Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

[Telescope]

Those boards freak me out ._.

[Shadow Wolf Lover]

This one is called: "Make a Wish"

So...me and my cousin went to one of those gypsy(cant spell) where they "let you make a true wish" so i wished for some money, and my cousin wished for a pony...then we were leaving and the "wish maker woman" turned to me and said:
"Have a terrible-i mean wishful day," she said with a crooked smile. I ignored her.
BIG MISTAKE.
The next day the money was laying on my bed, each day it got darker, as smokey black color. And i was wondering why. Then, on Christmas Day, the money was lying on top of my cousin's bloody body.
Dead.

***FAKE***

I dont get it...she wished for a pony??

well...i didnt meantion this, sorry, she DID, but i didnt meantion it!

[Chara Dreemurr]

Those boards freak me out ._.

I want one... X3

[Telescope]

My grandma has one!

She has lotsa scary stories! I'll ask her when I see her again, she was a crazy teenager

[Harpy•]

This one is called: "Make a Wish"

So...me and my cousin went to one of those gypsy(cant spell) where they "let you make a true wish" so i wished for some money, and my cousin wished for a pony...then we were leaving and the "wish maker woman" turned to me and said:
"Have a terrible-i mean wishful day," she said with a crooked smile. I ignored her.
BIG MISTAKE.
The next day the money was laying on my bed, each day it got darker, as smokey black color. And i was wondering why. Then, on Christmas Day, the money was lying on top of my cousin's bloody body.
Dead.

***FAKE***

I dont get it...she wished for a pony??

well...i didnt meantion this, sorry, she DID, but i didnt meantion it!

No, you mentioned that she wished for a pony...but the story still doesn't make that much sense, sorry.

[Telescope]

agree^^^

maybe if you gave it a bit more detail..., why do you think she died, and why did the money stay there. Its just kinda hard to understand

[Shadow Wolf Lover]

This is one is: Black Cats on Firdays!

Katie walked through the streets, looking for the small flower market. She looked on her cell phone that is was: 5:32 Friday the 13. Great an unlucky day! She thought. She strolled down the sidewalk, bored. Then she saw a figure lurking ahead.
A cat.
A black cat.
Katie continued walking, until she was five feet from the cat. It meowed, and ran in frnt of her. Katie stared at the cat run off. Then a truck was speeding down the street, and almost crashed into her. Katie screamed and ran forward. Where is this stupid flower place? She thought.
Katie walked some more, and saw a someone riding a bicycle by, they bumped shoulders with Katie, and she fell into a mud puddle.
"Ew!" Katie screamed, and bounced up. She patted some mud off her jeans. Then, a strong wind whipped her face. Katie blocked it with her arm. Then she saw the Flower Market. She jogged up to it and stopped.
The same black cat was sitting next to some roses.
"Here you go," It meowed, and handed her two roses, "I love you."
"What? Cats can't talk!" Katie yelped, and snatched the roses from him. She looked at them. They were turning black. "What?" Katie whispered, and saw the blackness was crawling up her hand, arm, and neck. She tried to drop them, but couldn't.
"Help-" Her cry broke off, when she fell down.
Dead.

[Harpy•]

Well...that one was a little better, with the essence of black cats and things, but the plot is still kind of lacking.

[Telescope]

I think that one was actually pretty awesome

[Shadow Wolf Lover]

Well...that one was a little better, with the essence of black cats and things, but the plot is still kind of lacking.

ok...i'll try HARDER then, thnkz for advice