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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby 20lait1 » Sun Apr 05, 2015 12:58 am

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Dear Hawk,

I went down and talked to the office lady at the office before leaving school and getting into the car. Cassie ignored me, Tigren just nodded and Nicole started squealing about her new clothes.

So after hours of driving (and we still aren't there) I checked my IPaw and saw a message.

From Jewel and everyone else,

We've filmed this lunchtime so you wouldn't feel like you've missed out. Click the attachment to view the video!


*scrolls down*

*click*


Fang: Hi, Skyler! We're missing you already, but we've promised each other some private space to talk to you. I'm going first -
Jewel: But it's my IPaw! Never mind, just don't steal it. DON'T press that button, okay?
Fang: Huh? *about to press button*
Jewel: NO! *pushes paw away*
Fang: Fine. *walks into some empty room* Yeah, so, Skyler, I'm missing you already. Have a good time! *hands IPaw to Jewel*
Jewel: So, yeah, Skyler.... I hope you're happy where you're going. I.... Just see you. Come back soon! *passes IPaw to Lilly*
Lilly: Hi Skyler! Just want to tell you that I think Jewel's crushing on someone! Don't tell her I said that! *gives IPaw to Xavier*
Xavier: Hey, bro, having a good time? Enjoy your new school! *paws it over to Riptide*
Riptide: Yeah, just... kinda strange without having you here. Just... enjoy, okay? *passes it over to Taylor*
Taylor: Hi! I got into some arguments with Sunny but Snowy didn't really care! But anyways, I'm kinda missing you now you're away. *hands it over to Xander*
Xander: Erm.... Yeah, just.... have a good time, you know? And I kinda, finally got Snowy to stop telling me to join her club! Just a simple no was fine before I went away before she could respond. Erm.... Hope you enjoy your school.... Just come back soon, okay? *blushes and passes it over to Kolli*
Kolli: Did you see my new video, Skyler? Everyone said it was perfect! Check PawTube for more videos! *gives it to Creek*
Creek: If you wanted to know, I found out Flame and Hail both are mad at each other cause they're crushing on Snowy. We won't have much trouble for a while. Hope you enjoy your new school! *paws it to Ink*
Ink: Am I supposed to talk to this thing? But how can she hear me? Okay... I still don't get it, but if you hear me, Skyler, you were nice to me and I hope the new students would be nice to you now. Now what? Okay... *passes it over to Charley*
Charley: At least the Christmas dance has been moved. Snowy wanted to dance with someone but haven't found that guy yet. It's not a Christmas dance anymore. So.... just come back in time for the dance, okay? *winks and leaves the room holding the IPaw, then passes it back to Jewel*

Jewel: Have a good time, okay? See you!


That was nice of them - oh, we're there? Time passes quickly when we're having fun. So anyways, we got off at the new house and now we're putting out everything and stuff. Tigren says that dad's coming home at night, but I still have to go to school now. Ugh. Anyways, I got to school after getting lost a couple of times. (I ended up in the park, almost went into the boys' toilets, and finally, the park again.) Barktree High, huh? Why is it called Barktree? Never mind. I don't care.

Anyways, when I finally entered, I met a Popular, who was probably the sorter (and the Queen Bee, like Snowy.). I tried to talk to her.... I was kinda nervous. And I think her name was Mackenzie too, cause well.... I think I saw or heard it somewhere.

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Me: *quietly* Hi, I'm Skyler.... or Sky for short....
Mackenzie: Just get to Exiles. *blows on paw polish*
Me: Okay....

I walked over to where she pointed. I saw a dog - probably an Outcast Exile too. Here's a picture -

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???: *flings out a paw dramatically* Welcome to Exiles!
Everyone Else: Hiiii!

Okay.... They seemed kinda nice. But anyways, I can see they're not friends with that Popular. And I think her name's Music... because I heard it somewhere too. Maybe one of her friends said it.

Me: Guess what?
Music: What?
Me: I played a prank on Mackenzie!
Everyone: What?!
Me: Yep! Watch....

So, yeah, we were outside, and Mackenzie opened the door and there was flour all over her. She looks a little like Snowy the White-nosed Dog.... Except for the wings, of course.

Mackenzie (I'm shortening it down to The Big Mac, like how Music calls her.... Music's kinda cool. Though I still miss Fang and the guys.): OMG! Who did that?!
Everyone except me: .....

I nearly laughed at the look on the BIG MAC's snout, but I kept my mouth shut. So yeah, school's okay.... I'm planning another prank for that Popular. Something about honey. Anyways, we have to go home after school (not going to say anything about it - its just normal school, okay?) So when I got home, Cassie and Nicole were gone (Tigren told me they went shopping) so I went up to my new room. Wait - why is it half-painted PINK?! I have to paint over it... Ugh. I'm going to use light blue. I guess I have to get painting now.... I'm going to write in you tomorrow.

Just a last thing - I found out Music's pretty cool and everyone else - I'll get their photos tomorrow - and the BIG MAC is literally Snowy. Like you didn't guess. In fact, notebooks can't guess. Never mind. Waste of paper.... I have to get painting now. See you, Hawk.
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Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

Postby namjoon. » Sun Apr 05, 2015 1:08 am

COOL!
You should include some of the other Chars! Like... Connie ( Kolli's little sister ), Ect... ( Sorry, i forgot thw others.... Sorry if i missed them! >.< )
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby pinkgeneguy » Sun Apr 05, 2015 2:23 am

    I forgot she was bloody moving to another bloody school! I hate my bloody self.








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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby 20lait1 » Sun Apr 05, 2015 2:24 am

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    Dear Hawk,

    Today I was introduced to everyone and the hideout. Here's the pictures -

    Music

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    Teina

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    Xerneas (though we call her X-ey)

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    Bloom

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    Cassie (There's another student with my step-mum's name... But she's much, much more nicer!)

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    So yeah, we were discussing stuff in the hideout. Then the BIG MAC came in! I thought this was a hideout - how did she know?

    BIG MAC: So, like, hey cuz, can you, like get my new dress from the drycleaners?

    Cuz? She has a cousin?

    X-ey: What? No way!

    Oh. So I see.... But they're like complete opposites! The mean Popular and the nice Exile....

    BIG MAC: Really? What if they find out that their little Xerneas isn't listening to her wonderful cousin?

    Ugh, the BIG MAC sounds like my little sister Nicole when she's begging for something or.... anything else, really.

    X-ey: *whimper*
    Me: You know what? I wanna claw you in the face, but I've got something in plan for you....

    I don't think anyone heard me. But I don't really care.

    Everyone Else: :shock:
    Me: Get out of the door.... Come on, get out!

    I watched the BIG MAC walk out.... and the bucket of honey fell on top of her! She's so careless of what can happen to you if you sneak into someone's hideout. I could see everyone containing their laughter until she left and we closed the door. I'm quite proud that the prank worked! :lol:

    Anyways, I'm going to write later when I have time.... What? I have a message?

    From Jewel

    Hope you're having a great time!

    From Fang

    Missing you a lot! Charley's really fretting.

    From Everyone Else (The rest aren't here...)

    Hope you come back soon!



    I almost cried - but I didn't, of course. Anyways, I'll write in you later. At gym, maybe?

    Hey! I'm back, Hawk! You probably didn't notice. I'm in the gym now. So I'm playing okay... The jocks don't even want to pass to the girls. I heard a random jock shout "Catch!" and I saw the ball fly towards a girl.... MUSIC? Ouch, that must have hurt.

    Coach: *blows whistle* Red team wins by one point! Blue - go to the showers!

    I'm not mad at Music.... but the showers are GROSS! There's wet fur everywhere - in fact, I'm not going to pollute you with all the disgusting stuff. (can notebooks be polluted?)

    Anyways, after a long day of school, I got home - again. I sent a couple of messages back to the guys before Nicole popped in and annoyed me for the rest of the day as I packed up, set out the bed and such. I also got the message that dad's staying away a day more so he's coming here tonight! It's almost time. I'm waiting very patiently NOT very patiently and writing in you now. Oh - there's the bell! I'm getting it!

    Me: DAD!
    ???: Dad?
    Me: Wait - who are you?
    ???: I'm the delivery dog, and not your dad. A guy called Flame's sending something to your house.
    Me: She's not my mu -
    Delivery Dog: Here. *stuffs parcel in my paws*
    Me: But -
    Delivery Dog: *slams door in my face*

    I don't think he liked me. Nah, he hated me. So anyways, Cassie came down the stairs and opened the parcel. A letter fell out and I snatched it before anyone could get it.

    Dear Cassie and my dear pups,

    I hope you've moved in nicely to your new home. I've sent this ten minutes before I arrive and there's a gift for everyone. Enjoy yourselves and read the letters I gave you (attached to the gifts)

    Flame Swiftrunner


    Cassie took the letter off me right after I finished reading it and read it aloud anyways. Then she took out the things in the parcel.

    Nicole got this -

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    Cassie got this -

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    Tigren got this -

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    And I got.... this!

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    Nicole put on the wings immediately. Tigren put the potion away and Cassie hid the necklace in her personal drawer or something. I put the scythe away under my bed (cause it's the only place that can hide it and it's big enough) and I read the letter attached to it.

    Dear Skyler,

    I hope you enjoy the scythe. I hope you're putting your sword into good use too. I hope you're enjoying your new school, my daughter. You've grown into a fine, young dog. I hope you do well to succeed in me.

    Flame Swiftrunner


    So almost immediately after I read it, the door rang. I let Tigren open it this time.

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    Tigren: Hi, dad.
    Dad: Hello, my oldest child. How's caring for your siblings going along?
    Tigren: I'm not going to call Cassie mum and Nicole's kinda annoying.... Yeah, its fine.
    Dad: Good, then. How about my daughter, Skyler?
    Me: ..... Hi, dad. I'm... fine.
    Dad: Good. Now, how about Nicole? *ruffles her fur*
    Nicole: Hi, dad! I've got lots of new clothes! Like my new fairy wings? I'm big and old, like Skyler is!
    Dad: Yes, yes. Cassie?
    Cassie: Welcome home, husband. Sit down and we'll chat.

    So Cassie made us all go to bed except for Nicole (who's prancing around showing off her new, fake wings... I don't have a picture of her now, though) and now I'm writing in you, Hawk. I guess I have to sleep now. *yawn* I want to overhear their conversation but they're talking really quietly.... I'm going to sleep now. Goodnight, Hawk.
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    Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

    Postby namjoon. » Sun Apr 05, 2015 2:32 am

    OMGEH! This is awesome!!! ^^
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      Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

      Postby pinkgeneguy » Sun Apr 05, 2015 2:42 am

      You're absolutely right, Macz!








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      Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

      Postby BrandNewMelody » Sun Apr 05, 2015 3:29 am

      I am obsessed .-.
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      Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

      Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:11 am

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      Dear Hawk,

      Today I'm kinda worried about Music. She's kinda sick... you know, sneezing, coughing, blowing your nose and the sort. I wonder what's that all about. I know she's trying to hide it - but really, sickness isn't just something you can stuff in your pocket, right? Anyways, school's going to be pretty boring... The bell hasn't gone yet, so I'm writing in you now. Oh wait - is that the BIG MAC? She's coming towards me! I need to hide you!

      Phew, she's gone. You probably didn't notice, right? The bell's going to ring soon but I have some time to write. So here's a photo of her and here's the conversation.

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      The BIG MAC: Where's the other Exile? So, she left you, didn't she?
      Me: Nope, not at all. In fact -
      The BIG MAC: And do you know who pranked me twice? In fact, I remember that it happened as soon as you came here.
      Me: Not a clue! *hurries away*


      Gah! The bell's ringing - got to run! I'll write more later - I promise!

      So I'm home now - NICOLE GET YOUR PAWS OFF MY HAWK!!

      Oooh! I like this pink. I'm in my room now with her diary! I'm gonna tell Tigren that big sis Skyler has a diary! Anyways, I'm the aweshum nice, awnsom cool Nicole and I have magic powers! I can use my awesome wand to make my room pink - I did it! I was like "Mom, can I have a pink bedroom? I'm going to use my wand to make it!" And Mom was like "Okay, darling. Just use your wand and go out to play, then when I call you back in your room will be pink, okay?" I'm so cool! And I have so many clothes that I like - and I have these pwetty nice fairy wings! I'm big and old and one day, I will fly around in the sky and make the whole world pink! Big sis is banging on my door - NOOOO! DON'T TOUCH MY DOOR!!! I have to give it back - she's so mad!!!!

      - Nicole


      Gahh! Why is another person writing in my Hawk?! And she used this pink pen! I can't erase it! Gah! Oh well. I'm going to cheer myself up by going outside to fly. Cassie hates it, but I don't care. I'm going to write some more in the park. No annoying sisters. Humph.

      I'm at the park now. It's so peaceful and calm here.... And I've got another message? Oh well. *click*

      From Ink

      You said you wanted a video so here is one!



      What video? I don't get it. Whatever.

      *clicks attachment*

      Ink: Okay... I'm getting the hang of this now.
      Behind the Camera ??? : Remember what to do, okay? And careful of the camera.
      Ink: Sure! *turns back to camera* So please enjoy! *walks towards Snowy*
      Snowy: What?
      Ink: I've....
      Snowy: SPEAK UP, YOU CREEP!
      Ink: You....
      Snowy: WHAT, YOU USELESS - AHHHHHH!
      Ink: *pounces on her*
      Snowy: HELP ME, JOCKS!!!!
      Random Jocks: *rushes towards her* "Ow! Stop hitting me! It's the girl she wants!" "Get off me!" "OUCH! My eye!"
      Ink: This is what you get for calling me a creep... This is for calling me useless.... And this is for Skyler! *looks up and smiles at camera before continuing attack*
      Hail: Quickly! Get out of the way! *drags Ink off Snowy*
      Snowy: Eeeeek! *runs away*
      Ink: *bites Hail*
      Hail: Owwww! *lets go of Ink*
      Ink: *runs up to camera* Hope you enjoyed!


      After seeing Ink attack Snowy the second time, I laughed so much that a dog walking past gave me a really odd look. It's going to be night soon. I guess I have to leave. *sigh* Wait - what is that sound?

      That... was.... SCARY. Yet so exciting. I don't know what really happened, but I saw a dark shadow and suddenly a tree branch fell down! I immediately jumped to my paws, and held up my paws in front of me to attempt to protect me. When I flung my paws up, suddenly a gust of wind blew the tree back.... And uncovered the animal's face.

      I don't really remember anything else. I just remember sleeping powder, then falling asleep... And the falling tree branch as well as... wait - I have powers? I don't care if Cassie gets mad at me now. I want to try it now! I'm going to write in you when I get home.

      I'm back! So none of my belongings got stolen, surprisingly. And my power is so cool! I could just flick my paw and create a gust of wind, or make a small tornado. So yeah, I got yelled at when I got home. But I don't care. Anyways, I kinda remember an animal saying something to me... He wanted to squash me under that branch? I'm not sure... Oh well, I guess I've got to sleep now. Before Cassie finds something else to yell at me about. Like that fake spider I put in Nicole's bed or the glue that I put on the handle of her cup. Oh well. Goodnight, Hawk.
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      Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

      Postby pinkgeneguy » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:58 am

      And that is when I knew that this was going to be the best friends ill have in my life- Me, make Skylar say it! Don't have to, just a suggestion








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      Re: This is not a diary, this is a Hawk!

      Postby 20lait1 » Mon Apr 06, 2015 4:00 pm

      wolfiegirl8679 wrote:And that is when I knew that this was going to be the best friends ill have in my life- Me, make Skylar say it! Don't have to, just a suggestion


      I don't get it.... Can it be a little clearer? Sorry if it's a little insulting, but I don't really get what you're saying.
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