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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:07 am

Did you guys like the elevator story? I actually wrote that one :0 Comment and Crit is appreciated because I'm usually a horrible writer
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Chaimaru » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:17 am

There was a little girl named Sally and she was begging her mom to get her a doll for months. So one day, the Sally's mom surprised her with the doll. Sally took the doll everywhere. Then later in the day, she got thirsty. So Sally went to the water fountain and forgot the doll there. She was at the bottom of her stairs when she heard a voice that was not familiar.She looked on the top of the stairs and saw her doll with a butchers knife. The doll said in a sad but scary mischievous voice, "Sally, you forgot me.Sally, you forgot me.". Sally got scared, and she went in her parents room, but they were brutally killed drenched in blood, heads cut of, and huge cuts in their belly. Sally turned around, and she saw the doll, with eyes glowing red. "How could you forget me, Sally?". The doll ran up to Sally, but Sally knew that she would die anyway, and didn't want to be killed by a doll, so she grabbed the huge knife, and cut off her head.And today, the doll is still in poor dead Sally's arms. Sometimes silly teenagers go in there because they don't think its haunted, or just want the thrill of getting scared. But whenever anyone does go in there, the doll brutally murders them and let them burn in h3ll.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:21 am

dundundun! Thats one of the best doll stories I've read actually, becasue it actually tells what happens to the doll, and the people she kills
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orbitsy » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:36 am

This might've been already said.
Sorry if it's too gorey :3

DOG DRIPPING

Once upon a time there was a little kid. He had a pet dog called Toby. The little kid's room was always very dark at night, so when he got scared, he always placed his hand down the side of his bed.
The kid had a double bed, Toby slept on the bottom bunk, and the kid on the top.
Toby would always lick the kids hand, and the kid would feel better and go to sleep.
One night, the kid hears a dripping.
He sticks his hand down the side, and his hand is licked. He feels better and goes to sleep.
The same events happen the next night.
It's happens a third night, so the kid goes to investigate the dripping sound.
He goes 'round the dark corridor, and looks inside the bathroom.
He pulls back the shower curtain, and his dog is there.
...Hanging from the shower curtain rail.
Bleeding out of his chest
((AAGH THE GORE 8D))
The dog's blood has been splattered onto the bathroom wall, and it has been used as an ink, to write words.
The words read..

Humans can lick too.
:3..

I've heard the Sally one before too, its awesome :DD
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:48 am

We've had many versions of that story but I don't think I've heard that one :) creepy
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orbitsy » Sun Nov 21, 2010 3:49 am

Thanks ^-^~
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Orbitsy » Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:07 am

Oh also, I have a version of the Sally story :3

Sally, Sally..

Sally had always wanted a doll. Always.
It was her 9th birthday, and a parcel had arrived.
She assumed it was from a grandma or somebody, never bothering to check.
Sally tore it open, and peered inside at the contents.
A doll, with blonde curly hair, blue eyes, and a happy smile ^-^
"I love it!!"
Sally ran up to her room, and played with it for the rest of the day.
Sally played with this doll all the time. Every single day she came home from school, she always asked;
"Wheres my doll? Wheres my doll?"
Until one day, she was out with her friends, and her mum tidied away the doll underneath Sally's bed.
Sally had forgotten about her doll.

But one day, 3 years on, when Sally was asleep, she heard a chanting in her sleep.

"Sally..Sally...I'm coming to get you... Sally...Sally...I'm coming to get you..."
The next morning, Sally looked under her bed.
There was the doll, smiling back at Sally with her innocent blue eyes.
She wanted to play again?
Sally stared at it for a second.
"...I'm too OLD FOR DOLLS!"
Sally grabbed the doll from under her bed. She started ripping out it's long hair, poked out its eyes and ripped off its clothes, pulled out an arm..
Then she took it downstairs and shoved it in her kitchen cabinet, smiling to herself.
How rebel.
but that night, Sally heard more chanting...


"Sally..Sally..I'm coming to get you..
Sally..Sally..I'm coming up the stairs..
Sally...Sally...I'm in your brothers bedroom...
Sally...Sally..Your brother's dead.

Sally..Sally...I know you're here somewhere..
Sally..Sally...I'm at your parents' heads..
Sally..Sally...I've got a knife here...
Sally..Sally..your parents are dead.

Sally..Sally.. I'm coming up the staircase..
Sally..Sally..I'm in your bed...
Sally..Sally...I'm going to kill you..
Sally.....Sally....You....Are..."


The postman was the one who discovered the bodies.
A boy, stabbed in the chest.
A man and a woman, both stabbed in the head.
And a little girl...
..A little girl with blonde hair and blue eyes.
Although her hair had appeared to have been pulled out.
And one of her eyes was gouged out.
Her clothes were ripped off, as was her arm.
In one hand, she held a kitchen knife.
In the other, she held a doll. The doll was holding a card.
A birthday card.
Happy birthday Sally.

(Fyi the doll is Sally :3)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ˩ady Ǥamzee » Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:40 am

It was the day before Halloween
Erica, her friends Jasmine and Diane were down by the creek.
"I wanna be a princess for Halloween." Erica says.
"I wanna be a Vampire." Jasmine says.
"I wanna be a Mass Murderer." Diane says.
Erica and Jasmine both shrug, at Diane's chioce.
"But I am going to be a Mass Murderer!" She insists, but the subject is dropped.
So they continue to play until it's get dark.

The next day, Erica's mom agrees to take them all trick-or-treating.
Erica puts on her princess costume and they go to get Jasmine.
Jamine has on her vampire costume.
When they drove to Diane's house, no one came to the door.
Diane had to brothers and a sister, so someone had to be home.
They rang the doorbell over and over again, but no one answers.
Finally Jasmine decides to go around back and see if they're back there.
Erica's mom warns her not too, but she goes anyway.

Erica and her mother continued to wait for a long time, but no one comes out.
Erica's mom calls the police.
When they arrive, they found Jasmine on the patio.
Her costume had been ripped off and she'd been stabbed.
When they went upstairs they found her two brothers in their beds. Stabbed.
Herfather was in the kitchen. Stabbed.
Her mother and her sister were never found.

When the cops went to check the basement, they found Diane.
She was sitting in a rocking chair, slowly rocking back and forth.
"I told you I was going to be a Mass Murderer." She was whispering.
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About the DiRtY NiGhT ClOwNs.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shadow Wolf Lover » Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:59 am

Ǥɛɛκ ιи тнɛ Ƥιиκ wrote:
It was the day before Halloween
Erica, her friends Jasmine and Diane were down by the creek.
"I wanna be a princess for Halloween." Erica says.
"I wanna be a Vampire." Jasmine says.
"I wanna be a Mass Murderer." Diane says.
Erica and Jasmine both shrug, at Diane's chioce.
"But I am going to be a Mass Murderer!" She insists, but the subject is dropped.
So they continue to play until it's get dark.

The next day, Erica's mom agrees to take them all trick-or-treating.
Erica puts on her princess costume and they go to get Jasmine.
Jamine has on her vampire costume.
When they drove to Diane's house, no one came to the door.
Diane had to brothers and a sister, so someone had to be home.
They rang the doorbell over and over again, but no one answers.
Finally Jasmine decides to go around back and see if they're back there.
Erica's mom warns her not too, but she goes anyway.

Erica and her mother continued to wait for a long time, but no one comes out.
Erica's mom calls the police.
When they arrive, they found Jasmine on the patio.
Her costume had been ripped off and she'd been stabbed.
When they went upstairs they found her two brothers in their beds. Stabbed.
Herfather was in the kitchen. Stabbed.
Her mother and her sister were never found.

When the cops went to check the basement, they found Diane.
She was sitting in a rocking chair, slowly rocking back and forth.
"I told you I was going to be a Mass Murderer." She was whispering.

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby BlossomTail » Sun Nov 21, 2010 5:00 am

It was Summer of 2004, that seventeen year old, Cassidy Garder, was the only one up for camping in the woods. There were always stories about people who went and never came back - which was something Cassidy wasn't afraid of - she wasn't afraid of anything! Her optimistic friend Danielle, was a believer - she was a believer in supernatural content, and didn't care what others thought of her. She actually decided she wanted to go camping with Cassidy. They both finally convinced their friends, Kaitlyn, the scared one, and Ashley, the innocent christian girl to follow along and they did, of course. After packing up and ready to go, they drove about 44 miles up to the mountains where their deserted campsite awaited for them.

They got out of the vehicle with suitcases and sleeping bags behind them. Walking at least a couple hundred yards they found it - the camping grounds. A tent was there. . .Along with a sleeping bag and luggage. . .What? They didn't put that tent up and all four of them were beside eachother watching every surrounding. Everything was calm, so there was nothing going on, right? Wrong. It was getting late and the sun was setting and slowly hovering the tips of the trees. They didn't have time to worry about it, so they set up their camp a few feet away from the mysterious tent. By the time they were finished, it was dark, but their lanters and flashlights helped them see. Danielle thought of a great idea. When the girls went to sleep, which was about 2 hours later, she would go and inspect the tent that was set up from earlier, and she did. Tip-toeing out of her sleeping bag and into her shoes, she quietly walked over to the tent, and there was someone inside of it. . .she could hear breathing.

She held her breath, and fought with herself of whether to go in or not. She made up her mind and got a stick from beside her feet, while holding up the curtain that was attacthed to the tent. She stepped inside and saw a shadowy figure laying helplessly on the floor, begging for air. Her heart beat faster, and her legs were trembling.

To be continued!

What do ya'll think? More to come? It was my first scary story I made up by myself, so what do you think :3
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