) Good story so far. But dosent amy have to graduate Middle school. But We all heart TIAJNAD. "playes a song on amy's dog pod "

THank you! :) I think I'm going to cool it down, a little bit, since my violence was kicking in for a minute. Thanks for telling me about it, or else I wouldn't have realized it.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:27 pm

Okay, time for more! :)





















Surprisingly, Pete put a wet rag to my cut, and the blood dried and stopped within a few minutes. But why had he helped me, after he had hurt me so badly? I looked at him, and he noticed the strange look on my face. I looked into his eyes. And you won't believe what I saw. Tears.
Pete are you.... are you crying?
Pete wiped his eyes and growled.
No, I am not!
But he was. I looked at his eyes again, and he stopped growling, and cried more.
Why are you crying?
I was whispering. There was something in his eyes. Something.... different.
I....... I can't hurt you!
But you said you had to!
NO! I..... I can't!
But why couldn't he? And why had he? He finally sighed, and unchained me.
Go.
But..... why?
GO.
But I can't just leave you here crying over nothing!
Pete glared at me.
I SAID GO!
But-
GO NOW! DO YOU WANT TO STAY HERE?!
I gulped, and ran out of the room, but hid behind a corner. I wanted to see if Pete said anything next. And, sure enough, he did. I heard him open up his dogphone, type in a number, and then waiting for someone to pick up.
Hello? Suzi?
WHAT?!
I heald my breath at the sound of Suzi's voice, but realized she was only on the phone, and wasn't here.
Uh.... well........ Amy disappeared.
I heard silence.
WHATDOYOUMEANSHECOULDN'THAVEJUSTDISAPPEAREDYOUAREANIDIOTPETE!!!!!!
Suzi was deffinately angry. I heard Suzi take a deep breath.
Pete? What exactly happened. Where is Amy?
I dunno. She just disappeared as soon as I catched her.
But Suzi wasn't buying it.
Pete, I know you're lying. What happened?
Why was Pete even working for her, anyway?
I told you. She disappeared.
Suzi still wasn't buying it.
Pete, you know what will happen if you are lying to me.
Pete gulped.
You do, don't you?
Yes.
I heard a zapping sound, and then I heard Suzi's voice, loud and clear.
So why are you lying to me?
Oh, no! It was just as I feared! Pete had the NEW dogphone, that could transport people! That means... SUZI WAS IN THE BUILDING AND SHE WAS PROBABLY GOING TO HURT PETE!
I-I-I-I-I-I-
Pete, stop your babbling! Tell me!
But Pete stayed quiet. Suzi sighed.
Dear brother, why are you lying to me?
BROTHER?!
Suzi, I told you already. She disappeared.
I heard Suzi whisper something to Pete, something that I couldn't hear. But I knew by the tone of her voice, she was threatening (one of her many talents).
You wouldn't DARE do that!
I would, and will if you don't tell me what really happened!
I thought for a fleeting second that Pete was either going to tell Suzi that A) He had told her the truth, or B) He would tell her that he let me free. But no. Of course he didn't.
She let herself go when I was getting my equipment.
Suzi growled.
That meanst you didn't secure the bonds tight enough!
I don't know how she escaped, but she was there, I turned around, and she was gone!
Suzi snorted.
Pete, I highly doubt that that is possible. Now, tell me where she is, or else you KNOW what I will do.
Pete gulped, but said nothing.
Bro, I'm WAITING.
I could tell Pete was sweating.
PETE!
He said nothing.
Alright, I give you to the count of three. 1......
Nothing.
2........
Nothing.
3......................
Nothing.
Alright, you called it upon yourself!
WAIT!
I peaked around the corner. Suzi was smiling evilly, making me shiver. I hid behind the corner again.
Yes?
Pete sighed.
I know where she is.
He did?
She behind that corner.
OMW HOW DID HE KNOW THAT?! Suddenly, Suzi poofed right in front of me, and I stumbled back. Suzi smiled evilly, making me shiver yet again.
Long time no see, eh, Amy?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Ellies » Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:00 pm

OMW!!!!! Well it was like a 0.0 WT! ^^ : ( Kinda feeling XD
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby brambletalon98 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:18 pm

AGHAGHAAAAGGH!!!

PETE.IS.A.TRAITOR

* runs around, screaming *

*coughs *

eh-hem.

anyway, were aloud to do fanart, right?
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:21 pm

Ellies wrote:OMW!!!!! Well it was like a 0.0 WT! ^^ : ( Kinda feeling XD

XD
brambletalon98 wrote:AGHAGHAAAAGGH!!!

PETE.IS.A.TRAITOR

* runs around, screaming *

*coughs *

eh-hem.

anyway, were aloud to do fanart, right?

Yup, just as long as you post it here! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:34 am

I'm soooooo confused? is pete good or bad? URG! THE CONFUSION! ITS FRYING MY BRAIN!
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby kaypatts » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:53 am

OMG! I'm on Team suzi. I Iz Evil
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:22 am

Kayla wrote:OMG! I'm on Team suzi. I Iz Evil


Evilness! I'm on Team Dragon (wherever they went. xP)
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