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by videlicet » Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:23 pm
ƧнαωтʏƆнιcκ wrote:Does the story have to be finished for it to be reviewed?
Nope!

Would you like your story to be reviewed? I was supposed to write a review this week... But I was dreadfully busy. D:
I got my SSAT results back... I was in the 96% percentile, 99% in verbal understanding. And now I have to write applications and stuff. *sigh* How wonderfully banal. D: So, this means even less free time for me... Joys.
@.a rising storm., Thank you!!

And I'm looking forwards to seeing your story!
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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by gizmo, » Thu Feb 09, 2012 1:42 pm
Sure! Would you like to review it? Go here if you would like to(: It does not have a name at the moment, because, well, I'm horrible at names. Also, I find it easier to name it when you are close to finishing or until you at least know where it's going xD
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by lovely. » Fri Feb 10, 2012 8:41 am
I.Love.You wrote:
Story's Title:
The Boy On The Beach
Link to Story:
Here
Genre:
I actually have no idea. I guess it could fit into Realistic Fiction, possibly Drama {I'm not sure I only have one chapter up.}Really whatever you think fits it best ^^
Description:
Penelope Summers is thirteen year old girl, who lives on a small island {Name undecided.}. Penelope's family owns a small market called Produce By Design. Penelope loves the market, but hates the name. The islands school is very tiny, but even in Penelope's grade, there is a mean girl, who despises Penelope. Every morning on Saturdays and Sundays, she rides her old bike down to the beach, to watch the water and find seashells. This all is normal, until one day, Penelope meets a boy. A fourteen boy named Chase Leasly {Pronounced Lease-Lee}, who is perhaps the cutest boy Penelope had ever seen. A strong friendship forms between the two. Penelope
soon learns that Chase holds a dark secret, and never looks at the boy on the beach the same way again.
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed?
Yes :3
Other:
I would like to make it clear, that this story is not a romance. There might be a quick kiss or something, but this is not a romance. I know the title is very cheesy and such, and I'm working on the title still :3
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by obscure. » Fri Feb 10, 2012 9:27 am
Hi, I would like to add one of my own works, if that's okay (:
Story's Title: Maybe There's Hope
Link to Story: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1019893
Genre: Animalistic Fiction
Description(optional): This story is about a young stallion who must be sold from his old home and enters a world of harsh people and cruelty. It seems as though his fate at the Slaughter House is near, until the day when a true miracle takes place...
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed? Yes, please, if possible. I would love to know what others think of my work, and how to make it better as I'm aspiring to be an author someday C:
Other(Extra information goes here): No other info really, other than thanks for giving me the opportunity for others to see my work (:
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by lovely. » Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:16 am
I.Love.You wrote:
Story's Title:
The Boy On The Beach
Link to Story:
Here
Genre:
I actually have no idea. I guess it could fit into Realistic Fiction, possibly Drama {I'm not sure I only have one chapter up.}Really whatever you think fits it best ^^
Description:
Penelope Summers is thirteen year old girl, who lives on a small island {Name undecided.}. Penelope's family owns a small market called Produce By Design. Penelope loves the market, but hates the name. The islands school is very tiny, but even in Penelope's grade, there is a mean girl, who despises Penelope. Every morning on Saturdays and Sundays, she rides her old bike down to the beach, to watch the water and find seashells. This all is normal, until one day, Penelope meets a boy. A fourteen boy named Chase Leasly {Pronounced Lease-Lee}, who is perhaps the cutest boy Penelope had ever seen. A strong friendship forms between the two. Penelope
soon learns that Chase holds a dark secret, and never looks at the boy on the beach the same way again.
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed?
Yes :3
Other:
I would like to make it clear, that this story is not a romance. There might be a quick kiss or something, but this is not a romance. I know the title is very cheesy and such, and I'm working on the title still :3
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by videlicet » Sat Feb 11, 2012 11:47 am
Thank you very much, guys! I will add your stories to the Bookstore as soon as I can!

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meanwhile the world goes on. / meanwhile the sun and the clear pebbles of the rain
are moving across the landscapes, / over the prairies and the deep trees,
the mountains and the rivers. --wild geese, by mary oliver┗━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━━┛
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by GreekMythology<3 » Sun Feb 12, 2012 10:20 am
Story's Title: Kiokino
Link to Story:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1031956&start=0&view=viewpoll
Genre:Animalistic fiction
Description(optional):I just make it up as i go along so i cant really give a description =3
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed? yes.
Other(Extra information goes here):

Murr, Q, Joe and Sal.
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by Charias » Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:23 am
Story's Title: |ηєw єαятн|
Link to Story:
My StoryGenre: Animal adventure
Description: The humans disappeared a long time ago, leaving the Earth to the animals. Wars ate still fought over it, between the dogs, and the cats. Can two unlikely friends, infected by a curse that defies explanation, stop the age-old war?
Would you like your story to be rated/reviewed?: Yes, please!
Other: So far there's only one chapter, but it's a long chapter and I definately plan on continuing!
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by Ourpawprints » Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:41 am
Story's Title: A Horse's Life
Link to Story: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=985829 Genre: Realistic Fiction
Description(optional): A Horse's Life, although having a pretty boring title (probably should fix that) is a well-written adventure of a chestnut mare, Amber being stolen from her wild herd. She is beaten, abused and
betrayed by the ones who her life depends on. But through all that, can this spirited young horse finally find a place that she can call home?
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed? Yes, I would
Other(Extra information goes here): Still a WIP
Story's Title: An Echo's Call
Link to Story: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=1020355 Genre: fan fic
Description(optional): With a strong will, a warrior can survive the toughest battles, the hardest hunger, the loneliest night and a cruel death. But this warrior may just be testing the limits on that.
Would You Like Your Story to be Rated & Reviewed? Yup
Other(Extra information goes here): Still a WIP
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