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What are you looking forward to?

The end of this book so we can get to book 4!
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The end of the series because this series stinks. -.-
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The end of this series because I wanna see what happens at the end!!
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What am I looking forward to? Pfft, a new entry, of course!
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sat Dec 22, 2012 7:52 am

Yaaaay!!! I love you JF!!!!
And yeah, Heaven would be cool like that!
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Unashamed » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:09 am

Well, JF, your dreams certainly aren't as ridiculous as mine. I just want to have some friends, overcome my shyness, and marry Dru (my crush.)
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:14 am

Oh nuts, seven pages without any new entry! Now I see why you guys were so desperate... Alright, guess I'll be doing the 2012 entry! .... later. But I'm still gonna do an entry now!!



















RHUBARB! WAIT! WHY AM I BRILLI-OW! OW OW OW!!
Rhubarb was pulling me fast through the Banishment Land, and trees had sprouted up out of the ground and I kept on running into them.
No time to explain!
Rhubarb kept on pulling me around, and he suddenly stopped.
We're here.
Awesome! Wait, where's here?
Rhubarb knelt onto the ground and didn't answer. He slipped a necklace off his neck. How come I had never noticed he was wearing a necklace? I squinted to try and see it, but all I could make out were wings. A necklace with wings on it... huh, didn't see that too often. Rhubarb laid the wings necklace onto the ground, muttered something, and then stepped back. The ground started shaking, and a hole opened up. Rhubarb suddenly grabbed my hand and dashed forward toward the large gaping hole that was in the ground.
WOAH! WE'RE NOT GOING DOWN THAT VERY LARGE GAPING DARK HOLE, ARE WE?!
Yup!
WHAT?!
Rhubarb jumped into the air, dragging me with him. Then he pulled us both down the dark hole. I felt myself falling, and I started to scream. A bright light suddenly blinded me, and then everything went blank.

I opened my eyes slowly. I was laying in a grassy meadow. And guess who was staring at me? Flower. Of course.
OHMYGOSHYOUJUSTFELLOUTOFTHESKY!
What?!
I SAID "OH MY GOSH YOU JUST FELL OUT OF THE SKY!!!"
I did?
I tried to stand up, but then moaned and sat back down. Everything hurt.
Okay, maybe I did. Where's Rhubarb? I mean Clyff?
HUH?! I DON'T KNOW WHO THIS CLYFF DUDE IS BUT RHUBARB ALREADY LEFT!
What?! Rhubarb left me here alone?!
NOT ALONE! YOU'VE GOT ME!!!
And that's the worst part.
HEY! I MAY BE LOUD BUT I HAVE FEELINGS!
Sorry, Flower. Where are we, exactly?
HUMPH! I'M NOT TELLING YOU, YOU MEANIE!
Fine, then I'll find out on my own.
NO! WAIT! TAKE ME WITH YOUUUUUU!
Why?!
I'LL HELP YOU! I'LL HELP YOU FIND JENETTE!!
What? How can we when Jenette's on earth and I'm banished. Wait, how did you get to the banishment land?
WHAT'S A BANISHMENT LAND?! THIS IS EARTH! I THINK I SAW JENETTE A FEW MINUTES AGO PASSING BY. WHEN I STARTED TO WALK UP TO HER SHE PUT UP HER FISTS AND SAID "If you start to talk, you're gonna find my fist in your face" AND SO I DIDN'T SAY NOTHIN'!
So.... I'm on Earth again, and Jenette is here?
YUUUUP!
I was back.... but how?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby star star. » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:17 am

*dies*

OMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMW AMY'S BACK?!?!?! YAY!!!

And I need to stop screaming. I need that for one of the scenes. But still.

OMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMW!!!!





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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:26 am

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME I LOVE IT OMW OMW OMW OMW I LOVE THE NEW ENTRY
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:28 am

COOIIOOOOOOOOOL!!!!
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:30 am

Image JF The entry was awesome
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Unashamed » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:32 am

LOL, I still can't stop laughing. And I think I got an idea about what's happened to Jenette. I mean, I thought she was in that big hole with all the bad guys, so how could she be here? I think that maybe the Demon Queen took Jenette's appearance or something. Am I right?
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:33 am

That'd be cool!!
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Re: The Banishment Land - Third Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Dec 22, 2012 8:40 am

L U C K Y W A R wrote:*dies*

OMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMW AMY'S BACK?!?!?! YAY!!!

And I need to stop screaming. I need that for one of the scenes. But still.

OMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMWOMW!!!!

lolol
Rockfire wrote:AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME I LOVE IT OMW OMW OMW OMW I LOVE THE NEW ENTRY

Thanks, Rocky (may I call you that?)!
Flashpaw100 wrote:COOIIOOOOOOOOOL!!!!

Thanks, Flashy!
Rockfire wrote:Image JF The entry was awesome

lol, thanks! XD
Outside Looking In wrote:LOL, I still can't stop laughing. And I think I got an idea about what's happened to Jenette. I mean, I thought she was in that big hole with all the bad guys, so how could she be here? I think that maybe the Demon Queen took Jenette's appearance or something. Am I right?

Thank you!! And you shall see...
Flashpaw100 wrote:That'd be cool!!

It would be! :)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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