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What did you think of the end of this book?

... Oh. My. Gosh. OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
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WHAT JUST HAPPENED?!
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13%
Oohhh... this just got very interesting.
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THE CLIFF-HANGERS! I LOVE THEM!
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All of the above
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I didn't like it and thought it was stupid. This whole book series is stupid, actually. HATER ALL THE WAY!!
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Total votes : 15

Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Unashamed » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:25 am

Don't worry about it, JF. You'll never lose me as a fan, no matter how badly the plot gets!!!
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:27 am

I'll never leave you, JF! We're your inspiration, you've always said so; we'll help you through this.
I mean, you don't want this to end like Untitled, do you? Six books and then lose your muse when writing the finale?
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let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby star star. » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:29 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I'm soooooooooo sorry guys! I just... grr.... fine, I'll tell you the truth! I've been losing my inspiration. Every time I think "hey, I should write a new entry today!" I just never, ever get to it because... I worry that if I write too much too soon then the entries will be boring and I'll loose all of the fans that I still have left. Many of them left because of when I published TIAJNAD and they thought i was "stealing" CS pets. Although it was nice yesterday when I met someone who said this when talking to my sister:

Person: :O YOUR SISTER IS JEASUS FREAK????? THE JEASUS FREAK??? THE ONE WHO WROTE TEH MOST AWESOME BOOK EVER?
TIAJNAD?
Sister: Oh, yeah. That's her.
Person: I FRIGGIN LOVE HER

So yeah, that was nice. But... I just don't want to loose any of you guys. I don't want to loose what little fans I still have left...

Oh gosh that person's amazing!
JayF~ I. Will. Never. Leave. You. Heck, you were my inspiration for TJOG! Oh no. No, I wont do it. /Offsite, how I'm feeling/
Anyway. Ok, JayF. *ahem* Now that that's all cleared up and such...

WRITE A NEW ENTRY!!





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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:35 am

Heck no, i will never ever leave you! i am and always WILL be a TIAJNAD fan!!!
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:39 am

Remember all those fans from earlier? Maybe they quit, or just forgot about TIAJNAD. Maybe you could PM them and find out, JF?
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:41 am

Maybe... I hope they won't find it rude by asking...
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:44 am

Maybe that would be a bad idea, since it is kinda rude, I suppose. I just... why would you stop reading? WHY? Because this is good. SO EPICALLY AWESOME, in fact, I wanna yell "CHICKENS!".
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
here I'll stand, and here I'll stay
let the storm rage on
the cold never bothered me anyway
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:51 am

Hidden Tears wrote:Don't worry about it, JF. You'll never lose me as a fan, no matter how badly the plot gets!!!

.:Stardust:. wrote:I'll never leave you, JF! We're your inspiration, you've always said so; we'll help you through this.
I mean, you don't want this to end like Untitled, do you? Six books and then lose your muse when writing the finale?

L U C K Y W A R wrote:
Oh gosh that person's amazing!
JayF~ I. Will. Never. Leave. You. Heck, you were my inspiration for TJOG! Oh no. No, I wont do it. /Offsite, how I'm feeling/
Anyway. Ok, JayF. *ahem* Now that that's all cleared up and such...

WRITE A NEW ENTRY!!

Flashpaw100 wrote:Heck no, i will never ever leave you! i am and always WILL be a TIAJNAD fan!!!

Thanks you guys. :) You always have been there for me, I guess. Usually as soon as I post an entry at least one of you guys posts nearly right away. :)
.:Stardust:. wrote:Remember all those fans from earlier? Maybe they quit, or just forgot about TIAJNAD. Maybe you could PM them and find out, JF?

Flashpaw100 wrote:Maybe... I hope they won't find it rude by asking...

.:Stardust:. wrote:Maybe that would be a bad idea, since it is kinda rude, I suppose. I just... why would you stop reading? WHY? Because this is good. SO EPICALLY AWESOME, in fact, I wanna yell "CHICKENS!".

lol, maybe they just didn't realize that I was writing a 2nd series? I could always just PM them saying that I started a 2nd series. That wouldn't be rude, would it? And maybe they're actually really reading this but are silent stalkers...

For always being there for me and for being with me now, I give you the next entry:















Killed me FATHER?! As in, like, my REAL FATHER?!
WHAT THE HECK?! HOW COULD YOU KILL MY FATHERWHATIEAHO;HIEO;AGEA?!
Okay, first, I have no idea what that last word was you said, secondly, I had my reasons.
WHYHOWCOULDYOUHAVEREASONS?!
Okay, now you're just starting to sound like a bunny I know.
Wait, you know Flower?
Who? I know a bunny named Pedal.
Who?
HEY! I never showed you a pic of Flower, did I? Here she is:
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She even looked annoying.
Here, I'll call Pedal. PEDALLLLLL!
A bunny started to hop hurriedly toward us ((its words will be in a sort-of light blue)).
HIIAAAAA!!!!!!
Wait, that doesn't sound like a- never mind.
WHAT?! WHAT WERE YOU GOING TO SAY?! WAS IT SOMETHING BAD?! WAS IT OFFENSIVE?! TELL MEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
I looked over at my "mom".
She's almost a direct duplicate of Flower! Well, just her voice, anyway.
He.
Wha?
HE is almost a direct duplicate of your Flower.
Wait, you're telling me that that bunny is a DUDE?!
Yeah.
I looked over at the dancing Pedal.
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Yup, that's her him.
HEY PEDAL!
Pedal stopped dancing and singing and turned to me.
WHAT?! WHAT'RE YOU GONNA SAY?! GOT SOMETHING TO SAY TO ME HUH?! WHAT?! WHAT WHAT WHAT-
You're seriously a dude?!
YEAH 'COURSE I AM! ARE YOU?!
NO!
WELL GOSH I WAS JUST ASKIN'!
Do I LOOK like a dude?!
WELL DO I?!
... I'm not gonna answer that. ANYWAY, so, "mom", back onto subject. Why did you kill my "dad".
Quit using air quotes around mine and your father's names.
Huh? Oh fine.
Apparently I was doing air quotes when saying "mom" and "dad". Oh nuts, I'm writing it too! NUTTTTS!
So, it was right after you were born. Your father tried to teach you his powers, but you forced them away. He soon tried to force the powers onto you, but I told him not to because there was a very likely chance that it would kill you. But-
Wait, powers? My dad had powers?
Yes, that's how you have yours today. Anyway, you might also want to know that the house we lived in for some reason had a shield against his powers, so he couldn't use them inside the house. Anyways, he tried forcing them onto you and wouldn't stop trying so I soon had to tell him to leave. He wouldn't, though. He said he "had to teach you". I told him no, that you would learn on your own. But he said you wouldn't. Then he started getting angry, and he started to come toward you. He threatened that he would take you far away and never come back with you until he taught you his powers. But I knew that if he did that, then you would surely die. So I gave him the chance once more to leave, but that got him even more furious and he actually grabbed you (as a baby) and started to walk toward the door. I grabbed a knife then, knowing that once he opened that door he could use his powers to teleport, and just... killed him.
Wait, he could teleport?
Yes. And maybe so can you. It depends on what powers he tried to force onto you.
So... you actually saved me by killing him?
Yes.
But how could you? I mean, he was your husband and my dad.
He was already beginning to change before you were born. Some days he would just stare out the window and mutter something about the world needing a dog. And other days he would come up to me and say "It's going to end three times, you know. Three times." and he was right.
Huh? What are you talking about?
You saw it, didn't you? There was that first war, the one you won, remember?
Yeah.
The one where Suzi turned good!
And you remember just a few days ago on December 21 that there was a giant earthquake in LA? The world almost ended then.
So... it's techincaly ended twice?
Yes.
Wait, but you said he said it ended three times.
My "mom" was quiet.
"Mooom"?
Maybe he was wrong. Maybe it was only supposed to end twice...
What aren't you telling me?
Amy, the world's going to end again. Your father said that the third time would be the worst and that nobody could stop it... but you. That's why he was trying to teach you his powers so soon. He wanted you to be ready to save the world.
Wait... the world's going to end... AGAIN?!
Yes. And this time, I don't think you'll be able to save it.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby star star. » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:54 am

OHMIAMY THE WORLD IS ENDING AGAIN?!?! NU!





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Re: End Of The Road - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Rebel Faery » Tue Jan 08, 2013 5:55 am

YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!
Maybe Pedal is Flower's brother or something? Or are all bunnies hyper and annoying?
And yay, the end of the world!
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I've decided it's time to move on, and so I've quit CS. It's been a good three years, but, well, as of May 2014, I don't think I'll be coming back. I'd like to say thank you, to all of you. Thank you for encouraging me, inspiring me, and being my friends. I've had so much fun, but this is the end. Seeing as this is my last visit, I've changed my username back to the original, Rebel Faery. It's a name that I no longer go by, but a name I'll always remember. I'm so sorry to every fan of TIAJNAD, to everyone that read my writing, to, well, everyone. But it's time to move on. To make like Elsa and let it go. (I was still on CS when Frozen came out. It feels like so long ago.)
let it go, let it go, and I'll rise like the break of dawn
let it go, let it go, that perfect girl is gone
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the cold never bothered me anyway
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