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[Kodabomb]

Oh thank you so much! If you haven't read my book The Jewel Empire, it's about Princess Wildfire who turned wicked, and when she was changed back she was worried the Empire would hate her and want to kill her, though she knew she would stay good forever. I NEEDED to do a song about it and finally got inspiration. <3

Reading books 1 and 2. Forgive me if I don't get some of it, I'm no pegasister!

*screams* A non-brony/pegasister is reading Jewel Empire!! *dies*

[Lilysplash]

Oh thank you so much! If you haven't read my book The Jewel Empire, it's about Princess Wildfire who turned wicked, and when she was changed back she was worried the Empire would hate her and want to kill her, though she knew she would stay good forever. I NEEDED to do a song about it and finally got inspiration. <3

Reading books 1 and 2. Forgive me if I don't get some of it, I'm no pegasister!

*screams* A non-brony/pegasister is reading Jewel Empire!! *dies*

XD no problem! :3
I also critiqued your other story, and your writing is quite impressive. <3
And your art is plain amazing, you talented thing! Even as a non-MLP fan, those ponies are gorgeous!

[Cherry]

Haha, I'm not into MLP:FIM much either, though I -sorry- was into My Little Ponies when I was younger. (They had a cool mini-TV show you could watch on tape.)
I used to have a huge collection, but not anymore.

And this makes me ask the question:
What movie/book/play/TV show/etc. would you base your story on? (You can pick more, but explain why and which story if you have multiple stories influenced. [This question does not apply to fanfics, but you can answer why you wanted your fanfic based off of that show if you want to answer.])

[Kodabomb]

Aw, that is so kind of you Lilysplash! Unfortunately I haven't been online on the computer much, so I can't get ANYTHING done. *snarls at Mum* I want to be productive.
Anywho, I started a new chapter yesterday and I hope to finish at some point. X3

[Lilysplash]

Haha, I'm not into MLP:FIM much either, though I -sorry- was into My Little Ponies when I was younger. (They had a cool mini-TV show you could watch on tape.)
I used to have a huge collection, but not anymore.

And this makes me ask the question:
What movie/book/play/TV show/etc. would you base your story on? (You can pick more, but explain why and which story if you have multiple stories influenced. [This question does not apply to fanfics, but you can answer why you wanted your fanfic based off of that show if you want to answer.])

*Gasp*
I thought you'd never ask! XD
I'm mostly a fanfiction writing, so apart from my original stories, I do write for Warriors and Naruto! <3 I read, however, from Hetalia and occasionally Percy Jackson and Glee as well.

Aw, that is so kind of you Lilysplash! Unfortunately I haven't been online on the computer much, so I can't get ANYTHING done. *snarls at Mum* I want to be productive.
Anywho, I started a new chapter yesterday and I hope to finish at some point. X3

I sympathize! My mom yells at me for "abusing computer rights", so I stay off for two days. (It's not my computer, but the family's.) I come back on, and somebody installs some program which gives it a virus, and shuts down my Oekaki. T-T I am suffering. I was working on contest entries, and now I can't! The contest ended... TT~TT

[Small Child]

It's pretty. Short, for a song with a chorus, but it is written well. Though on the line "Tony hands numb with cold" do you mean tiny?
I've written songs, but there's not as much of a "right" way to write a song as there is in writing a book. (Correct me on this, but really the only crit you'll be getting is A) music critics and B) people in a song writer's group or maybe the people who are singing/buying your song if you happened to sell it.)
I like it. It's a pretty subtle message for something so terrible, and I think you really got this from a kid's perspective.

I'm not a very good critique, but this is what I have to give you. c:
It's amazing. I kind of sang it in my head as a fast song, especially the chorus. I love the lyrics and the meaning behind it, so lovely. c:
That's all I have to say, sorry. >.< not much critique there, actually. Like I said before, I'm a terrible critique but I tried. I've never really written a song before, either, so my knowledge isn't quite up to par.
Anyways, beautiful song!

Thank you very much guys! I did mean tiny, haha. Those typos. Anyway, it's a WIP, Im still trying to get through the next couple of verses. Thank you for the kind words and I'll post the whole song later! :3

[Cherry]

Ah, okay. Typos hate me too. Cool, can't wait to see the finished product.
I really hate writing verses, though when I write songs I have verses that have different tunes and different structures since I'm so forgetful.
One good influence for writing verses is Owl City. You might want to check out his song Galaxies for examples. (That song *is* a God song, just so you know. I'm a Christian so I obviously don't have a problem with it, but I'm not sure if you would. )

[Small Child]

No, that'd be okay! Thanks!

[nutella ♥]

/nomuse/ urg I need to write something, but nothing is coming to mind. I'm filling my spare time by participating in all the various forum games because I can't seem to write anything. :/
#writersblockprobs

[Jailor]

I'm way too obsessed with writing science fiction at the moment

so many plot bunnies

I don't care if it's two in the morning

I will stay up writing