Rebel Faery wrote:╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:Rebel Faery wrote:Hey, JF? Will you read another Journal I'm writing? I really hope you do, since you're such an awesome writer and all, and though I could never live up to your awesomeness, I thought this was a good idea and I'd really appreciate it if you took a look. I mean, you don't have to if you don't want to, but I hope you will anyway. Here is the link:
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Just looked at it!
((BTW, Rebel, not to bug you but did you get the next part of the TIAJNAD script I sent you in PM?))
Oh, yeah! It was like 6am when I got it, though, and I totally forgot. I'll go put that up now.
Thank you! And I understand!
New picture:
NEW ENTRY!
Oh joy.
You!Yes, me.The Demon Queen rose her paw and slammed the door shut using her powers. Lights flickered on.
My, my, my, my, my.Your what?The Demon queen scowled at Jenette.
Jenette, I'm tired of your constant remarks. I think it's time you..... shut up.The Demon Queen rose her arm and used her power to raise Jenette off the ground. Jenette kicked and struggled, but the Demon Queen's power was too..... powerful. She moved her arm and Jenette moved to the side of the room. The Demon Queen then took her other hand and moved it down word. Jenette's mouth slowly opened up wide. The Demon Queen then moved her head upward a bit. A knife slid out of her pocket and moved right beside the floating Jenette. The Demon Queen put the knife into Jenette's mouth. My mouth dropped open in horror when I realized what she was going to do.
STOP!I stood to my feet and started running at the Demon Queen. She turned to me.
Stand down!She stuck her leg out at me and I was shoved against a wall and crumbled to the ground. The Demon Queen put her foot back down. As for me, I stood there, trying to figure out where left and right were. The Demon Queen began again with her knife. I heard Jenette let out a scream, and that snapped me back. I got to my feet (no matter how dizzy I was) and ran at the Demon Queen. But she forced her foot out at me and I fell to the ground again. Suddenly the Demon Queen collapsed to the ground. The knife and Jenette fell onto the ground. I looked up, my dizziness gone, and saw Suzi punching the stuffing out of the Demon Queen.
Stop hurting them!Suzi punched the Demon Queen.
NEVER!The Demon Queen punched Suzi back. This would go on forever. I ran over to Jenette and left the Demon Queen to Suzi. I knew that Suzi had to fight her own battle with the Demon Queen. She wanted to do it alone.
Jenette! Are you okay?Jenette moaned and looked up at me. Blood was running out of her mouth.
Did she cut it all off?Jenette opened her mouth. I looked inside. There was a slice in her tongue halfway through, but not all the way. Her tongue could still be fixed. Yes, when the Demon Queen said she was going to shut up Jenette, she meant cutting out her tongue. But, thanks to Suzi, she hadn't succeeded.
Gish! Can you fix her?Gish hopped over to us and looked at Jenette.
I'll try.Gish hopped over to the Demon Queen.
Suzi? Do you mind getting that needle and thread out of her pocket?Suzi nodded, punched the Demon Queen once more, then quickly reached into the Demon Queen's pocket and pulled out a needle and thread and handed it to Gish.
Thank you.Gish hopped back over to us and Suzi returned to punching.
How did you know the Demon Queen had a needle and thread?I saw it in her pocket when you tried fighting her.Oh.I thought she had used some sort of magic or something... oh well. Anyway, I had to look away when Gish started sewing up Jenette's tongue, but soon she was back to normal. She stood up and looked at me.
Thanks, Amy.For what?You tried to save me.Yeah, I tried. I didn't do anything but get my butt kicked!No, you distracted her. If you hadn't done that then my whole tongue would probably be gone.I guess that's true. But Suzi is the one that really saved you.I looked over at Suzi, who had knocked out the Demon Queen by now. She smiled at us.
How're you feeling, Jen? I mean, Jenette?Suzi looked like she was preparing herself for a powerful strike from Jenette. She had called her Jen. For some reason, Jenette hated that.
It's alright.Suzi relaxed.
And I'm feeling fine, except that my tongue is slightly achy. How are you doing over there?She's out cold.Suzi pointed at the Demon Queen.
But once she's awake she'll fight again. I can't just keep knocking her out. Last time I got lucky that she was too focused on me to not disappear again. She can easily disappear next time and then we'll be back where we started.Quick question; how did we get here in the first place?That creepy dog appeared, knocked you out, took us captive, and then was going to kill you. Then you know the rest of the story; other dog rescues you, she ends up being evil and wants to take your power, I come in and save the day, yada yada.Wait, how did you come in here in the first place? Weren't you locked up?Suzi ended up eating through the bars like she did back at HQ that one time.I looked at Suzi.
You can still do that?Yup.Awesome.We better get going. But what should we do with the Demon Queen?Is there a way to send her back to where she's from?I don't think so. She can only choose to go back; we can't force her.Her weakness?We all looked at Gish.
Everybody has a weakness. What is her's?Well, when she was in me, she sucked all the goodness out of me. Maybe goodness is her weakness.Goodness is the weakness. Huh. Why hadn't I thought of that before?
'Cause you don't think a lot.I turned to Jenette and scowled. Stupid mind-reading.
It's not stupid. It's a gift.AGH! QUIT THAT!
I can't. It's always there...... wait, so you can always read my thoughts?
Yeahuh.Even when I'm far, far away?
Yeah......
So that's how you knew I was going to be killed and you told me to use my power in that fire placey thingy?Jenette nodded.
That's freaky.
What are you guys talking about?JENETTE CAN READ MY THOUGHTS!
They can't hear you, Amy. You're thinking that.Oh. Right. JENETTE CAN READ MY THOUGHTS!I pointed at Jenette. Ginger stared at Jenette.
Is she serious.For once, yes...... Can you read mine?Sometimes. But I can always read Amy's. It's sort of a curse, because Amy thinks stupid stuff.HEY!Everybody laughed (even me).
So..... Suzi? You think you can show goodness to the Demon Queen?I can try. It probably won't work, though.Just do your best.Why was Jenette all nicey-nice to Suzi lately? It was sort of..... nice.
Alright, she's waking up. Here it goes.The Demon Queen's eyes popped open. And the next thing that she did horrified me.
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