At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

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What do YOU think should happen next (see page 14 [2nd post] for latest entry)?

You should make an army of Jenettes. ARISE JENETTIANS!
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29%
Make an army of Anger's (I like his ebilness....).
1
3%
Make them go to Disneyland!
5
14%
Make Suzi appear and kill them all! MWAHAHAHAHA!
1
3%
Have Amy eat some pie... or cake.... or BOTH!
2
6%
Jessy should die! She's a little brat!
0
No votes
BRING PETE AND INDAH BACK TO LIFE TO SAVE THE DAY! WOOHOO! GO TEAM PETE/INDAH!
6
17%
Have a chef come in and bake a cake.
1
3%
Make some pie!
3
9%
*Hums tune* Amy should sing!
6
17%
 
Total votes : 35

Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 26, 2012 6:14 am

Ellies wrote:The keboard was fun ^^ I hope this problem is sorted out soon!

Ya, it is. :)
xxazul63xx wrote:Did two days pass? DID THEY? *eye twitches*

You shall see....
Kayla wrote:YAY! WE STILL GOT OUR TIAJNAD!

Yay! :D

And............................. and.................................. and................. TWO DAYS HAVE PASSED! YAY! *Throws confetti in air and blows horn* YAY! *Repeats* TIAJNAD WILL STAY! *Throws even more confetti in the air* YYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY! *Fires confetti cannon* ...... okay. I'm good. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Jan 26, 2012 6:27 am

New poll! :) Sorry if some of the answers from the old poll are still there. Something went wacko. :(

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 27, 2012 8:53 am

Sorry for the long wait, guys! Here is a NEW ENTRY! :D



























I couldn't cry anymore, even if I tried. Every last tear I had in me was let out when I had knelt beside Pete. We were already back at HQ, and we immediately ran to Jessy's room. I heard giggling in another room, and I breathed a sigh of relief. I knew Jessy was alright..... or so I thought. I walked into the other room, and I saw Jessy..... playing on the floor with Suzi!
JESSY! GET AWAY FROM HER!
I grabbed Jessy's arm and pulled her away from Suzi, but Jessy pulled away from me! She quickly scribbled something on her notepad.
Get away from me stranger!
I stared.
I'm not a stranger. I'm your.... sister...
Jessy had a confused face.
Suzi? WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY LITTLE SISTER?!
Oh, nothing. Just wiped out her memory. Now she thinks that I'm her sister! Isn't it sweet?
No, it is NOT sweet! Change her back!
Hmm, let me think on that? NO! Why would I do that when I can make her think whatever I want?
I'm warning you, Suzi. If you don't change her back, I'm going to-
You're going to what? You make one move, I kill her.
Suzi had a remote in her hand with two buttons on it and a keyboard.
Let's see, if I push the top button, I brainwash her and put in a new memory for her. If I push the bottom button, it destroys her brain, her heart, and her entire body.
Jenette stared, and looked at me, a scared look on her face. No, it wasn't a scared face. It was a terrified face. I'd never seen Jenette terrified. I didn't think it was possible.
Now, unless you want me to kill her, I need you to do something for me.
What do you want, Suzi?
Jenette was growling by now, teeth and fists clenched.
Just a small favor. You see, when we were little, I wanted to be the secret agent. But no, you had to become one. And I still want to be one, you see. But of course that can't be possible with the two top agents. So, Jenette, I need you to kill Agent Roger, and Amy, Agent Cornelia.
I thought I'd faint. How could I kill my own parents?!
No, I can't!
Ah, but you must, unless you want Jessy to be dead.
But why can't you do it?!
Well, considering there's securety everywhere, I can't really reach them. But you two are agents here.... and you can access rooms easily.
Well how did you get in this room, then?
I flashed in.
Why can't you flash in their rooms then?
As I said before, securety. There wasn't any securety in this room, though, luckily for me.
Jenette looked at me.
I can't, but I need to.
I was whispering.
What can I do?
I..... I don't know.
Tick-tock tick-tock! Time's running up!
Jenette suddenly had a glint in her eye. I knew that look. She had an idea.
Give us a minute, Suzi-Woozy.
Suzi growled. Jenette growled back, except louder. Suzi stepped back, and I grinned. Suzi was so scared of Jenette. Jenette and I turned around and she whispered the plan in my ear.
Okay, let's go!
Jenette turned around.
Okay, Suzi. We'll do it. But first-
Jenette threw a large block at Suzi, and she topled over and the remote flew out of her hands. Jenette charged at her and held her down. I ran as everything went in slowmotion. I lept up and grabbed the remote and landed on the ground. I suddenly heard a loud noise and turned around and saw Suzi holding Jenette on the ground, a gun to her head.
No!!!
And then I looked at Jenette, and she smiled at me. I felt tears coming to my eyes, and then I heard the gun shoot.
Jenette!
And then I did the worste thing ever. I dropped the remote.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:01 am

OHMAIGOSHNESSOHMAIGOSHNESSOHMAIGOSHNESS! I SUZI SO MUCH! AND NO JEANETTE CAN'T DIE! SHE JUST CAN'T! I'M GONNA KILL SUZI.
*Leaps onto her, morphs into giant were-wolf* DId i tell you i was a were-wolf? No? Oh i am. *Then rips Suzi's throat out.* I'm good now.
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby kaypatts » Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:18 am

Thanks a lot. You killed Jeanette. My favorite character
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby katomorakwarrior » Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:29 am

Strictly speaking Amy heard the gun go off.
JF didn't say anything about seeing it.
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:40 am

katomorakwarrior wrote:Strictly speaking Amy heard the gun go off.
JF didn't say anything about seeing it.

Then there's still hope :p
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:55 am

Do you want more? :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Jan 27, 2012 11:56 am

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Re: At Death's Door - Sixth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Jan 27, 2012 12:10 pm

xxazul63xx wrote:yes

THEN YOU SHALL HAVE MORE! :D Gift for the stalkerwans! XD Sorry, I just love calling you guys that.


























I ran over to Jenette and knelt beside her. And that's when I realized it. She wasn't hurt. And I didn't hear the remote crash to the ground.
Amy.... WHY DID YOU DROP THE REMOTE?!
But.... I didn't hear it drop.... and what was that gunshot?
Jenette smiled.
Suzi's not here, is she?
I looked around. Sure enough, Suzi wasn't there. Where had she gone?
Jenette, what did you do?
Oh, nothing. I just karate kicked Suzi, making her drop the gun, and it went off and almost hit Suzi but she disappeared and I don't know where she is now..... but hey, she's gone.
Wow. But that doesn't answer the question about the remote.
Ya, I guess you're right. We're going to have to- JESSY!
I turned around abruptly. Jessy was holding the remote.... and Suzi was holding Jessy!
Why do you keep poofing up everywhere?!
It's a gift!
Ya. A gift for idiots.
I heard that!
I know. That's why I didn't whisper it.
Suzi snorted.
Jessy, press the button.
Jessy's paw got close to the second button.
Jessy! No!
Jessy stopped.
Do it!
Jessy started again.
No! Stop!
Jessy stopped.
Do it you idiot!
Jessy looked at Suzi. Then at me. Then at Jenette.
DO IT!
Jessy then did the most spectacular thing ever. She threw the remote to me, and I grabbed it just before it hit the ground. Suzi growled a low, creapy growl.
FINE! I'LL FINISH YOU OFF MYSELF!
She grabbed Jessy by the throat, and I heard Jessy struggling for breath.
No!
I couldn't move. I was too scared. Jenette suddenly raced past me and crashed into Suzi, who dropped Jessy. I ran to Jessy. She was alright. She looked up at me and smiled. She scripbled something down on her notepad.
I love you, Sissy.
I smiled and hugged Jessy. Somehow, someway, she was back. I suddenly heard something crack, and I turned around abruptly. Jenette had Suzi on the ground, and she was sitting on her. Jenette had pulled Suzi's leg up above her leg so that it was touching her head. Suzi was in pain, I could tell, although she didn't say anything.
I was always better at karate then you.
Jenette pulled harder and Suzi grimiced. She then disappeared, and Jenette nearly fell over from the sudden disappearence.
Now what?
I guess we need to save Jessy's voice.
But where do we look?
Jenette smiled.
From the most unlikelyest thing ever.
And what would that be?
It's not a what.... it's a who. Come on out....
And then that all too familiar "who" came out of the shadows. I stared, my mouth open. Jenette hated her! Why was she here? And how could she know the way?
FLOWER?!
Flower smiled a big smile and jumped up and down.
ARE WE GOING ON AN ADVENTURE BECAUSE I SURE CAN'T WAIT I LOVE ADVENTURE LET'S GO NOWWWWWW!!!
I looked at Jenette as Flower chatted on.
You hate Flower!
Ya, I do. But she says she knows the way. What else can we do?
I looked at Flower, doing her ridiculous dance.
Okay.... I guess it's worth a shot.
YAY! SO WE'RE GOING NOW BECAUSE THAT IS AWESOME SO ARE WE GOING I BET WE ARE OH I CAN'T WAIT LET'S GO NOW BEFORE THE DAY GET'S ANY OLDER WE'VE GOT TO GET GOING NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW NOW-
SHUT UP!
This would be a long day.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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