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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Zexalii » Sun Oct 23, 2016 3:24 am

I wrote a poem! What do you guys think? It's my first out of school and I just wrote what was in my head

The 4 seasons

The trees are young and so are you,
Oh innocent one
Every living thing joyfully breathes in your presence,
Oh sweet one
You serve and pray and hope for the best,
Oh faithful one
Not turning your back, you fight for loved ones,
Oh loyal one

But as the rain falls, my tears do
As I fall, you bring me back up
You bring me up from my ashes,
You pulled me out from despair
But what about you?

The leaves change colours,
Just as you change
But I was blind to the change
But change is good, right?
You took depression and
Made it your name
You took despair and
Put it in your head

But as the weather turns cold,
You do too
She left you
You were cold
You have told lies to
Bring branches down
You have killed to
Create fear
As the landscape becomes unfamiliar,
You do too,
Oh stranger

The trees cry out
For you to stop
But you have the chance
To release your claws
You have the chance
To bud again
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Sun Oct 23, 2016 5:20 am

    New Character!!
    I'm so happy to introduce everyone to an new but very slowly developing character. Some things about her:
    Name: Ash
    Gender: Nonbinary 'Female'
    Sexuality: Pansexual
    Scars: She goes on missions for the military
    Weapon: Daggers
    Just a few simple things right now, but this got me so happy to write again!! :)
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby BucketORandomness » Sun Oct 23, 2016 6:25 am

@Keldeo, that was beautiful. I enjoyed it muchly >^.^<

@L.V.L, Your charrie looks interesting! What are they showing up in?
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby L.V.L » Sun Oct 23, 2016 6:32 am

    BucketORandomness wrote:@L.V.L, Your charrie looks interesting! What are they showing up in?

    Currently... nothing. But I am thinking of an idea right now, while I'm also trying to do my math homework. :lol:
    I will hopefully get onto writing the idea in bullet points and then posting here to see what you guys think about it. I just got her earlier today, so this will be fun!! :D
    Edit; I'm also getting another character, hopefully within the next week, so I will add him to her stories.











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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby BucketORandomness » Sun Oct 23, 2016 6:41 am

Ah. Good luck then! ((With math and with stories))
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Zexalii » Sun Oct 23, 2016 7:28 am

BucketORandomness wrote:@Keldeo, that was beautiful. I enjoyed it muchly >^.^<

@L.V.L, Your charrie looks interesting! What are they showing up in?

Thanks!
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Novi » Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:06 am

So I finally finished all the ref sheets for my dragon story ;u; Now to actually get started on writing it <3 Aaaa, I'm so excited!!

Here's the sta.sh folder with all the refs, in case anyone wanted to see them ;v;
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby birbmememaster24 » Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:10 am

A bunch of dragons, and then just 1 lil birb.
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Oct 23, 2016 10:21 am

Wooow you guys were BUSY without me! :D XD


Møriarty x. wrote:I might be interested, but I probably won't join. I've found that my characters' personalities change depending on the setting. Outside of my story, I have too much free reign.

And prep for NaNo is killing me. How do you a synopsis? I have no idea. I haven't even added my story to the site because of that problem.

Also, I've found that listening to Lindsey Stirling helps me concentrate when writing. Music with words is apparently too distracting. Has anyone else had that problem?

I don't think I have a problem, but yes I totally agree! Lindsey Stirling has been a /huge/ inspiration <3


katomorakwarrior wrote:*slinks in from world of five different chapters from five different stories in one month*
Sorry, did someone mention something about a character-developing roleplay? Um... that sounds like a fun sort of thing to do... really... really fun... really, really, really fun...
Sorry, I couldn't resisting breaking lazy hiatus to input an opinion on the idea.
*toddles back to one of many word documents...*
*vows not to respond to person who just posted... should go back to writing... but agrees entirely...*

WEEEELCOME BAAAACK!!!!
if only for a very short amount of time...


Escape♡ wrote:Hey all, I'm new cx

Kia ora! Welcome to the Lazies! :D


AriDeZu wrote:Y'know, whenever I start a story, I have a perfect picture of how I want it to go. I sit down and words fly from my fingers, everything is great. . . . and then writers block gets in the way. AAARRRRRRRRRR!!!!!

One word: yES


Hollywood*Undead wrote:A wild author has appeared.

Welcome! c:


Afflated Artist wrote:
L.V.L wrote:
    Afflated Artist wrote:on another note, does anybody have any tips for writing really upset characters /without/ making it sound cheesy?
    I ran into another wall otz


    Alright, here I come to help!! *maybe*
    It depends on what they're upset about, but usually all my characters are upset with each other at some point.

DeMaizu wrote:@Artist What's your character upset about?

w e lp
*nervous laughter*
the quickest way to explain this would be that a parent of this character that they were extremely close to was killed a while back and she only just figured out /why/ they'd killed him because she managed to get her grubby little paws hands on one of his old journals and realized exactly what he'd been up to- *Inhales sharply*
I don't know if that's of any help, but she's //extremely// upset about the fact that he "Hadn't ever told her" and another friend just made a comment about him and only managed to upset her /more/
like my /other/ character is trying to calm her down and all the things they're saying sound like something out of a set up soap opera, and it's driving me n uts help

Wow, that sounds really... /really complicated./
Maybe you could just write it, however cheesy it is, then leave it, clear your head for a bit, and edit it so it's not cheesy later? Idk. I hate upsetting my characters XD


juliebean223 wrote:I cant write. I stare at blank doccuments trying to convince myself that I can do something. I have no insparation for art either.
Im sick of it.

*pats*
I feel ya :(


Lucifer's Vessel wrote:That RP thing sounds pretty cool.

Hi, Silver!
Ya'll can call me whatever. :P You could call me Carrot God Dolphin and I wouldn't care as long as you clarified it was me you were talking to XD

Guys, I've spent the past three days writing out the legends of my deities in my book only to realize that the story doesn't coincide with an already finished chapter so now I have to fix that chapter to align with the new lore and I'm gonna die.

'Eyyy welcome back!! Long time no see! :D
despite my 'horror' that's p funny
sHOOSH WITH THE C-THINGS


Aww no that sucks *pats*


DeMaizu wrote:I need someone to whack me upside the head virtually. (DON'T hit me in real life, sis.) My creative brain is taking annap, somebody wake it up!

@Julie :( Aww . . . . I'm sorry to read that, I hope it gets better for you soon!

*smacks with a pole*
TIME'S UP! GET BACK TO WORK!!!

...did I help?


Define 'Emergency' wrote:
So I have ten dragon characters, all of which are in the same storyline, and I needed some form of conflict or something for the plot. I eventually came up with the idea that a character of a different species would be taken in by the dragons and raised as one of them. I couldn't figure out for the life of me what the new character should be - I went from a different type of dragon to a griffin, back to my original idea, and it was honestly just messing me up.

Why am I telling you guys this? Because I just got an adorable idea for the new character while watching some cute videos on YouTube!

So my idea for the story is that a dragon goes into a campsite and finds an RV while the humans are out. He ventures inside it, messing around a bit before he finds a tiny, cute winged thing trapped in a cage. Figuring that it's another dragon being held against its will, the dragon panics and knocks the cage over in an attempt to free the little one. The tiny winged thing shrieks, but the cage is damaged enough so that it does not get hurt too badly, and it is able to hop out of the cage. The dragon, pleased with his successful attempt, gently picks up the strange little "dragon" and brings it back to his dragon pack, where they figure out that this isn't a dragon...

It's a young cockatiel.

So now I've got the perfect idea that the little birdie imprints on two of the dragons and he ends up sticking around and trying to hunt and be a good dragon. (He isn't very good at it, though.)

I'm working on reference sheets before I work on the story, but aaa! I'm so excited and happy that I've gotten through this dilemma cx

HHHHHHHH
I love dragons and birds so, so much - please let ME us read it? Please, please, please, please, PLEEAASE?! Image


Møriarty x. wrote:Welcome new peeps!

@De this probably won't help much but it's a prompt I found on Pinterest. "What now?" "I don't know. I thought the jump would kill us."


I think I may be the only person here that doesn't need help with character development(?) What's up with that? You guys can give me any situation and I can tell you what my chars would do. Aka: I have way too much time on my hands.

Also, to whoever replied to me about the synopsis; thank you, but I know what it is. I just have trouble writing it.

Same
Wren's good at them!


Keldeogirl wrote:I wrote a poem! What do you guys think? It's my first out of school and I just wrote what was in my head

The 4 seasons

The trees are young and so are you,
Oh innocent one
Every living thing joyfully breathes in your presence,
Oh sweet one
You serve and pray and hope for the best,
Oh faithful one
Not turning your back, you fight for loved ones,
Oh loyal one

But as the rain falls, my tears do
As I fall, you bring me back up
You bring me up from my ashes,
You pulled me out from despair
But what about you?

The leaves change colours,
Just as you change
But I was blind to the change
But change is good, right?
You took depression and
Made it your name
You took despair and
Put it in your head

But as the weather turns cold,
You do too
She left you
You were cold
You have told lies to
Bring branches down
You have killed to
Create fear
As the landscape becomes unfamiliar,
You do too,
Oh stranger

The trees cry out
For you to stop
But you have the chance
To release your claws
You have the chance
To bud again

Oo I like that! ^^


L.V.L wrote:
    New Character!!
    I'm so happy to introduce everyone to an new but very slowly developing character. Some things about her:
    Name: Ash
    Gender: Nonbinary 'Female'
    Sexuality: Pansexual
    Scars: She goes on missions for the military
    Just a few simple things right now, but this got me so happy to write again!! :)

Cool! Welcome back to the writing world XD
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Re: ❛ the lazy writers ❜

Postby DeMaizu » Sun Oct 23, 2016 1:26 pm

@Ranger Possibly . . . . . Let's go find out! *goes off to alternate between writing and CS*
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